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    The Oculyst of the Hurricane

    KhaixRozary
    KhaixRozary
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    Post by KhaixRozary on Sat Oct 13, 2018 6:36 am


    身体闪烁 • { 执政官 } | Shēnti Shánshōu • Zhízhèn Güån | Body Flicker Technique • { Archon }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C | 5
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Shunshin | Body Flicker Technique
    Speed: ±1 Tier Speed
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret
    Requirements: Rank B Speed
    Parent Technique: Body Flicker Technique
    Hand Seals: 野兔 | Yétü | Hare
    Description: The caster is able to move in an arc in almost instantaneous untraceable speed while temporarily masking the user's movements with proper custom visual variations; blink and stream of light. This technique is used to get around and behind an opponent without sacrificing multiple Shunshins, streaming around both thier attacks and case. Shunshin Arciero gifts the same boost, thus scales normally along the ascendant Shunshin technique. Provided that the user holds the hand seal for activation, they are allowed to move in a full circle around the adversary.
    Weaknesses:~
    ~
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    闪电颠簸 { 休克 } | Shǎndiànbó • { Xüîkë } | Lightning Jolt Technique • { Shock }
    Rank: B
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: B | 10
    Upkeep Cost: C | 5
    Range: Personal - Close { 0hm -  36m }
    Speed: Variable w/ Coordination -¹
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret
    Requirements: Rank B Speed
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: 野兔 •  绵羊 • 公鸡 | Yétü • Míanyäng • Gōngjï  | Hare • Sheep • Rooster
    Description: The caster charges their natural sources from the center of her abdomen and further into her hands. After weaving the corresponding sigils the charge of the chakra within the hands will fizzle until the nature of lightning emanates from the palms. The lightning shall naturally coat over the hands, bringing the sound of crackling thunder, shining in a sporadic color of violet and deep indigo. The caster will point them at a target, releasing the cluster of lightning toward an adversary. This cluster of lightening energy jumps from the caster's hands and clings towards it's extended target, latching the elemental nature unto and throughout their body. This cannot be avoided by armor, shatters enchantments, and sunders barriers.

    Upon contact, the technique shocks the opponent, as the name implies, sending an electrifying jolt of energy throughout their body. If the constitution of the adversary is below that of B, the jolt spikes throughout the adversaries nervous system, shortening out there synaptic receptors, causing involuntary movement and spasming pains stunning them for a post. Due to the electrical composition, lightning current and exertion of the shock, similar to fire, exposure to such a technique damages the adversary with second degree burns over their body. By applying upkeep, the adversary will stay stunned. Afterwards, This technique inhibits the movement of the adversary, hampering their speed by a tier { ±±± } and coordination with a major disadvantage { ±± } for two turns.
    Weaknesses:~


    ~



    _________________

    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Kumoga10

    Opening of the Whylds, the unsealing of the Clouds...:

    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Giphy

    Léï Zhènyün
    ~ Ijutstu, Ninjutsu, Kuchiyôse, Fuuinjutsu, Chemistry, Engineer, Genjutsu { ? } ~
    Ïnazüma; Storm ~ Tempest, Ray, Cloudian Air
    The Protopolypian Medusozoan

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    Stats:

    [*]Strength: E
    [*]Constitution: C
    [*]Stamina: B { 160 }
    [*]Speed: S
    [*]Coordination: B
    [*]Intelligence: A
    [*]Perception: B

    Limit Break Points:

    [*]Physical:
    [*]Technique:
    [*]Destiny: 3






    Uchiha Akihiro
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    Post by Uchiha Akihiro on Sat Oct 13, 2018 1:27 pm

    身体闪烁 • { 执政官 } | Shēnti Shánshōu • Zhízhèn Güån | Body Flicker Technique • { Archon }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C | 5
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Shunshin | Body Flicker Technique
    Speed: ±1 Tier Speed
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplementary; Secret
    Requirements: Rank B Speed
    Parent Technique: Body Flicker Technique
    Hand Seals: 野兔 | Yétü | Hare
    Description: The caster is able to move in an arc in almost instantaneous untraceable speed while temporarily masking the user's movements with proper custom visual variations; blink and stream of light. This technique is used to get around and behind an opponent without sacrificing multiple Shunshins, streaming around both their attacks and case. Shunshin Arciero gifts the same boost, thus scales normally along the ascendant Shunshin technique. Provided that the user holds the hand seal for activation, they are allowed to move in a full circle around the adversary.
    Weaknesses:~

    Denied, mostly due to wording.
    * This is a big no no. You get a 1 Tier boost to speed. Whether that is traceable or not depends entirely on your opponent's Perception.
    I also took the liberty of correcting minor spelling errors. On another note, you don't need to hold the hand-seal to get this boost. Why not just put up a 5 upkeep cost and get the same effect with your hands-free?
    Also please note that if this technique doesn't debuff Perception then the blink and stream of light are merely cosmetics and won't affect your opponent's ability to trace.



    闪电颠簸 { 休克 } | Shǎndiànbó • { Xüîkë } | Lightning Jolt Technique • { Shock }
    Rank: B
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: B | 10
    Upkeep Cost: C | 5
    Range: Personal - Close { 0hm - 36m }
    Speed: Variable w/ Coordination -¹
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret
    Requirements: Rank B Speed
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: 野兔 • 绵羊 • 公鸡 | Yétü • Míanyäng • Gōngjï | Hare • Sheep • Rooster
    Description: The caster charges their natural sources from the center of her abdomen and further into her hands. After weaving the corresponding sigils the charge of the chakra within the hands will fizzle until the nature of lightning emanates from the palms. The lightning shall naturally coat over the hands, bringing the sound of crackling thunder, shining in a sporadic color of violet and deep indigo. The caster will point them at a target, releasing the cluster of lightning toward an adversary. This cluster of lightning energy jumps from the caster's hands and clings towards it's extended target, latching the elemental nature unto and throughout their body. This cannot be avoided by armor, shatters enchantments, and sunders barriers.

    Upon contact, the technique shocks the opponent, as the name implies, sending an electrifying jolt of energy throughout their body. If the constitution of the adversary is below that of B, the jolt spikes throughout the adversaries nervous system, shortening out their synaptic receptors, causing involuntary movement and spasming pains stunning them for a post. Due to the electrical composition, lightning current and exertion of the shock, similar to fire, exposure to such a technique damages the adversary with second-degree burns over their body. By applying upkeep, the adversary will stay stunned. Afterward, This technique inhibits the movement of the adversary, hampering their speed by a tier { ±±± } and coordination with a major disadvantage { ±± } for two turns.
    Weaknesses:~

    * What is this? Coordination minus 1 tier?
    * This is denied. I'm not allowing you to completely ignore armor, enchantments and barriers with this jutsu.
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    Post by KhaixRozary on Mon Oct 15, 2018 8:44 pm


    身体闪烁 • { 执政官 } | Shēnti Shánshōu • Zhízhèn Güån | Body Flicker Technique • { Archon ~ Arciero }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C | 5
    Upkeep Cost: C | 5
    Range: Shunshin | Body Flicker Technique
    Speed: ±1 Tier
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret
    Requirements: Rank B Speed
    Parent Technique: Body Flicker Technique
    Hand Seals: 野兔 | Yétü | Hare
    Description: The caster is able to move in an arc instantaneously with proper custom visual variations; blink and stream of light. This technique is used to get around and behind an opponent without sacrificing multiple Shunshins, streaming around both thier attacks and gaze. Archon Arciero gifts the same boost, thus scales normally along the ascendant Shunshin technique. Provided that the user holds the hand seal for activation, they are allowed to move in a full circle around the adversary.
    Weaknesses:~

    I shifted wording for technique for visuability. Holding the handseal would allow the halo to manifest, however the upkeep can form after the halo, and that's if the caster holds the technique for that long. Altered.

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    闪电颠簸 { 休克 } | Shǎndiànbó • { Xüîkë } | Lightning Jolt Technique • { Shock }
    Rank: B
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: B | 10
    Upkeep Cost: C | 5
    Range: Personal - Close { 0hm -  36m }
    Speed: Variable w/ Coordination -¹
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret
    Requirements: Rank B Speed
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: 野兔 •  绵羊 • 公鸡 | Yétü • Míanyäng • Gōngjï  | Hare • Sheep • Rooster
    Description: The caster charges their natural sources from the center of her abdomen and further into her hands. After weaving the corresponding sigils the charge of the chakra within the hands will fizzle until the nature of lightning emanates from the palms. The lightning shall naturally coat over the hands, bringing the sound of crackling thunder, shining in a sporadic color of violet and deep indigo. The caster will point them at a target, releasing the cluster of lightning toward an adversary. This cluster of lightening energy jumps from the caster's hands and clings towards it's extended target, latching the elemental nature unto and throughout their body.

    Upon contact, the technique shocks the opponent, as the name implies, sending an electrifying jolt of energy throughout their body. If the constitution of the adversary is below that of B, the jolt spikes throughout the adversaries nervous system, shortening out there synaptic receptors, causing involuntary movement and spasming pains stunning them for a post. Due to the electrical composition, lightning current and exertion of the shock, similar to fire, exposure to such a technique damages the adversary with second degree burns over their body. By applying upkeep, the adversary will stay stunned. Afterwards, This technique inhibits the movement of the adversary, hampering their speed by a tier { ±±± } and coordination with a major disadvantage { ±± } for two turns.
    Weaknesses:~

    For your first question, yes. I removed the denied portion. Altered.
    ~



    _________________

    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Kumoga10

    Opening of the Whylds, the unsealing of the Clouds...:

    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Giphy

    Léï Zhènyün
    ~ Ijutstu, Ninjutsu, Kuchiyôse, Fuuinjutsu, Chemistry, Engineer, Genjutsu { ? } ~
    Ïnazüma; Storm ~ Tempest, Ray, Cloudian Air
    The Protopolypian Medusozoan

    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 1010

    Stats:

    [*]Strength: E
    [*]Constitution: C
    [*]Stamina: B { 160 }
    [*]Speed: S
    [*]Coordination: B
    [*]Intelligence: A
    [*]Perception: B

    Limit Break Points:

    [*]Physical:
    [*]Technique:
    [*]Destiny: 3






    Uchiha Akihiro
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    Post by Uchiha Akihiro on Mon Oct 15, 2018 8:54 pm

    身体闪烁 • { 执政官 } | Shēnti Shánshōu • Zhízhèn Güån | Body Flicker Technique • { Archon ~ Arciero }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C | 5
    Upkeep Cost: C | 5
    Range: Shunshin | Body Flicker Technique
    Speed: ±1 Tier
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret
    Requirements: Rank B Speed
    Parent Technique: Body Flicker Technique
    Hand Seals: 野兔 | Yétü | Hare
    Description: The caster is able to move in an arc instantaneously with proper custom visual variations; blink and stream of light. This technique is used to get around and behind an opponent without sacrificing multiple Shunshins, streaming around both thier attacks and gaze. Archon Arciero gifts the same boost, thus scales normally along the ascendant Shunshin technique. Provided that the user holds the hand seal for activation, they are allowed to move in a full circle around the adversary.
    Weaknesses:~

    Under the condition that this technique does not allow you to move at instantaneous speed, but at +1 tier base speed, Approved.

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    Shǎndiànbó • { Xüîkë } | Lightning Jolt Technique • { Shock }

    I think a person with D-rank Const and another with C-rank Const would react differently to this.
    The debuffs should be different for each rank. Other than that it's pretty close to approval I'd say.
    KhaixRozary
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    Post by KhaixRozary on Mon Oct 15, 2018 11:08 pm



    脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: D •°• 3
    Upkeep Cost: D •°• 3
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable with Intellect
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutstu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive; Ïnäzümä
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°•  Sheep
    Description: The caster quickly centrates on the chakra along the palm of their hands or in thier mouth. The Chakra Lotus is used by the caster creating an edible Aetheric Source flaring forth a growing chakra lotus which circulates from thier finger tips or tongue, streaming and homing towards the ally or adversary.

    First, The Aetheric Chakra Lotus has the ability to increase the intellect of themselves/ally by a tier advantage { ±±± } or decrease the intellect of the adversary by a major disadvantage { ±± } for two turns before reactivation. Those whom are affected by the Chakra Lotus technique will emanate a shining crystal lotus bulb, beaconing down silver light above thier head which only sensors, those with chakra sight, those whom are affected by the Chakra Lotus Technique and the caster can see.

    Spoiler:
    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Smc_si10

    Weaknesses:

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    閃電蓮花 •°• Shǎndiàn Liánhuā •°• Lightning Lotus { Raihaña }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: D •°• 3
    Upkeep Cost: D •°• 3
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable with Intellect
    Element:雷遁[ •°• Rāïton •°• Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ijutstu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive; Ïnäzümä
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster quickly centrates on the chakra along the palm of their hands or in thier mouth. The Lightning Lotus is used by the caster creating a small bang, flaring forth an edible lightning lotus which conducting forth from thier finger tips or tongue, streaming and homing towards the ally or adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning lotus discharges, paralyzing the opponent for a turn. Alternatively, the Lightning Lotus technique can be discharged as a conic wave and emanates continuously with cost of upkeep to keep adversary bolted and paralyzed after stunned.

    Aesthethically, a, non lethal version of this technique can be cast for a supplimentary raise in Coordination by a tier {+±+} up 2 turns before reactivation. Those whom are affected by the Lightning Lotus technique will emanate a shining golden lotus bulb above thier head, beaconing down golden light which only sensors, those with chakra sight, those whom are affected by the Lightning Lotus Technique and the caster can see.

    Spoiler:
    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Smc_go10

    Weaknesses:

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    雲蓮花 •°• Yün Liánhuā •°• Cloud Lotus { Yünhaña }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: D •°• 3
    Upkeep Cost: D •°• 3
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable with Intellect
    Element:風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ijutstu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive; Ïnäzümä
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster quickly centrates on the chakra along the palm of their hands or in thier mouth. The Cloud Lotus is used by the caster creating a poffin flaring forth a growing chakra lotus which circulating forth from thier finger tips or mouth, streaming and homing towards the adversary. Upon contact, the has a variety of effects and status raises which can be applied for persona, however caster may choose only one ability while wielding the Cloud Lotus, yet can interchange them prospectively at the beginning of each turn.

    First, The Cloud Lotus has the ability to increase the perception of themselves//ally by tier advantage { ±±± } or decreasing perception of an adversary by major disadvantage { ±± } Those whom are affected by the Cloud Lotus technique will emanate a shining prismatic crystal lotus bulb above thier head, beaconing a sesquaital light which only sensors, those with chakra sight, those whom are affected by the Cloud Lotus Technique and the caster can see.

    Spoiler:
    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Smc_co11

    Weaknesses:

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    云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Rank: C
    Power: Variable w/ Intellect
    Activation Cost: D | 3
    Upkeep Cost: E | 1
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable w/ Intellect
    Element: 風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Ïnäzümän, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster gathers chakra within thier body and begin to emit the plumes of clouds from eyes, mouth, nostrils, ears, hands and feet. The clouds will pan and drift from the pores of thier body, creating a large mass of fluff around them. Alternatively, the caster can allocate the space around them, in thier range, to manifest clouds within thier distance.
    The clouds naturally grow in size as they move forth from the caster, panning larger akin the range which they travel, absorbing water in the atmosphere as they move forward. The manifestation of casting speed and ability power are on par of the rank of the caster's intellect. The perception of adversaries within the cloud is reduced by a tier, so long as they are within the cloud. Naturally, adversaries are also soaked upon entering and exiting the cloud, covering them with water droplets and keeping them moist. Supplimentarly, if there are clouds which have been previous manifested by the caster, they can utilize the cloud, akin mediums, for the creation of new plumes in appropiation of upkeep.
    Weaknesses:

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    雲暫停 •°• Yún Xuáñgūà •°• Cloud Suspension
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: D •°• 3
    Upkeep Cost: E •°• 1
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable with Intellect
    Element: 風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Ïnäzümä, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: After the caster has generated clouds, they can manuever the clouds, allowing the cloud to carry them up upon a circular platform or covering them partially or wholly in an orb of billowing puffs. While upon, or within, a cloud, the caster is gifted suspension upon the cloud, allowing celeric movement throughout the air. The clouds only move as swift as the rank of intellegence of the caster. The cloud suspension technique also gift the caster an major advantage in speed and a minor advantage in coordination in regards to movement and manuevering while within or on a plume of cloud.
    Weaknesses:

    ~



    _________________

    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Kumoga10

    Opening of the Whylds, the unsealing of the Clouds...:

    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Giphy

    Léï Zhènyün
    ~ Ijutstu, Ninjutsu, Kuchiyôse, Fuuinjutsu, Chemistry, Engineer, Genjutsu { ? } ~
    Ïnazüma; Storm ~ Tempest, Ray, Cloudian Air
    The Protopolypian Medusozoan

    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 1010

    Stats:

    [*]Strength: E
    [*]Constitution: C
    [*]Stamina: B { 160 }
    [*]Speed: S
    [*]Coordination: B
    [*]Intelligence: A
    [*]Perception: B

    Limit Break Points:

    [*]Physical:
    [*]Technique:
    [*]Destiny: 3






    Uchiha Akihiro
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    Post by Uchiha Akihiro on Fri Oct 19, 2018 1:48 pm

    脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Denied. You're not boosting *and* deboosting at D-rank cost. Intellect isn't a stat, Intelligence is.

    電蓮花 •°• Shǎndiàn Liánhuā •°• Lightning Lotus { Raihaña }
    Denied. No generic paralyzation jutsus. You're not using a D-rank power jutsu to paralyze a guy with S-rank const.

    雲蓮花 •°• Yün Liánhuā •°• Cloud Lotus { Yünhaña }
    Denied, same reason as first.

    云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    If you're using water from the atmosphere to create a 30 meters wide cloud, this cloud needs a meter growth per post. Chakra costs are way too low. Not allowing you to maintain a technique that can drop the peception of everyone in the area for 1 stamina point per post. Denied.

    雲暫停 •°• Yún Xuáñgūà •°• Cloud Suspension
    Denied...chakra costs also way too low.
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    Class: S
    Ryo: ~

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    Post by KhaixRozary on Fri Oct 19, 2018 9:21 pm



    脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5
    Upkeep Cost: C •°• 5
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: C
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutstu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive; Ïnäzümä
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°•  Sheep
    Description: The caster quickly centrates on the chakra along the palm of their hands or in thier mouth. The Chakra Lotus is used by the caster creating an edible Aetheric Source flaring forth a glowing chakra lotus which circulates from thier finger tips or tongue, streaming and homing towards the ally or adversary. The Aetheric Chakra Lotus has the ability to increase the intelligence of themselves/ally by a tier advantage { ±±± }. Those whom are affected by the Chakra Lotus technique will emanate a shining crystal lotus bulb, beaconing down silver light above thier head which only sensors, those with chakra sight, those whom are affected by the Chakra Lotus Technique and the caster can see.

    Spoiler:
    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Smc_si10

    Weaknesses:

    Altered Cost and Upkeep
    Speed Adjusted to C

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    閃電蓮花 •°• Shǎndiàn Liánhuā •°• Lightning Lotus { Raihaña }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5
    Upkeep Cost: C •°• 5
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: C
    Element:雷遁[ •°• Rāïton •°• Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ijutstu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive; Ïnäzümä
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster quickly centrates on the chakra along the palm of their hands or in thier mouth. The Lightning Lotus is used by the caster creating a small bang, flaring forth an edible lightning lotus, conducting forth from thier finger tips or tongue, streaming and homing towards the ally or adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning lotus discharges, paralyzing the opponent for a turn. Alternatively, the Lightning Lotus technique can be discharged as a conic wave and emanates continuously with cost of upkeep to keep adversary bolted and paralyzed after stunned.

    Aesthethically, a, non lethal version of this technique can be cast for a supplimentary raise in Coordination by a tier {+±+} up 2 turns before reactivation. Those whom are affected by the Lightning Lotus technique will emanate a shining golden lotus bulb above thier head, beaconing down golden light which only sensors, those with chakra sight, those whom are affected by the Lightning Lotus Technique and the caster can see.

    Spoiler:
    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Smc_go10

    Weaknesses:Those above the constitution of C are immune to stun.

    Altered Cost and Upkeep
    Speed Adjusted to C

    ~

    雲蓮花 •°• Yün Liánhuā •°• Cloud Lotus { Yünhaña }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5
    Upkeep Cost: C •°• 5
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: C
    Element:風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ijutstu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive; Ïnäzümä
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster quickly centrates on the chakra along the palm of their hands or in thier mouth. The Cloud Lotus is used by the caster creating a poffin flaring forth a growing chakra lotus which circulating forth from thier finger tips or mouth, streaming and homing towards the adversary. The Cloud Lotus has the ability to increase the perception of themselves//ally by tier advantage { ±±± }. Those whom are affected by the Cloud Lotus technique will emanate a shining prismatic crystal lotus bulb above thier head, beaconing a sesquaital light which only sensors, those with chakra sight, those whom are affected by the Cloud Lotus Technique and the caster can see.

    Spoiler:
    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Smc_co11

    Weaknesses:

    Altered Cost and Upkeep
    Speed Adjusted to C
    ~

    云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Rank: B
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5
    Upkeep Cost: C •°• 5
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable w/ Coordination
    Element: 風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Ïnäzümän, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster gathers chakra within thier body and begin to emit the plumes of clouds from eyes, mouth, nostrils, ears, hands and feet. The clouds will pan and drift from the pores of thier body, creating a large mass of fluff around them. Alternatively, the caster can allocate the space around them, in thier range, to manifest clouds within thier distance.
    The clouds naturally grow in size 3 meters per rank of intellect of the caster as they move forth from the caster, panning larger akin the range which they travel, absorbing water in the atmosphere as they move forward, each post. The manifestation of casting speed and ability power are on par of the rank of the caster's Intellegence. The perception of adversaries within the cloud is reduced by a major disadvantage { ±± }, so long as they are within the cloud. Naturally, adversaries are also soaked upon entering and exiting the cloud, covering them with water droplets and keeping them moist. Supplimentarly, if there are clouds which have been previous manifested by the caster, they can utilize the cloud, akin mediums, for the creation of new plumes in appropiation of upkeep.
    Weaknesses:

    Altered towards B Rank
    Altered Upkeep
    Added per post growth: grow in size 3 meters per rank of intellect of the caster as they move forth from the caster...per post.
    Altered Tier perception debuff to major advantage.
    Speed altered Variable with Coordination instead of Intellegence


    ~

    雲暫停 •°• Yún Xuáñgūà •°• Cloud Suspension
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5
    Upkeep Cost: D •°• 3
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: C
    Element: 風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Ïnäzümä, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: After the caster has generated clouds, they can manuever the fluffs, allowing the cloud to carry them up upon a circular platform or covering them partially or wholly in an orb of billowing puffs. While upon, or within, a cloud, the caster is gifted suspension upon the cloud, allowing celeric movement throughout the air. The clouds only move as swift as the rank of intellegence of the caster. The cloud suspension technique also gift the caster an major advantage { ±± } in speed and a minor advantage { ± } in coordination in regards to movement and manuevering while within or on a plume of cloud.
    Weaknesses:~

    Altered advantages towards C rank.
    Speed altered to C

    ~



    Last edited by KhaixRoze on Sat Oct 27, 2018 8:40 pm; edited 2 times in total


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    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 1010

    Stats:

    [*]Strength: E
    [*]Constitution: C
    [*]Stamina: B { 160 }
    [*]Speed: S
    [*]Coordination: B
    [*]Intelligence: A
    [*]Perception: B

    Limit Break Points:

    [*]Physical:
    [*]Technique:
    [*]Destiny: 3






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    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Empty Re: The Oculyst of the Hurricane

    Post by Uchiha Akihiro on Sat Oct 20, 2018 11:06 am

    脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    閃電蓮花 •°• Shǎndiàn Liánhuā •°• Lightning Lotus { Raihaña }
    雲蓮花 •°• Yün Liánhuā •°• Cloud Lotus { Yünhaña }

    Needs C-rank upkeep and cost if it boosts a Tier.

    云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    What I meant is you need a growth per post. For example, it grows at 5 meters per post.
    Also techniques which debuff a full tier are generally considered B-rank. Considering this debuffs anyone in the area I would consider this A-rank.
    As such your chakra costs and rank are wrong.


    雲暫停 •°• Yún Xuáñgūà •°• Cloud Suspension
    "The cloud suspension technique also gift the caster an major advantage { ±±± } in speed and a minor advantage { ±± } in coordination in regards to movement and manuevering while within or on a plume of cloud."

    * 3 "+" are a Tier advantage.
    * 2 "+" are a "major" advantage.
    Considering this, this technique should be B-ranked at least and have correspondent chakra costs. I advise you to read the Stat Boosting and Debuffing Rules
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    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Empty Re: The Oculyst of the Hurricane

    Post by KhaixRozary on Sat Oct 20, 2018 11:40 am

    http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t1059p25-eyes-of-the-tempest#11071
    Altered Techniques for Approval.
    I appreciate the Alleviancy.

    ~=∆=~


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    Opening of the Whylds, the unsealing of the Clouds...:

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    The Protopolypian Medusozoan

    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 1010

    Stats:

    [*]Strength: E
    [*]Constitution: C
    [*]Stamina: B { 160 }
    [*]Speed: S
    [*]Coordination: B
    [*]Intelligence: A
    [*]Perception: B

    Limit Break Points:

    [*]Physical:
    [*]Technique:
    [*]Destiny: 3






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    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Empty Re: The Oculyst of the Hurricane

    Post by Copycat on Sat Oct 27, 2018 8:14 pm

    脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5
    Upkeep Cost: C •°• 5
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable with Intellegence
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutstu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive; Ïnäzümä
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°•  Sheep
    Description: The caster quickly centrates on the chakra along the palm of their hands or in thier mouth. The Chakra Lotus is used by the caster creating an edible Aetheric Source flaring forth a glowing chakra lotus which circulates from thier finger tips or tongue, streaming and homing towards the ally or adversary. The Aetheric Chakra Lotus has the ability to increase the intelligence of themselves/ally by a tier advantage { ±±± }. Those whom are affected by the Chakra Lotus technique will emanate a shining crystal lotus bulb, beaconing down silver light above thier head which only sensors, those with chakra sight, those whom are affected by the Chakra Lotus Technique and the caster can see.

    Spoiler:
    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Smc_si10

    Weaknesses:

    Make the Speed C.

    閃電蓮花 •°• Shǎndiàn Liánhuā •°• Lightning Lotus { Raihaña }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5
    Upkeep Cost: C •°• 5
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable with Intellegence
    Element:雷遁[ •°• Rāïton •°• Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ijutstu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive; Ïnäzümä
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster quickly centrates on the chakra along the palm of their hands or in thier mouth. The Lightning Lotus is used by the caster creating a small bang, flaring forth an edible lightning lotus, conducting forth from thier finger tips or tongue, streaming and homing towards the ally or adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning lotus discharges, paralyzing the opponent for a turn. Alternatively, the Lightning Lotus technique can be discharged as a conic wave and emanates continuously with cost of upkeep to keep adversary bolted and paralyzed after stunned.

    Aesthethically, a, non lethal version of this technique can be cast for a supplimentary raise in Coordination by a tier {+±+} up 2 turns before reactivation. Those whom are affected by the Lightning Lotus technique will emanate a shining golden lotus bulb above thier head, beaconing down golden light which only sensors, those with chakra sight, those whom are affected by the Lightning Lotus Technique and the caster can see.

    Spoiler:
    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Smc_go10

    Weaknesses:Those above the constitution of C are immune to stun.

    Make the Speed C.

    雲蓮花 •°• Yün Liánhuā •°• Cloud Lotus { Yünhaña }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5
    Upkeep Cost: C •°• 5
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable with Intellegence
    Element:風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ijutstu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive; Ïnäzümä
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster quickly centrates on the chakra along the palm of their hands or in thier mouth. The Cloud Lotus is used by the caster creating a poffin flaring forth a growing chakra lotus which circulating forth from thier finger tips or mouth, streaming and homing towards the adversary. The Cloud Lotus has the ability to increase the perception of themselves//ally by tier advantage { ±±± }. Those whom are affected by the Cloud Lotus technique will emanate a shining prismatic crystal lotus bulb above thier head, beaconing a sesquaital light which only sensors, those with chakra sight, those whom are affected by the Cloud Lotus Technique and the caster can see.

    Spoiler:
    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Smc_co11

    Weaknesses:

    Make the Speed C.

    云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Rank: B
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5
    Upkeep Cost: C •°• 5
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable w/ Intellect
    Element: 風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Ïnäzümän, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster gathers chakra within thier body and begin to emit the plumes of clouds from eyes, mouth, nostrils, ears, hands and feet. The clouds will pan and drift from the pores of thier body, creating a large mass of fluff around them. Alternatively, the caster can allocate the space around them, in thier range, to manifest clouds within thier distance.
    The clouds naturally grow in size 3 meters per rank of intellect of the caster as they move forth from the caster, panning larger akin the range which they travel, absorbing water in the atmosphere as they move forward, each post. The manifestation of casting speed and ability power are on par of the rank of the caster's Intellegence. The perception of adversaries within the cloud is reduced by a major disadvantage { ±± }, so long as they are within the cloud. Naturally, adversaries are also soaked upon entering and exiting the cloud, covering them with water droplets and keeping them moist. Supplimentarly, if there are clouds which have been previous manifested by the caster, they can utilize the cloud, akin mediums, for the creation of new plumes in appropiation of upkeep.
    Weaknesses:

    Make this vary based on Coordination instead of Intelligence.

    雲暫停 •°• Yún Xuáñgūà •°• Cloud Suspension
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5
    Upkeep Cost: D •°• 3
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable with Intellegence
    Element: 風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Ïnäzümä, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: After the caster has generated clouds, they can manuever the fluffs, allowing the cloud to carry them up upon a circular platform or covering them partially or wholly in an orb of billowing puffs. While upon, or within, a cloud, the caster is gifted suspension upon the cloud, allowing celeric movement throughout the air. The clouds only move as swift as the rank of intellegence of the caster. The cloud suspension technique also gift the caster an major advantage { ±± } in speed and a minor advantage { ± } in coordination in regards to movement and manuevering while within or on a plume of cloud.
    Weaknesses:~

    Change Speed to C.


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    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Empty Re: The Oculyst of the Hurricane

    Post by KhaixRozary on Sat Oct 27, 2018 8:42 pm

    http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t1059p25-eyes-of-the-tempest#11071
    Altered Techniques for Approval.
    I appreciate the Alleviancy.

    ~=∆=~


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    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Giphy

    Léï Zhènyün
    ~ Ijutstu, Ninjutsu, Kuchiyôse, Fuuinjutsu, Chemistry, Engineer, Genjutsu { ? } ~
    Ïnazüma; Storm ~ Tempest, Ray, Cloudian Air
    The Protopolypian Medusozoan

    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 1010

    Stats:

    [*]Strength: E
    [*]Constitution: C
    [*]Stamina: B { 160 }
    [*]Speed: S
    [*]Coordination: B
    [*]Intelligence: A
    [*]Perception: B

    Limit Break Points:

    [*]Physical:
    [*]Technique:
    [*]Destiny: 3






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    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Empty Re: The Oculyst of the Hurricane

    Post by Copycat on Fri Nov 02, 2018 8:39 am

    KhaixRoze wrote:


    脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5
    Upkeep Cost: C •°• 5
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: C
    Element: ~
    Skill: Ijutstu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive; Ïnäzümä
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°•  Sheep
    Description: The caster quickly centrates on the chakra along the palm of their hands or in thier mouth. The Chakra Lotus is used by the caster creating an edible Aetheric Source flaring forth a glowing chakra lotus which circulates from thier finger tips or tongue, streaming and homing towards the ally or adversary. The Aetheric Chakra Lotus has the ability to increase the intelligence of themselves/ally by a tier advantage { ±±± }. Those whom are affected by the Chakra Lotus technique will emanate a shining crystal lotus bulb, beaconing down silver light above thier head which only sensors, those with chakra sight, those whom are affected by the Chakra Lotus Technique and the caster can see.

    Spoiler:
    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Smc_si10

    Weaknesses:

    Altered Cost and Upkeep
    Speed Adjusted to C

    ~

    閃電蓮花 •°• Shǎndiàn Liánhuā •°• Lightning Lotus { Raihaña }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5
    Upkeep Cost: C •°• 5
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: C
    Element:雷遁[ •°• Rāïton •°• Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ijutstu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive; Ïnäzümä
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster quickly centrates on the chakra along the palm of their hands or in thier mouth. The Lightning Lotus is used by the caster creating a small bang, flaring forth an edible lightning lotus, conducting forth from thier finger tips or tongue, streaming and homing towards the ally or adversary. Upon contact, the sparking lightning lotus discharges, paralyzing the opponent for a turn. Alternatively, the Lightning Lotus technique can be discharged as a conic wave and emanates continuously with cost of upkeep to keep adversary bolted and paralyzed after stunned.

    Aesthethically, a, non lethal version of this technique can be cast for a supplimentary raise in Coordination by a tier {+±+} up 2 turns before reactivation. Those whom are affected by the Lightning Lotus technique will emanate a shining golden lotus bulb above thier head, beaconing down golden light which only sensors, those with chakra sight, those whom are affected by the Lightning Lotus Technique and the caster can see.

    Spoiler:
    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Smc_go10

    Weaknesses:Those above the constitution of C are immune to stun.

    Altered Cost and Upkeep
    Speed Adjusted to C

    ~

    雲蓮花 •°• Yün Liánhuā •°• Cloud Lotus { Yünhaña }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5
    Upkeep Cost: C •°• 5
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: C
    Element:風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ijutstu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive; Ïnäzümä
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster quickly centrates on the chakra along the palm of their hands or in thier mouth. The Cloud Lotus is used by the caster creating a poffin flaring forth a growing chakra lotus which circulating forth from thier finger tips or mouth, streaming and homing towards the adversary. The Cloud Lotus has the ability to increase the perception of themselves//ally by tier advantage { ±±± }. Those whom are affected by the Cloud Lotus technique will emanate a shining prismatic crystal lotus bulb above thier head, beaconing a sesquaital light which only sensors, those with chakra sight, those whom are affected by the Cloud Lotus Technique and the caster can see.

    Spoiler:
    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Smc_co11

    Weaknesses:

    Altered Cost and Upkeep
    Speed Adjusted to C
    ~

    云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Rank: B
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5
    Upkeep Cost: C •°• 5
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable w/ Coordination
    Element: 風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Ïnäzümän, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster gathers chakra within thier body and begin to emit the plumes of clouds from eyes, mouth, nostrils, ears, hands and feet. The clouds will pan and drift from the pores of thier body, creating a large mass of fluff around them. Alternatively, the caster can allocate the space around them, in thier range, to manifest clouds within thier distance.
    The clouds naturally grow in size 3 meters per rank of intellect of the caster as they move forth from the caster, panning larger akin the range which they travel, absorbing water in the atmosphere as they move forward, each post. The manifestation of casting speed and ability power are on par of the rank of the caster's Intellegence. The perception of adversaries within the cloud is reduced by a major disadvantage { ±± }, so long as they are within the cloud. Naturally, adversaries are also soaked upon entering and exiting the cloud, covering them with water droplets and keeping them moist. Supplimentarly, if there are clouds which have been previous manifested by the caster, they can utilize the cloud, akin mediums, for the creation of new plumes in appropiation of upkeep.
    Weaknesses:

    Altered towards B Rank
    Altered Upkeep
    Added per post growth: grow in size 3 meters per rank of intellect of the caster as they move forth from the caster...per post.
    Altered Tier perception debuff to major advantage.
    Speed altered Variable with Coordination instead of Intellegence


    ~

    雲暫停 •°• Yún Xuáñgūà •°• Cloud Suspension
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5
    Upkeep Cost: D •°• 3
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: C
    Element: 風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Ïnäzümä, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: After the caster has generated clouds, they can manuever the fluffs, allowing the cloud to carry them up upon a circular platform or covering them partially or wholly in an orb of billowing puffs. While upon, or within, a cloud, the caster is gifted suspension upon the cloud, allowing celeric movement throughout the air. The clouds only move as swift as the rank of intellegence of the caster. The cloud suspension technique also gift the caster an major advantage { ±± } in speed and a minor advantage { ± } in coordination in regards to movement and manuevering while within or on a plume of cloud.
    Weaknesses:~

    Altered advantages towards C rank.
    Speed altered to C

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    The Oculyst of the Hurricane - Page 2 Empty Cloudian Techniques { WIP }

    Post by KhaixRozary on Sat Nov 03, 2018 11:20 am



    In regards to the wind form's similarity, would it be approvable if it had an appropiate weakness?
    ~Augmented: The caster has a natural ability to transform their whole body, as well as all items which they touch, to become a spiritual, vaporous, and cloudlike ~ The caster has a natural ability to transform their whole body, as well as all items which they own, to become a spiritual, vaporous, and cloudlike.
    ~

    云 同情 •°• Yün Tóngqíng •°• Cloudian Empathy
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: E •°• 1
    Upkeep Cost:  D •°• 3
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: ~
    Element: 風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Ïnäzümän, Storm Cloud Creation, 250 Exp
    Parent Technique:云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: After the caster has generated clouds, they can shift them back and forth from the white regular clouds, towards the dark storm clouds the Inäzümän are know for manifesting. While the clouds are within thier storm form, Raiton, Suiton, and Ranton techniques cast from the catalyst of the clouds. While the clouds are within thier purest form, Raiton, Suiton, Fuuton and Ranton techniques can be cast from the catalyst of the clouds. Naturally, the Cloudian Empathy Technique reduces the the rank of chakra consumption from the respective elements of each cloud whether happy, pure clouds, or gloomy, storm clouds.
    Weaknesses:

    Inäzümän Ability:

    云 同情 •°• Yün Tóngqíng •°• Cloudian Empathy
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: E •°• 1
    Upkeep Cost:  D •°• 3
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: ~
    Element: 風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret, Hiden, Clan Ability [Unlocked at B Rank]
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Ïnäzümän, Storm Cloud Creation, 250 Exp
    Parent Technique: 云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: After the caster has generated clouds, they can shift them back and forth from the white regular clouds, towards the dark storm clouds the Inäzümän are know for manifesting. While the clouds are within thier storm form, Raiton, Suiton, and Ranton techniques cast from the catalyst of the clouds. While the clouds are within thier purest form, Raiton, Suiton, Fuuton and Ranton techniques can be cast from the catalyst of the clouds. Naturally, the Cloudian Empathy Technique reduces the the rank of chakra consumption from the respective elements of each cloud whether happy, pure clouds, or gloomy, storm clouds.
    Weaknesses:

    Specified the suggestion. Pretty neat with rank reduction.
    I also added upkeep of 3, however feel I that it has a particular upkeep, from it's parent techniques. Naturally, the Cloud Manifestation, has an upkeep already, and feel it would be quite asinine to have multiple upkeep of the same technique with added functionality, since I was hoping on making the Cloudian Empathy a clan ability of the Inäzümän. I will be creating a rain cloud and storm techniqhes with the same upkeep, since they all appropiate with the cloud technique of genesis.
    I can specify an experience cost to allocate it's effects.
    The cloud generation, which were accepted last update would most likely be unlocked at B Rank and requiring the wind element. {Another shift, when I finish the line of techniques}
    I'll write up a proper update for it in the customs for acceptance of the clan; Inäzümän.



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    [*]Constitution: C
    [*]Stamina: B { 160 }
    [*]Speed: S
    [*]Coordination: B
    [*]Intelligence: A
    [*]Perception: B

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    Post by Copycat on Mon Nov 05, 2018 8:08 am

    雲生成 | Yún Shēngchéng | Cloud Physiology ~ Wind Form
    Rank: S
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: ~
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0m - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable w/ Intellect
    Element: 風遁 | Fuuton | Style of Air
    Skill: Unique Ability
    Classification: Supplimentary
    Requirements: Event//Plot Exclusive; Ïnäzümä ; In order to incure this form and universal ability, one has had to die and be ressurected before Rigor Mortis.
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: ~
    Description: The caster has a natural ability to transform their whole body, as well as all items which they touch, to become a spiritual, vaporous, and cloudlike. While in cloud physiology the caster's body emanates and aetheric cerulean radiance streaming in thier essential quintessient nature, stratusing without hinderance of natural or elemental techniques comprised of the rank for genesis.

    Spoiler:
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    Weaknesses: Due to the caster having a less tangible form, they cannot utilize Taijutsu or be affected by physical based techniques while utilizing Cloud Physiology ~ Wind Form

    Denied. Too similar to Hozuki Hydrification without the backlash from a different element.

    云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloudian Empathy
    Rank: E
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: E •°• 1
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: ~
    Element: 風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Ïnäzümän, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: After the caster has generated clouds, they can shift them back and forth from the white regular clouds, towards the dark storm clouds the Inäzümän are know for manifesting. While the clouds are within thier storm form, Raiton, Suiton, and Ranton techniques cast from the catalyst of the clouds. While the clouds are within thier purest form, Raiton, Suiton, and Fuuton techniques can be cast from the catalyst of the clouds.
    Weaknesses:

    Raise this technique's overall rank to C-Rank, and specify that this technique lowers the drain of techniques from those elements so long as this one is maintained (so you'll still be paying an excess 3 CP for them basically).


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    Post by KhaixRozary on Mon Dec 17, 2018 4:39 pm


    云 代 •°• Yün Dáì •°• Cloudian Generation { Style of Cloud : Yunton }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: ~
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: ~
    Element: 風遁 : Fūton : Style of Wind, 水遁 : Suiton : Style of Aquatics, 雷遁 : Räitōn : Style of Lightning
    Skill: ~
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret, Hiden [Unlocked at D Rank]
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, 250 Exp
    Parent Technique: 雲蓮花 •°• Yün Liánhuā •°• Cloud Lotus { Yünhaña }
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: This is the innate ability of the Îńäzümån, reserved for those with the Kekkeï Genkai, or without the Bloodline, as a Hiden among the clan, granting the ability to create and manuever pure white and silvery rainclouds. The clouds naturally pan and absorb moisture within, growing large with water and can be utilized in conjunction of respective techniques of thier residing element. Cloudian techniques are often used to form barriers, reduce the perception of the adversary, or manipulate the weather to setup other ninjutsu that have environmental requirements. Innately, the Cloudian Creation ability allows the Îñäzümän to learn both techniques, Call of the Wind and Call of the Rain, regardless of rank, if they have the prerequisite elements. Requires Fuuton or Raiton to create white and pure clouds. Requires Suiton to create rainclouds.
    Weaknesses:

    Îñäzümån Ability:


    Cloudian Creation : { Style of Yunton }  - 250 EXP

    This is the innate ability of the Îńäzümån, reserved for those with the Kekkeï Genkai, or without the Bloodline, as a Hiden among the clan, granting the ability to create and manuever pure white and silvery rainclouds. The clouds naturally pan and absorb moisture within, growing large with water and can be utilized in conjunction of respective techniques of thier residing element. Cloudian techniques are often used to form barriers, reduce the perception of the adversary, or manipulate the weather to setup other ninjutsu that have environmental requirements. Innately, the Cloudian Creation ability allows the Îñäzümån to learn both techniques, Call of the Wind and Call of the Rain, regardless of rank, if they have the prerequisite elements. Requires Fuuton to create white and pure snow clouds. Requires Suiton to create rainclouds.

    Made clan ability for the Hiden of Îńäzümån.

    云 同情 •°• Yün Tóngqíng •°• Cloudian Empathy
    Rank: A
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: ~
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: ~
    Element: 風遁 : Fūton : Style of Wind, 水遁 : Suiton : Style of Aquatics, 雷遁 : Räitōn : Style of Lightning, 嵐遁 : Ranton : Style of Storm
    Skill: ~
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret [Unlocked at B Rank]
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, Cloud Creation [Hiden], Storm Cloud Creation, 750 Exp
    Parent Technique: 云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: After the caster has generated clouds, they can shift them back and forth from the white regular clouds, the silvern rain clouds, towards the dark storm clouds the Inäzümän are known for manifesting. While the clouds are within their indigo storm form, Raiton and Suiton techniques cast from the catalyst of the clouds; Stormcall. While the clouds are within their silver rain form Suiton and Fuuton techniques can be cast from the catalyst of the clouds; Raincall. While the clouds are within their purest white form, Fuuton and Raiton techniques can be cast from the catalyst of the clouds; Cloudcall. All cloudians are filled with the suiton element, regardless of thier elemental composition. They are extremely heavy and saturate all whom enter and exit, whilst providing an adequate chakra consumption and constitution of the appropiate rank of the cloud technique in conjunction of the Cloudian Empathy ability, depending on the amount of chakra invested. In laymen terms, an ally or adversary would require the Strength or higher than the technique of a cloud to enter, or the will of the caster, otherwise the clouds will be a formidable defence. Naturally all whom enter a cloud will be wet and saturated. Innately, Ranton can be cast from all interchanging formations of each particular cloudian path. Naturally, The Cloudian Empathy ability also gift the caster a tier advantage { ★ } in speed in regards to movement and manuevering while within or on a plume of cloud. Howevermore, the ability also increases the speed of casting techniques of the respective elements for each cloud formation.
    Weaknesses:

    Îñäzümån Ability:
    Storm Release: Cloudian Empathy  - 750 EXP
    After the caster has generated clouds, they can shift them back and forth from the white regular clouds, the silvern rain clouds, towards the indigo storm clouds the Îñäzümån are known for manifesting. While the clouds are within their storm form, Raiton and Suiton techniques cast from the catalyst of the clouds. While the clouds are within their silvern rain form Suiton and Fuuton techniques can be cast from the catalyst of the clouds. While the clouds are within their purest form, Fuuton and Raiton techniques can be cast from the catalyst of the clouds. All cloudians are filled with the suiton element, regardless of thier elemental composition, they are extremely heavy and saturate all whom enter and exit, whilst providing and adequate constitution of the appropiate rank of the cloud technique in conjunction of the Cloudian Empathy ability. In laymen terms, an ally or adversary would require the Strength or higher than the technique of a cloud to enter, or the will of the caster, otherwise the clouds will be a formidable defence. Naturally all whom enter a cloud will be wet and saturated. Innately, Ranton can be cast from all interchanging formations of each particular cloudian path. Naturally, The Cloudian Empathy ability also gift the caster a tier advantage { ★ } in speed in regards to movement and manuevering while within or on a plume of cloud. Howevermore, the ability also increases the speed of casting techniques of the respective elements for each cloud formation.


    I'd like to create this ability for the bloodline members of the Inazuma.
    I removed activation and upkeep, because the normal cloud abilities naturally occur to consume chakra whenever there is a need for activation or upkeep.
    Removed Enhanced speed towards X.
    Increased Experience to Learning
    Removed the rank increase of techniques which utilizes the clouds as a medium and augmented to speed of techniques casted from clouds and caster while upon or within clouds.
    Shifted Allies/Adversaries

    ~>:★:<~

    云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion { Call of the Cloud }
    Rank: B
    Power: Variable { C - S }
    Activation Cost: Variable { C •°• 5 ~ S •°• 25 }
    Upkeep Cost: Variable { D •°• 3 ~ A •°• 15 }
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable w/ Intelligence
    Element: 風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air,  水遁 : Suiton : Style of Aquatics
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster gathers chakra within thier body and begin to emit the plumes of clouds from eyes, mouth, nostrils, ears, hands and feet. The clouds will pan and drift from the pores of thier body, creating a large white mass of fluff around them. Alternatively, the caster can allocate the space around them, in thier range, to manifest clouds within thier distance. The clouds naturally grow in size, 3 meters per rank for intellect of the caster, as they move forth, panning larger akin the range which they travel, absorbing water in the atmosphere as they move forward. The pure clouds are white and transclucent, allowing all those whom lay thier eyes upon them to see roughly throughout them, even if providing mild obscurity. The manifestation of casting speed and manueverability are on par of the base rank of the caster's intelligence. The perception of adversaries within the cloud is reduced by a tier disadvantage { ★ } so long as they are within the cloud. Naturally, adversaries are also soaked upon entering and exiting the cloud, covering them with water droplets and keeping them moist. Supplimentarly, if there are clouds which have been previous manifested by the caster, they can utilize the cloud, akin mediums, for the growth, regeneration, and creation of new plumes in appropiation of upkeep. In layman terms, if a cloud was created, for upkeep, the cloud can increase in size and replicate at base rankage of the caster's intellect. Upon dispersion, the pure clouds burst in a gust of air, knocking back adversaries ten meters.
    Weaknesses:

    ~:>★<:~

    雨云 表現 • { 雨的召唤 } •°• Yûyün Bîäōxîän • { Yû de Zhàohuàn } •°• Raincloud Manifestion • { Call of the Rain }
    Rank: B
    Power: Variable { C - S }
    Activation Cost: Variable { C •°• 5 ~ S •°• 25 }
    Upkeep Cost: Variable { D •°• 3 ~ A •°• 15 }
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable w/ Intelligence
    Element: 水遁 : Suiton : Style of Aquatics
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster gathers chakra within thier body and begin to emit the plumes of silver rainclouds from eyes, mouth, nostrils, ears, hands and feet. The rainclouds will pan and drift from the pores of thier body, creating a swirling large silver mass of fluff around them. Alternatively, the caster can allocate the space around them, in thier range, to manifest rainclouds within thier distance. The rainclouds naturally grow in size 3 meters per rank of intellect of the caster as they move forth from the caster, panning larger akin the range which they travel, absorbing water in the atmosphere as they move forward, each post. The silvern rainclouds are heavily opaque, causing those peering within difficulty in seeing throughout because of the oppositice ascue, however provides subtle illumination through the luminosity of the refracting water and streaking lightning within. The manifestation of casting speed and manueverability are on par of the rank of the caster's intelligence. The perception of adversaries within the raincloud is reduced by a tier disadvantage { ★ }, so long as they are within the raincloud. Naturally, adversaries are also soaked upon entering and exiting the raincloud, covering them with water dousettes and keeping them moist. Supplimentarly, if there are rainclouds which have been previous manifested by the caster, they can utilize the raincloud, akin mediums, for the creation of new plumes in appropiation of upkeep. In layman terms, if a cloud was created, for upkeep, the cloud can increase in size and replicate at base rankage of the caster's intellect. As the name implies, the raincloud 'reigns' in light sprinkles, downpouring underneathe it's essence upon the manifold, saturating the field. Upon dispersion, the rainclouds burst within dousettes of water, leaving a puddle underneathe.
    Weaknesses: ~

    ~:>★<:~

    暴风云 表現 • { 召唤风暴 } •°• Baô Fêngyün Bîäōxîän • Zhàohuàn Fëngbáö •°•  Stromcloud Manifestion { Call of the Storm }
    Rank: A
    Power:  Variable { C - S }
    Activation Cost: Variable { C •°• 5 ~ S •°• 25 }
    Upkeep Cost: Variable { D •°• 3 ~ A •°• 15 }
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable w/ Coordination
    Element:嵐遁 : Ranton : Style of Storm
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Offensive; Secret
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster gathers chakra within thier body and begin to emit the plumes of indigo stromclouds from eyes, mouth, nostrils, ears, hands and feet. The stromclouds will pan and drift from the pores of thier body, creating a swirling large indigo mass of fluff around them. Alternatively, the caster can allocate the space around them, in thier range, to manifest stormclouds within thier distance. The stormclouds naturally grow in size 3 meters per rank of intellect of the caster as they move forth from the caster, panning larger akin the range which they travel, absorbing water in the atmosphere as they move forward, each post. The indigo stormclouds are heavily opaque, causing those peering within difficulty in seeing throughout because of the oppositice ascue, however provides subtle illumination through the luminosity of the streaming storm and streaking lightning. The manifestation of casting speed and manueverability are on par of the rank of the caster's intelligence. The intelligence of adversaries within the stormcloud is reduced by a minor disadvantage { ± } and perception by a major disadvantage { ±± }, when they enter and so long as they are within the stormcloud. Afterwhich, they are applied 'Shock' status effect upon exiting. Naturally, adversaries are also soaked upon entering and exiting the stormcloud, covering them with water dousettes and keeping them moist. Supplimentarly, if there are stormclouds which have been previous manifested by the caster, they can utilize the stormcloud, akin mediums, for the creation of new plumes in appropiation of upkeep. In layman terms, if a cloud was created, for upkeep, the cloud can increase in size and replicate at base rankage of the caster's intellect. As the name implies, the stormcloud 'reigns' in heavy downpour, brazling with golden lightning and booming with thunder, saturating the field. Upon dispersion, the stormclouds burst into rays of energy beams with knockback of the thunderclap ten meters.

    'Shock' Status Effect:
    If the constitution of the adversary is below that of B, the shock spikes throughout the adversary's nervous system, shortening out there synaptic receptors, causing involuntary movement and spasming pains, stunning them. Previously shocked enemies have thier 'shock' status and are stunned for a turn at Rank B of the stacking 'shock' status effect; cannot move. Afterwards, the emananting duration of both shock and stun can be elongated by the application of upkeep, with the exception of stuns which has been applied at less than S rank. After the release of the shock status effect, This technique inhibits the movement of the adversary, hampering their speed by a minor disadvantage { ± } and coordination with a major disadvantage { ±± } for two turns. If the shock of the technique is two tiers above the constituition of the adversary, thier nervous system becomes fried, upon overload, thus permentally paralyzed.
    Weaknesses:

    ~>:★:<~

    [雲暫停 •°• Yún Xuáñgūà •°• Cloudian Suspension
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5
    Upkeep Cost: D •°• 3
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable with Intellegence; Max { ★★ } Two Tiers from base stat
    Element: 風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: After the caster has generated clouds, they can manuever the clouds, allowing the cloud to carry them up upon a circular nimbus, or covering them partially or wholly in an swirling orb of billowing puffs. While upon, or within, a cloud, the caster is gifted suspension upon the cloud, allowing celeric movement throughout the air. The clouds only move as swift as the rank of intellegence of the caster. The cloud suspension technique also gift the caster an tier advantage { ★ } in coordination in regards to movement, manuevering, and casting while within or on a plume of cloud.
    Weaknesses:

    Reregistering augementing advantages from speed//coordination to coordination

    ~:>★<:~

    云 上升 •°• Yún ShângShëng •°• Cloudian Ascension
    Rank: S
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: S •°• 25
    Upkeep Cost: A •°• 15
    Range: Personal - Far [ 0hm - 100m ]
    Speed: Variable with Intellegence; Max { ★★ } Two Tiers from base stat
    Element: 風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: After the caster has generated clouds, they can manuever and merge the fluffs, allowing the cloud to carry them and allies up upon a circular platform or blanketing an area wholly in an orb of billowing puffs. While upon, or within, a cloud, the caster is gifted ascension upon the cloud, allowing celeric movement throughout the air. The cloud Ascension technique also gift the caster and allies a tier advantage { ★ } in speed and a tier advantage { ★ } in coordination in regards to movement, manuevering, and casting techniques while within or on a plume of cloud.
    Weaknesses:~

    ~>:★:<~

    聖 闪电颠簸 { 休克 } •°• Shèng Shǎndiànbó •°• Holy Lightning Jolt Technique
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: A •°• 15
    Upkeep Cost: B •°• 10
    Range: Personal - Close { 0hm -  36m }
    Speed: A +1 Tier { S }
    Element: 雷遁 : Räitōn : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Offensive; Secret
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: 野兔 •  绵羊 • 公鸡 | Yétü • Míanyäng • Gōngjï  | Hare • Sheep • Rooster
    Description: The caster charges their natural sources from the center of their abdomen and further into their hands. After weaving the corresponding sigils the charge of the chakra within the hands will fizzle until the nature of lightning emanates from the palms. The lightning shall naturally coat over the hands, shining in a sporadic color of violet and deep indigo. The caster will point them at a target, releasing the cluster of lightning toward an adversary, bringing the sound of crackling thunder upon firing. This cluster of lightning energy jumps, iconically, from the caster's hands and clings towards it's extended target, latching the elemental nature upon and throughout their body. Upon contact, the technique shocks the opponent, as the name implies, sending an electrifying jolt of energy throughout their body, applying the 'shock' status effect. Due to the electrical composition, lightning current and exertion of the shock, similar to fire, exposure to such status damages the adversary with 2nd degree burns over their body. If the adversary has a chaotic or evil allignment, the Holy Lightning Jolt technique advances in a rank of power and they are stunned instead. The speed of this technique naturally increases by one tier in regard of casting.

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    'Shock' Status Effect:
    If the constitution of the adversary is below that of B, the shock spikes throughout the adversary's nervous system, shortening out there synaptic receptors, causing involuntary movement and spasming pains, stunning them. Previously shocked enemies have thier 'shock' status and are stunned for a turn at Rank B of the stacking 'shock' status effect; cannot move. Afterwards, the emananting duration of both shock and stun can be elongated by the application of upkeep, with the exception of stuns which has been applied at less than S rank. After the release of the shock status effect, This technique inhibits the movement of the adversary, hampering their speed by a minor disadvantage { ± } and coordination with a major disadvantage { ±± } for two turns. If the shock of the technique is two tiers above the constituition of the adversary, thier nervous system becomes fried, upon overload, thus permentally paralyzed. Rank

    Weaknesses:~

    Reregistering for the alteration of the name of the technique.
    Added in increase in speed of casting, although wondering if I did this right...
    It's an A rank technique, with the power of B, to have the speed of S.
    I dropped the level of it's power in hopes of increasing it's speed.
    Added in 'Shock' status effect.

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    聖 闪电器具 •°• Shèng Shånjîån Qìjù • { Xüîkë } •°• Holy Lightning Apparatus { Shock } 
    Rank: S
    Power: Variable { E - S }
    Activation Cost: Variable { E •°• 1 - S •°• 25 }
    Upkeep Cost: Variable { E •°• 1 - A •°• 15 }
    Range: Personal - Close { 0hm -  36m }
    Speed: Variable w/ Power { E - S }
    Element:雷遁 : Räitōn : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu, Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: 野兔 •  绵羊 • 马 | Yétü • Mâ • Míanyäng | Hare • Horse • Sheep
    Description: In enhancing the essence of chakra within thier lightning techniques, this technique can to be universally utilized with the element of Raiton and any elemental combination which accues in utilization of the element of origin. Upon contact, the particular technique shocks the opponent, as the name implies, sending an electrifying jolt of energy throughout and brazens over their body, applying the 'shock' status effect and reduces Constitution by a tier { ★ }. If the adversary has an allignment of Chaotic or Evil, the Holy Lightning Apparatus advances in a rank of power and they are stunned instead. By applying shock, the status effect naturally removes any form of lethality from the original technique, excluding ranks of A, S, and above.

    'Shock' Status Effect:
    Previously shocked enemies have thier 'shock' status removed and are stunned for a turn at Rank B of the stacking 'shock' status effect; cannot move. Afterwards, The emananting duration of both shock and stun can be elongated by the application of upkeep, with the exception of stuns which has been applied at less than S rank. After the release of the shock status effect, this technique inhibits the movement of the adversary, hampering their speed and coordination with prospective disadvantages for multiple turns, depending on the level of rankage. { 1:C, 2:B, 3:A≈S }

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    Weaknesses:~

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    聖 闪电 抑制 • { 超载 } •°• Shèng Shånjîån Yízhí • { Chaozai } •°• Holy Lightning Inhibitation { Overload }  
    Rank: S
    Power: Variable { E - S }
    Activation Cost: Variable { E •°• 1 - S •°• 25}
    Upkeep Cost: Variable { E •°• 1 - A •°• 15 }
    Range: Personal - Close { 0hm -  36m }
    Speed: Variable w/ Power { E - S }
    Element: 雷遁 : Räitōn : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu, Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: 马 | Míanyäng | Sheep
    Description: After the application of a lightning status effect, Shock, Stun, ECT, the user can apply upkeep to persue forth into overcharging the lightning element causing the status effect to 'Overload'. Lightning techniques are considered one tier more powerful against the Constitution of the adversary which is effected by the 'Overload' status effect.

    'Overload' Status Effect:
    Previously shocked enemies have thier 'shock' status, buffs removed, and supercharge the effect akin an overload. The constitution of the adversary is reduced by the amount of debuffs removed to a maximum of three advantages; the number of removed buffs exemplifies the number of disadvantages for constitution { 1:±:C, 2:±±:B, 3:★:A≈S }. If the constitution of the adversary is below that of the rank utilized, the overload spikes throughout the adversary's nervous system, shortening out their synaptic receptors, causing involuntary movement and spasming pains, stunning them; cannot move. Due to the electrical composition, lightning current and exertion of the shock, similar to fire, exposure to such status damages the adversary with degree burns over their body, depending on level of rankage; { 1:C, 2:B, 3:A≈S }. If the status effect before the 'overload' of the technique is two tiers above the constituition of the adversary, thier nervous system becomes fried thus permentally paralyzed, upon activation.  

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    Weaknesses:~

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    閃電蓮花矛: Fēngbào Míngwén : Storm Inscription
    Rank: Variable
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: Variable { E •°• 1 - S •°• 25 }
    Upkeep Cost: Variable { E •°• 1 - A •°• 15 }
    Range: Personal - Close { 0hm -  15m }
    Speed: ±1 Tier
    Element: 嵐遁 : Ranton : Style of Storm
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu, Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, A Rank Intelligence
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: : Shè :  Serpentine
    Description: The caster charges Räñton essence within thier finger tips and engraphs thier appropriate seal of any rank, etching thier glyphs with streaming storm energy beam chakra upon any physical item.

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    Altered and Reposting.

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    Opening of the Whylds, the unsealing of the Clouds...:

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    Léï Zhènyün
    ~ Ijutstu, Ninjutsu, Kuchiyôse, Fuuinjutsu, Chemistry, Engineer, Genjutsu { ? } ~
    Ïnazüma; Storm ~ Tempest, Ray, Cloudian Air
    The Protopolypian Medusozoan

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    Stats:

    [*]Strength: E
    [*]Constitution: C
    [*]Stamina: B { 160 }
    [*]Speed: S
    [*]Coordination: B
    [*]Intelligence: A
    [*]Perception: B

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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike on Mon Mar 04, 2019 9:03 pm

    KhaixRoze wrote:

    云 代 •°• Yün Dáì •°• Cloudian Generation { Style of Cloud : Yunton }
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: ~
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: ~
    Element: 風遁 : Fūton : Style of Wind, 水遁 : Suiton : Style of Aquatics, 雷遁 : Räitōn : Style of Lightning
    Skill: ~
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret, Hiden [Unlocked at D Rank]
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, 250 Exp
    Parent Technique: 雲蓮花 •°• Yün Liánhuā •°• Cloud Lotus { Yünhaña }
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: This is the innate ability of the Îńäzümån, reserved for those with the Kekkeï Genkai, or without the Bloodline, as a Hiden among the clan, granting the ability to create and manuever pure white and silvery rainclouds. The clouds naturally pan and absorb moisture within, growing large with water and can be utilized in conjunction of respective techniques of thier residing element. Cloudian techniques are often used to form barriers, reduce the perception of the adversary, or manipulate the weather to setup other ninjutsu that have environmental requirements. Innately, the Cloudian Creation ability allows the Îñäzümän to learn both techniques, Call of the Wind and Call of the Rain, regardless of rank, if they have the prerequisite elements. Requires Fuuton or Raiton to create white and pure clouds. Requires Suiton to create rainclouds.
    Weaknesses:

    Îñäzümån Ability:


    Cloudian Creation : { Style of Yunton }  - 250 EXP

    This is the innate ability of the Îńäzümån, reserved for those with the Kekkeï Genkai, or without the Bloodline, as a Hiden among the clan, granting the ability to create and manuever pure white and silvery rainclouds. The clouds naturally pan and absorb moisture within, growing large with water and can be utilized in conjunction of respective techniques of thier residing element. Cloudian techniques are often used to form barriers, reduce the perception of the adversary, or manipulate the weather to setup other ninjutsu that have environmental requirements. Innately, the Cloudian Creation ability allows the Îñäzümån to learn both techniques, Call of the Wind and Call of the Rain, regardless of rank, if they have the prerequisite elements. Requires Fuuton to create white and pure snow clouds. Requires Suiton to create rainclouds.

    Made clan ability for the Hiden of Îńäzümån.

    云 同情 •°• Yün Tóngqíng •°• Cloudian Empathy
    Rank: A
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: ~
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: ~
    Element: 風遁 : Fūton : Style of Wind, 水遁 : Suiton : Style of Aquatics, 雷遁 : Räitōn : Style of Lightning, 嵐遁 : Ranton : Style of Storm
    Skill: ~
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret [Unlocked at B Rank]
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, Cloud Creation [Hiden], Storm Cloud Creation, 750 Exp
    Parent Technique: 云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: After the caster has generated clouds, they can shift them back and forth from the white regular clouds, the silvern rain clouds, towards the dark storm clouds the Inäzümän are known for manifesting. While the clouds are within their indigo storm form, Raiton and Suiton techniques cast from the catalyst of the clouds; Stormcall. While the clouds are within their silver rain form Suiton and Fuuton techniques can be cast from the catalyst of the clouds; Raincall. While the clouds are within their purest white form, Fuuton and Raiton techniques can be cast from the catalyst of the clouds; Cloudcall. All cloudians are filled with the suiton element, regardless of thier elemental composition. They are extremely heavy and saturate all whom enter and exit, whilst providing an adequate chakra consumption and constitution of the appropiate rank of the cloud technique in conjunction of the Cloudian Empathy ability, depending on the amount of chakra invested. In laymen terms, an ally or adversary would require the Strength or higher than the technique of a cloud to enter, or the will of the caster, otherwise the clouds will be a formidable defence. Naturally all whom enter a cloud will be wet and saturated. Innately, Ranton can be cast from all interchanging formations of each particular cloudian path. Naturally, The Cloudian Empathy ability also gift the caster a tier advantage { ★ } in speed in regards to movement and manuevering while within or on a plume of cloud. Howevermore, the ability also increases the speed of casting techniques of the respective elements for each cloud formation.
    Weaknesses:

    Îñäzümån Ability:
    Storm Release: Cloudian Empathy  - 750 EXP
    After the caster has generated clouds, they can shift them back and forth from the white regular clouds, the silvern rain clouds, towards the indigo storm clouds the Îñäzümån are known for manifesting. While the clouds are within their storm form, Raiton and Suiton techniques cast from the catalyst of the clouds. While the clouds are within their silvern rain form Suiton and Fuuton techniques can be cast from the catalyst of the clouds. While the clouds are within their purest form, Fuuton and Raiton techniques can be cast from the catalyst of the clouds. All cloudians are filled with the suiton element, regardless of thier elemental composition, they are extremely heavy and saturate all whom enter and exit, whilst providing and adequate constitution of the appropiate rank of the cloud technique in conjunction of the Cloudian Empathy ability. In laymen terms, an ally or adversary would require the Strength or higher than the technique of a cloud to enter, or the will of the caster, otherwise the clouds will be a formidable defence. Naturally all whom enter a cloud will be wet and saturated. Innately, Ranton can be cast from all interchanging formations of each particular cloudian path. Naturally, The Cloudian Empathy ability also gift the caster a tier advantage { ★ } in speed in regards to movement and manuevering while within or on a plume of cloud. Howevermore, the ability also increases the speed of casting techniques of the respective elements for each cloud formation.


    I'd like to create this ability for the bloodline members of the Inazuma.
    I removed activation and upkeep, because the normal cloud abilities naturally occur to consume chakra whenever there is a need for activation or upkeep.
    Removed Enhanced speed towards X.
    Increased Experience to Learning
    Removed the rank increase of techniques which utilizes the clouds as a medium and augmented to speed of techniques casted from clouds and caster while upon or within clouds.
    Shifted Allies/Adversaries

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    云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion { Call of the Cloud }
    Rank: B
    Power: Variable { C - S }
    Activation Cost: Variable { C •°• 5 ~ S •°• 25 }
    Upkeep Cost: Variable { D •°• 3 ~ A •°• 15 }
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable w/ Intelligence
    Element: 風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air,  水遁 : Suiton : Style of Aquatics
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 脈輪 蓮花 •°• Maìlún Liánhuā •°• Chakra Lotus Technique { Khaïaña }
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster gathers chakra within thier body and begin to emit the plumes of clouds from eyes, mouth, nostrils, ears, hands and feet. The clouds will pan and drift from the pores of thier body, creating a large white mass of fluff around them. Alternatively, the caster can allocate the space around them, in thier range, to manifest clouds within thier distance. The clouds naturally grow in size, 3 meters per rank for intellect of the caster, as they move forth, panning larger akin the range which they travel, absorbing water in the atmosphere as they move forward. The pure clouds are white and transclucent, allowing all those whom lay thier eyes upon them to see roughly throughout them, even if providing mild obscurity. The manifestation of casting speed and manueverability are on par of the base rank of the caster's intelligence. The perception of adversaries within the cloud is reduced by a tier disadvantage { ★ } so long as they are within the cloud. Naturally, adversaries are also soaked upon entering and exiting the cloud, covering them with water droplets and keeping them moist. Supplimentarly, if there are clouds which have been previous manifested by the caster, they can utilize the cloud, akin mediums, for the growth, regeneration, and creation of new plumes in appropiation of upkeep. In layman terms, if a cloud was created, for upkeep, the cloud can increase in size and replicate at base rankage of the caster's intellect. Upon dispersion, the pure clouds burst in a gust of air, knocking back adversaries ten meters.
    Weaknesses:

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    雨云 表現 • { 雨的召唤 } •°• Yûyün Bîäōxîän • { Yû de Zhàohuàn } •°• Raincloud Manifestion • { Call of the Rain }
    Rank: B
    Power: Variable { C - S }
    Activation Cost: Variable { C •°• 5 ~ S •°• 25 }
    Upkeep Cost: Variable { D •°• 3 ~ A •°• 15 }
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable w/ Intelligence
    Element: 水遁 : Suiton : Style of Aquatics
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster gathers chakra within thier body and begin to emit the plumes of silver rainclouds from eyes, mouth, nostrils, ears, hands and feet. The rainclouds will pan and drift from the pores of thier body, creating a swirling large silver mass of fluff around them. Alternatively, the caster can allocate the space around them, in thier range, to manifest rainclouds within thier distance. The rainclouds naturally grow in size 3 meters per rank of intellect of the caster as they move forth from the caster, panning larger akin the range which they travel, absorbing water in the atmosphere as they move forward, each post. The silvern rainclouds are heavily opaque, causing those peering within difficulty in seeing throughout because of the oppositice ascue, however provides subtle illumination through the luminosity of the refracting water and streaking lightning within. The manifestation of casting speed and manueverability are on par of the rank of the caster's intelligence. The perception of adversaries within the raincloud is reduced by a tier disadvantage { ★ }, so long as they are within the raincloud. Naturally, adversaries are also soaked upon entering and exiting the raincloud, covering them with water dousettes and keeping them moist. Supplimentarly, if there are rainclouds which have been previous manifested by the caster, they can utilize the raincloud, akin mediums, for the creation of new plumes in appropiation of upkeep. In layman terms, if a cloud was created, for upkeep, the cloud can increase in size and replicate at base rankage of the caster's intellect. As the name implies, the raincloud 'reigns' in light sprinkles, downpouring underneathe it's essence upon the manifold, saturating the field. Upon dispersion, the rainclouds burst within dousettes of water, leaving a puddle underneathe.
    Weaknesses: ~

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    暴风云 表現 • { 召唤风暴 } •°• Baô Fêngyün Bîäōxîän • Zhàohuàn Fëngbáö •°•  Stromcloud Manifestion { Call of the Storm }
    Rank: A
    Power:  Variable { C - S }
    Activation Cost: Variable { C •°• 5 ~ S •°• 25 }
    Upkeep Cost: Variable { D •°• 3 ~ A •°• 15 }
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable w/ Coordination
    Element:嵐遁 : Ranton : Style of Storm
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Offensive; Secret
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster gathers chakra within thier body and begin to emit the plumes of indigo stromclouds from eyes, mouth, nostrils, ears, hands and feet. The stromclouds will pan and drift from the pores of thier body, creating a swirling large indigo mass of fluff around them. Alternatively, the caster can allocate the space around them, in thier range, to manifest stormclouds within thier distance. The stormclouds naturally grow in size 3 meters per rank of intellect of the caster as they move forth from the caster, panning larger akin the range which they travel, absorbing water in the atmosphere as they move forward, each post. The indigo stormclouds are heavily opaque, causing those peering within difficulty in seeing throughout because of the oppositice ascue, however provides subtle illumination through the luminosity of the streaming storm and streaking lightning. The manifestation of casting speed and manueverability are on par of the rank of the caster's intelligence. The intelligence of adversaries within the stormcloud is reduced by a minor disadvantage { ± } and perception by a major disadvantage { ±± }, when they enter and so long as they are within the stormcloud. Afterwhich, they are applied 'Shock' status effect upon exiting. Naturally, adversaries are also soaked upon entering and exiting the stormcloud, covering them with water dousettes and keeping them moist. Supplimentarly, if there are stormclouds which have been previous manifested by the caster, they can utilize the stormcloud, akin mediums, for the creation of new plumes in appropiation of upkeep. In layman terms, if a cloud was created, for upkeep, the cloud can increase in size and replicate at base rankage of the caster's intellect. As the name implies, the stormcloud 'reigns' in heavy downpour, brazling with golden lightning and booming with thunder, saturating the field. Upon dispersion, the stormclouds burst into rays of energy beams with knockback of the thunderclap ten meters.

    'Shock' Status Effect:
    If the constitution of the adversary is below that of B, the shock spikes throughout the adversary's nervous system, shortening out there synaptic receptors, causing involuntary movement and spasming pains, stunning them. Previously shocked enemies have thier 'shock' status and are stunned for a turn at Rank B of the stacking 'shock' status effect; cannot move. Afterwards, the emananting duration of both shock and stun can be elongated by the application of upkeep, with the exception of stuns which has been applied at less than S rank. After the release of the shock status effect, This technique inhibits the movement of the adversary, hampering their speed by a minor disadvantage { ± } and coordination with a major disadvantage { ±± } for two turns. If the shock of the technique is two tiers above the constituition of the adversary, thier nervous system becomes fried, upon overload, thus permentally paralyzed.
    Weaknesses:

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    [雲暫停 •°• Yún Xuáñgūà •°• Cloudian Suspension
    Rank: C
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5
    Upkeep Cost: D •°• 3
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable with Intellegence; Max { ★★ } Two Tiers from base stat
    Element: 風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: After the caster has generated clouds, they can manuever the clouds, allowing the cloud to carry them up upon a circular nimbus, or covering them partially or wholly in an swirling orb of billowing puffs. While upon, or within, a cloud, the caster is gifted suspension upon the cloud, allowing celeric movement throughout the air. The clouds only move as swift as the rank of intellegence of the caster. The cloud suspension technique also gift the caster an tier advantage { ★ } in coordination in regards to movement, manuevering, and casting while within or on a plume of cloud.
    Weaknesses:

    Reregistering augementing advantages from speed//coordination to coordination

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    云 上升 •°• Yún ShângShëng •°• Cloudian Ascension
    Rank: S
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: S •°• 25
    Upkeep Cost: A •°• 15
    Range: Personal - Far [ 0hm - 100m ]
    Speed: Variable with Intellegence; Max { ★★ } Two Tiers from base stat
    Element: 風遁 •°• Fuuton •°• Style of Air
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Secret, Hiden
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: After the caster has generated clouds, they can manuever and merge the fluffs, allowing the cloud to carry them and allies up upon a circular platform or blanketing an area wholly in an orb of billowing puffs. While upon, or within, a cloud, the caster is gifted ascension upon the cloud, allowing celeric movement throughout the air. The cloud Ascension technique also gift the caster and allies a tier advantage { ★ } in speed and a tier advantage { ★ } in coordination in regards to movement, manuevering, and casting techniques while within or on a plume of cloud.
    Weaknesses:~

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    聖 闪电颠簸 { 休克 } •°• Shèng Shǎndiànbó •°• Holy Lightning Jolt Technique
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: A •°• 15
    Upkeep Cost: B •°• 10
    Range: Personal - Close { 0hm -  36m }
    Speed: A +1 Tier { S }
    Element: 雷遁 : Räitōn : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Offensive; Secret
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: 野兔 •  绵羊 • 公鸡 | Yétü • Míanyäng • Gōngjï  | Hare • Sheep • Rooster
    Description: The caster charges their natural sources from the center of their abdomen and further into their hands. After weaving the corresponding sigils the charge of the chakra within the hands will fizzle until the nature of lightning emanates from the palms. The lightning shall naturally coat over the hands, shining in a sporadic color of violet and deep indigo. The caster will point them at a target, releasing the cluster of lightning toward an adversary, bringing the sound of crackling thunder upon firing. This cluster of lightning energy jumps, iconically, from the caster's hands and clings towards it's extended target, latching the elemental nature upon and throughout their body. Upon contact, the technique shocks the opponent, as the name implies, sending an electrifying jolt of energy throughout their body, applying the 'shock' status effect. Due to the electrical composition, lightning current and exertion of the shock, similar to fire, exposure to such status damages the adversary with 2nd degree burns over their body. If the adversary has a chaotic or evil allignment, the Holy Lightning Jolt technique advances in a rank of power and they are stunned instead. The speed of this technique naturally increases by one tier in regard of casting.

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    'Shock' Status Effect:
    If the constitution of the adversary is below that of B, the shock spikes throughout the adversary's nervous system, shortening out there synaptic receptors, causing involuntary movement and spasming pains, stunning them. Previously shocked enemies have thier 'shock' status and are stunned for a turn at Rank B of the stacking 'shock' status effect; cannot move. Afterwards, the emananting duration of both shock and stun can be elongated by the application of upkeep, with the exception of stuns which has been applied at less than S rank. After the release of the shock status effect, This technique inhibits the movement of the adversary, hampering their speed by a minor disadvantage { ± } and coordination with a major disadvantage { ±± } for two turns. If the shock of the technique is two tiers above the constituition of the adversary, thier nervous system becomes fried, upon overload, thus permentally paralyzed. Rank

    Weaknesses:~

    Reregistering for the alteration of the name of the technique.
    Added in increase in speed of casting, although wondering if I did this right...
    It's an A rank technique, with the power of B, to have the speed of S.
    I dropped the level of it's power in hopes of increasing it's speed.
    Added in 'Shock' status effect.

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    聖 闪电器具 •°• Shèng Shånjîån Qìjù • { Xüîkë } •°• Holy Lightning Apparatus { Shock } 
    Rank: S
    Power: Variable { E - S }
    Activation Cost: Variable { E •°• 1 - S •°• 25 }
    Upkeep Cost: Variable { E •°• 1 - A •°• 15 }
    Range: Personal - Close { 0hm -  36m }
    Speed: Variable w/ Power { E - S }
    Element:雷遁 : Räitōn : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu, Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: 野兔 •  绵羊 • 马 | Yétü • Mâ • Míanyäng | Hare • Horse • Sheep
    Description: In enhancing the essence of chakra within thier lightning techniques, this technique can to be universally utilized with the element of Raiton and any elemental combination which accues in utilization of the element of origin. Upon contact, the particular technique shocks the opponent, as the name implies, sending an electrifying jolt of energy throughout and brazens over their body, applying the 'shock' status effect and reduces Constitution by a tier { ★ }. If the adversary has an allignment of Chaotic or Evil, the Holy Lightning Apparatus advances in a rank of power and they are stunned instead. By applying shock, the status effect naturally removes any form of lethality from the original technique, excluding ranks of A, S, and above.

    'Shock' Status Effect:
    Previously shocked enemies have thier 'shock' status removed and are stunned for a turn at Rank B of the stacking 'shock' status effect; cannot move. Afterwards, The emananting duration of both shock and stun can be elongated by the application of upkeep, with the exception of stuns which has been applied at less than S rank. After the release of the shock status effect, this technique inhibits the movement of the adversary, hampering their speed and coordination with prospective disadvantages for multiple turns, depending on the level of rankage. { 1:C, 2:B, 3:A≈S }

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    聖 闪电 抑制 • { 超载 } •°• Shèng Shånjîån Yízhí • { Chaozai } •°• Holy Lightning Inhibitation { Overload }  
    Rank: S
    Power: Variable { E - S }
    Activation Cost: Variable { E •°• 1 - S •°• 25}
    Upkeep Cost: Variable { E •°• 1 - A •°• 15 }
    Range: Personal - Close { 0hm -  36m }
    Speed: Variable w/ Power { E - S }
    Element: 雷遁 : Räitōn : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu, Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: 马 | Míanyäng | Sheep
    Description: After the application of a lightning status effect, Shock, Stun, ECT, the user can apply upkeep to persue forth into overcharging the lightning element causing the status effect to 'Overload'. Lightning techniques are considered one tier more powerful against the Constitution of the adversary which is effected by the 'Overload' status effect.

    'Overload' Status Effect:
    Previously shocked enemies have thier 'shock' status, buffs removed, and supercharge the effect akin an overload. The constitution of the adversary is reduced by the amount of debuffs removed to a maximum of three advantages; the number of removed buffs exemplifies the number of disadvantages for constitution { 1:±:C, 2:±±:B, 3:★:A≈S }. If the constitution of the adversary is below that of the rank utilized, the overload spikes throughout the adversary's nervous system, shortening out their synaptic receptors, causing involuntary movement and spasming pains, stunning them; cannot move. Due to the electrical composition, lightning current and exertion of the shock, similar to fire, exposure to such status damages the adversary with degree burns over their body, depending on level of rankage; { 1:C, 2:B, 3:A≈S }. If the status effect before the 'overload' of the technique is two tiers above the constituition of the adversary, thier nervous system becomes fried thus permentally paralyzed, upon activation.  

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    閃電蓮花矛: Fēngbào Míngwén : Storm Inscription
    Rank: Variable
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: Variable { E •°• 1 - S •°• 25 }
    Upkeep Cost: Variable { E •°• 1 - A •°• 15 }
    Range: Personal - Close { 0hm -  15m }
    Speed: ±1 Tier
    Element: 嵐遁 : Ranton : Style of Storm
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu, Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, A Rank Intelligence
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: : Shè :  Serpentine
    Description: The caster charges Räñton essence within thier finger tips and engraphs thier appropriate seal of any rank, etching thier glyphs with streaming storm energy beam chakra upon any physical item.

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    Altered and Reposting.

    ~:>★<:~


    Consistent with what we have discussed in the Discord, All of these jutsu are hereby Approved.

    Chakra Conduit, is not approved and will be fixed and re-registered at a later date.


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    Character Name: Shimiko Chinoike
    Stats:

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: A
    • Speed: A
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence:  B
    • Perception: A

    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1


    Gear

    • 2x Kālīkoroshimasu
    • 10x Serrated Kunai
    • Six Sai of Serration
    • Chinowakugumi Armour
    • Twin Tessen of Terror


    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t344-shimiko-s-updates
    Link to Character Application: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t260-shimiko-chinoike
    Link to Known Techniques:

    Shimiko's ANBU Mask
    KhaixRozary
    KhaixRozary
    Jounin

    Posts : 385
    Join date : 2018-08-03
    Age : 27
    Location : The Abyss of the Whispers for Eternity

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Kuchiyôse, Iijutsu, Ninjutsu, Fuuinjutsu; Ototon, Stormztrohm
    Class: S
    Ryo: ~

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    閃電蓮花矛: Fēngbào Míngwén : Storm Inscription
    Rank: Variable
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: Variable { E •°• 1 - S •°• 25 }
    Upkeep Cost: Variable { E •°• 1 - A •°• 15 }
    Range: Personal - Close { 0hm -  15m }
    Speed: Variable
    Element: 嵐遁 : Ranton : Style of Storm
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu, Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary;
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, A Rank Intelligence
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: : Shè :  Serpentine
    Description: The caster charges Räñton essence within thier finger tips and engraphs thier appropriate seal of any rank, etching thier glyphs with streaming storm energy beam chakra upon any physical item. This includes touching, to engraph the seal, akin utilizing the palm or sole akin an hanko for stamping.

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    Altered From Secret to KKG Exclusive

    ~`|•:★:•|`~

    聖 闪电器具 •°• Shèng Shånjîån Qìjù • { Xüîkë } •°• Holy Lightning Apparatus { Shock } 
    Rank: S
    Power: Variable { E - S }
    Activation Cost: Variable { E •°• 1 - S •°• 25 }
    Upkeep Cost: Variable { E •°• 1 - A •°• 15 }
    Range: Personal - Close { 0hm -  36m }
    Speed: Variable w/ Power { E - S }
    Element:雷遁 : Räitōn : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu, Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: 野兔 •  绵羊 • 马 | Yétü • Mâ • Míanyäng | Hare • Horse • Sheep
    Description: In enhancing the essence of chakra within thier lightning techniques, this technique can to be universally utilized with the element of Raiton and any elemental combination which accues in utilization of the element of origin. Upon contact, the particular technique shocks the opponent, as the name implies, sending an electrifying jolt of energy throughout and brazens over their body, applying the 'shock' status effect and reduces Constitution by a tier { ★ }. If the adversary has an allignment of Chaotic or Evil, the Holy Lightning Apparatus advances in a rank of power and they are stunned instead. By applying shock, the status effect naturally removes any form of lethality from the original technique, excluding ranks of A, S, and above.

    'Shock' Status Effect:
    Previously shocked enemies have thier 'shock' status removed and are stunned for a turn at Rank B of the stacking 'shock' status effect; cannot move. Afterwards, The emananting duration of both shock and stun can be elongated by the application of upkeep, with the exception of stuns which has been applied at no less than S rank. After the release of the shock status effect, this technique inhibits the movement of the adversary, hampering their speed and coordination with prospective disadvantages for multiple turns, depending on the level of rankage. { 1:C, 2:B, 3:A≈S }

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    Weaknesses:~

    Altered grammatical errors

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    聖 闪电颠簸 { 休克 } •°• Shèng Shǎndiànbó •°• Holy Lightning Jolt Technique
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: A •°• 15
    Upkeep Cost: B •°• 10
    Range: Personal - Close { 0hm -  36m }
    Speed: S
    Element: 雷遁 : Räitōn : Style of Lightning
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Offensive; Secret
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: 野兔 •  绵羊 • 公鸡 | Yétü • Míanyäng • Gōngjï  | Hare • Sheep • Rooster
    Description: The caster charges their natural sources from the center of their abdomen and further into their hands. After weaving the corresponding sigils the charge of the chakra within the hands will fizzle until the nature of lightning emanates from the palms. The lightning shall naturally coat over the hands, shining in a sporadic color of violet and deep indigo. The caster will point them at a target, releasing the cluster of lightning toward an adversary, bringing the sound of crackling thunder upon firing. This cluster of lightning energy jumps, iconically, from the caster's hands and clings towards it's extended target, latching the elemental nature upon and throughout their body. Upon contact, the technique shocks the opponent, as the name implies, sending an electrifying jolt of energy throughout their body, applying the 'shock' status effect. Due to the electrical composition, lightning current and exertion of the shock, similar to fire, exposure to such status damages the adversary with 2nd degree burns over their body. If the adversary has a chaotic or evil allignment, the Holy Lightning Jolt technique advances in a rank of power and they are stunned instead.

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    'Shock' Status Effect:
    In enhancing the essence of chakra within thier lightning techniques, this technique can to be universally utilized with the element of Raiton and any elemental combination which accues in utilization of the element of origin. Upon contact, the particular technique shocks the opponent, as the name implies, sending an electrifying jolt of energy throughout and brazens over their body, applying the 'shock' status effect and reduces Constitution by a tier { ★ }. If the adversary has an allignment of Chaotic or Evil, the Holy Lightning Apparatus advances in a rank of power and they are stunned instead. By applying shock, the status effect naturally removes any form of lethality from the original technique, excluding ranks of B, A, S, and above.

    If the constitution of the adversary is below that of A, the shock spikes throughout the adversary's nervous system, shortening out there synaptic receptors, causing involuntary movement and spasming pains, stunning them. Previously shocked enemies have thier 'shock' status and are stunned for a turn at Rank A of the stacking 'shock' status effect; cannot move. Afterwards, the emananting duration of both shock and stun can be elongated by the application of upkeep, with the exception of stuns which has been applied at no less than S rank upkeep. The shock status effect inhibits the movement of the adversary, hampering their speed by a minor disadvantage { ±± } and coordination with a major disadvantage { ±± } for two turns. If the shock of the technique is two tiers above the constituition of the adversary, thier nervous system becomes fried, upon stun, thus permentally paralyzed.

    Weaknesses:~

    There was a problem previously where the party argued the speed was A rank, rather than being S rank as intended while casting. I changed the speed to S rank, so there was no confusion and updated ascribation for thr adjustment of it's speed.
    Also augemented the shock value from B to A rank.
    Also noticed I only applied half of the actual affect of shock within the technique, so I augmented it within.

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    云 同情 •°• Yün Tóngqíng •°• Cloudian Empathy
    Rank: A
    Power: ~
    Activation Cost: ~
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: ~
    Element: 風遁 : Fūton : Style of Wind, 水遁 : Suiton : Style of Aquatics, 雷遁 : Räitōn : Style of Lightning, 嵐遁 : Ranton : Style of Storm
    Skill: ~
    Classification: Supplimentary; Secret [Unlocked at B Rank]
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, Cloud Creation [Hiden], Storm Cloud Creation, 750 Exp
    Parent Technique: 云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: 羊 •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: After the caster has generated clouds, they can shift them back and forth from the white regular clouds, the silvern rain clouds, towards the dark storm clouds the Inäzümän are known for manifesting. While the clouds are within their indigo storm form, Raiton and Suiton techniques cast from the catalyst of the clouds; Stormcall. While the clouds are within their silver rain form Suiton and Fuuton techniques can be cast from the catalyst of the clouds; Raincall. While the clouds are within their purest white form, Fuuton and Raiton techniques can be cast from the catalyst of the clouds; Cloudcall. All cloudians are filled with the suiton element, regardless of thier elemental composition. They are extremely heavy and saturate all whom enter and exit, whilst providing an adequate chakra consumption and constitution of the appropiate rank of the cloud technique in conjunction of the Cloudian Empathy ability, depending on the amount of chakra invested. In laymen terms, an ally or adversary would require the Strength or higher than the technique of a cloud to enter, or the will of the caster, otherwise the clouds will be a formidable defence. Naturally all whom enter a cloud will be wet and saturated thus increasing the power of lightning and storm techniques by a rank. Innately, Ranton can be cast from all interchanging formations of each particular cloudian path. Naturally, The Cloudian Empathy ability also gift the caster a tier advantage { ★ } in speed in regards to movement and manuevering while within or on a plume of cloud. Howevermore, the ability also increases the speed of techniques when casting the respective elements for each cloud formation.
    Weaknesses:

    Îñäzümån Ability:
    Storm Release: Cloudian Empathy  - 750 EXP
    After the caster has generated clouds, they can shift them back and forth from the white regular clouds, the silvern rain clouds, towards the indigo storm clouds the Îñäzümån are known for manifesting. While the clouds are within their storm form, Raiton and Suiton techniques cast from the catalyst of the clouds. While the clouds are within their silvern rain form Suiton and Fuuton techniques can be cast from the catalyst of the clouds. While the clouds are within their purest form, Fuuton and Raiton techniques can be cast from the catalyst of the clouds. All cloudians are filled with the suiton element, regardless of thier elemental composition, they are extremely heavy and saturate all whom enter and exit, whilst providing and adequate constitution of the appropiate rank of the cloud technique in conjunction of the Cloudian Empathy ability. In laymen terms, an ally or adversary would require the Strength or higher than the technique of a cloud to enter, or the will of the caster, otherwise the clouds will be a formidable defence. Naturally all whom enter a cloud will be wet and saturated, thus increases the power of lightning and strong techniques by a rank. Innately, Ranton can be cast from all interchanging formations of each particular cloudian path. Naturally, The Cloudian Empathy ability also gift the caster a tier advantage { ★ } in speed in regards to movement and manuevering while within or on a plume of cloud. Howevermore, the ability also increases the speed of techniques when casting the respective elements for each cloud formation.


    Adding in Saturated adversaries are more susceptible to lightning and storm techniques, increasing thier power by a rank.
    Also augemented the ability of increasing speed of casting to when casting, so when the techniques are cast they move a tier faster.

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    暴风云 表現 • { 召唤风暴 } •°• Baô Fêngyün Bîäōxîän • Zhàohuàn Fëngbáö •°•  Stromcloud Manifestion { Call of the Storm }
    Rank: A
    Power:  Variable { C - S }
    Activation Cost: Variable { C •°• 5 ~ S •°• 25 }
    Upkeep Cost: Variable { D •°• 3 ~ A •°• 15 }
    Range: Personal - Medium [ 0hm - 30m ]
    Speed: Variable w/ Coordination
    Element:嵐遁 : Ranton : Style of Storm
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Supplimentary, Offensive; Secret
    Requirements: KKG Exclusive; Îñäzümån, Storm Cloud Creation
    Parent Technique: 云 表現 •°• Yün Bîäōxîän •°• Cloud Manifestion
    Hand Seals: •°• Yâng •°• Sheep
    Description: The caster gathers chakra within thier body and begin to emit the plumes of indigo stromclouds from eyes, mouth, nostrils, ears, hands and feet. The stromclouds will pan and drift from the pores of thier body, creating a swirling large indigo mass of fluff around them. Alternatively, the caster can allocate the space around them, in thier range, to manifest stormclouds within thier distance. The stormclouds naturally grow in size 3 meters per rank of intellect of the caster as they move forth from the caster, panning larger akin the range which they travel, absorbing water in the atmosphere as they move forward, each post. The indigo stormclouds are heavily opaque, causing those peering within difficulty in seeing throughout because of the oppositice ascue, however provides subtle illumination through the luminosity of the streaming storm and streaking lightning. The manifestation of casting speed and manueverability are on par of the rank of the caster's intelligence. The intelligence of adversaries within the stormcloud is reduced by a minor disadvantage { ± } and perception by a major disadvantage { ±± }, when they enter and so long as they are within the stormcloud. Afterwhich, they are applied 'Shock' status effect upon exiting. Naturally, adversaries are also soaked upon entering and exiting the stormcloud, covering them with water dousettes and keeping them moist. Supplimentarly, if there are stormclouds which have been previous manifested by the caster, they can utilize the stormcloud, akin mediums, for the creation of new plumes in appropiation of upkeep. In layman terms, if a cloud was created, for upkeep, the cloud can increase in size and replicate at base rankage of the caster's intellect. As the name implies, the stormcloud 'reigns' in heavy downpour, brazling with golden lightning and booming with thunder, saturating the field. Upon dispersion, the stormclouds burst into rays of energy beams with knockback of the thunderclap ten meters.

    'Shock' Status Effect:
    In enhancing the essence of chakra within thier lightning techniques, this technique can to be universally utilized with the element of Raiton and any elemental combination which accues in utilization of the element of origin. Upon contact, the particular technique shocks the opponent, as the name implies, sending an electrifying jolt of energy throughout and brazens over their body, applying the 'shock' status effect and reduces Constitution by a tier { ★ }. If the adversary has an allignment of Chaotic or Evil, the Holy Lightning Apparatus advances in a rank of power and they are stunned instead. By applying shock, the status effect naturally removes any form of lethality from the original technique, excluding ranks of A, S, and above.

    If the constitution of the adversary is below that of A, the shock spikes throughout the adversary's nervous system, shortening out there synaptic receptors, causing involuntary movement and spasming pains, stunning them. Previously shocked enemies have thier 'shock' status and are stunned for a turn at Rank A of the stacking 'shock' status effect; cannot move. Afterwards, the emananting duration of both shock and stun can be elongated by the application of upkeep, with the exception of stuns which has been applied at no less than S rank upkeep. The shock status effect inhibits the movement of the adversary, hampering their speed by a minor disadvantage { ± } and coordination with a major disadvantage { ±± } for two turns. If the shock of the technique is two tiers above the constituition of the adversary, thier nervous system becomes fried, upon stun, thus permentally paralyzed.


    Added in changes which applies to the 'Shock' status effect.
    Added in remaining layer within the technique, akin the Holy Lightning Jolt

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    靜電 衝擊 { 密封靜電 } | Jìngdiàn Chōngjí { Mìfēng Jìngdiàn } | Static Shock { Seal of Static }
    Rank: B
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: C •°• 5 { Upon kinection with Lightning Technique }
    Upkeep Cost: D •°• 3
    Range: Personal { 0hm }
    Speed: B
    Element: 雷遁 | Räitōn | Style of Lightning
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu; Art of Sealing
    Classification: Supplimentary, Offensive, Binding; Hiden
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive; Îñäzümån
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: : Shè :  Serpentine
    Description: Lightning techniques apply a static seal upon the adversary. The Static seal bestows moderate shocks to the nervous system, reducing coordination by a tier { ★ }. The seal blares lightning chakra through the body part or limb part upon movement, causing intense pain with malfunction by sporadic and involuntary operation through the nervous system around the seal. However, if the body part or limb is left inactive, the adversary will remain unaffected by the sharpened jolts triggered through thier system by movement. Naturally, after application of the Static seal, and provided movement to shock the adversary in operatation, the seal seeks other seals which are located upon the body, kinecting it's properties with those seals, spreading amongst it's kin, increasing the intensity of the static jolts. This naturally nuetrilizes seals, excluding kinjutsu, from adversaries and disrupts thier influence over their seals upon thier body or items, and coverts them into static seals. The static seal last for three turns, in which three seals can be placed upon a users body, or utilized, at one time, refreshing it's duration each time a seal is applied or utilized upon an adversary. When two static seals are applied, the caster can fully manuever the caster's body however they will, or completely disable them from moving, thus stun; cannot move. When three static seals are applied, the caster can activate each seal, for the cost of upkeep to electrocute the adversary for an increased rank of power, consuming the seals. The electrocution applies a B rank application of the 'Shock' status effect.

    Static Shock Seal:
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    'Shock' Status Effect:
    In enhancing the essence of chakra within thier lightning techniques, this technique can to be universally utilized with the element of Raiton and any elemental combination which accues in utilization of the element of origin. Upon contact, the particular technique shocks the opponent, as the name implies, sending an electrifying jolt of energy throughout and brazens over their body, applying the 'shock' status effect and reduces Constitution by a tier { ★ }. If the adversary has an allignment of Chaotic or Evil, the Holy Lightning Apparatus advances in a rank of power and they are stunned instead. By applying shock, the status effect naturally removes any form of lethality from the original technique, excluding ranks of B, A, S, and above.

    If the constitution of the adversary is below that of B, the shock spikes throughout the adversary's nervous system, shortening out there synaptic receptors, causing involuntary movement and spasming pains, stunning them. Previously shocked enemies have thier 'shock' status and are stunned for a turn at Rank A of the stacking 'shock' status effect; cannot move. Afterwards, the emananting duration of both shock and stun can be elongated by the application of upkeep, with the exception of stuns which has been applied at no less than S rank upkeep. The shock status effect inhibits the movement of the adversary, hampering their speed by a minor disadvantage { ± } and coordination with a major disadvantage { ±± } for two turns. If the shock of the technique is two tiers above the constituition of the adversary, thier nervous system becomes fried, upon stun, thus permentally paralyzed.

    Weaknesses:Unfortunately, the conversions of seals, which do not originally belong to the caster, will not consume them upon activation, although will include them as a static seal in the acculmination for the increased rank electrocution, upon activation of three static seals.

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    天體 耀斑 | Tiāntǐ Yàobān | Celestial Flare
    Rank: B
    Power: Variable { C ~ S }
    Activation Cost: Variable { C ~ S •°• 5 ~ 25 }
    Upkeep Cost: ~
    Range: Personal - Medium { 0hm - 30m }
    Speed: Variable w/ Intellect
    Element: 風遁 | Fuuton | Style of Air
    Skill: Ninjutsu; Art of Spirit
    Classification: Supplimentary ; Hiden
    Requirements: Clan Exclusive; Îñäzümån
    Parent Technique: ~
    Hand Seals: 马 • 公鸡 | Míanyäng • Gōngjï | Sheep • Rooster
    Description: Generates chakra around the body, flashing radiantly in golden burst of lightning, emanating a shockwave which pushes back physical and spiritual projectiles and adversaries, sundering weapons and armor equal and lesser rank. Those whom are in range, are temporarily blinded for one turn, reducing thier perception by a tier { ★ } for two turns afterwards, diminishing by an advantage each turn, until radiance has ceased, and forced backwards five meters per rank of intellect. Alternatively, a caster can also charge an item with the Celestial Flare technique to be timed released by will of a seal.  

    Effect Variations:
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    'Shock' Status Effect:
    In enhancing the essence of chakra within thier lightning techniques, this technique can to be universally utilized with the element of Raiton and any elemental combination which accues in utilization of the element of origin. Upon contact, the particular technique shocks the opponent, as the name implies, sending an electrifying jolt of energy throughout and brazens over their body, applying the 'shock' status effect and reduces Constitution by a tier { ★ }. If the adversary has an allignment of Chaotic or Evil, the Holy Lightning Apparatus advances in a rank of power and they are stunned instead. By applying shock, the status effect naturally removes any form of lethality from the original technique, excluding ranks of A, S, and above.

    Previously shocked enemies have thier 'shock' status removed and are stunned for a turn at Rank B of the stacking 'shock' status effect; cannot move. Afterwards, The emananting duration of both shock and stun can be elongated by the application of upkeep, with the exception of stuns which has been applied at no less than S rank. After the release of the shock status effect, this technique inhibits the movement of the adversary, hampering their speed and coordination with prospective disadvantages for multiple turns, depending on the level of rankage. { 1:C, 2:B, 3:A≈S }

    Weaknesses: The effect of the celestial flare does not differentiate from friend or foe, there all within the vicinity of its range will be effected.

    ~`|•:★:•|`~



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    Léï Zhènyün
    ~ Ijutstu, Ninjutsu, Kuchiyôse, Fuuinjutsu, Chemistry, Engineer, Genjutsu { ? } ~
    Ïnazüma; Storm ~ Tempest, Ray, Cloudian Air
    The Protopolypian Medusozoan

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    Stats:

    [*]Strength: E
    [*]Constitution: C
    [*]Stamina: B { 160 }
    [*]Speed: S
    [*]Coordination: B
    [*]Intelligence: A
    [*]Perception: B

    Limit Break Points:

    [*]Physical:
    [*]Technique:
    [*]Destiny: 3







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