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PostSubject: Re: Orochi Risu's Jutsu drawingboard   Fri Nov 03, 2017 4:34 pm

That's fine, but what I'm asking is how long does each strike count towards this limit. As in, if you hit someone in the arm post one, do you have to only hit them one more time in post five to numb their arm or do you need to hit them twice in the same post to numb their arm? What is the time limit each strike possesses before the counter for numbing is reset to 0?

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PostSubject: Re: Orochi Risu's Jutsu drawingboard   Fri Nov 03, 2017 5:03 pm

oh good point and fixed it (also simplified the text a bit)

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PostSubject: Re: Orochi Risu's Jutsu drawingboard   Sat Nov 04, 2017 9:08 am

@Orochi Risu wrote:


Name:Ijutsu-Reverse Chakra Palm
Rank:D
Power:D
Activation Cost:3
Upkeep Cost:1
Range:self
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Intelligence C rank
Parent Technique: Ijutsu- Chakra Palm
Hand Seals: -
Description:
Just like with the Chakra Palm technique, the user coats their hands in chakra, but this time forgoes to enhance said chakra into medical chakra and rather allows it to remain in its raw form. While this technique is being used, the user can land more precise and more damaging blows, raising their strength by one +. Should the user strike any limb twice within the span of three posts, it will result in a numb feeling in the affected limb for two posts. Should the user strike the same spot again within those two posts of numbness, the affected limb becomes paralyzed for one post.

Weaknesses: Due to the large amount of focus this technique takes, when the user is hit by anything (ex. weapon, punch, etc. However, not random leaves or rain), the technique is forcefully stopped.


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PostSubject: Re: Orochi Risu's Jutsu drawingboard   Mon Nov 06, 2017 5:24 am

Name: Soft Body Modification: Writhing Agony Fangs
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element:-
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: C rank Intelligence
Parent Technique: Soft Body Manipulation
Hand Seals: -
Description:
After coating their canines in a fine layer of medical chakra, the user bites down on a targets flesh, only penetrating enough to cause someone to bleed profusely, but not through bone. The bitten area will be infected with the medical chakra. This festers into an injury that scabs over instantly,  This scab, however, retains the medical chakra, which keeps recausing the wound to bleed, causing discomfort as it automatically destroys and heals itself. Someone bitten by this technique suffers a - to their coordination as the pain distracts them, which lasts for 3 posts before the target either gets used to it, or the pain fades.

-Each of the bites' debuff to coordination stacks as long as they are active. (ex. Player A gets bitten in post one and again in post 2, the debuff will be -- until either of the bites' duration ends.) with a max of -1 tier Coordination after stacking.
-The range of this technique is based on the range limits of the parent technique: Soft Body Modification.
-The speed of this technique is based on the user's base Coordination rank.

Weaknesses: Can't be used when stamina is 10 or lower

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PostSubject: Re: Orochi Risu's Jutsu drawingboard   Mon Nov 06, 2017 9:25 am

@Orochi Risu wrote:
Name: Soft Body Modification: Writhing Agony Fangs
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element:-
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: C rank Intelligence
Parent Technique: Soft Body Manipulation
Hand Seals: -
Description:
After coating their canines in a fine layer of medical chakra, the user bites down on a targets flesh, only penetrating enough to cause someone to bleed profusely, but not through bone. The bitten area will be infected with the medical chakra. This festers into an injury that scabs over instantly,  This scab, however, retains the medical chakra, which keeps recausing the wound to bleed, causing discomfort as it automatically destroys and heals itself. Someone bitten by this technique suffers a - to their coordination as the pain distracts them, which lasts for 3 posts before the target either gets used to it, or the pain fades.

-Each of the bites' debuff to coordination stacks as long as they are active. (ex. Player A gets bitten in post one and again in post 2, the debuff will be -- until either of the bites' duration ends.)
-The range of this technique is based on the range limits of the parent technique: Soft Body Modification.
-The speed of this technique is based on the user's base Coordination rank.

Weaknesses: Can't be used when stamina is 10 or lower

Cap the stacking at a tier.

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PostSubject: Re: Orochi Risu's Jutsu drawingboard   Mon Nov 06, 2017 10:16 am

fixed

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PostSubject: Re: Orochi Risu's Jutsu drawingboard   Mon Nov 06, 2017 10:42 am

@Orochi Risu wrote:
Name: Soft Body Modification: Writhing Agony Fangs
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element:-
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: C rank Intelligence
Parent Technique: Soft Body Manipulation
Hand Seals: -
Description:
After coating their canines in a fine layer of medical chakra, the user bites down on a targets flesh, only penetrating enough to cause someone to bleed profusely, but not through bone. The bitten area will be infected with the medical chakra. This festers into an injury that scabs over instantly,  This scab, however, retains the medical chakra, which keeps recausing the wound to bleed, causing discomfort as it automatically destroys and heals itself. Someone bitten by this technique suffers a - to their coordination as the pain distracts them, which lasts for 3 posts before the target either gets used to it, or the pain fades.

-Each of the bites' debuff to coordination stacks as long as they are active. (ex. Player A gets bitten in post one and again in post 2, the debuff will be -- until either of the bites' duration ends.) with a max of -1 tier Coordination after stacking.
-The range of this technique is based on the range limits of the parent technique: Soft Body Modification.
-The speed of this technique is based on the user's base Coordination rank.

Weaknesses: Can't be used when stamina is 10 or lower

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  • Strength: D
  • Constitution: D
  • Stamina: A
  • Speed: D
  • Coordination: S
  • Intelligence: A
  • Perception: S
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