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    Lion Tribe Contract

    Satori Ryuutei
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    Post by Satori Ryuutei Sat Apr 13, 2019 6:13 pm

    Previous Approval: Ryuutei Clan

    Clan Contract
    The Ryuutei have been closely bonded with the Lion Summoning since their first steps into beginning to bond with their Bijuu chakra. Their natural affinity for animals, combined with their natural primal nature made them prime candidates for the summons, and it took little time for the Lion Tribe and their servants to form a contract with the Ryuutei. Often, the champion of the clan is required to fight the head of the Tribe in a one on one battle to obtain the Tribes respect, to become the head of the Ryuutei Clan.

    Contract Name: Lion Tribe
    Type: Animal
    Specimen: Lions
    Culture/Lore:  Like with all intelligent animals the Lion Tribe has existed since the founding of the world, bonded tightly to natural energy and the world. Once the Kings of the great plains on the lands between the lands of wind and fire, after meeting the Ryuutei hundreds of years ago the Tribe instead bonded with, and swore allegiance too, the Clan of Shinobi. Ever since the Lion Tribe, as well as their disciples (lesser shinobi felines), live alongside the Ryuutei on their great compounds land. The Lions culture is incredibly similar to the Ryuutei's own, this was largely the reason they got along so well.

    Within the Tribe, females are considered to be powerful warriors while males are great scholars, tacticians, commanders, and guardians of the Tribe. Often they will use lesser shinobi felines as scouts and assassins while handling direct combat themselves. The head of the Tribe is decided through fair combat and can often be to the death. This ruthless lifestyle matches their human companions perfectly, and often they will train and fight together. Many of the Ryuutei's techniques are derived from the Lions themselves.

    Element(s): Fire.
    Designated Skill: Sacrificed. Instead, gain the "Blue Flames" Jutsu.
    Summoning Method: The summoning method of the Ryuutei (or the few non-Ryuutei allowed to make the contract) bringing forth a lion is very similar to their culture. Primal, brutal, and bound with blood. The summoner must make a sacrifice of some sort, generally, this is in the form of a life or freshly killed animal (or human) for the Lion to eat. However, in emergencies, a simple blood offering is allowed to be drawn across the palm before slamming it down to summon a Lion (though a sacrifice must be offered later).
    Requirements: Blood offering at the minimum along with the standard chakra expenditure.
    Drawbacks: Lions are powerful hunters and apex predators, however, their powerful senses can sometimes be used against them. Effects that target their sense of smell or hearing gain a tier when used against them.
    Holders: Kiyoshi Ryuutei (NPC)

    Approved Summons:


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    Satori Ryuutei
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    Post by Satori Ryuutei Sat Apr 13, 2019 6:14 pm

    Summon Name: Khalla
    Rank: S
    Appearance: Khalla in her standard form takes the shape of a large orange cat with some physical traits such as facial structure and body shape comparable to a lioness. Her size is comparable to that of a lynx. Her paws have larger digits than normal felines (so that she can form hand-seals as needed). She clearly holds some lion-traits, but her size makes her an extreme oddity among the tribe. Her eyes are a brilliant gold unless she's wielding her flames in which case they turn into a brilliant blue like all of the tribe.

    Element: Fire (Blue)
    Skill(s): Sacrificed.
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: A
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence: D
    • Perception: A

    Taijutsu:
    Ninjutsu:



    Summon Name: Zaishu
    Rank: S
    Appearance: Zaishi is the polar opposite of his sister in color, and if possible is even smaller than his sister. Thinner, and clearly more fragile, the cat is not at all an intimidating lion and instead looks less like a threat and more like a glorified housecat. Roughly the size of a Lynx with the traits of a small lion, his coat is a pitch black with a grey underbelly. His mane as well matching as a dark grey hue, with brilliant blue eyes that shine while his fire techniques are in use.

    Element: Fire (Blue)
    Skill(s): Sacrificed.
    Stats:

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: A
    • Speed: D
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: S
    • Perception: A

    Genjutsu:
    Ninjutsu:


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    Post by Nozomi Sat Apr 20, 2019 12:23 pm

    Alright, so first things first.
    Upon review, your Blue Fire increases both power and decreases cost of Katon techniques, effectively already giving it a two fold boost, on top of the +1 to power that Fire gets as is with our new elements change. Please remove either the +1 to power or the -1 to cost from your Blue Fire, as even by itself, that's too much.

    Next up: Burning Lion
    I notice that it gives your summon 3 tiers worth of boosts. Since you're paying an increased cost, I'm more okay with this than I would be otherwise, but increase the Upkeep to 25 so it matches S rank cost please.

    Next up: Pack Hunter
    Absolutely not, denied. Genjutsu as a skill really shouldn't be providing buffs, it's more of a debuffing skill. Even if it was allowed to provide buffs, that would be 3 tiers of buffs for every single ally in the area, which has way higher potential than other boosters.


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    Post by Satori Ryuutei Sat Apr 20, 2019 4:34 pm

    For the first two, those are both already approved by Nyg so... I don't know how that'll go. I guess you'll need to speak with him. The link is at the top of the contract and shows the approval of such.

    Far as Pack Hunter, edited to a Ninjutsu and re-balanced. Thanks for the heads up that Genjutsu can't buff.


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    Post by Nozomi Sat Apr 20, 2019 11:11 pm

    I already did talk to Nyg about those, he's okay with my changes to them.
    Make those changes, and then I can approve the rest no problem, everything else looks good



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    Post by Satori Ryuutei Sun Apr 21, 2019 8:08 am

    Got ha wasn't aware you'd spoken with him! Edits made.


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    Post by Nozomi Sun Apr 21, 2019 8:13 am

    Satori Ryuutei wrote:Summon Name: Khalla
    Rank: S
    Appearance: Khalla in her standard form takes the shape of a large orange cat with some physical traits such as facial structure and body shape comparable to a lioness. Her size is comparable to that of a lynx. Her paws have larger digits than normal felines (so that she can form hand-seals as needed). She clearly holds some lion-traits, but her size makes her an extreme oddity among the tribe. Her eyes are a brilliant gold unless she's wielding her flames in which case they turn into a brilliant blue like all of the tribe.

    Element: Fire (Blue)
    Skill(s): Sacrificed.
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: A
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence: D
    • Perception: A

    Taijutsu:
    Ninjutsu:



    Summon Name: Zaishu
    Rank: S
    Appearance: Zaishi is the polar opposite of his sister in color, and if possible is even smaller than his sister. Thinner, and clearly more fragile, the cat is not at all an intimidating lion and instead looks less like a threat and more like a glorified housecat. Roughly the size of a Lynx with the traits of a small lion, his coat is a pitch black with a grey underbelly. His mane as well matching as a dark grey hue, with brilliant blue eyes that shine while his fire techniques are in use.

    Element: Fire (Blue)
    Skill(s): Sacrificed.
    Stats:

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: A
    • Speed: D
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: S
    • Perception: A

    Genjutsu:
    Ninjutsu:
    Approved


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