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PostSubject: Azumi Isora   Mon Oct 16, 2017 10:47 am

Character Profile

Name: Azumi Isora
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Village: Konoha
Rank: Chunin
Title: -

Clan: -
Bloodline: -
Element(s): -
Skill(s):
+Taijutsu
+Medical Ninjutsu
+3 Skill Points used for Stats

Stats

  • Strength: C
  • Constitution: C
  • Stamina: C
  • Speed: C
  • Coordination: D
  • Intelligence: D
  • Perception: D


1500 + 1500 (Skill Points) = 3000 EXP
-1200 for Stats
1800/3000 EXP Left

Unique Abilities:
Master of the Body - Azumi has been doing all that she could to master her Taijutsu, to make up for her inability to use Ninjutsu and Genjutsu to their full capacity. Her prowess with the art results in all boosts from Taijutsu techniques being increased by another + (i.e. a + boost becomes ++).

T.A.T. - Azumi jokingly calls herself a "T.A.T." Shinobi, which stands for "True All Taijutsu". This is partly true, as her chakra coils are partially damaged. Her ability to mold chakra is crippled, meaning that she is incapable of learning Ninjutsu and Genjutsu above D-Rank without the Skills, when it comes to Medical Ninjutsu, she is capable of learning them without restriction, however their chakra prices are each increased by a rank. As a result, her prowess with her Taijutsu has increased, causing their chakra prices to be considered as one rank below what they actually are to a minimum of D-Rank.

Gated Chakra System - Azumi's chakra system is crippled, and while that means she can't mold chakra as efficiently as others, it has also lead to her having an easier time maintaining the power of the Eight Gates. With every Tier of Constitution, her Gate duration is increased by an extra +1 post (i.e. E-Tier Constitution allows for a duration of 3 posts instead of 2). As a result, the strain on her body is all the greater, increasing the amount of time to remove a single minus inflicted by the Gates by 2 Days (i.e. 6 instead of 4).

Appearance:
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History: Azumi was born a happy bouncing baby girl. She was a healthy weight, a beautiful coloration and her voice was so loud, she could've gotten into a fight with a bullhorn and won. Her parents thought she was, in all respects, a normal little girl. Her parents, Han and Lin, wouldn't find out she was different until many years later. She was raised as normal, running around her dad's smithy and bothering her mother whilst she was cooking meals. Her parents were content with their little Azumi, so they didn't think to have more kids. She was a little handful herself, though a dream to have around the house. She was always playing with the kids in their neighborhood and going on adventures and the like. It came as no surprise to them when she expressed the desire to enter the shinobi academy.

When she was signed up, Azumi was as happier than she could ever remember being. She tackled her lessons with gusto, until she was brought to a screeching halt by a handicap she never even knew was present within her body. She found it extremely difficult to mold chakra properly, and her control was much less refined than others her age, despite them all being beginners. Upon examination by a doctor, as recommended by her instructor, it was discovered that Azumi possessed damaged chakra coils. While her ability to contain chakra within her body was not affected, her ability to use her chakra effectively was hampered immensely. The doctor said she may never be a regular shinobi due to this handicap, and her parents accepted this. They did what they could to make it up to her, and acted as though she had accepted what was said as truth as well. But she didn't! She decided that she would be an amazing Kunoichi, even if she wasn't as good at using chakra as others were! She would work as hard as she had to in order to make sure of that.

Azumi began to train to refine her body so that it could be her weapon. Taijutsu was easy for her to perform, so she found that she didn't need Ninjutsu or Genjutsu to be a good ninja. She did all forms of combat, day and night, training in whatever way she could. She became the best hand to hand fighter in her class, and could even outstrip those who were good at Ninjutsu in a fight. She graduated and was placed in a team with two others that actually covered her weaknesses in battle. Once a Genin, she began training in the Eight Gates. She was determined to get any advantage she could in battle, due to not being able to use Ninjutsu as well as others. She became a recluse for a little over six months, training with little rest outside of the time she needed to recuperate until she had mastered all of the Gates. Upon achieving this feat, she was put forth as a recommendation to become a Chunin, and she was accepted. Now, she works to invent new fighting styles to shape the face of physical combat.

Personality: Azumi is a very bubbly and energetic person, nearly personifying the ideal of "social butterfly". She enjoys playing with people and is always incredibly happy, being obscenely difficult to put down or make sad no matter what happens to her. Due to this she always ends up taking things nowhere near as seriously as she should and she dislikes killing unless she absolutely has to. Thankfully due to her appearance and how she acts, she finds it easy to make friends or at least call people friends even if they want rid of her.

She is pretty smart but she is also easily distracted and her intelligence rarely shows due to this as she can be found chasing small animals to pet them or hugging people until they end up nearly suffocating due to just not noticing what is going on around her. Azumi means well though and she always does her best to live up to expectations and make her friends and family happy, even if she needs to make them happy by force.

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Skills & Elements: All
Class: X
Ryo: All of It

PostSubject: Re: Azumi Isora   Tue Oct 31, 2017 9:12 pm

The maximum amount of skill points you can trade is 3.

In order to receive a cost reduction to Taijutsu, you'll need a cost increase in another area that you have a skill point invested in. This can be a Skill or an Element. Alternatively, you could make a flaw to increase the cost of all Skills other than Taijutsu, if you wanted to have Taijutsu as your only Skill point investment.

Increased use of the Gates will need some kind of flaw that harms you in some way while using the gates. Another character has an ability that lets him use the gates longer, but at a higher stamina cost, for example.

In order to start with the Gates, you'll need to wait until after your character is approved and then ask the Hokage. You could save your extra experience points until then, if you want.

The opening bonus is claimed in an update and not during registration. You'll need to wait until you make that update to count that 250 experience.

It looks like you used the free 1050 experience to get all your stats to D-Tier, so you would only need to spend 1200 on your four C-Tiers, since they cost 300 a piece.
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PostSubject: Re: Azumi Isora   Tue Oct 31, 2017 9:39 pm

I made the changes to the skills, EXP and removed the things for the Eight Gates.

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PostSubject: Re: Azumi Isora   Wed Nov 01, 2017 9:44 am

Now that you've got the Ijutsu Skill, you could change your price UA to increase the cost of Ijutsu only. That'll be less restrictive on you, while still giving the Taijutsu cost reduction that you want.

The Gates UA is still imbalanced. It gives you a 50% increase to the duration, so if you want to go with a higher recovery time, it'll need to be an additional 50%. So the flaw would like this: It takes 6 days instead of 4 in order to remove a single - inflicted by the Gates.
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PostSubject: Re: Azumi Isora   Wed Nov 01, 2017 5:27 pm

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Skills & Elements: Fire | Earth | Wind | Bukijutsu | Ninjutsu | Taijutsu
Class: B
Ryo: 24775

PostSubject: Re: Azumi Isora   Thu Nov 02, 2017 1:32 am

@Azumi wrote:
Character Profile

Name: Azumi Isora
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Village: Konoha
Rank: Chunin
Title: -

Clan: -
Bloodline: -
Element(s): -
Skill(s):
+Taijutsu
+Medical Ninjutsu
+3 Skill Points used for Stats

Stats

  • Strength: C
  • Constitution: C
  • Stamina: C
  • Speed: C
  • Coordination: D
  • Intelligence: D
  • Perception: D


1500 + 1500 (Skill Points) = 3000 EXP
-1200 for Stats
1800/3000 EXP Left

Unique Abilities:
Master of the Body - Azumi has been doing all that she could to master her Taijutsu, to make up for her inability to use Ninjutsu and Genjutsu to their full capacity. Her prowess with the art results in all boosts from Taijutsu techniques being increased by another + (i.e. a + boost becomes ++).

T.A.T. - Azumi jokingly calls herself a "T.A.T." Shinobi, which stands for "True All Taijutsu". This is partly true, as her chakra coils are partially damaged. Her ability to mold chakra is crippled, meaning that she is incapable of learning Ninjutsu and Genjutsu above D-Rank without the Skills, when it comes to Medical Ninjutsu, she is capable of learning them without restriction, however their chakra prices are each increased by a rank. As a result, her prowess with her Taijutsu has increased, causing their chakra prices to be considered as one rank below what they actually are to a minimum of D-Rank.

Gated Chakra System - Azumi's chakra system is crippled, and while that means she can't mold chakra as efficiently as others, it has also lead to her having an easier time maintaining the power of the Eight Gates. With every Tier of Constitution, her Gate duration is increased by an extra +1 post (i.e. E-Tier Constitution allows for a duration of 3 posts instead of 2). As a result, the strain on her body is all the greater, increasing the amount of time to remove a single minus inflicted by the Gates by 2 Days (i.e. 6 instead of 4).

Appearance:
Spoiler:
 

History: Azumi was born a happy bouncing baby girl. She was a healthy weight, a beautiful coloration and her voice was so loud, she could've gotten into a fight with a bullhorn and won. Her parents thought she was, in all respects, a normal little girl. Her parents, Han and Lin, wouldn't find out she was different until many years later. She was raised as normal, running around her dad's smithy and bothering her mother whilst she was cooking meals. Her parents were content with their little Azumi, so they didn't think to have more kids. She was a little handful herself, though a dream to have around the house. She was always playing with the kids in their neighborhood and going on adventures and the like. It came as no surprise to them when she expressed the desire to enter the shinobi academy.

When she was signed up, Azumi was as happier than she could ever remember being. She tackled her lessons with gusto, until she was brought to a screeching halt by a handicap she never even knew was present within her body. She found it extremely difficult to mold chakra properly, and her control was much less refined than others her age, despite them all being beginners. Upon examination by a doctor, as recommended by her instructor, it was discovered that Azumi possessed damaged chakra coils. While her ability to contain chakra within her body was not affected, her ability to use her chakra effectively was hampered immensely. The doctor said she may never be a regular shinobi due to this handicap, and her parents accepted this. They did what they could to make it up to her, and acted as though she had accepted what was said as truth as well. But she didn't! She decided that she would be an amazing Kunoichi, even if she wasn't as good at using chakra as others were! She would work as hard as she had to in order to make sure of that.

Azumi began to train to refine her body so that it could be her weapon. Taijutsu was easy for her to perform, so she found that she didn't need Ninjutsu or Genjutsu to be a good ninja. She did all forms of combat, day and night, training in whatever way she could. She became the best hand to hand fighter in her class, and could even outstrip those who were good at Ninjutsu in a fight. She graduated and was placed in a team with two others that actually covered her weaknesses in battle. Once a Genin, she began training in the Eight Gates. She was determined to get any advantage she could in battle, due to not being able to use Ninjutsu as well as others. She became a recluse for a little over six months, training with little rest outside of the time she needed to recuperate until she had mastered all of the Gates. Upon achieving this feat, she was put forth as a recommendation to become a Chunin, and she was accepted. Now, she works to invent new fighting styles to shape the face of physical combat.

Personality: Azumi is a very bubbly and energetic person, nearly personifying the ideal of "social butterfly". She enjoys playing with people and is always incredibly happy, being obscenely difficult to put down or make sad no matter what happens to her. Due to this she always ends up taking things nowhere near as seriously as she should and she dislikes killing unless she absolutely has to. Thankfully due to her appearance and how she acts, she finds it easy to make friends or at least call people friends even if they want rid of her.

She is pretty smart but she is also easily distracted and her intelligence rarely shows due to this as she can be found chasing small animals to pet them or hugging people until they end up nearly suffocating due to just not noticing what is going on around her. Azumi means well though and she always does her best to live up to expectations and make her friends and family happy, even if she needs to make them happy by force.

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Strength: D
Constitution: B
Stamina: C
Speed: B
Coordination: B
Intelligence: C
Perception: C

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