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 Akashi Uzumaki (Done)

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Akashi Uzumaki
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Skills & Elements: Fuuinjutsu | Kenjutsu | Taijutsu
Class: B
Ryo: 650

PostSubject: Akashi Uzumaki (Done)   Sat Sep 23, 2017 2:06 pm

Name: Akashi Uzumaki
Age: 34
Gender: Male
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Jounin (B-Rank)
Title: The Vanishing Rose

Clan: Uzumaki
Bloodline: N/A
Element(s): Raiton
Skill(s): 5 spent (1 traded for stat)

Fuuinjutsu
Taijutsu
Kenjutsu
Chemistry

(100 exp leftover)
Stats

  • Strength: E
  • Constitution: E
  • Stamina: C
  • Speed: A
  • Coordination:C
  • Intelligence: B
  • Perception: D


Unique Abilities:

Fist over Blade: Having focused his efforts on the combination of Kenjutsu and Taijutsu Akashi has trained his body to increase by 1 tier in Coordination while utilizing this fighting style.

Mire of the Lonely Blade: Due to the concentration required to continue combos from both Kenjutsu and Taijutsu Akashi receives a 1 tier decrease to Perception while using this style.
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Quick Blade, Quicker Hands: Putting so much focus on his Ken-Taijutsu style Akashi has trained himself to utilize one-handed seals to allow the use of any Ninjutsu while using his prefered fighting style.

Well, not that Quick...er: When using one-handed seals Akashi suffers a 1 tier penalty to Coordination.
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Seals with a Personal Twist: When tampering with seals that are customs Akashi receives a 1 tier increase to Intelligence.

History is Thing I Guess: When tampering with seals that are canon Akashi’s Intelligence is considered one Tier lower.
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Poison Bookworm: Focusing on liquid poisons Akashi has been able to enhance the effects and duration of all liquid poisons by 1 rank.

Cost of Perfection: Because his of his special care to creating liquid poison's their countdown is increased by .5 to reach its full potential.
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Appearance: A small red spiral of a hair lies at the top of Akashi’s head, standing at 6’2” with a lean build and loose posture. His off duty attire consists of a pair of red pants that slant off after the knee and transition into leggings that extend down to his feet tucked inside traditional black shinobi sandals. On his torso he wears a tight fitted black shirt with red lines spanning down the chest and arms, a white overcoat with a red swirl symbolizing his Uzumaki heritage and a black sash pulled over it completes his outfit. When on active duty he swaps the red shorts for a black variant and loses the white overcoat in exchange for the classic Kumogakure flak jacket. A small tanto can always be found stored at his lower back, placed horizontally behind a small pouch for other such shinobi tools.



History: Born aboard a boat before the struggle for power over the sea his parents sailed from port to port, holding now real claim to a home in any of the warring nations as they traded all over. When the waters became a place for conquest and battle the family of three quickly abandoned their way of life in the Land of Lightning, shoring their boat and seeking a new means to live. Akashi’s father was a talented swordsman back in his prime, which after swearing never to take up arms again he begrudgingly went back to being a sellsword for small troubles in the foothills of the Land of Lightning. As his body grew old and weak he began teaching Akashi the way of the blade, as a young boy all he wanted was for his parents to live a safe a carefree live. Eventually he took over for his father, able to make enough off selling his blade in the Houzuki x Inazuma war to allow his parents to live on their own in peace.
It was in the war that Akashi learned to hone his Raiton element, unable to master the Suiton element no matter how hard he tried. After getting a stable grasp over Raiton he focused on creating a blend of Kenjutsu incorporated with Taijutsu, utilizing his quick feet and dexterity to overcome his opponents. When the war was over he had earned the nickname of Vanishing Rose, due to effect his red hair had when flickering around the battlefield. When he returned home he came to find his father had passed away, old age and a full life led to a peaceful death in this age of death. While sad he had missed his passing he couldn’t but be thankful for the lessons he’d imparted to him that allowed the two of them to live such peaceful lives to this point. With the formation of a shinobi village in the Land of Lightning Akashi and his mother moved to the growing hub, signing up for their military to keep his mother afloat and allow him to hone his skills even further. Starting as a Chunin he quickly worked his way up, using his brawn rather than brawn to overcome the many obstacles that lead to becoming a Jounin. Hardly having any time to see his mother the Uzumaki grew distant, instead electing to spend his nose deep in the many books and wealth of knowledge that the village possessed.
It wasn’t until his time in Kumogakure that Akashi learned the ins and outs of Chemistry, his sharp mind took to the craft quickly and found he clearly had a talent for it. Knowing his physical strength to be lacking he focused on creating poisons to slow and dampen his enemies abilities to give him the edge when facing tougher and tougher opponents that came with rising in the ranks.

Personality: As a child he was filled with the wonder of how expansive and never-ending the sea was, however this side of him was stunted upon his families forced out of the sea. This loss of childhood wonderment manifested into a larger trust of the outside world, having very few friends his own age he felt like there was little time for childhood games while his parents scrounged for work. Eager to help he quickly took to training his frail body from a young age which helped to instill a strong sense of discipline that has helped Akashi climb to where he is today. The war turned his desired discipline into a base requirement to stay alive, constantly honing his skills and reaching for new ones when faced with adversary he struggled to overcome.
Once the war was over he became a more studious individual, looking for new ways to expand his arsenal such as Chemistry. This led to a more secluded life, one with brief smoke breaks between training or reading that quickly became a staple habit of his. In the Kumogakure forces he was known as a cold and calculating commander who didn’t waste time or breathe on words that weren’t necessary. Years of dedication to this lifestyle certainly had an impact on his social skills, finding it difficult to enjoy or even indulge the many vices of shinobi life that many still took to or even small enjoyments in life such as humor or sarcasm. Just about the only side activity he’s found common ground with others on is his habitual smoking. Having picked it up during the war he’d found a tendency to continue it during his shinobi career, exchanging tips and preferences with others who enjoyed the same.


Roleplay Sample: A wafting line of smoke trailed out from an old tree that clung to the side of a mountain in the Land of Lightning, a patrol of Inazuma forces marched below down a winding path. It had been four hours since Akashi started waiting at his recon position, finally reaching for the handle of his tanto at his back. His orders were to engage the group with his special body flicker technique to create a distraction long enough for the hiding Suiton-users to come out and finish them off. Calculating eyes inspected the shinobi for any notable weapons or tells to fighting styles to make his approach as safely as possible. Twelve shinobi. Seven swords. One tetsubo. Flicking his hand-rolled cigarette towards the group he watched as the crumpled remains of parchment and tobacco fell gently through the air. As the last dying embers sparked and broke off in a trail of orange before completely snuffing out one of the sword-wielders in the back turned her head towards the small cigarette butt. At that very moment Akashi dashed from his hiding spot, leaving behind an explosive tag that would set off in two seconds time.
The explosion would appear directly within the suspicious Inazuma member’s eyesight, quickly turning the heads of the other eleven shinobi in their party. In a red blur Akashi appeared before the tetsubo-wielder, who astutely sensed his presence and reach their giant arm towards their club. Thrusting his tanto straight towards the reaching arm’s shoulder he rushed forward to follow up an elbow jab to the fresh wound to take his weapon out of the game. Howling in pain the giant went to nurse his wound with his other hand, meanwhile Akashi continued with his momentum and flipped over to put distance and eyesight between him and the remaining eleven. Reaching for his back he retrieved his larger katana and flowed Raiton chakra through, immediately following up with a swift slash to the wavering giants back. Through a sudden spurt of blood he caught the surprised and stained faces of those that remain, vanishing once more before the blood caught his cloths. Now on full alert to their quick assailant all weapons were drawn and techniques prepared, it would be next to impossible to get up close again without being seen.
In a red twirl he appeared in front of one shinobi armed with simply a kunai, assuming them to specialize in Ninjutsu or some other unarmed art. Sweeping with his right leg he naturally positioned himself with his back to them, stabbing backwards with his tanto to his target’s head. Ten. With the crumpling of a second corpse their numbers dwindled further, buying him the precious time he was tasked with buying. Knowing his time to be getting close he only had to save off for a few more moments, tossing a kunai with an explosive tag wrapped around it to distracted them and give the feint of an attack from the opposite side as he’d already demonstrated. Instead diving in through the smoke of the explosion Akashi utilized the jump on the only two who saw through his ploy, the others looking in the opposite direction. These fellas has swords in both their hands and swung at him in a converging ‘V’ shape both starting at the top. Moving to the left he dodged under the sword and struck it with the pommel of his katana. His right leg then came swinging up to kick the hand of the parried sword, disarming one of the two and finishing them off with a tanto-fueled slash to the chest. His left foot touched the ground and pushed him off and away from the pack once more, just in time for the Suiton team to engage. Having taken out three of their numbers their odds were looking good, but the real fight was just beginning.


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PostSubject: Re: Akashi Uzumaki (Done)   Sat Sep 23, 2017 9:00 pm

As an Uzumaki, you will gain access to the Adamantine Sealing Chains, Adamantine Attacking Chains, and Uzumaki Sealing Technique exclusives, which means that you won't be able to take advantage of the free ability, unfortunately.

As far as chakra reduction goes, we only go by rank reductions. So you can have one rank less on Bijuu Sealing techniques, but not half.

For stat boosting Unique Abilities, you won't be able to boost a stat above A-Tier and the flaw that balances such boosts must be active at the same time that the boost is. So while you're using your combination Kenjutsu and Taijutsu style and you get that extra tier to Speed and Coordination, you'll need to have a total two tier Debuff somewhere else.

Your ability for seals is redundant to the norm for Fuuinjutsu. Having greater Intelligence with respect to Fuuinjutsu allows you to undo seals in one post if 1 tier higher and immediately if two or more higher. What you could do is have your Intelligence be one tier higher against customs and one tier lower against canon.

The enhancement to liquid poisons is fine, but the drawback will need to be something different. It would be simple to just isolate your practice to liquid poisons and ignore solids altogether, thereby mitigating your Flaw, so it will need to change to something that is very likely to affect you. Weakening the liquid poisons or making the creation process for them harder, for example, is a good way to go.

Everything else looks good!

As a reference for your character in the future: Uzushiogakure does exist on this site, but it has not yet been made accessible for players. So you do have brethren out there!
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Join date : 2017-09-22

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Skills & Elements: Fuuinjutsu | Kenjutsu | Taijutsu
Class: B
Ryo: 650

PostSubject: Re: Akashi Uzumaki (Done)   Sat Sep 23, 2017 9:23 pm

Got her fixed up

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PostSubject: Re: Akashi Uzumaki (Done)   Sat Sep 23, 2017 9:42 pm

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