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PostSubject: Nozomi's Registry   Sat Nov 04, 2017 7:55 pm

Name: Petal Dance of the Mist
Rank: C rank
Power: C rank
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: 3
Range: Self
Speed: N/a
Element: N/a
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: C rank Coordination
Parent Technique: N/a
Hand Seals: Dragon - Snake - Bird
Description: This ninjutsu was developed by the Himitsu clan in order to help advance their Taijutsu skills to be able to match other clans with specialized Taijutsu based KKG such as the Kaguya or the Gentle Fist style of the Hyuuga clan. The users hand is coated in a film of chakra that leaves behind small trails of what appear to be tiny Cherry Blossom petals. The trail of blades have no power behind them, and don't do damage, but the user's strikes create the force necessary to send the petal blades into whatever they strike. The blades aren't large, but their numerous amount allows for the user to quickly create wounds that can bleed or disable an opponent.
Weaknesses: This technique completely coats the user's hands, and while they are safe from the blades with each strike, they are not safe from the other hands blades. If the user attempts to use new seals while this technique is active, they will cut up their own hand a little bit, although not as much as a full strike would do. In order to use another technique that requires hand seals without taking damage, the user would need to end this technique first and then reactivate it, paying the activation cost again.

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Name: Oculus Enhancement
Rank: C rank
Power: C rank
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: 1
Range: Self
Speed: N/a
Element: Suiton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/a
Parent Technique: N/a
Hand Seals: Tiger - Bird - Dog
Description: The user, by flowing Suiton Chakra into their ocular nerves, are able to increase their perceptive abilities as if wearing a lense. The filter of Suiton Chakra acts to help more clearly amplify the sight of the user, and as such only increases the perceptive clues of the user's sight. This increase is the equivalent of a tier of perception.
Weaknesses: Bright lights such as those caused by flash bombs can cause a glare in the lense that temporarily blind the user if they stare at them directly.

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Name: Spring Chant
Rank: D
Power: C
Activation Cost: N/a
Upkeep Cost: 3
Range: Self
Speed: N/a
Element: N/a
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: C rank Coordination w/o taijutsu skill or D rank with the taijutsu skill.
Parent Technique: N/a
Hand Seals: N/a
Description: This style of combat focuses on fast, flowing combinations utilizing basic principles of Taijutsu. The style uses sheer speed and number of attacks to achieve its goals in contrast to other more strength reliant Taijutsu styles. While those who aren't trained in Taijutsu find that faster strikes tend to lose out on power, a Taijutsu user who has trained in the skill can utilize this style without losing any of their striking power, allowing body mechanics to make up for any power lost. Boosts coordination by one tier with the taijutsu skill and by one plus without it.
Weaknesses: The boosts are lowered by -- if the user doesn't have the taijutsu skill. Their strength is also lowered by - if they don't possess the Taijutsu Skill to represent their lack of true effort in mastering their body.

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PostSubject: Re: Nozomi's Registry   Sun Nov 05, 2017 3:51 pm

@Nozomi wrote:
Name: Petal Dance of the Mist
Rank: C rank
Power: C rank
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: 3
Range: Self
Speed: N/a
Element: N/a
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: C rank Coordination
Parent Technique: N/a
Hand Seals: Dragon - Snake - Bird
Description: This ninjutsu was developed by the Himitsu clan in order to help advance their Taijutsu skills to be able to match other clans with specialized Taijutsu based KKG such as the Kaguya or the Gentle Fist style of the Hyuuga clan. The users hand is coated in a film of chakra that leaves behind small trails of what appear to be tiny Cherry Blossom petals. The trail of blades have no power behind them, and don't do damage, but the user's strikes create the force necessary to send the petal blades into whatever they strike. The blades aren't large, but their numerous amount allows for the user to quickly create wounds that can bleed or disable an opponent.
Weaknesses: This technique completely coats the user's hands, and while they are safe from the blades with each strike, they are not safe from the other hands blades. If the user attempts to use new seals while this technique is active, they will cut up their own hand a little bit, although not as much as a full strike would do. In order to use another technique that requires hand seals without taking damage, the user would need to end this technique first and then reactivate it, paying the activation cost again.


So, this coats the user's hands in the chakra created petal blades and then lets you smash them into people to cut them up? Just making sure I'm reading that right. If that's how it works, approved.

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Name: Oculus Enhancement
Rank: C rank
Power: C rank
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: 3
Range: Self
Speed: N/a
Element: Suiton
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/a
Parent Technique: N/a
Hand Seals: Tiger - Bird - Dog
Description: The taijutsu user, by flowing Suiton Chakra into their ocular nerves, are able to increase their perceptive abilities as if wearing a lense. The filter of Suiton Chakra acts to help more clearly amplify the sight of the user, and as such only increases the perceptive clues of the user's sight. This increase is the equivalent of a tier of perception.
Weaknesses: N/a


This is definitely a ninjutsu. Also, if it acts like a lens then bright lights are going to cause glare and mess with your ability to see a bit. Since this is a ninjutsu, the upkeep can be lowered to 1 point per post. Make those changes and it should be good.
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Name: Spring Chant
Rank: D
Power: C
Activation Cost: N/a
Upkeep Cost: 3
Range: Self
Speed: N/a
Element: N/a
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: C rank Coordination w/o taijutsu skill or D rank with the taijutsu skill.
Parent Technique: N/a
Hand Seals: N/a
Description: This style of combat focuses on fast, flowing combinations utilizing basic principles of Taijutsu. The style uses sheer speed and number of attacks to achieve its goals in contrast to other more strength reliant Taijutsu styles. While those who aren't trained in Taijutsu find that faster strikes tend to lose out on power, a Taijutsu user who has trained in the skill can utilize this style without losing any of their striking power, allowing body mechanics to make up for any power lost. Boosts coordination by one tier with the taijutsu skill and by one plus without it.
Weaknesses: The boosts are lowered by -- if the user doesn't have the taijutsu skill. Their strength is also lowered by - if they don't possess the Taijutsu Skill to represent their lack of true effort in mastering their body.


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PostSubject: Re: Nozomi's Registry   Sun Nov 05, 2017 6:56 pm

Petal dance: Yes, that is exactly how it functions.

Oculus Enhancement: The requested edits have been made.

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PostSubject: Re: Nozomi's Registry   Sun Nov 05, 2017 10:01 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Nozomi's Registry   Wed Nov 08, 2017 11:05 am

Name: Misty Petal Step
Rank: E
Power: E
Activation Cost: 1
Upkeep Cost: 1
Range: Self
Speed: N/a
Element: N/a
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: C rank coordination
Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
Hand Seals: N/a
Description: Combining the principle of the academy technique Supernatural Walking Practice, and the Petal Dance of the Mist, the Himitsu clan has developed a technique that allows the user to skate across the ground at will Taking part of its inspiration from the Supernatural Walking Practice, this ability allows the user to coat their body in a strange chakra that literally allows them to slide/skate along the ground with any part of their body that is in contact with it, leaving behind a small trail of petals on the points of contact. [I.e, the user can run, dive into a slide and continue moving at the same speed as if they were still running]. While moving along the ground on anything that isnt their feet, the user cannot increase their speed unless they are going downhill.
Weaknesses: N/a

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Name: Misty Petal Platform
Rank: E
Power: E
Activation Cost: 1
Upkeep Cost: 1
Range: Self
Speed: N/a
Element: N/a
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: C rank Coordination
Parent Technique: Misty Petal Step
Hand Seals: N/a
Description: Through superior chakra control, the user is able to create a single small platform of petals through their feet wherever they are as a sort of spring board, as they create a solid enough platform to jump off of. The petals disperse and fall harmlessly to the ground afterwards, as they are only stable enough to allow for a brief moment of contact.
Weaknesses:

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Name: Misty Petal Propulsion
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: 2
Range: N/a
Speed: N/a
Element: N/a
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: C Rank Coordination
Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
Hand Seals: N/a
Description: This jutsu allows instant reach of the users desired speed within their own capabilities using chakra flow, allowing them to attain up to their max speed at the moment of takeoff, instead of the user having to build up their speed first. The user builds up chakra inside them and uses it as a burst speed, creating a small whirlwind of petals through the leak off of chakra reminiscent of the other Himitsu Clan Techniques. This jutsu is sometimes mistaken for the Body Flicker Technique, especially when used by the fastest shinobi. The chakra flow increases the user's speed by a tier.
Weaknesses: Although this can be maintained, if the user wants to make a sudden change of direction, they would need to reactivate the jutsu, paying the activation cost again.

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Name: Misty Petal Shifts
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: N/a
Range: N/a
Speed: N/a
Element: N/a
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: C rank Coordination
Parent Technique: Misty Petal Propulsion
Hand Seals: N/a
Description: Althoigh this technique can move the user's entire body, it isnt made for movement over great distances. Instead this technique focuses on small things, such as serving to accelerate the user's hands or feet to their full speed. This allows for fast changes on where a strike would land, helping to subvert a defense at the last moment. The same effect of petals is left, although in a smaller amount as they are localized in the hands and feet of the user. This can be used twice on the feet to shift the user at most a foot in any direction. The moved limbs are granted an increased coordination of ++.
Weaknesses: N/a

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PostSubject: Re: Nozomi's Registry   Wed Nov 08, 2017 5:29 pm

@Nozomi wrote:
Name: Misty Petal Step
Rank: E
Power: E
Activation Cost: 1
Upkeep Cost: 1
Range: Self
Speed: N/a
Element: N/a
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: C rank coordination
Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
Hand Seals: N/a
Description: Combining the principle of the academy technique Supernatural Walking Practice, and the Petal Dance of the Mist, the Himitsu clan has developed a technique that allows the user to skate across the ground at will Taking part of its inspiration from the Supernatural Walking Practice, this ability allows the user to coat their body in a strange chakra that literally allows them to slide/skate along the ground with any part of their body that is in contact with it, leaving behind a small trail of petals on the points of contact. [I.e, the user can run, dive into a slide and continue moving at the same speed as if they were still running]. While moving along the ground on anything that isnt their feet, the user cannot increase their speed unless they are going downhill or using a technique.
Weaknesses: N/a

That bit about not being able to increase speed unless using techniques defeats the purpose of saying speed can't be increased. Just make it that it can't be increased in general unless on your feet please.
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Name: Misty Petal Platform
Rank: E
Power: E
Activation Cost: 1
Upkeep Cost: 1
Range: Self
Speed: N/a
Element: N/a
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: C rank Coordination
Parent Technique: Misty Petal Step
Hand Seals: N/a
Description: Through superior chakra control, the user is able to create a single small platform of petals through their feet wherever they are as a sort of spring board, as they create a solid enough platform to jump off of. The petals disperse and fall harmlessly to the ground afterwards, as they are only stable enough to allow for a brief moment of contact.
Weaknesses:

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Name: Misty Petal Propulsion
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: 3
Range: N/a
Speed: N/a
Element: N/a
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: C Rank Coordination
Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
Hand Seals: N/a
Description: This jutsu allows instant reach of the users desired speed within their own capabilities using chakra flow, allowing them to attain up to their max speed at the moment of takeoff, instead of the user having to build up their speed first. The user builds up chakra inside them and uses it as a burst speed, creating a small whirlwind of petals through the leak off of chakra reminiscent of the other Himitsu Clan Techniques. This jutsu is sometimes mistaken for the Body Flicker Technique, especially when used by the fastest shinobi. The chakra flow increases the user's speed by a tier.
Weaknesses: Although this can be maintained, if the user wants to make a sudden change of direction, they would need to reactivate the jutsu, paying the activation cost again.

This is basically the Body Flicker technique, but with petals. You can make the upkeep 2 points per post, 1 for the petals and 1 for maintaining the speed.

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Name: Misty Petal Shifts
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: N/a
Range: N/a
Speed: N/a
Element: N/a
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: C rank Coordination
Parent Technique: Misty Petal Propulsion
Hand Seals: N/a
Description: Rather than accelerating the user's entire body, this technique focuses on small things, such as serving to accelerate the user's hands or feet to their full speed. This allows for fast changes on where a strike would land, helping to subvert a defense at the last moment. The same effect of petals is left, although in a smaller amount as they are localized in the hands and feet of the user. This can be used twice on the feet to shift the user at most a foot in any direction.
Weaknesses: N/a


This says it doesn't move the entire body, but then mentions using it on your feet shifts your entire body. That's going to need fixed. Also, this reads like it should have a Coordination boost in there somewhere but I'm not seeing one. If there's no Coordination boost, I'm a bit lost as to the purpose of this technique when the same effect described can be achieved by virtue of raw stats.

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PostSubject: Re: Nozomi's Registry   Wed Nov 08, 2017 8:49 pm

Edits made.

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PostSubject: Re: Nozomi's Registry   Thu Nov 09, 2017 5:21 pm

@Nozomi wrote:
Name: Misty Petal Step
Rank: E
Power: E
Activation Cost: 1
Upkeep Cost: 1
Range: Self
Speed: N/a
Element: N/a
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: C rank coordination
Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
Hand Seals: N/a
Description: Combining the principle of the academy technique Supernatural Walking Practice, and the Petal Dance of the Mist, the Himitsu clan has developed a technique that allows the user to skate across the ground at will Taking part of its inspiration from the Supernatural Walking Practice, this ability allows the user to coat their body in a strange chakra that literally allows them to slide/skate along the ground with any part of their body that is in contact with it, leaving behind a small trail of petals on the points of contact. [I.e, the user can run, dive into a slide and continue moving at the same speed as if they were still running]. While moving along the ground on anything that isnt their feet, the user cannot increase their speed unless they are going downhill.
Weaknesses: N/a

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Name: Misty Petal Propulsion
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: 2
Range: N/a
Speed: N/a
Element: N/a
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: C Rank Coordination
Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
Hand Seals: N/a
Description: This jutsu allows instant reach of the users desired speed within their own capabilities using chakra flow, allowing them to attain up to their max speed at the moment of takeoff, instead of the user having to build up their speed first. The user builds up chakra inside them and uses it as a burst speed, creating a small whirlwind of petals through the leak off of chakra reminiscent of the other Himitsu Clan Techniques. This jutsu is sometimes mistaken for the Body Flicker Technique, especially when used by the fastest shinobi. The chakra flow increases the user's speed by a tier.
Weaknesses: Although this can be maintained, if the user wants to make a sudden change of direction, they would need to reactivate the jutsu, paying the activation cost again.

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Name: Misty Petal Shifts
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: N/a
Range: N/a
Speed: N/a
Element: N/a
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: C rank Coordination
Parent Technique: Misty Petal Propulsion
Hand Seals: N/a
Description: Althoigh this technique can move the user's entire body, it isnt made for movement over great distances. Instead this technique focuses on small things, such as serving to accelerate the user's hands or feet to their full speed. This allows for fast changes on where a strike would land, helping to subvert a defense at the last moment. The same effect of petals is left, although in a smaller amount as they are localized in the hands and feet of the user. This can be used twice on the feet to shift the user at most a foot in any direction. The moved limbs are granted an increased coordination of ++.
Weaknesses: N/a



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