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    The Oculus of the Tempest

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    KhaixRoze
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    Skills & Elements: Kuchiyôse, Iijutsu, Ninjutsu, Fuuinjutsu; Ototon, Stormztrohm
    Class: S
    Ryo: ~

    The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by KhaixRoze on Thu Aug 09, 2018 5:21 pm


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    [quote][Fade][u][b]Kanji[/fade][/b] • [blur]Translation[/blur] • Name[/u]
    The name of your technique. This can be in any language you wish, though it is common practice to include an English translation for ease of reference.
    [b][blur]Rank[/blur]:[/b]
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    [i]Skill Type[/i]
    If your technique is based on any certain Skills, include them here. Like Elements, characters will generally be required to have the Skills listed here in order to learn the technique, but there is some flexibility for those with a higher Intelligence stat; read more on that here.
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    [i]Classification:[/i]
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    [i]Requirements:[/i]
    Any specific requirements in order to use the technique. These are most often certain levels of stats or bloodlines. If not applicable, write "N/A".
    [i]Parent Technique:[/i]
     If the technique is based on another technique, list that here. This includes any techniques that must be known in order to use this particular technique. Related or derived techniques can be listed in the description (or you can create your own little category for it on the template), but only the parent may be listed here.
    [b][blur]Ignition//Upkeep :[/blur][/b]
    Techniques costs are represented by points that are deducted from your stamina pool. The base level of costs are: E=1, D=3, C=5, B=10, A=15, and S=25. These numbers can be adjusted based on your specific technique, but will generally follow that guide. Most techniques are quick in use and don't persist very long, meaning that their only cost is the Activation Cost. However, some do last, most often those that increase stats, and those techniques require an Upkeep Cost. This is usually one rank less than the Activation Cost (a boosting jutsu with an activation cost of 10 (B-Rank) will usually have an upkeep cost of 5 (C-Rank)), but it can vary based on your specific technique.
    [b][blur]Element:[/blur][/b]
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    [b][blur]Range:[/blur][/b]
    How far your technique can extend. Some, like Lightning Release Armor, act as an aura around the body and don't actually extend at all; these can be denoted with "Self" on the range. Otherwise, we typically use meters to represent the overall range. However, you are still free to use other systems of measurement.
    [i]Speed:[/i]
    This is how fast your technique moves, if it moves at all. If it doesn't, just write "N/A" here. The measurement for this is meters per second, which we use for all techniques, so there isn't as much flexibility here. The speed of the technique can vary greatly depending on the technique's rank, damage potential, and any other things it can do. I technique with higher speed will usually have lower damage.
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    [b][blur]Lore//Flavor:[/blur][/b]
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    [b][Blur]Drawback//Weaknesses[/blur]:[/b]~[/quote]

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    [b]Name:[/b]
    [b]Rank:[/b]
    [b]Power:[/b]
    [b]Activation Cost:[/b]
    [b]Upkeep Cost:[/b]
    [b]Range:[/b]
    [b]Speed:[/b]
    [b]Element:[/b]
    [b]Skill:[/b]
    [b]Classification:[/b]
    [b]Requirements:[/b]
    [b]Parent Technique:[/b]
    [b]Hand Seals:[/b]
    [b]Description:[/b]
    [b]Weaknesses:[/b]



    ~
    Chakra Color:
    The chakra color of Yün chakra emanates a glacial nebula of white speckled aether and riddled with glinting diamonds, sheening and refracting light, bestowing the appearance of an white galactic sky, increst with golden, cerulean and aquamarine miniature stellars resembling the universe. This is reflected in the billowing Icylynic clouds he naturally created with his Kekkeï Genkaï. The vice of his water, indigo, the gust of his wind, silver, and the streams of his lightning, gold

    Elements:

     Fuuton | Release of Gale  

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    [b]風遁[/b] : [u]Fūton[/u] : Style of Wind

    Wind Release (風遁, Fūton, English TV: Wind Style) is one of the five basic elemental nature transformations. Most offensive Wind Release techniques are performed by making chakra as sharp and thin as possible, however, wind can also be generated as a large, concussive force to overwhelm a target. Wind-based techniques are mainly short to mid-ranged offensive techniques that combine brute force and keen precision to deal cutting and slashing damage. A rarity among the five chakra natures, wind techniques are usually performed by generating air circulation and can be enhanced through this method as well. Wind-natured chakra can also be channelled into blades to increase their cutting power and overall range. The wind affinity is seemingly more common amongst shinobi of Sunagakure. Wind Release also specialises in deflecting and even reflecting attacks. Wind Release focuses on projectile type techniques and can even change melee type techniques such as the Rasengan into projectiles when adding wind nature transformation to them.

    Fuuton (Wind Release): Only by concentrating one's chakra into a fine edge can Fuuton be created. It uses heightened cutting power on a small scale over a wide range to inflict mass damage or simply a powerful impact. When flowed over a weapon, it has similar cutting power to Raiton, but overpowers it in raw form, while acting as fuel to Katon. This can make it the losing technique in a clash or an enhancing factor in a combination assault. The concussive power of Suiton can also be enhanced via Fuuton, which is found primarily in the Land of Wind's Sunagakure. 

      Suiton | Release of Aqua  

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    [b]水遁[/b] : [u]Suiton[/u] : Style of Aquatics

    Water Release (水遁, Suiton, English TV: Water Style) is one of the basic elemental nature transformation techniques that allow the user to manipulate pre-existing water, or create their own, by turning their chakra into water. It takes much more ability to create the water outside the body than to manipulate what is already available or expel it from their mouths. One of the most versatile of the five basic chakra natures, Water Release techniques can not only change shape but state as well. Moreover, the water becomes more solid in the process as well, and certain techniques can even allow the user to increase the water's density or viscosity, making it a suitable element to capture the targets. The water affinity is seemingly more common amongst shinobi of Kirigakure. Offensive water techniques seem to inflict harm from the sudden force that they exert, which would cause massive internal damage to a human.

    -Suiton (Water Release): Perhaps the most versatile of the Basic Elements, Suiton can be manipulated in shape, viscosity, and even density to suit virtually any task. Induced drowning and impact-based attacks are just two of many potential uses. Like controlling Katon, creating Suiton out of nothing is particularly difficult and found only in the strongest of Suiton users. Suiton is strong against Katon via flame extinguishing and weak against Doton due to the latter's propensity for dispersing the force and power of water. Uniquely, Suiton can act as a conductor for Raiton, extending its range and destructive potential. As the shinobi village in the Land of Water, Kirigakure houses most of the world's Suiton using population

    Raiton | Release of Lightning 

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    [b]雷遁[/b] : [u]Räitōn[/u] : Style of Lightning

    Lightning Release (雷遁, Raiton, English TV: Lightning Style) is one of the five basic elemental nature transformation techniques that allows the user to generate lightning by increasing the high frequency vibrations of their chakra, allowing for piercing damage and fast movement. The electricity paralyses the target so that they are unable to move and leaves them vulnerable to a finishing strike. While uncommon, lightning can be infused into bladed weapons in a way similar to Wind Release through chakra flow for increased piercing power through vibrations, with the added effect of inducing numbness. When the technique is released from their bodies, and thus not requiring physical contact, it does not move as fast as true lightning. Instead, due to the control the user has to exert over it, it moves far slower, which can give opponents time to still react. Lightning Release is common to the ninja of Kumogakure.

    Raiton (Lightning Release): The second least controllable and probably most difficult to master, Raiton involves the heavy vibrating of one's chakra to the point that it becomes electricity, increasing both speed and piercing capabilities. Raiton can act much like real world lightning when wielded in one's hands, but once it leaves the body, it moves far slower than would be expected, similar in speed to Katon. However, utilizing actual lightning can dramatically improve Raiton's potency. When combined with Suiton, its effects can be wide-ranging and catastrophic, but it is weak against the naturally electrical insulating Fuuton. Doton can easily be cut through, however, making it weak against Raiton in particular. Kumogakure, located within the Land of Lightning, is the shinobi village most associated with Raiton. .

    Ïnazüma

    The Inazuma Clan's power derives from the advanced element of Storm Release, or Ranton. Storm Release is the combination of Lightning and Water based chakra that manifests in energy beams and dark storm clouds. The versatility in Storm Release abilities is what makes the clan one of the strongest and most respected in all of Lightning Country. Storm Release beams tend to have a powerful piercing element to their attack but they can also be used to flow through water or weapons. It is common for Inazuma Clan members to enhance their weapons with Ranton to bring destruction against their opponents. The bloodline's ability to also generate violent tempests give it a degree of control over the environment allowing them to shape the skies above a battlefield and shift the weather to give them an advantage.


    嵐遁 | Räñton | Release of Storm

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    [b]嵐遁[/b] : [u] Ranton[/u] : Style of Storm

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    Storm Release (嵐遁, Ranton, Viz: "Gale Style" or "Storm Style") is a combined nature transformation kekkei genkai made up of techniques that mix lightning and water-based chakra to create energy beams that can be guided towards the enemy. This kekkei genkai is wielded by several shinobi from Kumogakure. 

    Ranton (Storm Release): By mixing lightning and water based chakra, Ranton users are able to generate dark storm clouds or even release laser-like beams of chakra energy. They can spread water far and wide, only to electrocute it with lightning for devastating area assaults. Its elements seem to act independently when facing certain other elements; wind can insulate the lightning, earth can stop the flow of water, and water can conduct the electric current. In its true, flawlessly combined state, Ranton is neutral to Doton and Katon, while weak to Fuuton. Similarly to Youton, Ranton has no specific Clan, but it is isolated to Kumogakure. Ranton: =Doton, =Katon

    Storm Release: Energy Beam Creation ~ Acquired
    This is the initial stage of the Storm Release bloodline and it grants the ability to generate energy beams. The beams can be broad and flowing or fine and super focused like a laser. At this stage the user is limited to using and creating Storm Release techniques related to energy beams. These energy beams are often guided by the user or flowed through weapons. While this stage has excellent offensive and defensive capabilities, the user is restricted to energy beam based Ranton techniques.

    Storm Release: Storm Cloud Creation  ~ Acquired
    This is the second and final stage of the Storm Release bloodline and it grants the ability to generate storm clouds. The storm clouds naturally suck up moisture in the air to grow and are rife with electricity making them excellent catalysts for controlling the environment. Storm cloud techniques are often used to form barriers or manipulate the weather to setup other ninjutsu that have environmental requirements.

    Bloodline Limits & Drawbacks:

    Storm Release is weak against Wind Release techniques. Fuuton disperses Ranton such that its manifestations are harmlessly dissipated. Wind Release techniques of the same rank and above an opposing Storm Release technique nullify its effects. Storm Release clouds generally require some degree of moisture to reach their full potential therefore using them in extremely dry and arid climates (Wind and Earth Country) reduces their effectiveness by a single rank. This can be overcome by merely supplementing them with water via an appropriate Suiton jutsu.


    Last edited by KhaixRoze on Wed Dec 12, 2018 8:29 pm; edited 13 times in total


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    Léï Zhènyün
    ~ Ijutstu, Ninjutsu, Kuchiyôse, Fuuinjutsu, Engineer, Chemistry, Genjutsu { ? } ~
    Ïnazüma; Storm ~ Tempest, Ray, Cloudian Air
    The Protopolypian Medusozoan



    Stats:

    [*]Strength: E
    [*]Constitution: C
    [*]Stamina: B { 160 }
    [*]Speed: S
    [*]Coordination: C
    [*]Intelligence: B
    [*]Perception: B

    Limit Break Points:

    [*]Physical:
    [*]Technique:
    [*]Destiny: 3










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    KhaixRoze
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    Skills & Elements: Kuchiyôse, Iijutsu, Ninjutsu, Fuuinjutsu; Ototon, Stormztrohm
    Class: S
    Ryo: ~

    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by KhaixRoze on Sun Aug 12, 2018 8:02 pm


    閃電針 : Shǎndiàn Zhën : Lightning Needles
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Ignition/Upkeep: D, C [Activation] D [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed: ~
    Handsigns: : Shè :  Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma has a multitude of jutsu complementing the Tempest of the Gale, the Thunder of the Lightning, and the Hurricane of the storm. 'The Lightning Bolt' is a line of Räiton techniques which are linear, piercing and sundering armor and weapondry whist penetrating any barrier or formidable defence.
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence emitting an intense shockwave vivifing up to twelve lightning needles, cackling with excitement, with pure lightning energy orbiting the caster's body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Bo Shuriken" or Senbon, approximately three inches. While holstering needles within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates three lightning needles which can be utilized in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of an E Rank for chakra consumption. When thrown, the Lightning needles are utilized by the caster, streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning needles discharges in a large pop, shocking the opponent for minor damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst sinking into the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Needle pierces through barriers and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~
    ° Upkeep raised towards D Rank.
    ~∆pproval
    ~
    閃電箭 : Shǎndiàn Jian : Lightning Bolt
    Rank: D
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Ignition/Upkeep: E, D, C [Activation], D [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed:
    Handsigns: : Shè : Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma has a multitude of jutsu complementing the Tempest of the Gale, the Thunder of the Lightning, and the Hurricane of the storm. 'The Lightning Bolt' is a line of Räiton techniques which are linear, piercing and sundering armor and weapondry whist penetrating any barrier or formidable defence.
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave which vivifies up to three lightning bolts, cackling with excitement, out pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Aikuchi" or dagger, approximately twelve inches. While holstering a lightning bolt within the orbit of thr caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates two lightning bolts based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of chakra consumption. By conducting three Lightning Bolts, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    When thrown, the Lightning Bolt is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning bolt discharges in a large pop, shocking the opponent for minor damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst searing the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Bolt pierces through barriers and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Spoiler:


    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~
    ~∆pproval
    閃電蓮花 • { 矛 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Mäo } : Lightning Bolt • { Spear }
    Rank: C
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique:閃電箭 : Shǎndiàn Jian : Lightning Bolt
    Ignition/Upkeep: E, D, C [Activation], D [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed: ~
    Handsigns:   : Shè : Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma has a multitude of jutsu complementing the Tempest of the Gale, the Thunder of the Lightning, and the Hurricane of the storm. 'The Lightning Bolt' is a line of Räiton techniques which are linear, piercing and sundering armor and weapondry whist penetrating any barrier or formidable defence.
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave vivifing up to three lightning spears, cackling with excitement, within pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Nodachi" or Longsword, approximately one meter. While holstering a lightning spear within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates three lightning bolts based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep for chakra consumption By conducting one Lightning Javalin, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    When thrown, the Lightning Spear is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning spear discharges in a gallant boom, shocking the opponent for major damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst searing the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Bolt pierces and sunders through barriers, weapons, and armor of the same and lesser rank. Three

    Spoiler:


    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~
    ~∆pproval
    閃電蓮花 • { 標槍 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Biäoqiäng } : Lightning Bolt • { Javalin }
    Rank: B
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique:閃電蓮花 • { 矛 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Mäo } : Lightning Bolt • { Spear }
    Ignition/Upkeep: B, A, S [Activation], D [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed: ~
    Handsigns: Mizuki : Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma has a multitude of jutsu complementing the Tempest of the Gale, the Thunder of the Lightning, and the Hurricane of the storm. 'The Lightning Bolt' is a line of Räiton techniques which are linear, piercing and sundering armor and weapondry whist penetrating any barrier or formidable defence.
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave vivifing up to three lightning spears, cackling with excitement, within pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Zweihander" or Grandsword, approximately one meter. While holstering a lightning javalin within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates one lightning bolt based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep for chakra consumption By conducting one Lightning Javalin, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    When thrown, the Lightning Javalin is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning javalin discharges in an electric explosion spire, shocking the opponent for lethal damage and incinerating thier armor and weapons whilst immolating their charred carcass. Naturally, the Lightning Javalin pierces and sunders through barriers, weapons, and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Spoiler:


    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~
    ~∆pproval

    EDIT : it should be all here.


    Last edited by KhaixRoze on Tue Aug 21, 2018 4:31 pm; edited 5 times in total


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    Opening of the Whylds, the unsealing of the Clouds...:



    Léï Zhènyün
    ~ Ijutstu, Ninjutsu, Kuchiyôse, Fuuinjutsu, Engineer, Chemistry, Genjutsu { ? } ~
    Ïnazüma; Storm ~ Tempest, Ray, Cloudian Air
    The Protopolypian Medusozoan



    Stats:

    [*]Strength: E
    [*]Constitution: C
    [*]Stamina: B { 160 }
    [*]Speed: S
    [*]Coordination: C
    [*]Intelligence: B
    [*]Perception: B

    Limit Break Points:

    [*]Physical:
    [*]Technique:
    [*]Destiny: 3










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    Akame
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    Class: A
    Ryo:

    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by Akame on Sat Aug 18, 2018 12:08 pm

    I can't read any of these


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    Character Name: Akame Sasumi
    Experience:  0/4200
    Renown: 3000
    Ryo: 0
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: A
    • Perception: B


    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 2
    • Technique: 0
    • Destiny: 1

    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t219-tsuyo-s-updates#1371






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    Copycat
    Anbu

    Posts : 461
    Join date : 2017-10-29

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    Skills & Elements: Katon, Raiton, Doton, Ijutsu, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu & Fuuinjutsu
    Class: A
    Ryo: 1,105,125

    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by Copycat on Mon Aug 20, 2018 9:44 pm

    @KhaixRoze wrote:
    脈輪 蓮花 : Maì Lún Liánhuā : Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Rank: C
    Skill Type: Ijutstu
    Sub-type: Supplementary
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: Pressure Points Technique
    Ignition/Upkeep: C [Activation], E [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: N/A
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed:
    Handsigns: : Shè : Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    After the academy graduations, the Ïnazüma bestows a festival for the new indoctrinated genin of the clouds, inviting them to learn the nindo of the clan in celebration. One of the particular games was stun tag, in which every genin, whom knew how to manifest and manipulate chakra could learn to play.
    Description:
    The caster quickly centrates on the chakra along the palm of their hands or in thier mouth. The Chakra Lotus is used by the caster creating an Aetheric Source flaring forth a growing chakra lotus which circulats from thier finger tips or tongue, streaming and homing towards the adversary. Upon contact, the Chakra Lotushas a variety of effects and status raises which can be applied for persona, however caster may choose only one ability while wielding the Chakra Lotus, yet can interchange them prospectively at the beginning of each turn.

    First, The Aetheric Chakra Lotus has the ability to increase the rank of techniques by a tier {±±±}. Lastly, the Chakra Lotus increases Perception by a tier for up to 2 turns before reactivation. The caster can uphold the Chakra Lotus technique for an E Rank everyturn after initial activation and duration. Those whom are affected by the Chakra Lotus technique will emanate a shining crystal lotus bulb above thier head which only they can see, including those whom are also affected by the Chakra Lotus Technique.

    Spoiler:

    Enhances Rank of Techniques
    Perception
    ↑Raises One Rank//Tier {±±±}

    Drawback//Weaknesses:~

    For starters, separate the stat raiser from the offense technique itself. Furthermore, add that it requires physical contact instead of being a projectile, and functions as applying a fuuinjutsu seal to someone. Note that the crystal bulb isn't visible to the naked eye, and only to sensors or chakra sight. Raise the Upkeep from 1 to 3 (aka. D-Rank upkeep). You're also going to have to restrict the power increment the technique offers to a certain skill or element (like only increasing the power of Raiton techs by one rank, or Non-Elemental Ninjutsu). Add another clause that requires you to be within 30 meters of the person you're boosting, and that you cannot have another technique boosting your own Perception while you're boosting someone else's.

    @KhaixRoze wrote:閃電蓮花)[/| Shǎndiàn Liánhuā | Lightning Lotus { Raihaña }[/u]
    Rank:
    Skill Type: Ijutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 | Maì Lún Liánhuā | Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Ignition/Upkeep: C [Activation], E [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed:
    Handsigns: : Shè : Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    After the academy graduations, the Ïnazüma bestows a festival for the new indoctrinated genin of the clouds, inviting them to learn the nindo of the clan in celebration. One of the particular games was stun tag, in which every genin, whom knew the lightning element could learn to play.
    Description:
    The caster quickly centrates on the chakra along the palm of their hands or in thier mouth. The Lightning Lotus is used by the caster creating a small bang, flaring forth a growing lightning lotus which conducting forth from thier finger tips or tongue, streaming and homing towards the adversary. Upon contact, the has a variety of effects and status raises which can be applied for persona, however caster may choose only one ability while wielding the Lightning Lotus, yet can interchange them prospectively at the beginning of each turn. Upon contact, the sparking lightning lotus discharges, paralyzing the opponent for a turn. Alternatively, the Lightning Lotus technique can be discharged as a conic wave and emanates continuously with cost of upkeep to keep adversary bolted and paralyzed after stunned.

    Aesthethically, a, non lethal version of this technique can be cast for a supplimentary raise in Coordination by a tier {+±+} up 2 turns before reactivation. The caster can uphold an upkeep for an E Rank everyturn after initial activation and duration. Those whom are affected by the Lightning Lotus technique will emanate a shining golden lotus bulb above thier head and a glowing golden tomoe symbol upon thier forehead which only they can see, including those whom are also affected by the Subordinates of the Lightning Lotus Technique

    Spoiler:


    Stuns and Binds
    Enhances Speed of Techniques
    Coordination
    Seperates Cast for Range or Stat Raises
    ↑Raises One Rank//Tier {±±±}

    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~

    Same as the previous technique; Separate the stat-raising aspect of it into a different technique. Raise the upkeep to D-Rank and note that the lotus bulb can be seen by sensors or doujutsu. Add that this paralysis effect lasts 1 post unless maintained (in reference to that Upkeep bit), unless the opponent has B-Rank Constitution or higher, in which they resist it altogether (assuming this technique is meant to be a C-Rank). Add the same range limit clause and inability to have another tech increasing the stat you're buffing for someone else while this is active.

    @KhaixRoze wrote:雲蓮花 : Yün Liánhuā : Cloud Lotus { Yünhaña }
    Rank: C
    Skill Type: Ijutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 : Maì Lún Liánhuā : Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Ignition/Upkeep: C [Activation], E [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 風遁 | Fuuton | Style of Air
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed:
    Handsigns: • Shè •  Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    After the academy graduations, the Ïnazüma bestows a festival for the new indoctrinated genin of the clouds, inviting them to learn the nindo of the clan in celebration. One of the particular games was stun tag, in which every genin, whom knew the lightning element could learn to play.
    Description:
    The caster quickly centrates on the chakra along the palm of their hands or in thier mouth. The Cloud Lotus is used by the caster creating a poffin flaring forth a growing chakra lotus which circulating forth from thier finger tips or mouth, streaming and homing towards the adversary. Upon contact, the has a variety of effects and status raises which can be applied for persona, however caster may choose only one ability while wielding the Cloud Lotus, yet can interchange them prospectively at the beginning of each turn.

    First, The Cloud Lotus has the ability to increase the range of techniques by one tier. Lastly, the Cloud Lotus increases Constitution, Speed or Intellect by a tier for up to 2 turns before reactivation. The caster can uphold this technique for an E Rank everyturn after initial activation and duration. Those whom are affected by the Cloud Lotus technique will emanate a shining prismatic crystal lotus bulb above thier head which only they can see, including those whom are also affected by the Cloud Lotus Technique.

    Spoiler:

    Enhances Range of Techniques
    Constitution, Speed or Intellect
    Seperates Cast for Range or Stat Raises
    ↑Raises One Rank//Tier {±±±}

    Drawback//Weaknesses: Those with higher than Rank C Constitution are immune to the stun.

    Same as the previous technique.

    @KhaixRoze wrote:風暴 : Fēngbào Liánhuā : Storm Lotus { Arashihaña }
    Rank: C
    Skill Type: Ijutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 : Maì Lún Liánhuā : Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Ignition/Upkeep: C [Activation], E [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 風暴 : Ranton : Style of Storm
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed:
    Handsigns: : Shè : Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    After the academy graduations, the Ïnazüma bestows a festival for the new indoctrinated genin of the clouds, inviting them to learn the nindo of the clan in celebration. One of the particular games was Arashin, in which every genin, whom knew the storm element could learn to play.
    Description:
    The caster quickly centrates on the chakra along the palm of their hands or in thier mouth. The Storm Lotus is used by the caster creating a poffin flaring forth a growing chakra lotus which circulating forth from thier finger tips or mouth, streaming and homing towards the adversary. Upon contact, the has a variety of effects and status raises which can be applied for persona, however caster may choose only one ability while wielding the Cloud Lotus, yet can interchange them prospectively at the beginning of each turn.

    First, The Storm Lotus has the ability to allow the caster to levitate for three turns. The caster can uphold this technique for an E Rank everyturn after initial activation and duration. Those whom are affected by the Storm Lotus technique will emanate a shining prismatic crystal lotus bulb above thier head which only they can see, including those whom are also affected by the Storm Lotus Technique.

    Spoiler:

    Levitation

    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~

    No to levitation.

    @KhaixRoze wrote:閃電針 : Shǎndiàn Zhën : Lightning Needles
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Ignition/Upkeep: E, D, C [Activation], E [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed: ~
    Handsigns: : Shè :  Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma has a multitude of jutsu complementing the Tempest of the Gale, the Thunder of the Lightning, and the Hurricane of the storm. 'The Lightning Bolt' is a line of Räiton techniques which are linear, piercing and sundering armor and weapondry whist penetrating any barrier or formidable defence.
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence emitting an intense shockwave vivifing up to twelve lightning needles, cackling with excitement, with pure lightning energy orbiting the caster's body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Bo Shuriken" or Senbon, approximately three inches. While holstering needles within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands.While conducting six lightning needles, the caster's speed or coordination increases by a minor advantage {±}, interchanging based on casters will and legacy. Each cast emanates lightning needles which can be utilized in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of an E Rank for chakra consumption. When thrown, the Lightning needles are utilized by the caster, streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning needles discharges in a large pop, shocking the opponent for minor damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst sinking into the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Needle pierces through barriers and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Charging the Lightning Needle Technique based upon rank vivifies a certain number of needles, color, and piercing power:

    E ~ 12 White { Conduction ( 6 );  Speed, Coordination↑Raises Minor Advantage {±} }
    D ~ 25 Lightblue
    C ~ 50 Gold { Maximizes at D Rank }

    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~

    Raise the upkeep to D-Rank. Otherwise this should be good.

    @KhaixRoze wrote:閃電蓮花矛 : Fēngbào Míngwén : Storm Inscription
    Rank: E
    Type: Fuuinjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique:風暴 : Fēngbào Liánhuā : Storm Lotus { Arashihaña }
    Ignition/Upkeep: D [Activation], E [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 嵐遁 : Räñton : Release of Storm
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed:
    Handsigns: : Shè :  Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma are known to be the reigning storm of the seas, manuevering the tempest of thier clouds and contortion the beams of the storm. This is a standard jutsu, which are taught to all genin level students whom have the early affinity for storm, teaching them to manifest and harness the energy beam of the storm.
    Description:
    The caster charges Räñton essence within thier finger tips and engraphs thier appropriate seal, etching thier glyphs with streaming energy beam chakra. The Räñton chakra accesses the atmosphere at will, allowing the caster to engraph fuuinjutsu directly upon the manifold of the air around them as a medium for the Storm Inscription Techniques. Can also inscribe Fuuinjutsu upon other standard, advanced, masterful, mythic, heroic, legendary, and divinal grade items.

    Spoiler:

    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~

    No.

    @KhaixRoze wrote:閃電箭 : Shǎndiàn Jian : Lightning Bolt
    Rank: D
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Ignition/Upkeep: E, D, C [Activation], E [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed:
    Handsigns: : Shè : Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma has a multitude of jutsu complementing the Tempest of the Gale, the Thunder of the Lightning, and the Hurricane of the storm. 'The Lightning Bolt' is a line of Räiton techniques which are linear, piercing and sundering armor and weapondry whist penetrating any barrier or formidable defence.
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave which vivifies up to three lightning bolts, cackling with excitement, out pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Aikuchi" or dagger, approximately twelve inches. While holstering a lightning bolt within the orbit of thr caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. While holstering three lightning bolts, the caster Speed, Coordination, or Perception increases by a major advantage (±+} , interchanging based on casters will and legacy. Each cast emanates a lightning bolt which can be utilized in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of an E Rank for chakra consumption. By conducting three Lightning Bolts, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    When thrown, the Lightning Bolt is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning bolt discharges in a large pop, shocking the opponent for minor damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst searing the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Bolt pierces through barriers and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Charging the Lightning Bolt Technique based upon rank vivifies a certain number of bolts, color, and piercing power:

    E ~ 3 White { Conduction ( 3 ): Speed, Coordination, Perception↑Raises Major Advantage {±±} }
    D ~ 6 Lightblue
    C ~ 10 Gold

    Spoiler:


    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~

    Remove the stat boosts and indicate that the number of bolts increases by 2 for every tier of Coordination.

    閃電蓮花 • { 矛 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Mäo } : Lightning Bolt • { Spear }
    Rank: C
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique:閃電箭 : Shǎndiàn Jian : Lightning Bolt
    Ignition/Upkeep: E, D, C [Activation], E [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed: ~
    Handsigns:   : Shè : Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma has a multitude of jutsu complementing the Tempest of the Gale, the Thunder of the Lightning, and the Hurricane of the storm. 'The Lightning Bolt' is a line of Räiton techniques which are linear, piercing and sundering armor and weapondry whist penetrating any barrier or formidable defence.
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave vivifing up to three lightning spears, cackling with excitement, within pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Nodachi" or Longsword, approximately one meter. While holstering a lightning spear within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. While holstering one lightning spear, the caster Strength, Coordination, or Perception increases by a tier {±±±}, interchanging based on casters will and legacy. Each cast emanates a lightning bolt which can be utilized in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of an E Rank for chakra consumption. By conducting one Lightning Spear, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    When thrown, the Lightning Spear is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning spear discharges in a gallant boom, shocking the opponent for major damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst searing the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Bolt pierces and sunders through barriers, weapons, and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Charging the Lightning Spear Technique based upon rank vivifies a certain number of bolts, color, and piercing power:

    C ~ 1 White { Conduction { 1 } : Strength, Coordination, Perception↑Raises One Tier {±±±} }
    B ~ 3 Lightblue
    A ~ 5 Gold { Maximizes 3 for Black Lightning }

    Spoiler:


    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~

    Remove the stat boosters and indicate that three manifest per tier of Coordination you have, rather than paying a different cost for different amounts. That or give it a static number regardless of the cost.

    @KhaixRoze wrote:閃電蓮花 • { 標槍 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Biäoqiäng } : Lightning Bolt • { Javalin }
    Rank: B
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique:閃電蓮花 • { 矛 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Mäo } : Lightning Bolt • { Spear }
    Ignition/Upkeep: B, A, S [Activation], C, B [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed: ~
    Handsigns: Mizuki : Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma has a multitude of jutsu complementing the Tempest of the Gale, the Thunder of the Lightning, and the Hurricane of the storm. 'The Lightning Bolt' is a line of Räiton techniques which are linear, piercing and sundering armor and weapondry whist penetrating any barrier or formidable defence.
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave vivifing up to three lightning spears, cackling with excitement, within pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Zweihander" or Grandsword, approximately one meter. While holstering a lightning javalin within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. While holstering one lightning javalin, the caster Strength, Coordination, or Perception increases by a tier {±±±}, interchanging based on casters will and legacy. Each cast emanates a lightning javalin which can be utilized in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of an E Rank for chakra consumption. By conducting one Lightning Javalin, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    When thrown, the Lightning Javalin is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning javalin discharges in an electric explosion spire, shocking the opponent for lethal damage and incinerating thier armor and weapons whilst immolating their charred carcass. Naturally, the Lightning Javalin pierces and sunders through barriers, weapons, and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Charging the Lightning Javalin Technique based upon rank vivifies a certain number of bolts, color, and piercing power:

    B ~ 1 White { Conduction { 1 } : Strength, Coordination, Perception↑Raises One Tier {±±±} }
    A ~ 3 Lightblue
    S ~ 5 Gold { Maximizes 3 for Black Lightning }

    Spoiler:


    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~

    Remove the stat boosts and this should be good to go imo.


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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by KhaixRoze on Tue Aug 21, 2018 5:26 am



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    [*]Strength: E
    [*]Constitution: C
    [*]Stamina: B { 160 }
    [*]Speed: S
    [*]Coordination: C
    [*]Intelligence: B
    [*]Perception: B

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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by Copycat on Tue Aug 21, 2018 1:37 pm


    閃電針 : Shǎndiàn Zhën : Lightning Needles
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Ignition/Upkeep: D, C [Activation], E [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed: ~
    Handsigns: : Shè :  Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma has a multitude of jutsu complementing the Tempest of the Gale, the Thunder of the Lightning, and the Hurricane of the storm. 'The Lightning Bolt' is a line of Räiton techniques which are linear, piercing and sundering armor and weapondry whist penetrating any barrier or formidable defence.
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence emitting an intense shockwave vivifing up to twelve lightning needles, cackling with excitement, with pure lightning energy orbiting the caster's body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Bo Shuriken" or Senbon, approximately three inches. While holstering needles within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands.While conducting six lightning needles, the caster's speed or coordination increases by a minor advantage {±}, interchanging based on casters will and legacy. Each cast emanates lightning needles which can be utilized in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of an E Rank for chakra consumption. When thrown, the Lightning needles are utilized by the caster, streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning needles discharges in a large pop, shocking the opponent for minor damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst sinking into the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Needle pierces through barriers and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Charging the Lightning Needle Technique based upon rank vivifies a certain number of needles, color, and piercing power:

    E ~ 12 White { Conduction ( 6 );  Speed, Coordination↑Raises Minor Advantage {±} }
    D ~ 25 Lightblue
    C ~ 50 Gold { Maximizes at D Rank }

    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~

    Drop the amount of needles to three per rank. Remove the speed and coordination buff.

    閃電蓮花矛 : Fēngbào Míngwén : Storm Inscription
    Rank: E
    Type: Fuuinjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique:風暴 : Fēngbào Liánhuā : Storm Lotus { Arashihaña }
    Ignition/Upkeep: D [Activation], E [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 嵐遁 : Räñton : Release of Storm
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed:
    Handsigns: : Shè :  Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma are known to be the reigning storm of the seas, manuevering the tempest of thier clouds and contortion the beams of the storm. This is a standard jutsu, which are taught to all genin level students whom have the early affinity for storm, teaching them to manifest and harness the energy beam of the storm.
    Description:
    The caster charges Räñton essence within thier finger tips and engraphs thier appropriate seal, etching thier glyphs with streaming energy beam chakra. The Räñton chakra accesses the atmosphere at will, allowing the caster to engraph fuuinjutsu directly upon the manifold of the air around them as a medium for the Storm Inscription Techniques. Can also inscribe Fuuinjutsu upon other E - D grade items.

    Spoiler:

    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~

    Still no. Drawing fuuinjutsu on the air in itself is already pretty iffy, but as an E-Rank? No.

    閃電箭 : Shǎndiàn Jian : Lightning Bolt
    Rank: D
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Ignition/Upkeep: E, D, C [Activation], E [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed:
    Handsigns: : Shè : Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma has a multitude of jutsu complementing the Tempest of the Gale, the Thunder of the Lightning, and the Hurricane of the storm. 'The Lightning Bolt' is a line of Räiton techniques which are linear, piercing and sundering armor and weapondry whist penetrating any barrier or formidable defence.
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave which vivifies up to three lightning bolts, cackling with excitement, out pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Aikuchi" or dagger, approximately twelve inches. While holstering a lightning bolt within the orbit of thr caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates five lightning bolts based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of an E Rank for chakra consumption. By conducting three Lightning Bolts, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    When thrown, the Lightning Bolt is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning bolt discharges in a large pop, shocking the opponent for minor damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst searing the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Bolt pierces through barriers and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Spoiler:


    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~

    Raise the upkeep to D and make the amount of bolts per tier of Coordination two.

    閃電蓮花 • { 矛 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Mäo } : Lightning Bolt • { Spear }
    Rank: C
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique:閃電箭 : Shǎndiàn Jian : Lightning Bolt
    Ignition/Upkeep: E, D, C [Activation], E [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed: ~
    Handsigns:   : Shè : Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma has a multitude of jutsu complementing the Tempest of the Gale, the Thunder of the Lightning, and the Hurricane of the storm. 'The Lightning Bolt' is a line of Räiton techniques which are linear, piercing and sundering armor and weapondry whist penetrating any barrier or formidable defence.
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave vivifing up to three lightning spears, cackling with excitement, within pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Nodachi" or Longsword, approximately one meter. While holstering a lightning spear within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates three lightning bolts based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of an E Rank for chakra consumption By conducting one Lightning Javalin, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    When thrown, the Lightning Spear is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning spear discharges in a gallant boom, shocking the opponent for major damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst searing the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Bolt pierces and sunders through barriers, weapons, and armor of the same and lesser rank. Three

    Spoiler:


    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~

    D Upkeep.

    閃電蓮花 • { 標槍 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Biäoqiäng } : Lightning Bolt • { Javalin }
    Rank: B
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique:閃電蓮花 • { 矛 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Mäo } : Lightning Bolt • { Spear }
    Ignition/Upkeep: B, A, S [Activation], C, B [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed: ~
    Handsigns: Mizuki : Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma has a multitude of jutsu complementing the Tempest of the Gale, the Thunder of the Lightning, and the Hurricane of the storm. 'The Lightning Bolt' is a line of Räiton techniques which are linear, piercing and sundering armor and weapondry whist penetrating any barrier or formidable defence.
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave vivifing up to three lightning spears, cackling with excitement, within pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Zweihander" or Grandsword, approximately one meter. While holstering a lightning javalin within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates one lightning bolt based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of an E Rank for chakra consumption By conducting one Lightning Javalin, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    When thrown, the Lightning Javalin is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning javalin discharges in an electric explosion spire, shocking the opponent for lethal damage and incinerating thier armor and weapons whilst immolating their charred carcass. Naturally, the Lightning Javalin pierces and sunders through barriers, weapons, and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Spoiler:


    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~

    D Upkeep. Make it one spear per activation cost you pay.


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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by Copycat on Tue Aug 21, 2018 5:05 pm

    @KhaixRoze wrote:

    閃電針 : Shǎndiàn Zhën : Lightning Needles
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Ignition/Upkeep: D, C [Activation] D [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed: ~
    Handsigns: : Shè :  Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma has a multitude of jutsu complementing the Tempest of the Gale, the Thunder of the Lightning, and the Hurricane of the storm. 'The Lightning Bolt' is a line of Räiton techniques which are linear, piercing and sundering armor and weapondry whist penetrating any barrier or formidable defence.
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence emitting an intense shockwave vivifing up to twelve lightning needles, cackling with excitement, with pure lightning energy orbiting the caster's body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Bo Shuriken" or Senbon, approximately three inches. While holstering needles within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates three lightning needles which can be utilized in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of an E Rank for chakra consumption. When thrown, the Lightning needles are utilized by the caster, streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning needles discharges in a large pop, shocking the opponent for minor damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst sinking into the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Needle pierces through barriers and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~
    ° Upkeep raised towards D Rank.
    ~∆pproval
    ~
    閃電箭 : Shǎndiàn Jian : Lightning Bolt
    Rank: D
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Ignition/Upkeep: E, D, C [Activation], D [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed:
    Handsigns: : Shè : Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma has a multitude of jutsu complementing the Tempest of the Gale, the Thunder of the Lightning, and the Hurricane of the storm. 'The Lightning Bolt' is a line of Räiton techniques which are linear, piercing and sundering armor and weapondry whist penetrating any barrier or formidable defence.
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave which vivifies up to three lightning bolts, cackling with excitement, out pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Aikuchi" or dagger, approximately twelve inches. While holstering a lightning bolt within the orbit of thr caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates two lightning bolts based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of chakra consumption. By conducting three Lightning Bolts, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    When thrown, the Lightning Bolt is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning bolt discharges in a large pop, shocking the opponent for minor damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst searing the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Bolt pierces through barriers and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Spoiler:


    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~
    ~∆pproval
    閃電蓮花 • { 矛 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Mäo } : Lightning Bolt • { Spear }
    Rank: C
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique:閃電箭 : Shǎndiàn Jian : Lightning Bolt
    Ignition/Upkeep: E, D, C [Activation], D [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed: ~
    Handsigns:   : Shè : Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma has a multitude of jutsu complementing the Tempest of the Gale, the Thunder of the Lightning, and the Hurricane of the storm. 'The Lightning Bolt' is a line of Räiton techniques which are linear, piercing and sundering armor and weapondry whist penetrating any barrier or formidable defence.
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave vivifing up to three lightning spears, cackling with excitement, within pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Nodachi" or Longsword, approximately one meter. While holstering a lightning spear within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates three lightning bolts based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep for chakra consumption By conducting one Lightning Javalin, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    When thrown, the Lightning Spear is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning spear discharges in a gallant boom, shocking the opponent for major damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst searing the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Bolt pierces and sunders through barriers, weapons, and armor of the same and lesser rank. Three

    Spoiler:


    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~
    ~∆pproval
    閃電蓮花 • { 標槍 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Biäoqiäng } : Lightning Bolt • { Javalin }
    Rank: B
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique:閃電蓮花 • { 矛 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Mäo } : Lightning Bolt • { Spear }
    Ignition/Upkeep: B, A, S [Activation], D [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed: ~
    Handsigns: Mizuki : Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma has a multitude of jutsu complementing the Tempest of the Gale, the Thunder of the Lightning, and the Hurricane of the storm. 'The Lightning Bolt' is a line of Räiton techniques which are linear, piercing and sundering armor and weapondry whist penetrating any barrier or formidable defence.
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave vivifing up to three lightning spears, cackling with excitement, within pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Zweihander" or Grandsword, approximately one meter. While holstering a lightning javalin within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates one lightning bolt based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep for chakra consumption By conducting one Lightning Javalin, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    When thrown, the Lightning Javalin is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning javalin discharges in an electric explosion spire, shocking the opponent for lethal damage and incinerating thier armor and weapons whilst immolating their charred carcass. Naturally, the Lightning Javalin pierces and sunders through barriers, weapons, and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Spoiler:


    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~
    ~∆pproval

    EDIT : it should be all here.

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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by KhaixRoze on Wed Aug 22, 2018 1:44 pm


    消毒 : Xiaodu : Steralization Technique
    Rank: E
    Skill Type Ijutsu, Chemistry
    Sub-Type: ( Supplimental )
    Classification: Kumogakure Medical Corps.
    Requirements: ~
    Parent Technique:
    ~
    Ignition//Upkeep : E
    Element:
    ~
    Range:
    Personal - Close { 0hm - 6m }
    Speed:
    ~
    Hand Seals:
    ~
    Lore//Flavor:
    The Kumogakurian Medical Corps are reserved specifically for the specialist of Ijutsu, Medical and Healing Techniques. They are known for thier advanced techniques of Ijutsu, toxicology and antibiotics. They are always enhanced with ingenuic medical grade techniques which Accel upon the field or within infirmary.
    Description:
    Technique which doctors and nurses favor for quickly cleaning surfaces of thier tools and clothing. The priest draws chakra from thier well within thier palms and covers thier hands with the essence, akin gloves. Afterwards the chakra diffuses any form of minor germs and diseases from the hands and surfaces the hands touch while activating the technique.  
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~
    ~
    毒藥 抵抗 : Dúyào Dǐkång : Poison Resistance
    Rank: B
    Skill Type Ijutsu, Chemistry
    Sub-Type: ( Passive, Supplimental )
    Classification: Kumogakure Medical Corps.
    Requirements: Intellect Rank B
    Parent Technique:
    ~
    Ignition//Upkeep : C [Activation], D [Upkeep]
    Element:
    ~
    Range:
    Personal { 0hm }
    Speed:
    ~
    Hand Seals:
    ~
    Lore//Flavor:
    The Kumogakurian Medical Corps are reserved specifically for the specialist of Ijutsu, Medical and Healing Techniques. They are known for thier advanced techniques of Ijutsu, toxicology and antibiotics. They are always enhanced with ingenuic medical grade techniques which Accel upon the field or within infirmary.
    Description:
    If ever invited by toxicology, whether by ingestation, inhalation, or uninvited stings or venomous bites, the priest will charge chakra throughout thier meridians, causing thier body to raise resistances and halt the progression of the pardoned toxicology. By stopping it's progression, the caster can halt it's effects before they take place by donating upkeep per turn to blockade the toxicology from infection and thus keep the toxin subdued. This does not cure the toxicology, nor does it allow the poison to spread into the body without being fully captured within a gaseous bubble of air. Afterwards, the caster manipulates the toxicology with chakra, for activation cost, and replicates it's quality and increases it's quantities, utilizing the waste and fluids within thier own body, which can be expel the toxicology as a poison liquid, mist, or gas, blanketing the field with carcinogens. This also allows the caster to injest and diffuse poisons before any ill effects are bestowed upon ailed as a swift action. This technique also allows the caster to sample a poison to store within thier bodies for long periods of time, without falling ill to it's effects, replicating and creating immunity. Immunity to a specific toxicology has to be RP'd as a B Rank Craft.
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~
    ~
    查克拉手術刀:擴展Chá Kèlā Shǒushù Dāo: Kuòzhǎn • Chakra Scalpel: Extension
    Rank: C
    Skill Type Ijutsu, Kenjutsu
    Sub-Type: ( Supplimental, Offensive )
    Classification: Kumogakure Medical Corps.
    Requirements: Intellect Rank B, Chakra Scapel
    Parent Technique:
    ~
    Ignition//Upkeep : C [Activation], D [Upkeep]
    Element:
    ~
    Range:
    Personal { 0hm }
    Speed:
    ~
    Hand Seals:
    ~
    Lore//Flavor:
    The Kumogakurian Medical Corps are reserved specifically for the specialist of Ijutsu, Medical and Healing Techniques. They are known for thier advanced techniques of ijutsu, toxicology and antibiotics. They are always enhanced with ingenuic medical grade techniques which Accel upon the field or within infirmary.
    Description:
    In charging the chakra essence needed for the prerequisite, Chakra Scapel, the caster pans the range of it's capabilities by plunging chakra forward from center of thier palm after covering the hands with energy. The Essence Blade is a technique in which the the user creates a blade out of pure energy, retaining the prior effects of Chakra Scapel.

    The mininum length of the blade is an "Aikuchi Ken" or dagger, approximately twelve inches. The maximum length of the blade is a "Tachira Ken" or greatsword, approximately a meter and a half. The blade when created is strong enough to deflect material objects and weapons as it acts as an overall blade.
    Spoiler:



    Drawback//Weaknesses:~
    ~
    解剖刀片:外科層雲 : Jiě Pǒu Dāopiàn: Wàikē Céngyún : Dissection Blade: Surgical Stratus
    Rank: S
    Skill Type Ijutsu
    Sub-Type: ( Supplimental )
    Classification: Kumogakure Medical Corps.
    Requirements: Intellect Rank B
    Parent Technique:
    Chakra Scapel, Dissection Blade
    Ignition//Upkeep : A [Activation], C [Upkeep]
    Element:
    ~
    Range:
    Personal { 0hm }
    Speed:
    ~
    Hand Seals:
    ~
    Lore//Flavor:
    The Kumogakurian Medical Corps are reserved specifically for the specialist of Ijutsu, Medical and Healing Techniques. They are known for thier advanced techniques of ijutsu, toxicology and antibiotics. They are always enhanced with ingenuic medical grade techniques which Accel upon the field or within infirmary.
    Description:
    The Dissection Blade : Surgical Stratus gifts both agility and reflexes by boosting the coordination and speed of the caster by a tier while utilizing Chakra Scapel.
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~
    ~
    解剖刀片:戰鬥平靜Jiě Pǒu Doāpiàn: Zhàndòu Píngjìng • Dissection Blade: Battle Calm
    Rank: S
    Skill Type Ijutsu
    Sub-Type: ( Supplimental )
    Classification: Kumogakure Medical Corps.
    Requirements: Intellect Rank B
    Parent Technique:
    Chakra Scapel, Dissection Blade
    Ignition//Upkeep : A [Activation], C [Upkeep]
    Element:
    ~
    Range:
    Personal { 0hm }
    Speed:
    ~
    Hand Seals:
    ~
    Lore//Flavor:
    The Kumogakurian Medical Corps are reserved specifically for the specialist of Ijutsu, Medical and Healing Techniques. They are known for thier advanced techniques of ijutsu, toxicology and antibiotics. They are always enhanced with ingenuic medical grade techniques which Accel upon the field or within infirmary.
    Description:
    The Dissection Blade : Surgical Stratus gifts both Might and Muscle by boosting the Strength and Constitution of the caster by a tier while utilizing Chakra Scapel.
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~
    ~
    解剖刀片:冥想移情Jiě Pǒu Dāopiàn: Míngxiǎng Yí Qíng • Dissection Blade: Meditative Empathy
    Rank: S
    Skill Type Ijutsu
    Sub-Type: ( Supplimental  )
    Classification: Kumogakure Medical Corps.
    Requirements: Intellect Rank B
    Parent Technique:
    Chakra Scapel, Dissection Blade
    Ignition//Upkeep : A [Activation], C [Upkeep]
    Element:
    ~
    Range:
    Personal { 0hm }
    Speed:
    ~
    Hand Seals:
    ~
    Lore//Flavor:
    The Kumogakurian Medical Corps are reserved specifically for the specialist of Ijutsu, Medical and Healing Techniques. They are known for thier advanced techniques of ijutsu, toxicology and antibiotics. They are always enhanced with ingenuic medical grade techniques which Accel upon the field or within infirmary.
    Description:
    The Dissection Blade : Meditative Empathy gifts both precision and accuracy by boosting the perception of the caster by two tiers while utilizing Chakra Scapel. This naturally grants an implant and surgical bonus of +20 while utlizing the Chakra Scalpel.
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~

    Spoiler:


    Name:消毒 : Xiaodu : Steralization Technique
    Rank: E
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: E
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Personal { 0hm - 3m }
    Speed: ~
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutsu, Chemistry
    Classification: Kumogakure Medical Corps
    Requirements: ~
    Parent Technique:  ~
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    Technique which doctors and nurses favor for quickly cleaning surfaces of thier tools and clothing. The priest draws chakra from thier well within thier palms and covers thier hands with the essence, akin gloves. Afterwards the chakra diffuses any form of minor germs, pathogens, and infections from the hands and surfaces the hands touch while activating the technique.  
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~
    ~
    Name:毒藥 抵抗 : Dúyào Dǐkång : Poison Resistance
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: C
    Upkeep Cost: D
    Range: Personal { 0hm - 3m }
    Speed: ~
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutsu, Chemistry
    Classification: Kumogakure Medical Corps
    Requirements: ~
    Parent Technique:  Chemistry
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    If ever invited by toxicology, whether by ingestation, inhalation, or uninvited stings or venomous bites, the priest will charge chakra throughout thier meridians, causing thier body to raise resistances and halt the progression of the pardoned toxicology. By stopping it's progression, the caster can halt it's effects before they take place by donating upkeep per turn to blockade the toxicology from infection and thus keep the toxin subdued. This does not cure the toxicology, nor does it allow the poison to spread into the body without being fully captured within a gaseous bubble of air. Afterwards, the caster manipulates the toxicology with chakra, for activation cost, and replicates it's quality and increases it's quantities, utilizing the waste and fluids within thier own body, which can be expel the toxicology as a poison liquid, mist, or gas, blanketing the field with carcinogens. This also allows the caster to injest and diffuse poisons before any ill effects are bestowed upon ailed as a swift action. This technique also allows the caster to sample a poison to store within thier bodies for long periods of time, without falling ill to it's effects, replicating and creating immunity. Immunity to a specific toxicology has to be RP'd as a B Rank Craft.
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~
    ~
    Name:查克拉手術刀:擴展Chá Kèlā Shǒushù Dāo: Kuòzhǎn • Chakra Scalpel: Extension
    Rank: E
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: E
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Personal { 0hm - 3m }
    Speed: ~
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutsu, Chemistry
    Classification: Kumogakure Medical Corps
    Requirements: ~
    Parent Technique:  ~
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    In charging the chakra essence needed for the prerequisite, Chakra Scapel, the caster pans the range of it's capabilities by plunging chakra forward from center of thier palm after covering the hands with energy. The Essence Blade is a technique in which the the user creates a blade out of pure energy, retaining the prior effects of Chakra Scapel.

    The mininum length of the blade is an "Aikuchi Ken" or dagger, approximately twelve inches. The maximum length of the blade is a "Tachira Ken" or greatsword, approximately a meter and a half. The blade when created is strong enough to deflect material objects and weapons as it acts as an overall blade.

    Spoiler:




     
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~
    ~
    Name:解剖刀片:外科層雲 : Jiě Pǒu Dāopiàn: Wàikē Céngyún : Dissection Blade: Surgical Stratus
    Rank: S
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: C
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Personal { 0hm - 3m }
    Speed: ~
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutsu, Chemistry
    Classification: Kumogakure Medical Corps
    Requirements: Intellect Rank B
    Parent Technique: Chakra Scapel, Dissection Blade
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    The Dissection Blade : Surgical Stratus gifts both agility and reflexes by boosting the coordination and speed of the caster by a tier while utilizing Chakra Scapel.
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~
    ~
    Name:解剖刀片:戰鬥平靜Jiě Pǒu Doāpiàn: Zhàndòu Píngjìng • Dissection Blade: Battle Calm
    Rank: S
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: C
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Personal { 0hm - 3m }
    Speed: ~
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutsu, Chemistry
    Classification: Kumogakure Medical Corps
    Requirements: Intellect Rank B
    Parent Technique: Chakra Scapel, Dissection Blade
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    The Dissection Blade : Surgical Stratus gifts both Might and Muscle by boosting the Strength and Constitution of the caster by a tier while utilizing Chakra Scapel.
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~
    ~
    Name:解剖刀片:冥想移情Jiě Pǒu Dāopiàn: Míngxiǎng Yí Qíng • Dissection Blade: Meditative Empathy
    Rank: S
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: C
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Personal { 0hm - 3m }
    Speed: ~
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutsu, Chemistry
    Classification: Kumogakure Medical Corps
    Requirements: Intellect Rank B
    Parent Technique: Chakra Scapel, Dissection Blade
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    The Dissection Blade : Meditative Empathy gifts both precision and accuracy by boosting the perception of the caster by two tiers while utilizing Chakra Scapel. This naturally grants an implant and surgical bonus of +20 while utlizing the Chakra Scalpel
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~





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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by Copycat on Sat Aug 25, 2018 1:04 pm

    Sorry but ya stuff's on hold until you use the actual templates. Gotta use the standard format.


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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by KhaixRoze on Tue Aug 28, 2018 10:49 am

    Oh.
    There is a spoiler at the end of the post to show the formatted techniques.
    I'll include a spoiler for now on so you can have something to grade.
    I appreciate the alleviancy
    ^__^v

    http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t1059-eyes-of-the-tempest#7746

    Also made changes to Lightning Needles

    Original Tech
    閃電針 : Shǎndiàn Zhën : Lightning Needles
    Rank: E
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Sub-type: Supplementary, Offensive
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Ignition/Upkeep: D, C [Activation] D [Upkeep]
    Elemental Affinity: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed: ~
    Handsigns: : Shè :  Serpentine
    Lore/Flavor:
    The Ïnazüma has a multitude of jutsu complementing the Tempest of the Gale, the Thunder of the Lightning, and the Hurricane of the storm. 'The Lightning Bolt' is a line of Räiton techniques which are linear, piercing and sundering armor and weapondry whist penetrating any barrier or formidable defence.
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence emitting an intense shockwave vivifing up to twelve lightning needles, cackling with excitement, with pure lightning energy orbiting the caster's body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Bo Shuriken" or Senbon, approximately three inches. While holstering needles within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates three lightning needles which can be utilized in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of an E Rank for chakra consumption. When thrown, the Lightning needles are utilized by the caster, streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning needles discharges in a large pop, shocking the opponent for minor damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst sinking into the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Needle pierces through barriers and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Drawback//Weaknesses: ~

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    Altered Tech
    Name:閃電針 : Shǎndiàn Zhën : Lightning Needles
    Rank: C
    Power: D, C
    Activation Cost: E, D, C
    Upkeep Cost: E
    Range: Personal - Close { 0m - 36m }
    Speed: ~
    Element:  雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements:  Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence emitting an intense shockwave vivifing lightning needles, cackling with excitement, with pure lightning energy orbiting the caster's body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Bo Shuriken" or Senbon, approximately three inches. While holstering needles within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates three lightning needles, based upon rank of coordination, which can be utilized in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of an E Rank for chakra consumption. When thrown, the Lightning needles are utilized by the caster, streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning needles discharges in a large pop, shocking the opponent for minor damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst sinking into the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Needle pierces through barriers and armor of the same and lesser rank.


    Drawback//Weaknesses:~

    I increased power to D and kept its rank at C.
    Its ignition is also E, D C.
    Shifted number of needles based on Coordination
    And maximizing DMG//Power at C, when Ignition of C



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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by Copycat on Wed Aug 29, 2018 4:21 am

    @KhaixRoze wrote:Name:閃電針 : Shǎndiàn Zhën : Lightning Needles
    Rank: E
    Power: D, C
    Activation Cost: E, D, C
    Upkeep Cost: E
    Range: Personal - Close { 0m - 36m }
    Speed: ~
    Element:  雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements:  Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence emitting an intense shockwave vivifing up to twelve lightning needles, cackling with excitement, with pure lightning energy orbiting the caster's body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Bo Shuriken" or Senbon, approximately three inches. While holstering needles within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates three lightning needles which can be utilized in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of an E Rank for chakra consumption. When thrown, the Lightning needles are utilized by the caster, streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning needles discharges in a large pop, shocking the opponent for minor damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst sinking into the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Needle pierces through barriers and armor of the same and lesser rank.
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~

    Bump the rank to C; you can still keep its current statistics even with the letter rank change. Just feel that it's too low ranking considering the amount of variation.


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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by KhaixRoze on Wed Aug 29, 2018 1:49 pm

    It's official for lightning needs.
    Require the rest of the jutsu to checked, please.
    http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t1059-eyes-of-the-tempest#8104
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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by Shimiko Chinoike on Mon Sep 03, 2018 10:19 am

    @KhaixRoze wrote:
    It's official for lightning needs.
    Require the rest of the jutsu to checked, please.
    http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t1059-eyes-of-the-tempest#8104
    I appreciate the alleviancy

    They need to be in our template if you want them checked.


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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by KhaixRoze on Mon Sep 03, 2018 10:28 pm

    What was the spoiler at the end of the post for?
    http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t1059-eyes-of-the-tempest#7746



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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by Ryuko on Sat Sep 08, 2018 11:13 pm

    Name:消毒 : Xiaodu : Steralization Technique
    Rank: E
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: E
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Personal { 0hm - 3m }
    Speed: ~
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutsu
    Classification:  Village Exclusive (Kumo), Open
    Requirements: ~
    Parent Technique:  ~
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    Technique which doctors and nurses favor for quickly cleaning surfaces of thier tools and clothing. The priest draws chakra from thier well within thier palms and covers thier hands with the essence, akin gloves. Afterwards the chakra diffuses any form of minor germs, pathogens, and infections from the hands and surfaces the hands touch while activating the technique.  
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~

    Approved

    Name:毒藥 抵抗 : Dúyào Dǐkång : Poison Resistance
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: B
    Upkeep Cost: C
    Range: Personal { 0hm - 3m }
    Speed: ~
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutsu
    Classification:  Village Exclusive (Kumo), Open
    Requirements: ~
    Parent Technique:  ~
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    If ever invited by toxicology, whether by ingestation, inhalation, or uninvited stings or venomous bites, the priest will charge chakra throughout thier meridians, causing thier body to raise resistances and halt the progression of the pardoned toxicology. By stopping it's progression, the caster can halt it's effects before they take place by donating upkeep per turn to blockade the toxicology from infection and thus keep the toxin subdued. This does not cure the toxicology, nor does it allow the poison to spread into the body without being fully captured within a gaseous bubble of air. Afterwards, the caster manipulates the toxicology with chakra, for activation cost, and replicates it's quality and increases it's quantities, utilizing the waste and fluids within thier own body, which can be expel the toxicology as a poison liquid, mist, or gas, blanketing the field with carcinogens. This also allows the caster to injest and diffuse poisons before any ill effects are bestowed upon ailed as a swift action. This technique also allows the caster to sample a poison to store within thier bodies for long periods of time, without falling ill to it's effects, replicating and creating immunity. Immunity to a specific toxicology has to be RP'd as a B Rank Craft.
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~

    This is way way too strong for a B rank tech.  Especially consdering it doesn't have any drawback weakness.
    Halting the spread of poison within the body while it's active would be fine as a B rank,  The costs where too low so I adjusted them thought it still needs a draw back of some kind like lowering a stat while it's active  

    Allowing the long term storage of poison in the body on the other hand would be something seperate all of it's own since that's vering into Unqiue ability terriatory.  The  same for granting outright immunity to a specific poison thought the use of this techique.  That seems like it should be a restricted    

    Name:查克拉手術刀:擴展Chá Kèlā Shǒushù Dāo: Kuòzhǎn • Chakra Scalpel: Extension
    Rank: B/A
    Power: B/A
    Activation Cost: --
    Upkeep Cost: 10/15
    Range: Personal { 0hm - 3m }
    Speed: ~
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutsu
    Classification: Village Exclusive (Kumo), Open
    Requirements: ~
    Parent Technique: Chakra Scalpel
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    In charging the chakra essence needed for the prerequisite, Chakra Scapel, the caster pans the range of it's capabilities by plunging chakra forward from center of thier palm after covering the hands with energy. The Essence Blade is a technique in which the the user creates a blade out of pure energy, retaining the prior effects of Chakra Scapel.

    At B rank the blade is an "Aikuchi Ken" or dagger, approximately twelve inches. At A rank length of the blade is a "Tachira Ken" or greatsword, approximately a meter and a half. The blade when created is strong enough to deflect material objects and weapons as it acts as an overall blade.

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    Drawback//Weaknesses:~  The cost for this jutsu stacks ontop of the cost of the normal Chakra Scalpel

    I had to heavily edit this since the cost for effect was rediculously low especially when you take into account what the Dissection blade Extension does. This is like an amped up version combined with Dissection Blade: Focusing since it acts like an actual blades and needs to have the proper cost associated with that

    If you're ok with the edits then approved

    Name:解剖刀片:外科層雲 : Jiě Pǒu Dāopiàn: Wàikē Céngyún : Dissection Blade: Surgical Stratus
    Rank: S
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: C
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Personal { 0hm - 3m }
    Speed: ~
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutsu,
    Classification:  Village Exclusive (Kumo), Open
    Requirements: Intellect Rank B
    Parent Technique: Chakra Scapel, Dissection Blade
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    The Dissection Blade : Surgical Stratus gifts both agility and reflexes by boosting the coordination and speed of the caster by a tier while utilizing Chakra Scapel.
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~

    Why is this tech boosting stats for no desernable reason? There needs to be some logic behind where the buffs are coming from   The Dissection blade is already a fighting style in of itself, is this a more advance version of that?  Also as an S rank tech it's cost is way to low. Especially without a upkeep.  And where's the drawback weakness?



    Name:解剖刀片:戰鬥平靜Jiě Pǒu Doāpiàn: Zhàndòu Píngjìng • Dissection Blade: Battle Calm
    Rank: S
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: C
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Personal { 0hm - 3m }
    Speed: ~
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutsu,
    Classification:  Village Exclusive (Kumo), Open
    Requirements: Intellect Rank B
    Parent Technique: Chakra Scapel, Dissection Blade
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    The Dissection Blade : Battle calm grants both Might and Muscle by boosting the Strength and Constitution of the caster by a tier while utilizing Chakra Scapel.  
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~

    Ditto what I said about the last jutsu.  And obviously you can't stack both Surgical Stratus and Battle Calm at the same time


    Name:解剖刀片:冥想移情Jiě Pǒu Dāopiàn: Míngxiǎng Yí Qíng • Dissection Blade: Meditative Empathy
    Rank: S
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: C
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Personal { 0hm - 3m }
    Speed: ~
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutsu
    Classification:  Village Exclusive (Kumo), Open
    Requirements: Intellect Rank B
    Parent Technique: Chakra Scapel, Dissection Blade
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    The Dissection Blade : Meditative Empathy gifts both precision and accuracy by boosting the perception of the caster by two tiers while utilizing Chakra Scapel. This naturally grants an implant and surgical bonus of +20 while utlizing the Chakra Scalpel
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~


    Ditto what I said about the last two jutsu. In addtion jutsu that effect implant bonuses are flat out not allowed.


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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by KhaixRoze on Sun Sep 09, 2018 2:44 am

    Name:毒藥 抵抗 : Dúyào Dǐkång  : Poison Resistance
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: C
    Upkeep Cost: D
    Range: Personal { 0hm - 3m }
    Speed: ~
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutsu, Chemistry
    Classification: Hiden; Kumogakure Medical Corps
    Requirements: ~
    Parent Technique:  Chemistry
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    If ever invited by toxicology, whether by ingestation, inhalation, or uninvited stings or venomous bites, the priest will charge chakra throughout thier meridians, causing thier body to raise resistances and halt the progression of the pardoned toxicology. By stopping it's progression, the caster can halt it's effects before they take place by donating upkeep per turn to blockade the toxicology from infection and thus keep the toxin subdued. This does not cure the toxicology, nor does it allow the poison to spread into the body without being fully captured within a gaseous bubble of air. Afterwards, the caster manipulates the toxicology with chakra, for activation cost, and replicates it's quality and increases it's quantities, utilizing the waste and fluids within thier own body, which can be expel the toxicology as a poison liquid, mist, or gas, blanketing the field with carcinogens. This also allows the caster to injest and diffuse poisons before any ill effects are bestowed upon ailed as a swift action. This technique also allows the caster to sample a poison to store within thier bodies for long periods of time, without falling ill to it's effects, replicating and creating immunity. Immunity to a specific toxicology has to be RP'd as a B Rank Craft.
    Drawback//Weaknesses:~

    Classification of the jutsu for the Medical Corps of Kumogakure, Chemistry or Ijutsu.
    Particularly, It's a hiden. And the storage of a toxicology is simply Ijutsu or Chemistry. It doesn't require any form UA, due to the fact Ijutsu and Chemist can openly create poisons and antidotes, store them in vials. It's no difference in the storage of Anatomy and Physiology; The Endocrine System: the Pancreas, Kidneys, or the Gall Baldder naturally stores Bile, blood, and liquids, then secretes it upon digestion or will. Curatively, purifying the toxin is indigestion or regurgitation of the substance stored, akin the body naturally expells waste. All it requires is a lil chakra. Regardless if they are inebriated, drinking the alcohol on several occasions develops an immunity to the intoxicant. Reason why some people drink beer, to wine, towards liquor. It's the same process of repetitious drinking, evolving the lack of inebriation, then expelling the waste through urine or defication.
    It's the same process.

    I'll bestow changes towards the other techniques soon.
    I appreciate your Alleviancy, Ryuko


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    [*]Constitution: C
    [*]Stamina: B { 160 }
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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by Ryuko on Sun Sep 09, 2018 3:40 am

    [quote="KhaixRoze"]


    Classification of the jutsu for the Medical Corps of Kumogakure, Chemistry or Ijutsu.
    Particularly, It's a hiden. And the storage of a toxicology is simply Ijutsu or Chemistry. It doesn't require any form UA, due to the fact Ijutsu and Chemist can openly create poisons and antidotes, store them in vials. It's no difference in the storage of Anatomy and Physiology; The Endocrine System: the Pancreas, Kidneys, or the Gall Baldder naturally stores Bile, blood, and liquids, then secretes it upon digestion or will. Curatively, purifying the toxin is indigestion or regurgitation of the substance stored, akin the body naturally expells waste. All it requires is a lil chakra. Regardless if they are inebriated, drinking the alcohol on several occasions develops an immunity to the intoxicant. Reason why some people drink beer, to wine, towards liquor. It's the same process of repetitious drinking, evolving the lack of inebriation, then expelling the waste through urine or defication.
    It's the same process.


    There's a number of problems with that jutsu which is partly why I rebalanced it for you to save time.

    A Jutsu being B rank but having a C rank actavation cost and a D rank upkeep generally isn't going to fly around here. At least not unless it's Taijutsu or it has a a sever weakness/downside to justify the lower cost.

    Having it be classified to the Medical Corps of Kumogakure is a problem since that's a group that simply doesn't exist at this point in time.

    Requiring Chemistry is redundant in this case and will only serve to hard limit the number of people who can learn the jutsu. A medic would already know what they need for that.

    Storing it in a vial is one thing, keeping it inside your own body is another and increadably dangerious. One slip up with the chakra keeping it at bay and it'll start spreading again. Maybe that could be the downside. The jutsu requires concentration to maintain. You get hit and it's cancled out letting the poison spread. And since it requires concentration you can't use another concentration type jutsu at the same time.

    As for the rest it's simply a matter of game balance. Being able to slow down a poison, store it long term and then grant immunity to said poison all at once is just plain broken. Doubly so since you still haven't added any drawback/weakness to the jutsu at all like I requested.

    If you want that type of thing you will either need a UA which will grant it immunity towards your own specific poison but leaves the door open for other kinds. A KKG that deals with that sort of thing or a resticted tech. No if, ends or butts.


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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by KhaixRoze on Sun Sep 09, 2018 4:45 am

    Name:毒藥 抵抗 : Dúyào Dǐkång  : Poison Resistance
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: B
    Upkeep Cost: C
    Range: Personal { 0hm - 3m }
    Speed: ~
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: ~
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    If ever invited by toxicology, whether by ingestation, inhalation, or uninvited stings or venomous bites, the priest will charge chakra throughout thier meridians, causing thier body to raise resistances and halt the progression of the pardoned toxicology. By stopping it's progression, the caster can halt it's effects before they take place by donating upkeep per turn to blockade the toxicology from infection and thus keep the toxin subdued. This does not cure the toxicology, nor does it allow the poison to spread into the body without being fully captured within a gaseous bubble of air. Afterwards, the caster manipulates the toxicology with chakra, for activation cost, and replicates it's quality and increases it's quantities, utilizing the waste and fluids within thier own body, which can be expel the toxicology as a poison liquid, mist, or gas, blanketing the field with carcinogens. This also allows the caster to injest and diffuse poisons before any ill effects are bestowed upon ailed as a swift action.
    Drawback//Weaknesses: Requires centration upon the resistance to poison, if affected. Being hit which centration on the poison will sever the concentration of the technique

    I was told there is a medical facility within Kumogakure, thus I appropiated for the medical corps which runs such facility.
    Howevermore, I added the drawback. Removed immunity and will properly utilize your suggestion for creating a UA or Kinjutsu.
    BTW. I also added Ijutsu or Chemist to compensate, since chemist can also acquire and utilize posions//antidotes.
    I appreciate your Alleviancy.


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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by Ryuko on Sun Sep 09, 2018 5:54 pm

    @KhaixRoze wrote:
    Name:毒藥 抵抗 : Dúyào Dǐkång  : Poison Resistance
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: B
    Upkeep Cost: C
    Range: Personal { 0hm - 3m }
    Speed: ~
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutsu
    Classification: Hiden
    Requirements: ~
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    If ever invited by toxicology, whether by ingestation, inhalation, or uninvited stings or venomous bites, the priest will charge chakra throughout thier meridians, causing thier body to raise resistances and halt the progression of the pardoned toxicology. By stopping it's progression, the caster can halt it's effects before they take place by donating upkeep per turn to blockade the toxicology from infection and thus keep the toxin subdued. This does not cure the toxicology, nor does it allow the poison to spread into the body without being fully captured within a gaseous bubble of air. Afterwards, the caster manipulates the toxicology with chakra, for activation cost, and replicates it's quality and increases it's quantities, utilizing the waste and fluids within thier own body, which can be expel the toxicology as a poison liquid, mist, or gas, blanketing the field with carcinogens. This also allows the caster to injest and diffuse poisons before any ill effects are bestowed upon ailed as a swift action.
    Drawback//Weaknesses: Requires centration upon the resistance to poison, if affected. Being hit which centration on the poison will sever the concentration of the technique


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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by KhaixRoze on Mon Sep 10, 2018 9:23 am

    天堂的暴風雨融合 : Tiāntáng de Bàofēngyǔ Rónghé : Heavenly Tempest Convergence
    Rank: S
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: A
    Upkeep Cost: C
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed: Based on Coordination
    Element: 風遁 : Fūton : Style of Wind
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: : Shè : Serpentine
    Description: This technique enables the user to control wind and gas around oneself much like Gaara controls his sand. It can be used to block most incoming attacks, bind or knockback opponents with concussive force. Grants the user with shape manipulation of the wind, gifting it various feats unknown outside the techniques of the Füton element which the caster wouldn't normally have without the Heavenly Tempest Convergence. It is able to extract and utilise air from water, and as is very effective moist areas and any terrain which wind would be specified.
    Drawbacks//Weaknesses: ~


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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by Copycat on Tue Sep 11, 2018 2:06 am

    @KhaixRoze wrote:
    天堂的暴風雨融合 : Tiāntáng de Bàofēngyǔ Rónghé : Heavenly Tempest Convergence
    Rank: S
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: A
    Upkeep Cost: C
    Range: Personal - Close [0m - 36m]
    Speed: Based on Coordination
    Element: 風遁 : Fūton : Style of Wind
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: : Shè : Serpentine
    Description: This technique enables the user to control wind and gas around oneself much like Gaara controls his sand. It can be used to block most incoming attacks, bind or knockback opponents with concussive force. Grants the user with shape manipulation of the wind, gifting it various feats unknown outside the techniques of the Füton element which the caster wouldn't normally have without the Heavenly Tempest Convergence. It is able to extract and utilise air from water, and as is very effective moist areas and any terrain which wind would be specified.
    Drawbacks//Weaknesses: ~

    No bueno. Unlike Gaara's sand control or water convergence you have an infinite supply, air itself.


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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by KhaixRoze on Fri Sep 14, 2018 9:22 am

    Repost of previous techniques in template and slight changes.
    Removed Caps on Vivification.
    Based Speed of technique by Coordination of User
    Original Format

    Name:閃電針 : Shǎndiàn Zhën : Lightning Needles
    Rank: C
    Power: D, C
    Activation Cost: E, D, C
    Upkeep Cost: E
    Range: Personal - Medium { 0m - 36m }
    Speed: Based on Coordination - ¹ tier
    Element: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements:  Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence emitting an intense shockwave vivifing lightning needles, cackling with excitement, with pure lightning energy orbiting the caster's body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Bo Shuriken" or Senbon, approximately three inches. While holstering needles within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates three lightning needles, based upon rank of coordination, which can be utilized in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of an E Rank for chakra consumption. When thrown, the Lightning needles are utilized by the caster, streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning needles discharges in a large pop, shocking the opponent for minor damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst sinking into the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Needle pierces through barriers and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Drawback//Weaknesses:~
    ~
    閃電箭 : Shǎndiàn Jian : Lightning Bolt
    Rank: D
    Power: E, D, C
    Activation Cost: E, D, C
    Upkeep Cost: E, D
    Range: Personal - Medium [0m - 36m]
    Speed: Based on Coordination - ¹ tier
    Element: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: : Shè : Serpentine
    Description: A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave which vivifing lightning bolts, cackling with excitement I  pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with celestial flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Aikuchi" or dagger, approximately twelve inches. While holstering a lightning bolt within the orbit of th caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates three lightning bolts based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of the appropiate chakra consumption. By conducting three Lightning Bolts, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

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    When thrown, the Lightning Bolt is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning bolt discharges in a large pop, shocking the opponent for minor damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst searing the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Bolt pierces through barriers and armor of the same and lesser rank.
    Weaknesses: ~
    ~
    閃電蓮花 • { 矛 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Mäo } : Lightning Bolt • { Spear }
    Rank: C
    Power: E, D, C
    Activation Cost: E, D, C
    Upkeep Cost: E, D
    Range: Personal - Medium [0m - 36m]
    Speed: Based on Coordination - ¹ tier
    Element: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: 閃電箭 : Shǎndiàn Jian : Lightning Bolt
    Hand Seals: : Shè : Serpentine
    Description: A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave vivifing lightning spears, cackling with excitement in pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with celestial flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Nodachi" or Longsword, approximately one meter. While holstering a lightning spear within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates three lightning bolts based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep for the appropiate chakra consumption. By conducting one Lightning Javalin, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

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    When thrown, the Lightning Spear is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning spear discharges in a gallant boom, shocking the opponent for major damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst searing the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Bolt pierces and sunders through barriers, weapons, and armor of the same and lesser rank. Three

    Weaknesses: ~
    ~
    閃電蓮花 • { 標槍 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Biäoqiäng } : Lightning Bolt • { Javalin }
    Rank: B
    Power: B, A, S
    Activation Cost: B, A, S
    Upkeep Cost: C, B, A
    Range: Personal - Medium [0m - 36m]
    Speed: Based on Coordination - ¹ tier
    Element: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: 閃電蓮花 • { 矛 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Mäo } : Lightning Bolt • { Spear }
    Hand Seals: : Shè : Serpentine
    Description: A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave vivifing lightning javalins, cackling with excitement in pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with celestial flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Zweihander" or Grandsword, approximately one meter. While holstering a lightning javalin within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates one lightning bolt based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep for chakra consumption By conducting one Lightning Javalin, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

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    When thrown, the Lightning Javalin is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning javalin discharges in an electric explosion spire, shocking the opponent for lethal damage and incinerating thier armor and weapons whilst immolating their charred carcass. Naturally, the Lightning Javalin pierces and sunders through barriers, weapons, and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Weaknesses: ~
    ~




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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by Copycat on Thu Sep 20, 2018 3:26 am

    Name:閃電針 : Shǎndiàn Zhën : Lightning Needles
    Rank: C
    Power: D, C
    Activation Cost: E, D, C
    Upkeep Cost: E
    Range: Personal - Medium { 0m - 36m }
    Speed: Based on Coordination
    Element: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements:  Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence emitting an intense shockwave vivifing lightning needles, cackling with excitement, with pure lightning energy orbiting the caster's body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Bo Shuriken" or Senbon, approximately three inches. While holstering needles within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates three lightning needles, based upon rank of coordination, which can be utilized in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of an E Rank for chakra consumption. When thrown, the Lightning needles are utilized by the caster, streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning needles discharges in a large pop, shocking the opponent for minor damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst sinking into the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Needle pierces through barriers and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Drawback//Weaknesses:~

    Make it coordination -1 tier.

    閃電箭 : Shǎndiàn Jian : Lightning Bolt
    Rank: D
    Power: E, D, C
    Activation Cost: E, D, C
    Upkeep Cost: E, D
    Range: Personal - Medium [0m - 36m]
    Speed: Based on Coordination
    Element: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: : Shè : Serpentine
    Description: A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave which vivifing lightning bolts, cackling with excitement I  pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with celestial flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Aikuchi" or dagger, approximately twelve inches. While holstering a lightning bolt within the orbit of th caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates three lightning bolts based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of the appropiate chakra consumption. By conducting three Lightning Bolts, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    Spoiler:


    When thrown, the Lightning Bolt is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning bolt discharges in a large pop, shocking the opponent for minor damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst searing the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Bolt pierces through barriers and armor of the same and lesser rank.
    Weaknesses: ~

    Same.

    閃電蓮花 • { 矛 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Mäo } : Lightning Bolt • { Spear }
    Rank: C
    Power: E, D, C
    Activation Cost: E, D, C
    Upkeep Cost: E, D
    Range: Personal - Medium [0m - 36m]
    Speed: Based on Coordination
    Element: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: 閃電箭 : Shǎndiàn Jian : Lightning Bolt
    Hand Seals: : Shè : Serpentine
    Description: A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave vivifing lightning spears, cackling with excitement in pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with celestial flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Nodachi" or Longsword, approximately one meter. While holstering a lightning spear within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates three lightning bolts based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep for the appropiate chakra consumption. By conducting one Lightning Javalin, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    Spoiler:


    When thrown, the Lightning Spear is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning spear discharges in a gallant boom, shocking the opponent for major damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst searing the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Bolt pierces and sunders through barriers, weapons, and armor of the same and lesser rank. Three

    Weaknesses: ~

    Same.

    閃電蓮花 • { 標槍 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Biäoqiäng } : Lightning Bolt • { Javalin }
    Rank: B
    Power: B, A, S
    Activation Cost: B, A, S
    Upkeep Cost: C, B, A
    Range: Personal - Medium [0m - 36m]
    Speed: Based on Coordination
    Element: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: 閃電蓮花 • { 矛 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Mäo } : Lightning Bolt • { Spear }
    Hand Seals: : Shè : Serpentine
    Description: A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave vivifing lightning javalins, cackling with excitement in pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with celestial flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Zweihander" or Grandsword, approximately one meter. While holstering a lightning javalin within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates one lightning bolt based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep for chakra consumption By conducting one Lightning Javalin, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    Spoiler:


    When thrown, the Lightning Javalin is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning javalin discharges in an electric explosion spire, shocking the opponent for lethal damage and incinerating thier armor and weapons whilst immolating their charred carcass. Naturally, the Lightning Javalin pierces and sunders through barriers, weapons, and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Weaknesses: ~

    Same.


    天堂之光融合 : Tiāntáng zhī guāng rónghé : Heavenly Lightning Convergence
    Rank: S
    Power: Based on Intellect
    Activation Cost: A
    Upkeep Cost: C
    Range: Personal - Medium [0m - 36m]
    Speed: Based on Coordination
    Element: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: 閃電箭 : Shǎndiàn Jian : Lightning Bolt
    Hand Seals: : Shè : Serpentine
    Description: This technique enables the user to control lightning and electricity around oneself much like Gaara controls his sand. It can be used to pierce most incoming attacks, shock or stun opponents with eccentric force. Grants the user with shape manipulation of the lightning, gifting it various feats unknown outside the techniques of the Räitōn element which the caster wouldn't normally have without the Heavenly Lightning Convergence. It is able to extract and utilize synaptics from thinking in brain storms, and as is very effective in moist areas and any terrain which water would be specified.
    Drawbacks//Weaknesses: ~


    Still no bueno. Your best bet is just going for Black Lightning at this point, sorry.



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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by KhaixRoze on Thu Sep 20, 2018 8:03 pm

    http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t1059-eyes-of-the-tempest#9210
    Made proper alterations.
    I appreciate the alleviancy
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    Re: The Oculus of the Tempest

    Post by Copycat on Sat Oct 06, 2018 2:18 pm

    Name:閃電針 : Shǎndiàn Zhën : Lightning Needles
    Rank: C
    Power: D, C
    Activation Cost: E, D, C
    Upkeep Cost: E
    Range: Personal - Medium { 0m - 36m }
    Speed: Based on Coordination - ¹ tier
    Element: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements:  Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description:
    A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence emitting an intense shockwave vivifing lightning needles, cackling with excitement, with pure lightning energy orbiting the caster's body as a halo, spiriling with intense flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Bo Shuriken" or Senbon, approximately three inches. While holstering needles within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates three lightning needles, based upon rank of coordination, which can be utilized in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of an E Rank for chakra consumption. When thrown, the Lightning needles are utilized by the caster, streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning needles discharges in a large pop, shocking the opponent for minor damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst sinking into the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Needle pierces through barriers and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Drawback//Weaknesses:~

    閃電箭 : Shǎndiàn Jian : Lightning Bolt
    Rank: D
    Power: E, D, C
    Activation Cost: E, D, C
    Upkeep Cost: E, D
    Range: Personal - Medium [0m - 36m]
    Speed: Based on Coordination - ¹ tier
    Element: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: : Shè : Serpentine
    Description: A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave which vivifing lightning bolts, cackling with excitement I  pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with celestial flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Aikuchi" or dagger, approximately twelve inches. While holstering a lightning bolt within the orbit of th caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates three lightning bolts based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep of the appropiate chakra consumption. By conducting three Lightning Bolts, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    Spoiler:


    When thrown, the Lightning Bolt is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning bolt discharges in a large pop, shocking the opponent for minor damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst searing the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Bolt pierces through barriers and armor of the same and lesser rank.
    Weaknesses: ~

    閃電蓮花 • { 矛 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Mäo } : Lightning Bolt • { Spear }
    Rank: C
    Power: E, D, C
    Activation Cost: E, D, C
    Upkeep Cost: E, D
    Range: Personal - Medium [0m - 36m]
    Speed: Based on Coordination - ¹ tier
    Element: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: 閃電箭 : Shǎndiàn Jian : Lightning Bolt
    Hand Seals: : Shè : Serpentine
    Description: A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave vivifing lightning spears, cackling with excitement in pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with celestial flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Nodachi" or Longsword, approximately one meter. While holstering a lightning spear within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates three lightning bolts based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep for the appropiate chakra consumption. By conducting one Lightning Javalin, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    Spoiler:


    When thrown, the Lightning Spear is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning spear discharges in a gallant boom, shocking the opponent for major damage and incinerating thier cloth clothing whilst searing the top layer of thier flesh. Naturally, the Lightning Bolt pierces and sunders through barriers, weapons, and armor of the same and lesser rank. Three

    Weaknesses: ~

    閃電蓮花 • { 標槍 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Biäoqiäng } : Lightning Bolt • { Javalin }
    Rank: B
    Power: B, A, S
    Activation Cost: B, A, S
    Upkeep Cost: C, B, A
    Range: Personal - Medium [0m - 36m]
    Speed: Based on Coordination - ¹ tier
    Element: 雷遁 : Rāïton : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Kumo, Hiden, Secret
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive: Ïnazüma
    Parent Technique: 閃電蓮花 • { 矛 } : Shǎndiàn Liánhuā • { Mäo } : Lightning Bolt • { Spear }
    Hand Seals: : Shè : Serpentine
    Description: A technique of the caster centrating thier body with lightning essence, emitting an intense shockwave vivifing lightning javalins, cackling with excitement in pure lightning energy orbiting thier body as a halo, spiriling with celestial flare. The length of the bolts are akin an "Zweihander" or Grandsword, approximately one meter. While holstering a lightning javalin within the orbit of the caster, miniscule electrified streams eccentrates around the wristern in a incessant discus, whilst sheening a lightning bolt symbol on top of the casters hands. Each cast emanates one lightning bolt based upon rank of coordination which can be conjured in orbit or hand, as long as the caster upholds an upkeep for chakra consumption By conducting one Lightning Javalin, the technique is enhanced by a rank.  

    Spoiler:


    When thrown, the Lightning Javalin is sailed by the caster streaking forward in a straight line which conducts forth from thier palm streaming towards the adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning javalin discharges in an electric explosion spire, shocking the opponent for lethal damage and incinerating thier armor and weapons whilst immolating their charred carcass. Naturally, the Lightning Javalin pierces and sunders through barriers, weapons, and armor of the same and lesser rank.

    Weaknesses: ~

    Approved.


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