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    Azumi Isora

    Post by Azumi on Mon Oct 16, 2017 10:47 am

    Character Profile

    Name: Azumi Isora
    Age: 17
    Gender: Female
    Village: Konoha
    Rank: Chunin
    Title: -

    Clan: -
    Bloodline: -
    Element(s): -
    Skill(s):
    +Taijutsu
    +Medical Ninjutsu
    +3 Skill Points used for Stats

    Stats

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: D
    • Intelligence: D
    • Perception: D


    1500 + 1500 (Skill Points) = 3000 EXP
    -1200 for Stats
    1800/3000 EXP Left

    Unique Abilities:
    Master of the Body - Azumi has been doing all that she could to master her Taijutsu, to make up for her inability to use Ninjutsu and Genjutsu to their full capacity. Her prowess with the art results in all boosts from Taijutsu techniques being increased by another + (i.e. a + boost becomes ++).

    T.A.T. - Azumi jokingly calls herself a "T.A.T." Shinobi, which stands for "True All Taijutsu". This is partly true, as her chakra coils are partially damaged. Her ability to mold chakra is crippled, meaning that she is incapable of learning Ninjutsu and Genjutsu above D-Rank without the Skills, when it comes to Medical Ninjutsu, she is capable of learning them without restriction, however their chakra prices are each increased by a rank. As a result, her prowess with her Taijutsu has increased, causing their chakra prices to be considered as one rank below what they actually are to a minimum of D-Rank.

    Gated Chakra System - Azumi's chakra system is crippled, and while that means she can't mold chakra as efficiently as others, it has also lead to her having an easier time maintaining the power of the Eight Gates. With every Tier of Constitution, her Gate duration is increased by an extra +1 post (i.e. E-Tier Constitution allows for a duration of 3 posts instead of 2). As a result, the strain on her body is all the greater, increasing the amount of time to remove a single minus inflicted by the Gates by 2 Days (i.e. 6 instead of 4).

    Appearance:
    Spoiler:

    History: Azumi was born a happy bouncing baby girl. She was a healthy weight, a beautiful coloration and her voice was so loud, she could've gotten into a fight with a bullhorn and won. Her parents thought she was, in all respects, a normal little girl. Her parents, Han and Lin, wouldn't find out she was different until many years later. She was raised as normal, running around her dad's smithy and bothering her mother whilst she was cooking meals. Her parents were content with their little Azumi, so they didn't think to have more kids. She was a little handful herself, though a dream to have around the house. She was always playing with the kids in their neighborhood and going on adventures and the like. It came as no surprise to them when she expressed the desire to enter the shinobi academy.

    When she was signed up, Azumi was as happier than she could ever remember being. She tackled her lessons with gusto, until she was brought to a screeching halt by a handicap she never even knew was present within her body. She found it extremely difficult to mold chakra properly, and her control was much less refined than others her age, despite them all being beginners. Upon examination by a doctor, as recommended by her instructor, it was discovered that Azumi possessed damaged chakra coils. While her ability to contain chakra within her body was not affected, her ability to use her chakra effectively was hampered immensely. The doctor said she may never be a regular shinobi due to this handicap, and her parents accepted this. They did what they could to make it up to her, and acted as though she had accepted what was said as truth as well. But she didn't! She decided that she would be an amazing Kunoichi, even if she wasn't as good at using chakra as others were! She would work as hard as she had to in order to make sure of that.

    Azumi began to train to refine her body so that it could be her weapon. Taijutsu was easy for her to perform, so she found that she didn't need Ninjutsu or Genjutsu to be a good ninja. She did all forms of combat, day and night, training in whatever way she could. She became the best hand to hand fighter in her class, and could even outstrip those who were good at Ninjutsu in a fight. She graduated and was placed in a team with two others that actually covered her weaknesses in battle. Once a Genin, she began training in the Eight Gates. She was determined to get any advantage she could in battle, due to not being able to use Ninjutsu as well as others. She became a recluse for a little over six months, training with little rest outside of the time she needed to recuperate until she had mastered all of the Gates. Upon achieving this feat, she was put forth as a recommendation to become a Chunin, and she was accepted. Now, she works to invent new fighting styles to shape the face of physical combat.

    Personality: Azumi is a very bubbly and energetic person, nearly personifying the ideal of "social butterfly". She enjoys playing with people and is always incredibly happy, being obscenely difficult to put down or make sad no matter what happens to her. Due to this she always ends up taking things nowhere near as seriously as she should and she dislikes killing unless she absolutely has to. Thankfully due to her appearance and how she acts, she finds it easy to make friends or at least call people friends even if they want rid of her.

    She is pretty smart but she is also easily distracted and her intelligence rarely shows due to this as she can be found chasing small animals to pet them or hugging people until they end up nearly suffocating due to just not noticing what is going on around her. Azumi means well though and she always does her best to live up to expectations and make her friends and family happy, even if she needs to make them happy by force.

    Roleplay Sample:
    Spoiler:
    Marx just knew he had a strong effect on the other male, why else would he stop mid-sentence? His pride swelled just a bit, an innocent smile crawling onto his features. He pulled out his sketchbook and turned it to the page of the relevant schematics, placing it on the desk in front of Nee-san slowly, almost sensually, before sitting down once more "That is my first Era of Puppetry, the first ever collection I wish to make." His mind trailed from seduction to the collection, and his face took on a wistful look "The collection is called the Legendary Trio. They are inspired by a story I read, called Jiraiya Gōketsu Monogatari. It was the story of a hero, Jiraiya who went on a journey, eventually falling in love with a woman named Tsunade. His arch-nemesis was named Orochimaru. Jiraiya was capable of shapeshifting and turning into a giant toad, Tsunade practiced slug magic and Orochimaru practiced serpent magic. The puppets are called Gama, Nume and Hebi, each inspired by the characters and their specific abilities." He tilted his head to the side a bit and pointed to the book "I painted a picture of what they are going to look like in the book, on one of those pages, if you want to take a look."

    "They are each going to be designed to incorporate my new method of puppetry." Marx leaned forward and placed his elbows on his knees, placing his chin in his hands and looking at the writing on the pages "They are also each going to be designed the same, fundamentally. They are going to be made of a special wood, I have the chemical composition and properties written there somewhere, I just haven't been able to get the materials to make it. The wood is going to be able to conduct chakra and absorb blood in order to strengthen itself. The inner shells of the puppets are going to be able to mask chakra, as the puppets themselves will be able to store chakra through a system of Fuinjutsu I am going to create. The outer shell will be able to reroute chakra into the inner shell, then into the Fuinjutsu system. In theory anyway. Alongside the chakra circulatory system Fuinjutsu, I am going to make a 'blood' circulatory system Fuinjutsu. Each one will have their own 'blood' type, which are truly just poisons disguised as blood. Though they will have blood plasma. They'll each have five mechanisms each within them, with the only mechanism they have in common being their "Summoning Palm". It will be on each of their left palms, and will simply be a Lightning Flash Blade Creation seal that contains Clockwork puppets that mimic summons. Toads for Gama, Slugs for Nume, and Snakes for Hebi, of course."

    "Gama's Blood Type will be Toad Blood. It is going to be flammable, and act as a form of accelerant due to containing oil. I feel as though the combination will have fatiguing properties due to the combination of materials. His first mechanism will be an adhesive tongue. It is truly just a elastic and adhesive tool shaped like a tongue, with a mechanism to wind up the tongue and launch it like a projectile. The adhesive is strong as well, requiring a good amount of personal strength to rip it off, but like wise taking some skin along with it if the correct solvent isn't used. The second mechanism is hair needles attached to his scalp, with the needles being a unique combination of cactus barbs, iron, senbon and human hair. This combination makes the needles like hair, until they are either tensed with the launching mechanism. This launches the needles much like a senbon would be launched, dealing high amounts of piercing damage to whatever is hit while also lodging themselves in deep. When pulled out, they cause high amounts of bleeding damage as well. They can absorb Toad Blood to tense even further and deal higher damage. The composition of the hairs also makes them potent defensive measures when used together, which is boosted when Toad Blood is added." He took a bit of a breath as he recalled the other mechanisms "The third mechanism is a flamethrower, using a mixure of Fuinjutsu and mechanisms to make it work. It has Fire Element seals to store the flames, or alternatively a sparking mechanism to ignite whatever the fuel is that is being used. It can use Air, Oil or another flammable fuel, or Toad Blood. This is a flamethrower, so of course it is multi-purpose, and the different fuel sources allows it to be used even when the other run out. It can be maintained for quite some time, but it can and will overheat. The final unique mechanism is a Fuinjutsu tag dispenser. It has ten slots and the Fuinjutsu tag can be of any type, and can be placed on a non-living target normally or a living target with a chakra price."

    "Nume is a unique one, as she is support oriented, and perhaps my favorite. Her blood is known as Slug Blood, rather harmless when in liquid form, but when frozen into a solid or heated into a vapor it corrodes whatever it comes into contact with. The liquid form, when injected into the bloodstream, causes rapid blood cell death, while the vapor form deals great amounts of damage to one's lungs. Her first mechanism is the orb she has for her head, which is made from a specialized glass that is capable of storing chakra. Her second mechanism is her most variable one, and I call it the Piston Discharger. She will have various buttons on her arm that modify the appearance of her hand, which then is capable of discharging chakra for attacks in different ways. The Slug Blood can also be released alongside the chakra for different and powerful combinations. Her third mechanism is a shockwave generator in her calf, being capable of generating a massive shockwave through an emission of chakra from the generator. Her fourth mechanism is a chakra battery station with in her..." A mischeivous smile spread across his lips "Bust. The name is rather self explanatory, because the other two are incapable of replenishing the chakra they need to fuel their mechanisms, they are capable of "groping" her in order to transfer the chakra stored within the batteries into their own Fuinjutsu systems. The batteries won't be directly tied to Nume's own chakra system, to make sure there are no mishaps with over drainage, so she can "grope" herself and restore her own chakra. I must admit I made this puppet in a rare bout of teenage male-like lewdness."

    "Hebi is one that is aligned more towards subtlety. He possesses Snake Blood, which is causes gradual paralysis in an area when it comes in contact with an opponent, enters their blood stream or is inhaled in a vapor form. The vapor has an added effect of causing hallucinations for the entire time up until the opponent is paralyzed, causing them to suffer drops in their perception and coordination. His first mechanism is called "Crass Cutter", I thought it was more poetic than sharp tongue. It acts much like Gama's own tongue mechanism, instead of being adhesive it's bladed. It pierces through defenses and armors, and is capable of absorbing his blood and then applying its effects to whatever it cuts. The second mechanism is called "Hidden Shadow Snake Hands", two snake-like mechanisms are concealed within Hebi's arm and can be released by pressing two bottoms on his forearms. The snakes launch outwards and "bite" into whatever is caught within their jaws, locking down on that object if it flips a switch within their mouths. While they can be forcibly removed, it will cause massive amounts of damage to a living target if they are removed that way. The snakes will be able to release the Snake Blood from the fangs to either inject the poison directly into the veins or release the poison as a vapor. Hebi's third mechanism is a poison smoke screen, he possesses slots within his stomach that can hold different canisters of vapor poison, or liquid poisons that turn to vapor when exposed to certain temperatures. Buttons exist to activate the corresponding slots, enabling him to "exhale" the poisons outward to generate the smoke screen. This can act as an easy way to apply poisons to a target, as well as a good concealment mechanism. His fourth mechanism is a simple balloon clone. It will be able to hold two balloons, which will be filled with pressurized gas when prompted, being capable of use as a decoy when one's vision is obscured, as the balloons resemble Hebi, especially when one doesn't have a clear view. Each balloon has an explosive tag attached, which detonates if an opponent comes too close. The gas within the balloon can be infused with Snake Blood in order to apply its effect over the explosion duration."

    Marx leaned back and folded his hands over his lap, looking at Nee-san curiously "Thoughts? Any questions about the designs or the components?"


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    Re: Azumi Isora

    Post by The Founder on Tue Oct 31, 2017 9:12 pm

    The maximum amount of skill points you can trade is 3.

    In order to receive a cost reduction to Taijutsu, you'll need a cost increase in another area that you have a skill point invested in. This can be a Skill or an Element. Alternatively, you could make a flaw to increase the cost of all Skills other than Taijutsu, if you wanted to have Taijutsu as your only Skill point investment.

    Increased use of the Gates will need some kind of flaw that harms you in some way while using the gates. Another character has an ability that lets him use the gates longer, but at a higher stamina cost, for example.

    In order to start with the Gates, you'll need to wait until after your character is approved and then ask the Hokage. You could save your extra experience points until then, if you want.

    The opening bonus is claimed in an update and not during registration. You'll need to wait until you make that update to count that 250 experience.

    It looks like you used the free 1050 experience to get all your stats to D-Tier, so you would only need to spend 1200 on your four C-Tiers, since they cost 300 a piece.
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    Re: Azumi Isora

    Post by Azumi on Tue Oct 31, 2017 9:39 pm

    I made the changes to the skills, EXP and removed the things for the Eight Gates.


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    Character Name: Azumi Isora
    Spendable Experience: 1800
    Total Experience: 3000
    Renown: 0
    Ryo: 50,000
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: D
    • Intelligence: D
    • Perception: D

    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1

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    Re: Azumi Isora

    Post by The Founder on Wed Nov 01, 2017 9:44 am

    Now that you've got the Ijutsu Skill, you could change your price UA to increase the cost of Ijutsu only. That'll be less restrictive on you, while still giving the Taijutsu cost reduction that you want.

    The Gates UA is still imbalanced. It gives you a 50% increase to the duration, so if you want to go with a higher recovery time, it'll need to be an additional 50%. So the flaw would like this: It takes 6 days instead of 4 in order to remove a single - inflicted by the Gates.
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    Re: Azumi Isora

    Post by Azumi on Wed Nov 01, 2017 5:27 pm

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    Azumi:
    Character Name: Azumi Isora
    Spendable Experience: 1800
    Total Experience: 3000
    Renown: 0
    Ryo: 50,000
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: D
    • Intelligence: D
    • Perception: D

    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1

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    An Expert's Arsenal
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    Ryo: 30,000

    Re: Azumi Isora

    Post by Masuyo Kaede on Thu Nov 02, 2017 1:32 am

    @Azumi wrote:
    Character Profile

    Name: Azumi Isora
    Age: 17
    Gender: Female
    Village: Konoha
    Rank: Chunin
    Title: -

    Clan: -
    Bloodline: -
    Element(s): -
    Skill(s):
    +Taijutsu
    +Medical Ninjutsu
    +3 Skill Points used for Stats

    Stats

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: D
    • Intelligence: D
    • Perception: D


    1500 + 1500 (Skill Points) = 3000 EXP
    -1200 for Stats
    1800/3000 EXP Left

    Unique Abilities:
    Master of the Body - Azumi has been doing all that she could to master her Taijutsu, to make up for her inability to use Ninjutsu and Genjutsu to their full capacity. Her prowess with the art results in all boosts from Taijutsu techniques being increased by another + (i.e. a + boost becomes ++).

    T.A.T. - Azumi jokingly calls herself a "T.A.T." Shinobi, which stands for "True All Taijutsu". This is partly true, as her chakra coils are partially damaged. Her ability to mold chakra is crippled, meaning that she is incapable of learning Ninjutsu and Genjutsu above D-Rank without the Skills, when it comes to Medical Ninjutsu, she is capable of learning them without restriction, however their chakra prices are each increased by a rank. As a result, her prowess with her Taijutsu has increased, causing their chakra prices to be considered as one rank below what they actually are to a minimum of D-Rank.

    Gated Chakra System - Azumi's chakra system is crippled, and while that means she can't mold chakra as efficiently as others, it has also lead to her having an easier time maintaining the power of the Eight Gates. With every Tier of Constitution, her Gate duration is increased by an extra +1 post (i.e. E-Tier Constitution allows for a duration of 3 posts instead of 2). As a result, the strain on her body is all the greater, increasing the amount of time to remove a single minus inflicted by the Gates by 2 Days (i.e. 6 instead of 4).

    Appearance:
    Spoiler:

    History: Azumi was born a happy bouncing baby girl. She was a healthy weight, a beautiful coloration and her voice was so loud, she could've gotten into a fight with a bullhorn and won. Her parents thought she was, in all respects, a normal little girl. Her parents, Han and Lin, wouldn't find out she was different until many years later. She was raised as normal, running around her dad's smithy and bothering her mother whilst she was cooking meals. Her parents were content with their little Azumi, so they didn't think to have more kids. She was a little handful herself, though a dream to have around the house. She was always playing with the kids in their neighborhood and going on adventures and the like. It came as no surprise to them when she expressed the desire to enter the shinobi academy.

    When she was signed up, Azumi was as happier than she could ever remember being. She tackled her lessons with gusto, until she was brought to a screeching halt by a handicap she never even knew was present within her body. She found it extremely difficult to mold chakra properly, and her control was much less refined than others her age, despite them all being beginners. Upon examination by a doctor, as recommended by her instructor, it was discovered that Azumi possessed damaged chakra coils. While her ability to contain chakra within her body was not affected, her ability to use her chakra effectively was hampered immensely. The doctor said she may never be a regular shinobi due to this handicap, and her parents accepted this. They did what they could to make it up to her, and acted as though she had accepted what was said as truth as well. But she didn't! She decided that she would be an amazing Kunoichi, even if she wasn't as good at using chakra as others were! She would work as hard as she had to in order to make sure of that.

    Azumi began to train to refine her body so that it could be her weapon. Taijutsu was easy for her to perform, so she found that she didn't need Ninjutsu or Genjutsu to be a good ninja. She did all forms of combat, day and night, training in whatever way she could. She became the best hand to hand fighter in her class, and could even outstrip those who were good at Ninjutsu in a fight. She graduated and was placed in a team with two others that actually covered her weaknesses in battle. Once a Genin, she began training in the Eight Gates. She was determined to get any advantage she could in battle, due to not being able to use Ninjutsu as well as others. She became a recluse for a little over six months, training with little rest outside of the time she needed to recuperate until she had mastered all of the Gates. Upon achieving this feat, she was put forth as a recommendation to become a Chunin, and she was accepted. Now, she works to invent new fighting styles to shape the face of physical combat.

    Personality: Azumi is a very bubbly and energetic person, nearly personifying the ideal of "social butterfly". She enjoys playing with people and is always incredibly happy, being obscenely difficult to put down or make sad no matter what happens to her. Due to this she always ends up taking things nowhere near as seriously as she should and she dislikes killing unless she absolutely has to. Thankfully due to her appearance and how she acts, she finds it easy to make friends or at least call people friends even if they want rid of her.

    She is pretty smart but she is also easily distracted and her intelligence rarely shows due to this as she can be found chasing small animals to pet them or hugging people until they end up nearly suffocating due to just not noticing what is going on around her. Azumi means well though and she always does her best to live up to expectations and make her friends and family happy, even if she needs to make them happy by force.

    Roleplay Sample:
    Spoiler:
    Marx just knew he had a strong effect on the other male, why else would he stop mid-sentence? His pride swelled just a bit, an innocent smile crawling onto his features. He pulled out his sketchbook and turned it to the page of the relevant schematics, placing it on the desk in front of Nee-san slowly, almost sensually, before sitting down once more "That is my first Era of Puppetry, the first ever collection I wish to make." His mind trailed from seduction to the collection, and his face took on a wistful look "The collection is called the Legendary Trio. They are inspired by a story I read, called Jiraiya Gōketsu Monogatari. It was the story of a hero, Jiraiya who went on a journey, eventually falling in love with a woman named Tsunade. His arch-nemesis was named Orochimaru. Jiraiya was capable of shapeshifting and turning into a giant toad, Tsunade practiced slug magic and Orochimaru practiced serpent magic. The puppets are called Gama, Nume and Hebi, each inspired by the characters and their specific abilities." He tilted his head to the side a bit and pointed to the book "I painted a picture of what they are going to look like in the book, on one of those pages, if you want to take a look."

    "They are each going to be designed to incorporate my new method of puppetry." Marx leaned forward and placed his elbows on his knees, placing his chin in his hands and looking at the writing on the pages "They are also each going to be designed the same, fundamentally. They are going to be made of a special wood, I have the chemical composition and properties written there somewhere, I just haven't been able to get the materials to make it. The wood is going to be able to conduct chakra and absorb blood in order to strengthen itself. The inner shells of the puppets are going to be able to mask chakra, as the puppets themselves will be able to store chakra through a system of Fuinjutsu I am going to create. The outer shell will be able to reroute chakra into the inner shell, then into the Fuinjutsu system. In theory anyway. Alongside the chakra circulatory system Fuinjutsu, I am going to make a 'blood' circulatory system Fuinjutsu. Each one will have their own 'blood' type, which are truly just poisons disguised as blood. Though they will have blood plasma. They'll each have five mechanisms each within them, with the only mechanism they have in common being their "Summoning Palm". It will be on each of their left palms, and will simply be a Lightning Flash Blade Creation seal that contains Clockwork puppets that mimic summons. Toads for Gama, Slugs for Nume, and Snakes for Hebi, of course."

    "Gama's Blood Type will be Toad Blood. It is going to be flammable, and act as a form of accelerant due to containing oil. I feel as though the combination will have fatiguing properties due to the combination of materials. His first mechanism will be an adhesive tongue. It is truly just a elastic and adhesive tool shaped like a tongue, with a mechanism to wind up the tongue and launch it like a projectile. The adhesive is strong as well, requiring a good amount of personal strength to rip it off, but like wise taking some skin along with it if the correct solvent isn't used. The second mechanism is hair needles attached to his scalp, with the needles being a unique combination of cactus barbs, iron, senbon and human hair. This combination makes the needles like hair, until they are either tensed with the launching mechanism. This launches the needles much like a senbon would be launched, dealing high amounts of piercing damage to whatever is hit while also lodging themselves in deep. When pulled out, they cause high amounts of bleeding damage as well. They can absorb Toad Blood to tense even further and deal higher damage. The composition of the hairs also makes them potent defensive measures when used together, which is boosted when Toad Blood is added." He took a bit of a breath as he recalled the other mechanisms "The third mechanism is a flamethrower, using a mixure of Fuinjutsu and mechanisms to make it work. It has Fire Element seals to store the flames, or alternatively a sparking mechanism to ignite whatever the fuel is that is being used. It can use Air, Oil or another flammable fuel, or Toad Blood. This is a flamethrower, so of course it is multi-purpose, and the different fuel sources allows it to be used even when the other run out. It can be maintained for quite some time, but it can and will overheat. The final unique mechanism is a Fuinjutsu tag dispenser. It has ten slots and the Fuinjutsu tag can be of any type, and can be placed on a non-living target normally or a living target with a chakra price."

    "Nume is a unique one, as she is support oriented, and perhaps my favorite. Her blood is known as Slug Blood, rather harmless when in liquid form, but when frozen into a solid or heated into a vapor it corrodes whatever it comes into contact with. The liquid form, when injected into the bloodstream, causes rapid blood cell death, while the vapor form deals great amounts of damage to one's lungs. Her first mechanism is the orb she has for her head, which is made from a specialized glass that is capable of storing chakra. Her second mechanism is her most variable one, and I call it the Piston Discharger. She will have various buttons on her arm that modify the appearance of her hand, which then is capable of discharging chakra for attacks in different ways. The Slug Blood can also be released alongside the chakra for different and powerful combinations. Her third mechanism is a shockwave generator in her calf, being capable of generating a massive shockwave through an emission of chakra from the generator. Her fourth mechanism is a chakra battery station with in her..." A mischeivous smile spread across his lips "Bust. The name is rather self explanatory, because the other two are incapable of replenishing the chakra they need to fuel their mechanisms, they are capable of "groping" her in order to transfer the chakra stored within the batteries into their own Fuinjutsu systems. The batteries won't be directly tied to Nume's own chakra system, to make sure there are no mishaps with over drainage, so she can "grope" herself and restore her own chakra. I must admit I made this puppet in a rare bout of teenage male-like lewdness."

    "Hebi is one that is aligned more towards subtlety. He possesses Snake Blood, which is causes gradual paralysis in an area when it comes in contact with an opponent, enters their blood stream or is inhaled in a vapor form. The vapor has an added effect of causing hallucinations for the entire time up until the opponent is paralyzed, causing them to suffer drops in their perception and coordination. His first mechanism is called "Crass Cutter", I thought it was more poetic than sharp tongue. It acts much like Gama's own tongue mechanism, instead of being adhesive it's bladed. It pierces through defenses and armors, and is capable of absorbing his blood and then applying its effects to whatever it cuts. The second mechanism is called "Hidden Shadow Snake Hands", two snake-like mechanisms are concealed within Hebi's arm and can be released by pressing two bottoms on his forearms. The snakes launch outwards and "bite" into whatever is caught within their jaws, locking down on that object if it flips a switch within their mouths. While they can be forcibly removed, it will cause massive amounts of damage to a living target if they are removed that way. The snakes will be able to release the Snake Blood from the fangs to either inject the poison directly into the veins or release the poison as a vapor. Hebi's third mechanism is a poison smoke screen, he possesses slots within his stomach that can hold different canisters of vapor poison, or liquid poisons that turn to vapor when exposed to certain temperatures. Buttons exist to activate the corresponding slots, enabling him to "exhale" the poisons outward to generate the smoke screen. This can act as an easy way to apply poisons to a target, as well as a good concealment mechanism. His fourth mechanism is a simple balloon clone. It will be able to hold two balloons, which will be filled with pressurized gas when prompted, being capable of use as a decoy when one's vision is obscured, as the balloons resemble Hebi, especially when one doesn't have a clear view. Each balloon has an explosive tag attached, which detonates if an opponent comes too close. The gas within the balloon can be infused with Snake Blood in order to apply its effect over the explosion duration."

    Marx leaned back and folded his hands over his lap, looking at Nee-san curiously "Thoughts? Any questions about the designs or the components?"


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    Strength: C+
    Constitution: B
    Stamina: B
    Speed: A
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: B
    Perception: A

    Spoiler:


      Thigh Holster
    • 1 Kunai
      Front Holster
    • 10 Shuriken
      Back Holster
    • 10 Shuriken
      Right Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 6 Chili Pepper Bombs
    • 150 ft. Steel Wire
    • 5 Red Tags
    • 20 Military Ration Pills
    • Bandage Wrap
      Left Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 3 Flash Bombs
    • 3 Smoke Bombs
    • 50 Caltrops
    • 30 ft. Manriki
      Utility Belt
    • Canteen
    • Blacktongue
      Flak Jacket Scroll Holster
    • Small Sealed Weapon Scroll



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    Re: Azumi Isora

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      Current date/time is Wed Dec 12, 2018 7:02 am