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PostSubject: Tsuyo's Customs   Fri Sep 22, 2017 6:05 pm

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Name: Hawk Vision
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: Doubles upkeep of Byakugan
Range: Varies
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Kyujutsu, Stage Two Byakugan, A tier Perception
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This is a technique by which Tsuyo focuses the abilities of her Byakugan in tandem with the incredible eyesight granted by the Eagle Vision of Kyujutsu. Extra chakra being focused into her eyes and a conscious effort to ignore that which is behind her for that which is front of her is what makes up the basis of the technique. This doubles the range of her Byakugan's abilities, but requires a continued focus on her part.
Weaknesses: Reduces the almost 360 degree range of vision granted by the Byakugan to 240 degrees, with the center facing forwards. This greatly diminishes one of the primary abilities that makes the Byakugan such a powerful dojutsu.


Name: Wrath of Artemis
Rank: A
Power: A
Activation Cost: Varies
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Varies
Speed: +1 tier of the speed of the arrow
Element: Fuuton
Skill: Ninjutsu, Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Byakugan
Parent Technique:Chakra Flow
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: Wrath of Artemis is a technique that is meant for the sole purpose of taking targets out at a significantly increased range than would normally be possible with a bow and arrow while also providing increased impact power. By infusing Fuuton chakra into the arrow, Tsuyo can fire an arrow at varying distances without losing any power. The Fuuton chakra cuts air resistance to zero while in flight which also serves to silence it in its flight, and also provides enough lift to almost negate the effects of gravity on it. At the higher amounts of chakra, the arrow gains the ability to blow through steel armor as well as through wooden walls and trees. When used in tandem with the Eagle Vision granted by Kyujutsu, it enables Tsuyo to easily take out targets without them even realizing there was somebody targeting her and is thus one of her favorite techniques for assassination missions.

Depending on the amount of chakra flowed into the arrow, the range and power is increased differently:

E rank: Range of the arrow is doubled, no additional power granted.

D rank: Range of the arrow is increased by one kilometer, with no additional power granted.

C rank: Range of the arrow is increased by five kilometers, penetrating power is increased by a + for the first half and wooden walls may be fired through to reach a target. No bonus in second half of range.

B rank: Range is increased by ten kilometers, penetrating power is increased by ++ for the first half and + for the second. Wooden walls and steel armor is penetrable for the first five kilometers, only walls for the second.

A rank: Range is increased by twenty kilometers, penetrating power is identical to B rank.

S rank: Range is increased by forty kilometers, penetrating power is increased to one full tier for the first half and ++ for the second. The first half of the range, trees are able to be blown through now as well as walls ranked B rank and lower. Armor of any rank S rank and lower may be penetrated normally, while only armors of B rank and lower and regular wooden walls are penetrable in the second half.

Weaknesses: The arrow can be sensed since it's infused with chakra, and obstructions that her Byakugan can't reach or see through will effect her accuracy with the weapon. Additionally, only one item per plus of additional power available may be penetrated and each item reduces that power by one plus for the next one. For example, S rank arrow could blow through one tree and then through a wooden wall to hit a target at the tail end of its range but could do the same thing while also going through her first target in the first half, as the target becomes the third item. This means the next thing the arrow hit after would stop it like a regular arrow.

Name: Power Draw
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: 1
Range: Contact
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Kyujutsu, Ninjutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Kyujutsu, Ninjutsu
Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: Tsuyo flows chakra into her bow and bowstring to increase the draw power of her bow without any additional effort on her part. Increases the power of all arrows fired by one tier, which also includes a minor increase of range of fifty meters.
Weaknesses: N/A

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PostSubject: Re: Tsuyo's Customs   Sat Sep 23, 2017 4:43 pm

Hawk Vision- This will need its own upkeep, which will need to be more than 0.5 or 0.2 points per post. Keep in mind that this technique is a very powerful combination, because without it, you would be able to see up to the Byakugan's range with x-ray vision and beyond that with normal Eagle Vision. Another thing to consider is that this technique becomes exponentially more useful with each progression of the Byakugan, so the cost will also need to scale with it. The drawbacks will need to be inversely proportionate to the cost, so if you want a low upkeep, that vision is going to have to drop to 180 degrees and Eagle Vision will be limited to the range of this tech. Of course, limiting the vision to 180 could just negate the need for a scaling cost, since that's a drawback that increases in detriment with every level of Byakugan, leaving you with a static cost for the technique itself.
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PostSubject: Re: Tsuyo's Customs   Sat Sep 23, 2017 6:05 pm

If I made it 180 degrees, kept the upkeep the same but added a 3 point activation, would that do?

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PostSubject: Re: Tsuyo's Customs   Sat Sep 23, 2017 6:18 pm

@Tsuyo wrote:

Name: Hawk Vision
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: Doubles upkeep of Byakugan
Range: Varies
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Kyujutsu, Stage Two Byakugan, A tier Perception
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This is a technique by which Tsuyo focuses the abilities of her Byakugan in tandem with the incredible eyesight granted by the Eagle Vision of Kyujutsu. Extra chakra being focused into her eyes and a conscious effort to ignore that which is behind her for that which is front of her is what makes up the basis of the technique. This doubles the range of her Byakugan's abilities, but requires a continued focus on her part.
Weaknesses: Reduces the almost 360 degree range of vision granted by the Byakugan to 180 degrees, with the center facing forwards. This greatly diminishes one of the primary abilities that makes the Byakugan such a powerful dojutsu.

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PostSubject: Re: Tsuyo's Customs   Sat Sep 23, 2017 6:40 pm

@Tsuyo wrote:
@Tsuyo wrote:

Name: Hawk Vision
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: Doubles upkeep of Byakugan
Range: Varies
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Kyujutsu, Stage Two Byakugan, A tier Perception
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This is a technique by which Tsuyo focuses the abilities of her Byakugan in tandem with the incredible eyesight granted by the Eagle Vision of Kyujutsu. Extra chakra being focused into her eyes and a conscious effort to ignore that which is behind her for that which is front of her is what makes up the basis of the technique. This doubles the range of her Byakugan's abilities, but requires a continued focus on her part.
Weaknesses: Reduces the almost 360 degree range of vision granted by the Byakugan to 180 degrees, with the center facing forwards. This greatly diminishes one of the primary abilities that makes the Byakugan such a powerful dojutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Tsuyo's Customs   Sat Oct 21, 2017 1:48 pm

I'll address the other two at a later date. For now, these~



Name: Artificial Rebreathing Technique
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: 1
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: Fuuton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Gentle Fist
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: Utilizing the skill to control chakra at any chakra point on her body given by Gentle Fist, Tsuyo targets her throat and upper chest with Fuuton chakra. This chakra is not flowed very hard, taking away the cutting aspect of the Wind natured chakra in favor of generating pure air that is inserted directly into her respiratory system which is constantly refreshed with oxygen by the upkeep of the technique. This takes the place of having to breathe naturally, eliminating any need to exhale as well and allowing her to stay underwater indefinitely. The lack of pollutants in the chakra created air allows room for more oxygen to be present, giving Tsuyo a minor boost to Perception while using this of a single + as her mind and senses are slightly sharper than they would be breathing regular air. She uses this technique often on scouting and assassination missions in cold weather so that the warm air from her exhalations do not give her presence away at a distance.

Weaknesses: N/A



Name: Perceptive Approach
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 1
Range: User
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu, Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A tier Perception, Eagle Eye
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: Perceptive Approach is a technique that is on the opposite end of the spectrum from Tsuyo's Hawk Vision. Where Hawk Vision grants her a further range to gain more knowledge of what's in front of her, this technique allows her to focus her scrutinizing gaze on one specific target at close range rather than eyeing everything in a general sense. This scrutiny better allows her to defend and counter against this one target, making it much harder to to defeat her in a one on one conflict. It grants a bonus of ++ to Coordination and a single + to Perception against this one target, making her an excellent duelist.

Weaknesses: The focus on one target subtracts from the attention paid to the area around her, decreasing her Perception of things and events around her by one -.

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PostSubject: Re: Tsuyo's Customs   Sat Oct 21, 2017 3:17 pm

@Tsuyo wrote:
I'll address the other two at a later date. For now, these~



Name: Artificial Rebreathing Technique
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: 1
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: Fuuton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Gentle Fist
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: Utilizing the skill to control chakra at any chakra point on her body given by Gentle Fist, Tsuyo targets her throat and upper chest with Fuuton chakra. This chakra is not flowed very hard, taking away the cutting aspect of the Wind natured chakra in favor of generating pure air that is inserted directly into her respiratory system which is constantly refreshed with oxygen by the upkeep of the technique. This takes the place of having to breathe naturally, eliminating any need to exhale as well and allowing her to stay underwater indefinitely. The lack of pollutants in the chakra created air allows room for more oxygen to be present, giving Tsuyo a minor boost to Perception while using this of a single + as her mind and senses are slightly sharper than they would be breathing regular air. She uses this technique often on scouting and assassination missions in cold weather so that the warm air from her exhalations do not give her presence away at a distance.

Weaknesses: N/A


I'd rather see the rank buffed to C-rank, power level the same, and have the upkeep changed to 2 points. A rebreather is incredibly useful on its own, and seeing that it's a Kirgakure Exclusive item, you're essentially skipping around that barrier with a Fuuton technique.


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Name: Perceptive Approach
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 1
Range: User
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu, Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A tier Perception, Eagle Eye
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: Perceptive Approach is a technique that is on the opposite end of the spectrum from Tsuyo's Hawk Vision. Where Hawk Vision grants her a further range to gain more knowledge of what's in front of her, this technique allows her to focus her scrutinizing gaze on one specific target at close range rather than eyeing everything in a general sense. This scrutiny better allows her to defend and counter against this one target, making it much harder to to defeat her in a one on one conflict. It grants a bonus of ++ to Coordination and a single + to Perception against this one target, making her an excellent duelist.

Weaknesses: The focus on one target subtracts from the attention paid to the area around her, decreasing her Perception of things and events around her by one -.


Under requirements I see "Eagle Eye" though you common refer to your custom technique known as "Hawk Eye." If this is an error, correct it so it reflects the proper technique.

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PostSubject: Re: Tsuyo's Customs   Sun Oct 29, 2017 8:02 pm

@Tsuyo wrote:
I'll address the other two at a later date. For now, these~



Name: Artificial Rebreathing Technique
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: 2
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: Fuuton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Gentle Fist
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: Utilizing the skill to control chakra at any chakra point on her body given by Gentle Fist, Tsuyo targets her throat and upper chest with Fuuton chakra. This chakra is not flowed very hard, taking away the cutting aspect of the Wind natured chakra in favor of generating pure air that is inserted directly into her respiratory system which is constantly refreshed with oxygen by the upkeep of the technique. This takes the place of having to breathe naturally, eliminating any need to exhale as well and allowing her to stay underwater indefinitely. The lack of pollutants in the chakra created air allows room for more oxygen to be present, giving Tsuyo a minor boost to Perception while using this of a single + as her mind and senses are slightly sharper than they would be breathing regular air. She uses this technique often on scouting and assassination missions in cold weather so that the warm air from her exhalations do not give her presence away at a distance.

Weaknesses: N/A



Name: Perceptive Approach
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 1
Range: User
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu, Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A tier Perception, Eagle Eye
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: Perceptive Approach is a technique that is on the opposite end of the spectrum from Tsuyo's Hawk Vision. Where Hawk Vision grants her a further range to gain more knowledge of what's in front of her, this technique allows her to focus her scrutinizing gaze on one specific target at close range rather than eyeing everything in a general sense. This scrutiny better allows her to defend and counter against this one target, making it much harder to to defeat her in a one on one conflict. It grants a bonus of ++ to Coordination and a single + to Perception against this one target, making her an excellent duelist.

Weaknesses: The focus on one target subtracts from the attention paid to the area around her, decreasing her Perception of things and events around her by one -.






Fixed Rebreathing. With the second one, the mention of Hawk Vision is just a comparison. Eagle Eye is what is required for the technique, which is what's listed in the requirements.

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PostSubject: Re: Tsuyo's Customs   Mon Oct 30, 2017 9:40 pm

Perceptive Approach- You'll need to define close range. You're also getting a D-Rank boost that appears to be Ninjutsu based, which means you'll need a 3 point activation on top of that 1 point upkeep.
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PostSubject: Re: Tsuyo's Customs   Mon Oct 30, 2017 9:59 pm

It's not Ninjutsu, it's taking Eagle Vision and narrowing its scope down to one target near Tsuyo. Instead of seeing everything for miles, she sees one thing really well at a short distance by constantly focusing and scrutinizing it.

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PostSubject: Re: Tsuyo's Customs   Mon Oct 30, 2017 11:27 pm

Then it's an active skill. Either way, it's neither Taijutsu nor Bukijutsu and is not subject to the cost reductions associated with them. I can't even consider any range reduction for a balancing weakness, because you don't specify how much is lost or even at what range this technique functions. All you have are stat boosts, and stat boosts come with costs. In current form, you would have to remove the Coordination boost, because vision focus does not help you move better.
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PostSubject: Re: Tsuyo's Customs   Tue Oct 31, 2017 5:18 pm

I'll make the range twenty meters. And I can elaborate more, and probably should since I'm pretty bad about that it seems. She basically uses it in combat as an aid to melee confrontations with one person to make sure that she misses absolutely nothing they do. Here's a different version of it:





Name: Perceptive Approach
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 1
Range: 20 meters
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu, Kyujutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: A tier Perception, Eagle Eye
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: Perceptive Approach is a technique combining her skill with melee combat with her incredible eyesight granted from Kyujutsu. This technique allows her to focus her scrutinizing gaze on one specific target at close range rather than eyeing everything in a general sense. Tsuyo actively focuses her attacks and defenses against this one target, being sure to not miss a single action they make, so that she might overwhelm them quicker than she would typically be able to do. Perceptive Approach is designed to be used in tandem with a fighting style as it's a purely combat oriented technique. Grants one + to Coordination and ++ to Perception against this one target.

Weaknesses: The focus on one target subtracts from the attention paid to the area around her, decreasing her Perception of things and events around her by --. Her Coordination cannot be boosted higher than her Perception via this technique. If she's forced to fight more than one target at once, this technique becomes unusable.

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PostSubject: Re: Tsuyo's Customs   Fri Nov 03, 2017 9:09 am

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