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PostSubject: Kameko's Crafts   Sat Sep 23, 2017 6:48 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Kameko's Crafts   Sat Sep 23, 2017 7:30 pm

Name: Efficiency
Rank: B
Function: Passive
Price:  40,000 ryo
Description: A basic enchantment that allows one to flow their chakra through the enchanted item at one rank less cost, as the enchantment utilizes 100% of the chakra put into it and lets none go to waste to maximize efficiency without any additional effort on the part of the user. This general effectiveness lowers the maximum amount of charges for the versatility by one-third.
Charges: 20 posts


Name: Cleaver
Rank: A-S
Function: Active
Price: 120,000 ryo or 200,000 ryo
Description: This enchantment gives the enchanted weapon the ability to cut through any item with a durability equal to or lower than the enchanted item's rank. Defensive enchantments of equal rank or higher protect against this ability.
Charges: 20 uses



Name: Cries of Tartarus
Rank: S
Function: Passive
Price: 500,000 ryo
Description: The Cries of Tartarus is a high level enchantment meant exclusively for swords. While unsheathed, a sword enchanted with Cries of Tartarus emits a constant and ear-splitting cacophony of screaming voices that anybody within five-hundred meters is susceptible to, some so high that they can seemingly break glass. The wielder is immune to these screams as long as they are holding the sword. This screaming intensifies every post it is unsheathed for three posts where it reaches its maximum sound level.

First Post: The screaming is loud enough that communication can only happen by screaming over the sounds of the screams. The noise reduces the Perception of those afflicted by --, not affecting tracking abilities.

Second Post: The screaming has reached almost impossible levels of sound, causing those with less than B tier Constitution to have their ears begin bleeding. Communication through sound is impossible, and only the loudest of sounds such as huge explosions can be heard over the enchantment. Perception for those with less than B tier Constitution is reduced by one tier, while B tier and above retain only a --. However, those with less than C tier intelligence do not have the mental capacity to endure such a mental attack and are paralyzed with fear.

Final Post and beyond: The screaming is absolutely incredible, loud enough that the eardrums of those with less than B tier Constitution rupture from the noise. This incites deafness, reducing Perception by a full two tiers. Those with A tier Constitution receive the maximum penalty from the second post as well as bleeding ears, while S rank Constitution is able to endure the screaming and keeps the minimum debuff of --. The intelligence threshold remains the same.
Charges: 60 posts

Name: Battery Pack
Rank: A
Function: Passive/ Active
Price: 300,000 ryo
Description: Battery Pack is an enchantment that passively absorbs 1 point of stamina every post from the person using the item until it reaches 30 stamina. This stamina is kept in the item as a sort of battery, allowing them to access the stamina once the "battery" is full. The "battery" can only absorb 30 points of stamina before the enchantment needs refilled, though. The user can't utilize this stamina until the battery is full, though once some is taken they do not have to use it all at once if they do not wish to.
Charges: 30 posts, 1 Use per charge.



Name: Bronze Kunai
Rank: Any
Material: Bronze
Description: Kunai made of Bronze. The bronze has a durability that is equal to a -- of the rank of the kunai, though the copper that comprises much of the metal is very conductive to electricity. Increases the effectiveness of Raiton chakra flow techniques by one rank of power.
Requirement: N/A
Crafting Time: Varies
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PostSubject: Re: Kameko's Crafts   Sat Sep 23, 2017 8:33 pm

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Name: Efficiency
Rank: B
Function: Passive
Price:  40,000 ryo
Description: A basic enchantment that allows one to flow their chakra through the enchanted item at one rank less cost, as the enchantment utilizes 100% of the chakra put into it and lets none go to waste to maximize efficiency without any additional effort on the part of the user. This general effectiveness lowers the maximum amount of charges for the versatility by one-third.
Charges: 20 posts

Approved.

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Name: Cleaver
Rank: A-S
Function: Active
Price: 120,000 ryo or 200,000 ryo
Description: This enchantment gives the enchanted weapon the ability to cut through any item with a durability equal to or lower than the enchanted item's rank. Defensive enchantments of equal rank or higher protect against this ability.
Charges: 20 uses

How does this cut through any item of its durability or lower? Does it coat the item with elemental/chakra flow?

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Name: Cries of Tartarus
Rank: S
Function: Passive
Price: 500,000 ryo
Description: The Cries of Tartarus is a high level enchantment meant exclusively for swords. While unsheathed, a sword enchanted with Cries of Tartarus emits a constant and ear-splitting cacophony of screaming voices that anybody within five-hundred meters is susceptible to, some so high that they can seemingly break glass. The wielder is immune to these screams as long as they are holding the sword. This screaming intensifies every post it is unsheathed for three posts where it reaches its maximum sound level.

First Post: The screaming is loud enough that communication can only happen by screaming over the sounds of the screams. The noise reduces the Perception of those afflicted by --, not affecting tracking abilities.

Second Post: The screaming has reached almost impossible levels of sound, causing those with less than B tier Constitution to have their ears begin bleeding. Communication through sound is impossible, and only the loudest of sounds such as huge explosions can be heard over the enchantment. Perception for those with less than B tier Constitution is reduced by one tier, while B tier and above retain only a --. However, those with less than C tier intelligence do not have the mental capacity to endure such a mental attack and are paralyzed with fear.

Final Post and beyond: The screaming is absolutely incredible, loud enough that the eardrums of those with less than B tier Constitution rupture from the noise. This incites deafness, reducing Perception by a full two tiers. Those with A tier Constitution receive the maximum penalty from the second post as well as bleeding ears, while S rank Constitution is able to endure the screaming and keeps the minimum debuff of --. The intelligence threshold remains the same.
Charges: 60 posts

Alright, so firstly the range needs a major overhaul. 500 meters is far too great for an enchantment of this caliber.

The type I would like to see as Active, not Passive. Passive goes off of usages and not posts.

Now onto the effects....this is way too overpowered as it stands. You're affecting several stats with the threat of organ damage, paralysis, as well as a stat debuff. Remember that enchantments are aides that spice up an item, and not a technique itself. Please reduce these all drastically. I'm against an AoE paralysis and damage caused by the enchantment. I will allow a Perception debuff up to a tier with resistances including Constitution.

Edit those and I'll review it again.

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Name: Battery Pack
Rank: A
Function: Passive/ Active
Price: 300,000 ryo
Description: Battery Pack is an enchantment that passively absorbs 1 point of stamina every post from the person using the item until it reaches 30 stamina. This stamina is kept in the item as a sort of battery, allowing them to access the stamina once the "battery" is full. The "battery" can only absorb 30 points of stamina before the enchantment needs refilled, though. The user can't utilize this stamina until the battery is full, though once some is taken they do not have to use it all at once if they do not wish to.
Charges: 30 posts, 1 Use per charge.

I'd like this to be limited in a way so someone can't bank up ten of these guys and draw chakra from their stash when needed. You can either have it destroyed when used, or have the chakra value diminish overtime when not in use. If you choose to go with the recharging route it would also require a Fuuinjutsu user to recharge it before chakra can start being stored in the item again.


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Name: Bronze Kunai
Rank: Any
Material: Bronze
Description: Kunai made of Bronze. The bronze has a durability that is equal to a -- of the rank of the kunai, though the copper that comprises much of the metal is very conductive to electricity. Increases the effectiveness of Raiton chakra flow techniques by one rank of power.
Requirement: N/A
Crafting Time: Varies

I'd want to assume this is an enchantment. Use the template if it is. If not, the copper in bronze won't decrease the cost for lightning flow. It'll make it conduct easier for RP purposes. I'd allow you to make the enchantment cheaper when bronze is paired with the enchantment, but not allowing Bronze itself.
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PostSubject: Re: Kameko's Crafts   Sat Sep 23, 2017 10:35 pm

Specified the exact workings of the technique more, since it is a bit light on that. Sorry. Added a bit of a drawback, too. Also note the very small limit to uses despite the rank of the enchantment. At S rank, it's less than 25% of the standard maximum.



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Name: Cleaver
Rank: A-S
Function: Active
Price: 120,000 ryo or 200,000 ryo
Description: This enchantment gives the enchanted weapon the ability to cut through any item with a durability equal to or lower than the enchanted item's rank. Defensive enchantments of equal rank or higher protect against this ability. It does this by taking a small amount of metal from the center of the blade, evenly dispersed to not mess with the balance even slightly, and then distributes this small amount of metal to the edge of the weapon to artificially sharpen it to the heights of physical perfection. At A rank, it makes the edge of the weapon 3 nanometers thin which is how thin obsidian can naturally get. At S rank, the enchantment is so focused that it thins the edge to 1 nanometer thick which allows it to cut the atoms of a material itself. Without that aid of an equal level of chakra, it cannot cut through chakra flowed items if the item is within 2 tiers of the rank of the enchantment in durability.
Charges: 20 uses



Whaaaat? This is completely fair >_> <_< >_>



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Name: Cries of Tartarus
Rank: S
Function: Active
Price: 500,000 ryo
Description: The Cries of Tartarus is a high level enchantment meant exclusively for swords. While unsheathed, a sword enchanted with Cries of Tartarus emits a constant and ear-splitting cacophony of screaming voices that anybody within fifty meters is susceptible to, some so high that they can seemingly break glass. The wielder is immune to these screams as long as they are holding the sword. The user may also control the level of the sword used, though they must step up the level gradually. This means they must first use the first post before they can use the second, and must use the second before the third. This screaming intensifies every post it is unsheathed for three posts where it reaches its maximum sound level.

First Post: The screaming is loud enough that communication can only happen by screaming over the sounds of the screams. The noise reduces the Perception of those afflicted by -, not affecting tracking abilities.

Second Post: The screaming has reached almost impossible levels of sound, causing those with less than B tier Constitution to have their ears begin bleeding. Communication through sound is impossible, and only the loudest of sounds such as huge explosions can be heard over the enchantment. Perception for those with less than B tier Constitution is reduced by --, while B tier and above retain only a -.

Final Post and beyond: The screaming is absolutely incredible, loud enough that the eardrums of those with less than B tier Constitution rupture from the noise. This incites deafness, reducing Perception by a full tier. Those with B tier Constitution receive the maximum penalty from the second post as well as bleeding ears, while S rank Constitution is able to endure the screaming and keeps the minimum debuff of -. This post costs the equivalent of two posts of usage for post count purposes.
Charges: 30 posts



This one already requires the enchantment to be recharged after every 30 points of stamina is used, since it can only gather a maximum of 30 every charge. One point per post, and it has a 30 post maximum with one total use. That use, in this case, is using the thirty stamina.



Name: Battery Pack
Rank: A
Function: Passive/ Active
Price: 300,000 ryo
Description: Battery Pack is an enchantment that passively absorbs 1 point of stamina every post from the person using the item until it reaches 30 stamina. This stamina is kept in the item as a sort of battery, allowing them to access the stamina once the "battery" is full. The "battery" can only absorb 30 points of stamina before the enchantment needs refilled, though. The user can't utilize this stamina until the battery is full, though once some is taken they do not have to use it all at once if they do not wish to. Every usage reduces the battery's maximum lifespan by five points until it hits zero and the enchantment ceases to function.
Charges: 30 posts, reduced by five every recharge, 1 Use per charge.


On the kunai:


The copper in bronze would make bronze more conductive than just plain tin would which is what makes up the other half of bronze. Copper is the second most conductive metal on earth, having an alloy consisting of it would make electricity flow through it easier which would require less effort on the user's part. Hence, bronze weapons would decrease the amount of raiton chakra needed for a raiton element attack because a smaller amount flowing better can produce the same effect irl as a larger amount flowing slower. It's how electricity works lol. If I made the minimum rank for the effect C rank, would that suffice for it to just be a weaponry based ability since Bronze is weaker than both iron and steel in terms of durability?






For Zoomy's concerns, edited Efficiency



Name: Efficiency
Rank: B
Function: Passive
Price:  40,000 ryo
Description: A basic enchantment that allows one to flow their chakra through the enchanted item at one rank less cost, as the enchantment utilizes 100% of the chakra put into it and lets none go to waste to maximize efficiency without any additional effort on the part of the user. This general effectiveness lowers the maximum amount of charges for the versatility by one-third, and the first type of chakra flowed into the item is the only one that receives this discount.
Charges: 20 posts
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PostSubject: Re: Kameko's Crafts   Wed Sep 27, 2017 5:14 am

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Name: Cleaver
Rank: A-S
Function: Active
Price: 120,000 ryo or 200,000 ryo
Description: This enchantment gives the enchanted weapon the ability to cut through any item with a durability equal to or lower than the enchanted item's rank. Defensive enchantments of equal rank or higher protect against this ability. It does this by taking a small amount of metal from the center of the blade, evenly dispersed to not mess with the balance even slightly, and then distributes this small amount of metal to the edge of the weapon to artificially sharpen it to the heights of physical perfection. At A rank, it makes the edge of the weapon 3 nanometers thin which is how thin obsidian can naturally get. At S rank, the enchantment is so focused that it thins the edge to 1 nanometer thick which allows it to cut the atoms of a material itself. Without that aid of an equal level of chakra, it cannot cut through chakra flowed items if the item is within 2 tiers of the rank of the enchantment in durability.
Charges: 20 uses

I recommend changing this to Passive. Passive means it will use a charge when striking, instead of Active, which requires you to activate the enchantment with a small amount of chakra before benefiting from it. Passive will be cheaper and give you more Charges.

But if you're cool with how it is, Approved.

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This one already requires the enchantment to be recharged after every 30 points of stamina is used, since it can only gather a maximum of 30 every charge. One point per post, and it has a 30 post maximum with one total use. That use, in this case, is using the thirty stamina.



Name: Battery Pack
Rank: A
Function: Passive/ Active
Price: 300,000 ryo
Description: Battery Pack is an enchantment that passively absorbs 1 point of stamina every post from the person using the item until it reaches 30 stamina. This stamina is kept in the item as a sort of battery, allowing them to access the stamina once the "battery" is full. The "battery" can only absorb 30 points of stamina before the enchantment needs refilled, though. The user can't utilize this stamina until the battery is full, though once some is taken they do not have to use it all at once if they do not wish to. Every usage reduces the battery's maximum lifespan by five points until it hits zero and the enchantment ceases to function.
Charges: 30 posts, reduced by five every recharge, 1 Use per charge.

Approved!


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On the kunai:


The copper in bronze would make bronze more conductive than just plain tin would which is what makes up the other half of bronze. Copper is the second most conductive metal on earth, having an alloy consisting of it would make electricity flow through it easier which would require less effort on the user's part. Hence, bronze weapons would decrease the amount of raiton chakra needed for a raiton element attack because a smaller amount flowing better can produce the same effect irl as a larger amount flowing slower. It's how electricity works lol. If I made the minimum rank for the effect C rank, would that suffice for it to just be a weaponry based ability since Bronze is weaker than both iron and steel in terms of durability?


Yes, Copper is a great conductor and allows electricity to flow easily. However it does not influence the value of electricity. If I run 60 volts of electricity down a copper wire it will still be 60 volts by the time it reaches the end. Just because it's copper doesn't mean it'll perform as if I ran 120 volts down the wire. It would simply just "get there" easier.

Though as I said in my initial post, I am willing to work with this if you make an enchantment and state that using Bronze (or copper [Check out the new shop listing!] will make the enchantment more functional I will be a lot more flexible to work with, and I will be willing to take off a lot of enchantment requirements and pricing because I see and understand the rational behind using copper-based metals as a conductor for Raiton. However, as the material stands alone, I can't let it pass.


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For Zoomy's concerns, edited Efficiency


Name: Efficiency
Rank: B
Function: Passive
Price:  40,000 ryo
Description: A basic enchantment that allows one to flow their chakra through the enchanted item at one rank less cost, as the enchantment utilizes 100% of the chakra put into it and lets none go to waste to maximize efficiency without any additional effort on the part of the user. This general effectiveness lowers the maximum amount of charges for the versatility by one-third, and the first type of chakra flowed into the item is the only one that receives this discount.
Charges: 20 posts

Seeing as this is a Passive function item its language should be changed to "usages" instead of posts under the Charges field. Also, being a Passive B-rank enchantment above the average usage limit, that should be 60,000 ryo and not 10,000 ryo below the minimum.[/quote]

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Constitution: B
Stamina: C
Speed: B
Coordination: B
Intelligence: C
Perception: C

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PostSubject: Re: Kameko's Crafts   Yesterday at 12:54 pm

Masuyo Kaede wrote:
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Name: Cleaver
Rank: A-S
Function: Passive
Price: 120,000 ryo or 200,000 ryo
Description: This enchantment gives the enchanted weapon the ability to cut through any item with a durability equal to or lower than the enchanted item's rank. Defensive enchantments of equal rank or higher protect against this ability. It does this by taking a small amount of metal from the center of the blade, evenly dispersed to not mess with the balance even slightly, and then distributes this small amount of metal to the edge of the weapon to artificially sharpen it to the heights of physical perfection. At A rank, it makes the edge of the weapon 3 nanometers thin which is how thin obsidian can naturally get. At S rank, the enchantment is so focused that it thins the edge to 1 nanometer thick which allows it to cut the atoms of a material itself. Without that aid of an equal level of chakra, it cannot cut through chakra flowed items if the item is within 2 tiers of the rank of the enchantment in durability.
Charges: 30 uses

I recommend changing this to Passive. Passive means it will use a charge when striking, instead of Active, which requires you to activate the enchantment with a small amount of chakra before benefiting from it. Passive will be cheaper and give you more Charges.

But if you're cool with how it is, Approved.


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On the kunai:


The copper in bronze would make bronze more conductive than just plain tin would which is what makes up the other half of bronze. Copper is the second most conductive metal on earth, having an alloy consisting of it would make electricity flow through it easier which would require less effort on the user's part. Hence, bronze weapons would decrease the amount of raiton chakra needed for a raiton element attack because a smaller amount flowing better can produce the same effect irl as a larger amount flowing slower. It's how electricity works lol. If I made the minimum rank for the effect C rank, would that suffice for it to just be a weaponry based ability since Bronze is weaker than both iron and steel in terms of durability?


Yes, Copper is a great conductor and allows electricity to flow easily. However it does not influence the value of electricity. If I run 60 volts of electricity down a copper wire it will still be 60 volts by the time it reaches the end. Just because it's copper doesn't mean it'll perform as if I ran 120 volts down the wire. It would simply just "get there" easier.

Though as I said in my initial post, I am willing to work with this if you make an enchantment and state that using Bronze (or copper [Check out the new shop listing!] will make the enchantment more functional I will be a lot more flexible to work with, and I will be willing to take off a lot of enchantment requirements and pricing because I see and understand the rational behind using copper-based metals as a conductor for Raiton. However, as the material stands alone, I can't let it pass.


Technically there's voltage drop to account for as well as a few other factors, so no, it may not necessarily be 60 volts by the time you reach the end of the wire. Damage is not caused by volts, damage is caused by amperage. You can flow more and retain more amps with copper than you can steel with the same amount of effort (volts in real life, rank of the technique in game) because copper is a much better conductor of electricity. It's a better conductor than iron is too, a little more than five times better actually, but it's a much softer metal and more prone to physical damage which is what this item represents. I'll make an enchantment later I guess, but what you're saying is not physically possible is quite physically possible.


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For Zoomy's concerns, edited Efficiency


Name: Efficiency
Rank: B
Function: Passive
Price:  40,000 ryo
Description: A basic enchantment that allows one to flow their chakra through the enchanted item at one rank less cost, as the enchantment utilizes 100% of the chakra put into it and lets none go to waste to maximize efficiency without any additional effort on the part of the user. This general effectiveness lowers the maximum amount of charges for the versatility, and the first type of chakra flowed into the item in each thread is the only one that receives this discount.
Charges: 20 usages

Seeing as this is a Passive function item its language should be changed to "usages" instead of posts under the Charges field. Also, being a Passive B-rank enchantment above the average usage limit, that should be 60,000 ryo and not 10,000 ryo below the minimum.



But I don't want to charge that much for it. I didn't know those were hard set prices, I thought they were just suggestions.









New Stuff:


Name: Thin-Blade Knife
Rank: D-S
Material: 2 lbs for 5 knife blades (Copper, Bronze, Iron, Steel), 2 lbs of wood for the hilts and a 60" x 4" strip of cloth to wrap the hilt.
Description: This blade is one not meant to engage in combat with, as it has a very thin blade only 1/8" thick. It is 6" long, meant to slip between ribs to get to the tender organs underneath. They're balanced in such a way that they can be accurately thrown too, increasing their versatility.
Requirement: Weapon Crafting
Crafting Time: 3-15 days


Name: Eight-Point Shuriken
Rank: D-S
Material: 3 lbs of Copper, Bronze, Iron, or Steel for 15 shuriken
Description: These shruiken deviate from the standard four point shuriken used by doubling the amount of points on each shuriken. This shuriken is thinner than the four-point shuriken in order to retain a similar weight as well as the length of the points.
Requirement: Weapon Crafting
Crafting Time: 3-15 days


Name: Hatchet
Rank: D-S
Material: 1 lb of Bronze, Iron, or Steel for the head, 1 lb of wood for the handle, a 120"x4" strip of cloth to wrap the handle.
Description: A basic hatchet with a small head and a handle that brings its length to 13". It is balanced to be more top heavy, meant to be swung rather than thrown. Great for chopping wood.
Requirement: Weapon Crafting
Crafting Time: 3-15 days
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PostSubject: Re: Kameko's Crafts   Yesterday at 3:30 pm

Kameko wrote:
Name: Cleaver
Rank: A-S
Function: Passive
Price: 120,000 ryo or 200,000 ryo
Description: This enchantment gives the enchanted weapon the ability to cut through any item with a durability equal to or lower than the enchanted item's rank. Defensive enchantments of equal rank or higher protect against this ability. It does this by taking a small amount of metal from the center of the blade, evenly dispersed to not mess with the balance even slightly, and then distributes this small amount of metal to the edge of the weapon to artificially sharpen it to the heights of physical perfection. At A rank, it makes the edge of the weapon 3 nanometers thin which is how thin obsidian can naturally get. At S rank, the enchantment is so focused that it thins the edge to 1 nanometer thick which allows it to cut the atoms of a material itself. Without that aid of an equal level of chakra, it cannot cut through chakra flowed items if the item is within 2 tiers of the rank of the enchantment in durability.
Charges: 30 uses


Approved.

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For Zoomy's concerns, edited Efficiency


Name: Efficiency
Rank: B
Function: Passive
Price:  40,000 ryo
Description: A basic enchantment that allows one to flow their chakra through the enchanted item at one rank less cost, as the enchantment utilizes 100% of the chakra put into it and lets none go to waste to maximize efficiency without any additional effort on the part of the user. This general effectiveness lowers the maximum amount of charges for the versatility, and the first type of chakra flowed into the item in each thread is the only one that receives this discount.
Charges: 20 usages

Seeing as this is a Passive function item its language should be changed to "usages" instead of posts under the Charges field. Also, being a Passive B-rank enchantment above the average usage limit, that should be 60,000 ryo and not 10,000 ryo below the minimum.



But I don't want to charge that much for it. I didn't know those were hard set prices, I thought they were just suggestions.




These are not hard set limits and do allow for some flexibility. However, your charges do go above what is considered "average" for a B-rank enchantment. You marked the price being 10k below the minimum guideline. Normally it would be 50k ryo to produce an item of the same caliber with 15 charges. But because you added 5 more charges the price would be increased with it.




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New Stuff:


Name: Thin-Blade Knife
Rank: D-S
Material: 2 lbs for 5 knife blades (Copper, Bronze, Iron, Steel), 2 lbs of wood for the hilts and a 60" x 4" strip of cloth to wrap the hilt.
Description: This blade is one not meant to engage in combat with, as it has a very thin blade only 1/8" thick. It is 6" long, meant to slip between ribs to get to the tender organs underneath. They're balanced in such a way that they can be accurately thrown too, increasing their versatility.
Requirement: Weapon Crafting
Crafting Time: 3-15 days

Name: Eight-Point Shuriken
Rank: D-S
Material: 3 lbs of Copper, Bronze, Iron, or Steel for 15 shuriken
Description: These shruiken deviate from the standard four point shuriken used by doubling the amount of points on each shuriken. This shuriken is thinner than the four-point shuriken in order to retain a similar weight as well as the length of the points.
Requirement: Weapon Crafting
Crafting Time: 3-15 days


Name: Hatchet
Rank: D-S
Material: 1 lb of Bronze, Iron, or Steel for the head, 1 lb of wood for the handle, a 120"x4" strip of cloth to wrap the handle.
Description: A basic hatchet with a small head and a handle that brings its length to 13". It is balanced to be more top heavy, meant to be swung rather than thrown. Great for chopping wood.
Requirement: Weapon Crafting
Crafting Time: 3-15 days


Approved

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Constitution: B
Stamina: C
Speed: B
Coordination: B
Intelligence: C
Perception: C

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