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    Thast Sterling

    tgoodner12
    tgoodner12
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    Join date : 2018-10-26

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    Post by tgoodner12 on Sat Oct 27, 2018 12:08 am

    Name: Thast Aiko Sterling
    Age: 14
    Gender: Male
    Village: Konohagakure
    Rank: Genin (D-Class)
    Title: N/A

    Clan: Otsutskui
    Bloodline: Rin'negan(Preta Path)
    Element(s):Raiton
    Skill(s): Ninjutsu



    Stats

    • Strength:D
    • Constitution:D
    • Stamina:D
    • Speed:D
    • Coordination:D
    • Intelligence:D
    • Perception:D


    Unique Abilities: Obsession with Strength: Learning Class Advantage: Thast due to his obesessive training allows him to learn techniques one rank above of what his class allows. The early access results in stunted growth forcing Thast to spend an additional 10% experience to advance into the next class. This *can* be stacked with other modifiers (Sensei, Intelligence, etc..)
    Lightspeed: Thast's need to get stronger was not restricted to his physical strength but also his mobility. Due to the excessive training of Thast has gained the natural ability to increase his speed by (+1 Tier). The downside to this is that when pushing his speed to that level his coordination takes a hit (-1 Tier), due to him having to adjust to the speed.

    Appearance:


    Thast Sterling Xfmjgudx
    Thast regularly sports medium length dreads or a small mini afro when he wants to go for a different look. His eyes are normally stormy grey but change to purple with circles due to his Rin'negan. Thast stands at 5 foot 11 inches tall, about medium height and weighs 155 lbs. Thast wears a blue robe with a black collar, and yellow streaks down the sides. He also wears a blue set of glasses on his head and white gloves on his hands. On his lower half he sports a pair of black pants and black sandals to complete his outfit.


    History: Thast's story isn't too glamorous or exciting. He was born in the Hidden Leaf village to his parents, Keiku and Roman Sterling. They decided to name him after his great great grandfather who moved the family to the leaf village decades ago, Thasiant Sterling. The only notable thing about his life has been the eyes he was born with. Rin'negan, Thast still doesn't quite understand the big deal about his eyes but he does know that it's a big responsibility, at least that's what his Grandfather says. For Thast he just wants to learn as much about it as possible. He could care less about the responsibility, he wants to know how it'll help him get stronger. His grandfather would also inform him about people who would be envious and want to take his eyes, so he gave Thast a pair of blue sunglasses to wear when he activates the Rin'negan.

    Thast and his family has tried to keep his eyes a secret with only a few knowing, the Hokage and his teachers. Thast has chosen to follow the path of the shinobi because it seems like the best way to get stronger without shortcuts. It was important for him to do it the right way so when he became one of the strongest, none could call any foul play.

    Personality: Thast is just trying to be the best he can. Every action and choice he makes serves the purpose of self gain, nothing more and nothing less. He doesn't intend to be rude but he believes life is short and the only way to leave your mark on this world is become as strong as you possible can. Due to his belief he tries to distance himself from others. He's not out to make friends or any type of personal connections, other than his family. When it comes to working with others Thast usually excels. He's realized that people don't have a problem with you until your agenda works counter to theirs and he hasn't had to worry about that, yet.


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    Shimiko Chinoike
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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike on Sat Oct 27, 2018 2:47 am

    As a genin keep in mind that you are only allotted three skill points. You have five in your application (1 for your BL, 1 for Ninjutsu, 1 for Taijutsu, 1 for Lightning, and 1 for Earth). You have to remove two skills OR you can trade one of your maximum stat raises for more skills. However keep in mind that doing so costs 500 experience points and I wouldn't recommend it at this stage.


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    Thast Sterling 1pwf20

    Character Name: Shimiko Chinoike
    Stats:

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: A
    • Speed: A
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence:  B
    • Perception: A

    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1


    Gear

    • 2x Kālīkoroshimasu
    • 10x Serrated Kunai
    • Six Sai of Serration
    • Chinowakugumi Armour
    • Twin Tessen of Terror


    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t344-shimiko-s-updates
    Link to Character Application: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t260-shimiko-chinoike
    Link to Known Techniques:

    Shimiko's ANBU Mask
    tgoodner12
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    Post by tgoodner12 on Sat Oct 27, 2018 10:22 am

    I have fixed the skill points problem and finished my app
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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike on Sat Oct 27, 2018 12:07 pm

    Great! You are on your way to being approved just a couple of things:

    Lightspeed: Thast's need to get stronger was not restricted to his physical strength but also his mobility. Due to the excessive training of Thast has gained the natural ability to increase his speed by (+1). The downside to this is that when pushing his speed to that level his coordination takes a hit(-1), due to him having to adjust to the speed.

    *^ I assume you mean +1 tier. If so just write the word "tier" so that its clear.

    Unique Abilities: Obsession with Strength: Due to Thast's obsession to get stronger he has put a majority of his attention to learning the best techniques he can. Due to this he has the ability to learn C-rank techniques but the only drawback is that the exp required to level up is more than normal. The exp is 15% more.

    *^ This UA needs to be re-written as it scales as you increase in class. When Thast reaches D-Class he will be able to learn B-Rank techniques and so on. Also it should be only 10% more. To avoid confusion you can just copy the language found here directly:

    Learning Class Advantage: A player may have access to learning technique one rank above of what their class allows. This early access must result in stunted growth forcing the player to spend an additional 10% experience to advance into the next class. This *can* be stacked with other modifiers (Sensei, Intelligence, etc..)


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    Thast Sterling 1pwf20

    Character Name: Shimiko Chinoike
    Stats:

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: A
    • Speed: A
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence:  B
    • Perception: A

    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1


    Gear

    • 2x Kālīkoroshimasu
    • 10x Serrated Kunai
    • Six Sai of Serration
    • Chinowakugumi Armour
    • Twin Tessen of Terror


    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t344-shimiko-s-updates
    Link to Character Application: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t260-shimiko-chinoike
    Link to Known Techniques:

    Shimiko's ANBU Mask
    tgoodner12
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    Post by tgoodner12 on Sat Oct 27, 2018 2:56 pm

    Thank you, I've made the changes!
    Shimiko Chinoike
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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike on Sat Oct 27, 2018 4:17 pm

    My mistake. I have to pull this app because Deva Path is already taken. You'll have to choose another one.


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    Thast Sterling 1pwf20

    Character Name: Shimiko Chinoike
    Stats:

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: A
    • Speed: A
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence:  B
    • Perception: A

    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1


    Gear

    • 2x Kālīkoroshimasu
    • 10x Serrated Kunai
    • Six Sai of Serration
    • Chinowakugumi Armour
    • Twin Tessen of Terror


    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t344-shimiko-s-updates
    Link to Character Application: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t260-shimiko-chinoike
    Link to Known Techniques:

    Shimiko's ANBU Mask
    Shimiko Chinoike
    Shimiko Chinoike
    Jounin

    Posts : 1083
    Join date : 2017-09-21

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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike on Sat Oct 27, 2018 4:29 pm

    @tgoodner12 wrote:Name: Thast Aiko Sterling
    Age: 14
    Gender: Male
    Village: Konohagakure
    Rank: Genin (D-Class)
    Title: N/A

    Clan: Otsutskui
    Bloodline: Rin'negan(Preta Path)
    Element(s):Raiton
    Skill(s): Ninjutsu



    Stats

    • Strength:D
    • Constitution:D
    • Stamina:D
    • Speed:D
    • Coordination:D
    • Intelligence:D
    • Perception:D


    Unique Abilities: Obsession with Strength: Learning Class Advantage: Thast due to his obesessive training allows him to learn techniques one rank above of what his class allows. The early access results in stunted growth forcing Thast to spend an additional 10% experience to advance into the next class. This *can* be stacked with other modifiers (Sensei, Intelligence, etc..)
    Lightspeed: Thast's need to get stronger was not restricted to his physical strength but also his mobility. Due to the excessive training of Thast has gained the natural ability to increase his speed by (+1 Tier). The downside to this is that when pushing his speed to that level his coordination takes a hit (-1 Tier), due to him having to adjust to the speed.

    Appearance:


    Thast Sterling Xfmjgudx
    Thast regularly sports medium length dreads or a small mini afro when he wants to go for a different look. His eyes are normally stormy grey but change to purple with circles due to his Rin'negan. Thast stands at 5 foot 11 inches tall, about medium height and weighs 155 lbs. Thast wears a blue robe with a black collar, and yellow streaks down the sides. He also wears a blue set of glasses on his head and white gloves on his hands. On his lower half he sports a pair of black pants and black sandals to complete his outfit.


    History: Thast's story isn't too glamorous or exciting. He was born in the Hidden Leaf village to his parents, Keiku and Roman Sterling. They decided to name him after his great great grandfather who moved the family to the leaf village decades ago, Thasiant Sterling. The only notable thing about his life has been the eyes he was born with. Rin'negan, Thast still doesn't quite understand the big deal about his eyes but he does know that it's a big responsibility, at least that's what his Grandfather says. For Thast he just wants to learn as much about it as possible. He could care less about the responsibility, he wants to know how it'll help him get stronger. His grandfather would also inform him about people who would be envious and want to take his eyes, so he gave Thast a pair of blue sunglasses to wear when he activates the Rin'negan.

    Thast and his family has tried to keep his eyes a secret with only a few knowing, the Hokage and his teachers. Thast has chosen to follow the path of the shinobi because it seems like the best way to get stronger without shortcuts. It was important for him to do it the right way so when he became one of the strongest, none could call any foul play.

    Personality: Thast is just trying to be the best he can. Every action and choice he makes serves the purpose of self gain, nothing more and nothing less. He doesn't intend to be rude but he believes life is short and the only way to leave your mark on this world is become as strong as you possible can. Due to his belief he tries to distance himself from others. He's not out to make friends or any type of personal connections, other than his family. When it comes to working with others Thast usually excels. He's realized that people don't have a problem with you until your agenda works counter to theirs and he hasn't had to worry about that, yet.


    Roleplay Sample:

    Approved


    _________________
    Spoiler:


    Thast Sterling 1pwf20

    Character Name: Shimiko Chinoike
    Stats:

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: A
    • Speed: A
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence:  B
    • Perception: A

    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1


    Gear

    • 2x Kālīkoroshimasu
    • 10x Serrated Kunai
    • Six Sai of Serration
    • Chinowakugumi Armour
    • Twin Tessen of Terror


    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t344-shimiko-s-updates
    Link to Character Application: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t260-shimiko-chinoike
    Link to Known Techniques:

    Shimiko's ANBU Mask

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