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    Asura's Shop 'O Horrors (Better than that other loser)

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    Asura
    Jounin

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    Post by Asura on Sat Nov 04, 2017 10:44 am

    Poison Specialist: Poisons can be made one rank higher than the usual limit for Asura, but if made this way, half of the higher ranks countdown is added to the original ranks countdown. (Using the minimum countdown on the higher one.  If this should be done a different way, pls let meh know)

    Name: Gateway
    Appearance: A deep green gas contained within a glass grenade
    Rank: B
    State: Gas
    Price: 25,000
    Symptoms: Difficulty breathing, moderate amounts of pain, slight cough
    Effects: This poison was made with a single goal in mind: Make an opening.  To do this this, it affects the opponents Constitution, targeting both the nervous system and the immune system once inhaled.  This allows it to lower the body's resistance to both poison and pain.  It lowers the targets Constitution by 1 tier.  By lowering this stat, it reduces poison resistance, making it easier to get other poisons into the targets system
    Countdown: 5
    Duration: 4


    Name: Chunk 'O Death
    Appearance: A dark green, crystalline substance that breaks into pieces easily
    Rank: A
    State: Solid
    Price: 70,000
    Symptoms:  Spreading corruption (Veins turn black spreading from where the poison entered, skin darkens following it), Numbness of the limbs
    Effects: This poison, however it enters the body, quickly finds its way to the bloodstream, working into the targets immune system to reduce their ability to fight its final effect: Death.  Minus 2 temporary tiers to Constitution, At the end of the Duration, targeted organ failure of the Liver, Lungs, Heart, and Brain.  
    Countdown: 10+4=14 (WOW)
    Duration: 10


    Name: (Any name will work to help make each one distinctive.)
    Rank: (See guide to determine ranking.)
    State: (Gas, Solid, or Liquid)
    Price: (See guide to determine pricing.)
    Symptoms: (These are the "tell" of the poison. It is what the victim feels during the countdown and duration of the poison.)
    Effects: (Effects are the hard facts about the poison. Temporary/Permanent stat damage, organ failure, etc.)
    Countdown: (The preamble to the poison before its Effects take place.)
    Duration: (The length of time the Effects take place. For products whose Effects deal in absolute [perma-stat damage, death, KO, etc] this acts as a second countdown until they take place.)


    Last edited by Asura on Sat Nov 04, 2017 1:46 pm; edited 1 time in total


    _________________
    Me:
    Character Name: Asura
    Spendable Experience: 260
    Total Experience: 4100
    Renown: 0
    Ryo: 50,000

    Bloodline: Swift Release

    Elements: Wind

    Skills]
    Chemistry
    Genjutsu
    Taijutsu

    [b]Stats:

    [/b]

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: B
    • Coordination: C
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: C



    [b]Limit Break Points:

    [/b]

    • Physical: 2
    • Technique: 0
    • Destiny: 1



    [b]Link to Character Updates:
    Asura
    Link to Character Application:
    Link to Known Techniques:
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    Masuyo Kaede
    Masuyo Kaede
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    Skills & Elements: Fire | Earth | Wind | Water | Bukijutsu | Ninjutsu | Taijutsu
    Class: S
    Ryo: 30,000

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    Post by Masuyo Kaede on Sat Nov 04, 2017 1:30 pm

    @Asura wrote:Name: Gateway
    Appearance: A deep green gas contained within a glass grenade
    Rank: B
    State: Gas
    Price: 25,000
    Symptoms: Difficulty breathing, moderate amounts of pain, slight cough
    Effects: This poison was made with a single goal in mind: Make an opening.  To do this this, it affects the opponents Constitution, targeting both the nervous system and the immune system once inhaled.  This allows it to lower the body's resistance to both poison and pain.  It lowers the targets Constitution by 1 tier.  By lowering this stat, it reduces poison resistance, making it easier to get other poisons into the targets system
    Countdown: 5
    Duration: 4

    Approved.


    Name: Chunk 'O Death
    Appearance: A dark green, crystalline substance that breaks into pieces easily
    Rank: A
    State: Solid
    Price: 70,000
    Symptoms:  Spreading corruption (Veins turn black spreading from where the poison entered, skin darkens following it), Numbness of the limbs
    Effects: This poison, however it enters the body, quickly finds its way to the bloodstream, working into the targets immune system to reduce their ability to fight its final effect: Death.  Minus 2 tiers to Constitution, At the end of the Duration, targeted organ failure of the Liver, Lungs, Heart, and Brain.  
    Countdown: 6+4=10 (WOW)
    Duration: 4


    Poisons that deal in absolute must have the maximum penalty regarding countdowns and duration due to their high kill potential. Your Countdown should be 14 posts and duration 10 posts.

    Also specify if that -2 tiers of Constitution is temporary or permanent.


    _________________
    Strength: C
    Constitution: B
    Stamina: B
    Speed: A+
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: B
    Perception: A

    Spoiler:


      Thigh Holster
    • 1 Kunai
      Front Holster
    • 10 Shuriken
      Back Holster
    • 10 Shuriken
      Right Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 6 Chili Pepper Bombs
    • 150 ft. Steel Wire
    • 5 Red Tags
    • 20 Military Ration Pills
    • Bandage Wrap
      Left Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 3 Flash Bombs
    • 3 Smoke Bombs
    • 50 Caltrops
    • 30 ft. Manriki
      Utility Belt
    • Canteen
    • Blacktongue
      Flak Jacket Scroll Holster
    • Small Sealed Weapon Scroll



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    Asura
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    Post by Asura on Sat Nov 04, 2017 1:47 pm

    Fixed it


    _________________
    Me:
    Character Name: Asura
    Spendable Experience: 260
    Total Experience: 4100
    Renown: 0
    Ryo: 50,000

    Bloodline: Swift Release

    Elements: Wind

    Skills]
    Chemistry
    Genjutsu
    Taijutsu

    [b]Stats:

    [/b]

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: B
    • Coordination: C
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: C



    [b]Limit Break Points:

    [/b]

    • Physical: 2
    • Technique: 0
    • Destiny: 1



    [b]Link to Character Updates:
    Asura
    Link to Character Application:
    Link to Known Techniques:
    -----------------[/b]
    Masuyo Kaede
    Masuyo Kaede
    Jounin Commander

    Posts : 1195
    Join date : 2016-12-07

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Fire | Earth | Wind | Water | Bukijutsu | Ninjutsu | Taijutsu
    Class: S
    Ryo: 30,000

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    Post by Masuyo Kaede on Sat Nov 04, 2017 1:50 pm

    @Asura wrote:Name: Gateway
    Appearance: A deep green gas contained within a glass grenade
    Rank: B
    State: Gas
    Price: 25,000
    Symptoms: Difficulty breathing, moderate amounts of pain, slight cough
    Effects: This poison was made with a single goal in mind: Make an opening.  To do this this, it affects the opponents Constitution, targeting both the nervous system and the immune system once inhaled.  This allows it to lower the body's resistance to both poison and pain.  It lowers the targets Constitution by 1 tier.  By lowering this stat, it reduces poison resistance, making it easier to get other poisons into the targets system
    Countdown: 5
    Duration: 4


    Name: Chunk 'O Death
    Appearance: A dark green, crystalline substance that breaks into pieces easily
    Rank: A
    State: Solid
    Price: 70,000
    Symptoms:  Spreading corruption (Veins turn black spreading from where the poison entered, skin darkens following it), Numbness of the limbs
    Effects: This poison, however it enters the body, quickly finds its way to the bloodstream, working into the targets immune system to reduce their ability to fight its final effect: Death.  Minus 2 temporary tiers to Constitution, At the end of the Duration, targeted organ failure of the Liver, Lungs, Heart, and Brain.  
    Countdown: 10+4=14 (WOW)
    Duration: 10


    Approved


    _________________
    Strength: C
    Constitution: B
    Stamina: B
    Speed: A+
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: B
    Perception: A

    Spoiler:


      Thigh Holster
    • 1 Kunai
      Front Holster
    • 10 Shuriken
      Back Holster
    • 10 Shuriken
      Right Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 6 Chili Pepper Bombs
    • 150 ft. Steel Wire
    • 5 Red Tags
    • 20 Military Ration Pills
    • Bandage Wrap
      Left Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 3 Flash Bombs
    • 3 Smoke Bombs
    • 50 Caltrops
    • 30 ft. Manriki
      Utility Belt
    • Canteen
    • Blacktongue
      Flak Jacket Scroll Holster
    • Small Sealed Weapon Scroll



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    Post by Asura on Mon Nov 27, 2017 11:32 am

    Name: Poison-Putty
    Item Rank: C
    Material Rank: N/A
    Price: 15,000
    Form: Paste
    Application: Must be placed on a weapon or other skin-penetrating implement
    Description: This is a dark gray paste, scentless and squishy, until it is placed on metal.  Once it touches the metal, it begins to quickly solidify, attaching itself to the metal.
    Effects: This is used to attach solid poisons to weapons, allowing one to get the poison into a target's system without requiring them to swallow it.
    Quantity: 2 uses per creation


    _________________
    Me:
    Character Name: Asura
    Spendable Experience: 260
    Total Experience: 4100
    Renown: 0
    Ryo: 50,000

    Bloodline: Swift Release

    Elements: Wind

    Skills]
    Chemistry
    Genjutsu
    Taijutsu

    [b]Stats:

    [/b]

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: B
    • Coordination: C
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: C



    [b]Limit Break Points:

    [/b]

    • Physical: 2
    • Technique: 0
    • Destiny: 1



    [b]Link to Character Updates:
    Asura
    Link to Character Application:
    Link to Known Techniques:
    -----------------[/b]
    Masuyo Kaede
    Masuyo Kaede
    Jounin Commander

    Posts : 1195
    Join date : 2016-12-07

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Fire | Earth | Wind | Water | Bukijutsu | Ninjutsu | Taijutsu
    Class: S
    Ryo: 30,000

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    Post by Masuyo Kaede on Tue Nov 28, 2017 3:39 am

    @Asura wrote:Name: Poison-Putty
    Item Rank: C
    Material Rank: N/A
    Price: 15,000
    Form: Paste
    Application: Must be placed on a weapon or other skin-penetrating implement
    Description: This is a dark gray paste, scentless and squishy, until it is placed on metal.  Once it touches the metal, it begins to quickly solidify, attaching itself to the metal.
    Effects: This is used to attach solid poisons to weapons, allowing one to get the poison into a target's system without requiring them to swallow it.
    Quantity: 2 uses per creation

    This sounds like something that would be "liquid activated", such as being in contact with the target's blood. It would also activate when coming in contact with any liquid, such as water. It would be good to note that.

    I would also like to see a post limit for having it dissolve. Two posts should be fine, considering solid poisons generally have very low count down. Within that dissolving period it should be possible to clean the wound with grain alcohol, or any other official medical means such as Ijutsu to remove the putty before it takes place.


    _________________
    Strength: C
    Constitution: B
    Stamina: B
    Speed: A+
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: B
    Perception: A

    Spoiler:


      Thigh Holster
    • 1 Kunai
      Front Holster
    • 10 Shuriken
      Back Holster
    • 10 Shuriken
      Right Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 6 Chili Pepper Bombs
    • 150 ft. Steel Wire
    • 5 Red Tags
    • 20 Military Ration Pills
    • Bandage Wrap
      Left Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 3 Flash Bombs
    • 3 Smoke Bombs
    • 50 Caltrops
    • 30 ft. Manriki
      Utility Belt
    • Canteen
    • Blacktongue
      Flak Jacket Scroll Holster
    • Small Sealed Weapon Scroll



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