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 Nikuyo's Death Dealing Skills

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Tsuyo

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PostSubject: Re: Nikuyo's Death Dealing Skills   Wed Nov 08, 2017 4:40 pm

Amplify- It's no longer a generic amplification, one must choose one element to apply it to now.


Neutralizer- Nikuyo doesn't have all five elements though, and this isn't an open technique for just anybody to learn. Would limiting the maximum uses per thread work? I was thinking five per thread regardless of rank

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PostSubject: Re: Nikuyo's Death Dealing Skills   Fri Nov 10, 2017 12:10 pm

@Tsuyo wrote:
Amplify- It's no longer a generic amplification, one must choose one element to apply it to now.

Generic in the sense that it can be ANY element even though its only one. I think we were really hard on people just paying more to boost the power of their techs as that can understandably have severe unforeseen consequences. The only way I'd be okay with something like that is if everyone could do it hence why I ask it be completely Open and not restricted to individuals or singular villages.

@Tsuyo wrote:

Neutralizer- Nikuyo doesn't have all five elements though, and this isn't an open technique for just anybody to learn. Would limiting the maximum uses per thread work? I was thinking five per thread regardless of rank

Hypothetically someone could steal it from his mind or he can teach it to someone.

Limiting its uses would be better and five uses per thread is fine BUT this should be changed:

"Nikuyo must pay an amount of chakra equal to what his opponent paid for the ninjutsu in question"

It should be equal to the rank (complexity) of the technique as opposed to how much the opponent paid. Some people may have UAs for reduced chakra cost and this tech would infringe on some of the benefits of the UA if one could just counter it for the same cost of chakra.

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PostSubject: Re: Nikuyo's Death Dealing Skills   Sat Nov 18, 2017 11:59 am

@Nikuyo wrote:
Re did Amplify into something different and added one more



Name: Focused Amplification
Rank: D
Power: Varies
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Element: Varies
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Requires the Ninjutsu Skill to be possessed, Intelligence perks do not apply unless Ninjutsu is known.
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: Hand seals for original jutsu plus the Snake seal at the end
Description: Focused Amplification is a pretty simple technique that marks a ninjutsu user's favorite element. The user can utilize this technique in order to make a jutsu more powerful than it ordinarily would be. This is represented by the power of the technique increasing to whatever rank the user wishes. All aspects of the technique are empowered equally, including speed and range. The range of techniques are increased by 50% per increased rank.
Weaknesses: The user must pay an amount of stamina correspondent with the level of power they're making a technique. For example, if they used Wind Release: Divine Wind they could up the power to S rank by paying the activation for this technique AND a S rank amount of stamina for Divine Wind itself. Can only be used with Ninjutsu, and techniques that boost or debuff stats can't have this technique applied to them. The user may only have one element applicable for this technique, or all non-elemental ninjutsu if they lack an element.


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Name: Neutralizer
Rank: C
Power: Varies
Activation Cost: Varies
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 30 meters
Speed: Equal to user's Base Coordination
Element: N/A
Skill: Ninjutsu, Sensory
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Sensing Technique
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: Rat
Description: Nikuyo utilizes the Sensory technique to determine the amount of chakra an opponent is using in a given ninjutsu. Once he knows this, he makes the Rat seal and focuses chakra of an equal amount into his hand. He can then either touch what is affected by the technique to disturb the chakra that way or fire a crescent of chakra at it with the intention of neutralizing the chakra used in the opposing technique with this blast of chakra. This allows him to get rid of techniques an opponent may be using to enhance themselves and thus better level the playing field for him. The crescent is one meter wide.
Weaknesses: Nikuyo must pay an amount of chakra equal to the power of the technique, and this technique doesn't actually harm his opponent in any fashion. All it does is neutralize a given jutsu, any injuring done afterwards must be done a different way. Chakra types Nikuyo doesn't know how to utilize, such as unknown elements, bijuu chakra, etc cannot be canceled by Nikuyo. Only chakra types he can manipulate, such as regular chakra and Suiton, can be neutralized as he knows how each of those types functions at its core as well as how to interrupt its functioning. Genjutsu is not affected at all, and this may only be used a maximum of 5 times per thread.



Limited uses as suggested and changed it so that he must match the Power of the technique rather than the rank since a technique can be S rank in difficulty but only B rank in power. I would have made it the rank, but with our separation of Power and Rank I thought Power made more sense as a judge of chakra cost than rank would.

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PostSubject: Re: Nikuyo's Death Dealing Skills   Sat Nov 18, 2017 12:03 pm

@Nikuyo wrote:
@Nikuyo wrote:
Re did Amplify into something different and added one more



Name: Focused Amplification
Rank: D
Power: Varies
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Element: Varies
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Requires the Ninjutsu Skill to be possessed, Intelligence perks do not apply unless Ninjutsu is known.
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: Hand seals for original jutsu plus the Snake seal at the end
Description: Focused Amplification is a pretty simple technique that marks a ninjutsu user's favorite element. The user can utilize this technique in order to make a jutsu more powerful than it ordinarily would be. This is represented by the power of the technique increasing to whatever rank the user wishes. All aspects of the technique are empowered equally, including speed and range. The range of techniques are increased by 50% per increased rank.
Weaknesses: The user must pay an amount of stamina correspondent with the level of power they're making a technique. For example, if they used Wind Release: Divine Wind they could up the power to S rank by paying the activation for this technique AND a S rank amount of stamina for Divine Wind itself. Can only be used with Ninjutsu, and techniques that boost or debuff stats can't have this technique applied to them. The user may only have one element applicable for this technique, or all non-elemental ninjutsu if they lack an element.


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Name: Neutralizer
Rank: C
Power: Varies
Activation Cost: Varies
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 30 meters
Speed: Equal to user's Base Coordination
Element: N/A
Skill: Ninjutsu, Sensory
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Sensing Technique
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: Rat
Description: Nikuyo utilizes the Sensory technique to determine the amount of chakra an opponent is using in a given ninjutsu. Once he knows this, he makes the Rat seal and focuses chakra of an equal amount into his hand. He can then either touch what is affected by the technique to disturb the chakra that way or fire a crescent of chakra at it with the intention of neutralizing the chakra used in the opposing technique with this blast of chakra. This allows him to get rid of techniques an opponent may be using to enhance themselves and thus better level the playing field for him. The crescent is one meter wide.
Weaknesses: Nikuyo must pay an amount of chakra equal to the power of the technique, and this technique doesn't actually harm his opponent in any fashion. All it does is neutralize a given jutsu, any injuring done afterwards must be done a different way. Chakra types Nikuyo doesn't know how to utilize, such as unknown elements, bijuu chakra, etc cannot be canceled by Nikuyo. Only chakra types he can manipulate, such as regular chakra and Suiton, can be neutralized as he knows how each of those types functions at its core as well as how to interrupt its functioning. Genjutsu is not affected at all, and this may only be used a maximum of 5 times per thread.



Limited uses as suggested and changed it so that he must match the Power of the technique rather than the rank since a technique can be S rank in difficulty but only B rank in power. I would have made it the rank, but with our separation of Power and Rank I thought Power made more sense as a judge of chakra cost than rank would.

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