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    Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Nozomi on Sat Nov 04, 2017 7:55 pm

    Approved Tech:
    Name: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Rank: C rank
    Power: C rank
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: N/a
    Hand Seals: Dragon - Snake - Bird
    Description: This ninjutsu was developed by the Himitsu clan in order to help advance their Taijutsu skills to be able to match other clans with specialized Taijutsu based KKG such as the Kaguya or the Gentle Fist style of the Hyuuga clan. The users hand is coated in a film of chakra that leaves behind small trails of what appear to be tiny Cherry Blossom petals. The trail of blades have no power behind them, and don't do damage, but the user's strikes create the force necessary to send the petal blades into whatever they strike. The blades aren't large, but their numerous amount allows for the user to quickly create wounds that can bleed or disable an opponent.
    Weaknesses: This technique completely coats the user's hands, and while they are safe from the blades with each strike, they are not safe from the other hands blades. If the user attempts to use new seals while this technique is active, they will cut up their own hand a little bit, although not as much as a full strike would do. In order to use another technique that requires hand seals without taking damage, the user would need to end this technique first and then reactivate it, paying the activation cost again.

    -

    Name: Oculus Enhancement
    Rank: C rank
    Power: C rank
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: Suiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: N/a
    Parent Technique: N/a
    Hand Seals: Tiger - Bird - Dog
    Description: The user, by flowing Suiton Chakra into their ocular nerves, are able to increase their perceptive abilities as if wearing a lense. The filter of Suiton Chakra acts to help more clearly amplify the sight of the user, and as such only increases the perceptive clues of the user's sight. This increase is the equivalent of a tier of perception.
    Weaknesses: Bright lights such as those caused by flash bombs can cause a glare in the lense that temporarily blind the user if they stare at them directly.

    -

    Name: Spring Chant
    Rank: D
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: N/a
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Open
    Requirements: C rank Coordination w/o taijutsu skill or D rank with the taijutsu skill.
    Parent Technique: N/a
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: This style of combat focuses on fast, flowing combinations utilizing basic principles of Taijutsu. The style uses sheer speed and number of attacks to achieve its goals in contrast to other more strength reliant Taijutsu styles. While those who aren't trained in Taijutsu find that faster strikes tend to lose out on power, a Taijutsu user who has trained in the skill can utilize this style without losing any of their striking power, allowing body mechanics to make up for any power lost. Boosts coordination by one tier with the taijutsu skill and by one plus without it.
    Weaknesses: The boosts are lowered by -- if the user doesn't have the taijutsu skill. Their strength is also lowered by - if they don't possess the Taijutsu Skill to represent their lack of true effort in mastering their body.

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    Name: Misty Petal Step
    Rank: E
    Power: E
    Activation Cost: 1
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: Combining the principle of the academy technique Supernatural Walking Practice, and the Petal Dance of the Mist, the Himitsu clan has developed a technique that allows the user to skate across the ground at will Taking part of its inspiration from the Supernatural Walking Practice, this ability allows the user to coat their body in a strange chakra that literally allows them to slide/skate along the ground with any part of their body that is in contact with it, leaving behind a small trail of petals on the points of contact. [I.e, the user can run, dive into a slide and continue moving at the same speed as if they were still running]. While moving along the ground on anything that isnt their feet, the user cannot increase their speed unless they are going downhill.
    Weaknesses: N/a

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    Name: Misty Petal Platform
    Rank: E
    Power: E
    Activation Cost: 1
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Misty Petal Step
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: Through superior chakra control, the user is able to create a single small platform of petals through their feet wherever they are as a sort of spring board, as they create a solid enough platform to jump off of. The petals disperse and fall harmlessly to the ground afterwards, as they are only stable enough to allow for a brief moment of contact.
    Weaknesses:

    -

    Name: Misty Petal Propulsion
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 2
    Range: N/a
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: This jutsu allows instant reach of the users desired speed within their own capabilities using chakra flow, allowing them to attain up to their max speed at the moment of takeoff, instead of the user having to build up their speed first. The user builds up chakra inside them and uses it as a burst speed, creating a small whirlwind of petals through the leak off of chakra reminiscent of the other Himitsu Clan Techniques. This jutsu is sometimes mistaken for the Body Flicker Technique, especially when used by the fastest shinobi. The chakra flow increases the user's speed by a tier.
    Weaknesses: Although this can be maintained, if the user wants to make a sudden change of direction, they would need to reactivate the jutsu, paying the activation cost again.

    -

    Name: Misty Petal Shifts
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: N/a
    Range: N/a
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Misty Petal Propulsion
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: Althoigh this technique can move the user's entire body, it isnt made for movement over great distances. Instead this technique focuses on small things, such as serving to accelerate the user's hands or feet to their full speed. This allows for fast changes on where a strike would land, helping to subvert a defense at the last moment. The same effect of petals is left, although in a smaller amount as they are localized in the hands and feet of the user. This can be used twice on the feet to shift the user at most a foot in any direction. The moved limbs are granted an increased coordination of ++.
    Weaknesses: N/a



    Last edited by Nozomi on Tue Jan 16, 2018 4:49 pm; edited 5 times in total


    _________________
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    Character Name: Nozomi Himitsu
    Spendable Experience: 105
    Total Experience:  4005
    Renown: something
    Ryo: 40,000
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: B
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: A
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence: C
    • Perception: A

    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 0
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1

    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t381-nozomi-s-updates#2015
    Link to Character Application: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t380-himitsu-nozomi#2009
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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Akame on Sun Nov 05, 2017 3:51 pm

    @Nozomi wrote:Name: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Rank: C rank
    Power: C rank
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: N/a
    Hand Seals: Dragon - Snake - Bird
    Description: This ninjutsu was developed by the Himitsu clan in order to help advance their Taijutsu skills to be able to match other clans with specialized Taijutsu based KKG such as the Kaguya or the Gentle Fist style of the Hyuuga clan. The users hand is coated in a film of chakra that leaves behind small trails of what appear to be tiny Cherry Blossom petals. The trail of blades have no power behind them, and don't do damage, but the user's strikes create the force necessary to send the petal blades into whatever they strike. The blades aren't large, but their numerous amount allows for the user to quickly create wounds that can bleed or disable an opponent.
    Weaknesses: This technique completely coats the user's hands, and while they are safe from the blades with each strike, they are not safe from the other hands blades. If the user attempts to use new seals while this technique is active, they will cut up their own hand a little bit, although not as much as a full strike would do. In order to use another technique that requires hand seals without taking damage, the user would need to end this technique first and then reactivate it, paying the activation cost again.


    So, this coats the user's hands in the chakra created petal blades and then lets you smash them into people to cut them up? Just making sure I'm reading that right. If that's how it works, approved.

    -

    Name: Oculus Enhancement
    Rank: C rank
    Power: C rank
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: Suiton
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: N/a
    Parent Technique: N/a
    Hand Seals: Tiger - Bird - Dog
    Description: The taijutsu user, by flowing Suiton Chakra into their ocular nerves, are able to increase their perceptive abilities as if wearing a lense. The filter of Suiton Chakra acts to help more clearly amplify the sight of the user, and as such only increases the perceptive clues of the user's sight. This increase is the equivalent of a tier of perception.
    Weaknesses: N/a


    This is definitely a ninjutsu. Also, if it acts like a lens then bright lights are going to cause glare and mess with your ability to see a bit. Since this is a ninjutsu, the upkeep can be lowered to 1 point per post. Make those changes and it should be good.
    -

    Name: Spring Chant
    Rank: D
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: N/a
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Open
    Requirements: C rank Coordination w/o taijutsu skill or D rank with the taijutsu skill.
    Parent Technique: N/a
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: This style of combat focuses on fast, flowing combinations utilizing basic principles of Taijutsu. The style uses sheer speed and number of attacks to achieve its goals in contrast to other more strength reliant Taijutsu styles. While those who aren't trained in Taijutsu find that faster strikes tend to lose out on power, a Taijutsu user who has trained in the skill can utilize this style without losing any of their striking power, allowing body mechanics to make up for any power lost. Boosts coordination by one tier with the taijutsu skill and by one plus without it.
    Weaknesses: The boosts are lowered by -- if the user doesn't have the taijutsu skill. Their strength is also lowered by - if they don't possess the Taijutsu Skill to represent their lack of true effort in mastering their body.


    Approved~


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    Character Name: Akame Sasumi
    Experience:  0/4200
    Renown: 3000
    Ryo: 0
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: A
    • Perception: B


    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 2
    • Technique: 0
    • Destiny: 1

    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t219-tsuyo-s-updates#1371






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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Nozomi on Sun Nov 05, 2017 6:56 pm

    Petal dance: Yes, that is exactly how it functions.

    Oculus Enhancement: The requested edits have been made.


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    Character Name: Nozomi Himitsu
    Spendable Experience: 105
    Total Experience:  4005
    Renown: something
    Ryo: 40,000
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: B
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: A
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence: C
    • Perception: A

    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 0
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1

    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t381-nozomi-s-updates#2015
    Link to Character Application: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t380-himitsu-nozomi#2009
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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Akame on Sun Nov 05, 2017 10:01 pm

    Spoiler:
    @Nozomi wrote:Name: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Rank: C rank
    Power: C rank
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: N/a
    Hand Seals: Dragon - Snake - Bird
    Description: This ninjutsu was developed by the Himitsu clan in order to help advance their Taijutsu skills to be able to match other clans with specialized Taijutsu based KKG such as the Kaguya or the Gentle Fist style of the Hyuuga clan. The users hand is coated in a film of chakra that leaves behind small trails of what appear to be tiny Cherry Blossom petals. The trail of blades have no power behind them, and don't do damage, but the user's strikes create the force necessary to send the petal blades into whatever they strike. The blades aren't large, but their numerous amount allows for the user to quickly create wounds that can bleed or disable an opponent.
    Weaknesses: This technique completely coats the user's hands, and while they are safe from the blades with each strike, they are not safe from the other hands blades. If the user attempts to use new seals while this technique is active, they will cut up their own hand a little bit, although not as much as a full strike would do. In order to use another technique that requires hand seals without taking damage, the user would need to end this technique first and then reactivate it, paying the activation cost again.

    -

    Name: Oculus Enhancement
    Rank: C rank
    Power: C rank
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: Suiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: N/a
    Parent Technique: N/a
    Hand Seals: Tiger - Bird - Dog
    Description: The user, by flowing Suiton Chakra into their ocular nerves, are able to increase their perceptive abilities as if wearing a lense. The filter of Suiton Chakra acts to help more clearly amplify the sight of the user, and as such only increases the perceptive clues of the user's sight. This increase is the equivalent of a tier of perception.
    Weaknesses: Bright lights such as those caused by flash bombs can cause a glare in the lense that temporarily blind the user if they stare at them directly.



    Approved~


    _________________
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    Character Name: Akame Sasumi
    Experience:  0/4200
    Renown: 3000
    Ryo: 0
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: A
    • Perception: B


    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 2
    • Technique: 0
    • Destiny: 1

    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t219-tsuyo-s-updates#1371






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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Nozomi on Wed Nov 08, 2017 11:05 am

    Name: Misty Petal Step
    Rank: E
    Power: E
    Activation Cost: 1
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: Combining the principle of the academy technique Supernatural Walking Practice, and the Petal Dance of the Mist, the Himitsu clan has developed a technique that allows the user to skate across the ground at will Taking part of its inspiration from the Supernatural Walking Practice, this ability allows the user to coat their body in a strange chakra that literally allows them to slide/skate along the ground with any part of their body that is in contact with it, leaving behind a small trail of petals on the points of contact. [I.e, the user can run, dive into a slide and continue moving at the same speed as if they were still running]. While moving along the ground on anything that isnt their feet, the user cannot increase their speed unless they are going downhill.
    Weaknesses: N/a

    -

    Name: Misty Petal Platform
    Rank: E
    Power: E
    Activation Cost: 1
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Misty Petal Step
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: Through superior chakra control, the user is able to create a single small platform of petals through their feet wherever they are as a sort of spring board, as they create a solid enough platform to jump off of. The petals disperse and fall harmlessly to the ground afterwards, as they are only stable enough to allow for a brief moment of contact.
    Weaknesses:

    -

    Name: Misty Petal Propulsion
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 2
    Range: N/a
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: This jutsu allows instant reach of the users desired speed within their own capabilities using chakra flow, allowing them to attain up to their max speed at the moment of takeoff, instead of the user having to build up their speed first. The user builds up chakra inside them and uses it as a burst speed, creating a small whirlwind of petals through the leak off of chakra reminiscent of the other Himitsu Clan Techniques. This jutsu is sometimes mistaken for the Body Flicker Technique, especially when used by the fastest shinobi. The chakra flow increases the user's speed by a tier.
    Weaknesses: Although this can be maintained, if the user wants to make a sudden change of direction, they would need to reactivate the jutsu, paying the activation cost again.

    -

    Name: Misty Petal Shifts
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: N/a
    Range: N/a
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Misty Petal Propulsion
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: Althoigh this technique can move the user's entire body, it isnt made for movement over great distances. Instead this technique focuses on small things, such as serving to accelerate the user's hands or feet to their full speed. This allows for fast changes on where a strike would land, helping to subvert a defense at the last moment. The same effect of petals is left, although in a smaller amount as they are localized in the hands and feet of the user. This can be used twice on the feet to shift the user at most a foot in any direction. The moved limbs are granted an increased coordination of ++.
    Weaknesses: N/a


    Last edited by Nozomi on Wed Nov 08, 2017 8:48 pm; edited 1 time in total


    _________________
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    Character Name: Nozomi Himitsu
    Spendable Experience: 105
    Total Experience:  4005
    Renown: something
    Ryo: 40,000
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: B
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: A
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence: C
    • Perception: A

    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 0
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1

    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t381-nozomi-s-updates#2015
    Link to Character Application: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t380-himitsu-nozomi#2009
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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Akame on Wed Nov 08, 2017 5:29 pm

    @Nozomi wrote:Name: Misty Petal Step
    Rank: E
    Power: E
    Activation Cost: 1
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: Combining the principle of the academy technique Supernatural Walking Practice, and the Petal Dance of the Mist, the Himitsu clan has developed a technique that allows the user to skate across the ground at will Taking part of its inspiration from the Supernatural Walking Practice, this ability allows the user to coat their body in a strange chakra that literally allows them to slide/skate along the ground with any part of their body that is in contact with it, leaving behind a small trail of petals on the points of contact. [I.e, the user can run, dive into a slide and continue moving at the same speed as if they were still running]. While moving along the ground on anything that isnt their feet, the user cannot increase their speed unless they are going downhill or using a technique.
    Weaknesses: N/a

    That bit about not being able to increase speed unless using techniques defeats the purpose of saying speed can't be increased. Just make it that it can't be increased in general unless on your feet please.
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    Name: Misty Petal Platform
    Rank: E
    Power: E
    Activation Cost: 1
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Misty Petal Step
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: Through superior chakra control, the user is able to create a single small platform of petals through their feet wherever they are as a sort of spring board, as they create a solid enough platform to jump off of. The petals disperse and fall harmlessly to the ground afterwards, as they are only stable enough to allow for a brief moment of contact.
    Weaknesses:

    Approved~
    -

    Name: Misty Petal Propulsion
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: N/a
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: This jutsu allows instant reach of the users desired speed within their own capabilities using chakra flow, allowing them to attain up to their max speed at the moment of takeoff, instead of the user having to build up their speed first. The user builds up chakra inside them and uses it as a burst speed, creating a small whirlwind of petals through the leak off of chakra reminiscent of the other Himitsu Clan Techniques. This jutsu is sometimes mistaken for the Body Flicker Technique, especially when used by the fastest shinobi. The chakra flow increases the user's speed by a tier.
    Weaknesses: Although this can be maintained, if the user wants to make a sudden change of direction, they would need to reactivate the jutsu, paying the activation cost again.

    This is basically the Body Flicker technique, but with petals. You can make the upkeep 2 points per post, 1 for the petals and 1 for maintaining the speed.

    -

    Name: Misty Petal Shifts
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: N/a
    Range: N/a
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Misty Petal Propulsion
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: Rather than accelerating the user's entire body, this technique focuses on small things, such as serving to accelerate the user's hands or feet to their full speed. This allows for fast changes on where a strike would land, helping to subvert a defense at the last moment. The same effect of petals is left, although in a smaller amount as they are localized in the hands and feet of the user. This can be used twice on the feet to shift the user at most a foot in any direction.
    Weaknesses: N/a


    This says it doesn't move the entire body, but then mentions using it on your feet shifts your entire body. That's going to need fixed. Also, this reads like it should have a Coordination boost in there somewhere but I'm not seeing one. If there's no Coordination boost, I'm a bit lost as to the purpose of this technique when the same effect described can be achieved by virtue of raw stats.


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    Character Name: Akame Sasumi
    Experience:  0/4200
    Renown: 3000
    Ryo: 0
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: A
    • Perception: B


    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 2
    • Technique: 0
    • Destiny: 1

    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t219-tsuyo-s-updates#1371






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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Nozomi on Wed Nov 08, 2017 8:49 pm

    Edits made.


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    Character Name: Nozomi Himitsu
    Spendable Experience: 105
    Total Experience:  4005
    Renown: something
    Ryo: 40,000
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: B
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: A
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence: C
    • Perception: A

    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 0
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1

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    Link to Character Application: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t380-himitsu-nozomi#2009
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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Akame on Thu Nov 09, 2017 5:21 pm

    @Nozomi wrote:Name: Misty Petal Step
    Rank: E
    Power: E
    Activation Cost: 1
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: Combining the principle of the academy technique Supernatural Walking Practice, and the Petal Dance of the Mist, the Himitsu clan has developed a technique that allows the user to skate across the ground at will Taking part of its inspiration from the Supernatural Walking Practice, this ability allows the user to coat their body in a strange chakra that literally allows them to slide/skate along the ground with any part of their body that is in contact with it, leaving behind a small trail of petals on the points of contact. [I.e, the user can run, dive into a slide and continue moving at the same speed as if they were still running]. While moving along the ground on anything that isnt their feet, the user cannot increase their speed unless they are going downhill.
    Weaknesses: N/a

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    Name: Misty Petal Propulsion
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 2
    Range: N/a
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: This jutsu allows instant reach of the users desired speed within their own capabilities using chakra flow, allowing them to attain up to their max speed at the moment of takeoff, instead of the user having to build up their speed first. The user builds up chakra inside them and uses it as a burst speed, creating a small whirlwind of petals through the leak off of chakra reminiscent of the other Himitsu Clan Techniques. This jutsu is sometimes mistaken for the Body Flicker Technique, especially when used by the fastest shinobi. The chakra flow increases the user's speed by a tier.
    Weaknesses: Although this can be maintained, if the user wants to make a sudden change of direction, they would need to reactivate the jutsu, paying the activation cost again.

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    Name: Misty Petal Shifts
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: N/a
    Range: N/a
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Misty Petal Propulsion
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: Althoigh this technique can move the user's entire body, it isnt made for movement over great distances. Instead this technique focuses on small things, such as serving to accelerate the user's hands or feet to their full speed. This allows for fast changes on where a strike would land, helping to subvert a defense at the last moment. The same effect of petals is left, although in a smaller amount as they are localized in the hands and feet of the user. This can be used twice on the feet to shift the user at most a foot in any direction. The moved limbs are granted an increased coordination of ++.
    Weaknesses: N/a



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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Nozomi on Sat Jan 13, 2018 11:48 am

    Name: Petal Shuriken Technique
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: 0-50 Meters
    Speed: C
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description: After forming the Bird seal, within a meter around the user, sharp chakra petals continue to form at a rate of 30 or more per turn. Starting at 10 petals at E rank coordination, 10 more is added on for every tier above E that the user's coordination is. At any time the user is capable of selecting a direction and performing the half (bird) handseal to project any number of stored chakra petals in any direction in a straight line, although any petals that would path themselves through the user would twist around them harmlessly, not entering the meter safety ring.
    Weaknesses: While the petals are numerous, they are individually small, taking up a small paper thin amount of space, and are only about 1/3 inch wide in total. While the user is able to send the petals in any direction in a single line, they can't control it beyond the initial launch without the aid of another jutsu. Additionally, if an opponent enters within the meter safety ring that the petals are created at, the user cannot send these petals towards them, as the petals are stopped from entering that ring.

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    Name: Cherry Blossom Shuriken
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: 0-30 meters
    Speed: C
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Shuriken Technique
    Hand Seals: Half-Bird
    Description: The user creates a set of 10 beautiful shuriken out of 5 Petal Blades for each shuriken, either formed on hand, or from preexisting Petal Blades scattered around the field, the petals being recalled to the user. The shuriken from there float above the user’s palm, spinning almost like a sawblade in a tight and nearly flat circle until launched at a target. When not launched, the shuriken can act like a sawblade, allowing the user to slice through an opponent. However, the shuriken can also be launched, using the rotational force of the weapons and stopping the upkeep of the technique. The shuriken, being collected remnants of Chakra Petals, allow these shuriken to be destroyed after they have been launched, breaking back into the 5 original condensed petal like chakra constructs upon impact with an object.
    Weaknesses: N/a

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    Name: Petal Storm of the Mist: Thousand Cherry Blossoms
    Rank: C
    Power: D-S
    Activation Cost: Varies on Power
    Upkeep Cost: 1 below Activation
    Range: 15 meters per rank of power
    Speed: User's Coordination -1/+1
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: Bird - Snake - Dragon
    Description: Shoots out a continuous stream of hardened chakra that look like petal blades from the hands of the user, in a much more controlled manner than the Dance of the Misty Petal's short controlled hits. The user can control the petal blades with their hands and eyes much like Gaara's sand, except this requires actual control from the user. Sending out the hardened chakra petals through the air and controlling the path through their Chakra.

    This technique allows the user to block incoming attacks with a barrage of petal blades, and launch counter attacks from a range using that same barrage of blades. As the user's ability to mold and shape chakra improves and they are able to use higher ranked techniques, they gain the ability to use this technique at higher levels, creating a larger volume of more and more powerful petals, but not at a higher rank of power than they would be able to learn a technique on their own.

    Should the user simply be controlling the Petal Storm with only their mind, the speed of the technique is reduced to one tier below their coordination, as their full attention is not given. However, they can increase the speed of the technique by dedicating their full control by guiding the petals with their mind and their hands, raising the speed of the technique to one tier above their coordination.
    Weaknesses: The petals released from the user don't enter a range closer than 1 meter to the user, providing a small exploitable safe space from the technique close to the user. If the user is controlling the petals with both their hands and their mind together, increasing the speed of the technique, the safe space is removed, however the user risks injuring themselves with their own attack if they can't quite perceive the speed enough to stop it from injuring them after entering that space.

    When controlling the petals at the heightened level of speed, the concentration required is intense. While not enough to cancel other maintained techniques, the user is unable to activate any new techniques while controlling the petals at a rank above their coordination.

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    Name: Petal Dance of the Mist, Deflection
    Rank: E
    Power: E
    Activation Cost:
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: N/a
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: While Petal Dance of the Mist is active, this technique can be maintained to allow Petal Dance to deflect incoming attacks at its own rank, or for the user to make new hand seals with both of their hands without slicing into their own hands.
    Weaknesses: This technique can't be used on it's own, Petal Dance must be active.

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    Name: Battousai
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: N/a
    Range: 10 Meters
    Speed: C
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Storm of the Mist: Thousand Cherry Blossom
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: This is an odd jutsu, as it is meant to deceive the target. The user fakes an attack towards their opponent, sending a vortex of chakra petals at them. Just before striking the target, the vortex dissipates, the petals dropping to the ground. At this point, the user will act as if the jutsu failed, playing along the deception portion of the jutsu. At any point after of the user's choosing however, the chakra petals will build around the target's feet if they step into the trap's radius of 5 meters, and erupt upwards, taking the vague appearance of a person holding a sword and spinning around the target, with the sword pointed inward. The chakra sword is sharp, capable of slicing like a real sword. This can also be utilized by using previously discarded petals from another technique rather than making the initial vortex.
    Weaknesses: N/a


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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Akame on Sun Jan 14, 2018 6:26 pm

    Name: Petal Shuriken Technique
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: 0-50 Meters
    Speed: C
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description: After forming the Bird seal, within a meter around the user, sharp chakra petals continue to form at a rate of 30 or more per turn. Starting at 10 petals at E rank coordination, 10 more is added on for every tier above E that the user's coordination is. At any time the user is capable of selecting a direction and performing the half (bird) handseal to project any number of stored chakra petals in any direction in a straight line, although any petals that would path themselves through the user would twist around them harmlessly, not entering the meter safety ring.
    Weaknesses: While the petals are numerous, they are individually small, taking up a small paper thin amount of space, and are only about 1/3 inch wide in total. While the user is able to send the petals in any direction in a single line, they can't control it beyond the initial launch without the aid of another jutsu. Additionally, if an opponent enters within the meter safety ring that the petals are created at, the user cannot send these petals towards them, as the petals are stopped from entering that ring.


    The number of petals created is going to need to depend on how much chakra you pay, not how high your coordination is. This is because your hands being fast has nothing to do with the actual generation of these chakra petals. That is ruled by the stamina stat, and in this case, chakra. This also reads as a one time effect since there's only an initial lunge with the petals. If that's the case, you don't really need an upkeep. If you were wanting this to be a petal generating technique used over time, then that lunge effect doesn't fit very well with what the technique would be doing. It'd be easier to describe and keep track of any control related aspects if they were in different techniques.



    Name: Cherry Blossom Shuriken
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: 0-30 meters
    Speed: C
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Shuriken Technique
    Hand Seals: Half-Bird
    Description: The user creates a set of 10 beautiful shuriken out of 5 Petal Blades for each shuriken, either formed on hand, or from preexisting Petal Blades scattered around the field, the petals being recalled to the user. The shuriken from there float above the user’s palm, spinning almost like a sawblade in a tight and nearly flat circle until launched at a target. When not launched, the shuriken can act like a sawblade, allowing the user to slice through an opponent. However, the shuriken can also be launched, using the rotational force of the weapons and stopping the upkeep of the technique. The shuriken, being collected remnants of Chakra Petals, allow these shuriken to be destroyed after they have been launched, breaking back into the 5 original condensed petal like chakra constructs upon impact with an object.
    Weaknesses: N/a


    If you're creating the petals, that's going to need a separate stamina cost than just utilizing the petals already in your environment in addition to the cost of the technique.



    Name: Petal Storm of the Mist: Thousand Cherry Blossoms
    Rank: C
    Power: D-S
    Activation Cost: Varies on Power
    Upkeep Cost: 1 below Activation
    Range: 15 meters per rank of power
    Speed: User's Coordination -1/+1
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: Bird - Snake - Dragon
    Description: Shoots out a continuous stream of hardened chakra that look like petal blades from the hands of the user, in a much more controlled manner than the Dance of the Misty Petal's short controlled hits. The user can control the petal blades with their hands and eyes much like Gaara's sand, except this requires actual control from the user. Sending out the hardened chakra petals through the air and controlling the path through their Chakra.

    This technique allows the user to block incoming attacks with a barrage of petal blades, and launch counter attacks from a range using that same barrage of blades. As the user's ability to mold and shape chakra improves and they are able to use higher ranked techniques, they gain the ability to use this technique at higher levels, creating a larger volume of more and more powerful petals, but not at a higher rank of power than they would be able to learn a technique on their own.

    Should the user simply be controlling the Petal Storm with only their mind, the speed of the technique is reduced to one tier below their coordination, as their full attention is not given. However, they can increase the speed of the technique by dedicating their full control by guiding the petals with their mind and their hands, raising the speed of the technique to one tier above their coordination.
    Weaknesses: The petals released from the user don't enter a range closer than 1 meter to the user, providing a small exploitable safe space from the technique close to the user. If the user is controlling the petals with both their hands and their mind together, increasing the speed of the technique, the safe space is removed, however the user risks injuring themselves with their own attack if they can't quite perceive the speed enough to stop it from injuring them after entering that space.

    When controlling the petals at the heightened level of speed, the concentration required is intense. While not enough to cancel other maintained techniques, the user is unable to activate any new techniques while controlling the petals at a rank above their coordination.



    Alright, so this is essentially Byakuya's Shikai from Bleach. I feel the rank of this technique is going to be A rank, minimum, depending on how you want to go about this. First, I need to know how many petals are created in such a fashion for each rank of stamina paid per post. The amount able to be controlled is also going to need a cap based off of your Coordination stat, as this has the potential to be a very powerful ability and needs that counter balance. If you want the petals to be able to travel at one tier above your Coordination, then that's going to be a flat C rank cost and D rank upkeep alongside whatever costs there are for generating the petals. If you don't want to do this, you can have the speed cap at your Coordination stat's base level. Other boosts unrelated to these petal techniques will not be able to effect this, as your base Coordination is going to be counted as the regular maximum speed. That'll let you reduce the penalty to two minuses instead of a full tier, with one minus being removed per hand used to control the petals. The extra tier can be something you get for paying an additional cost and actively committing excess resources to the technique.



    Name: Battousai
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: N/a
    Range: 10 Meters
    Speed: C
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Storm of the Mist: Thousand Cherry Blossom
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: This is an odd jutsu, as it is meant to deceive the target. The user fakes an attack towards their opponent, sending a vortex of chakra petals at them. Just before striking the target, the vortex dissipates, the petals dropping to the ground. At this point, the user will act as if the jutsu failed, playing along the deception portion of the jutsu. At any point after of the user's choosing however, the chakra petals will build around the target's feet if they step into the trap's radius of 5 meters, and erupt upwards, taking the vague appearance of a person holding a sword and spinning around the target, with the sword pointed inward. The chakra sword is sharp, capable of slicing like a real sword. This can also be utilized by using previously discarded petals from another technique rather than making the initial vortex.



    Make it that only petals used with the vortex can be utilized, and add a 1 point upkeep in case the opponent takes a bit longer to step into the radius.




    Deflection is denied, as it's just a workaround to a previous technique's weaknesses.


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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Nozomi on Sun Jan 14, 2018 10:10 pm

    Changes:
    Petal Shuriken is more of a "Charge up an attack" sort of jutsu rather than a Petal Generator or Petal Launcher by itself. By spending more time gathering petals, she's powering it up a bit before launching an attack, rather than just creating. That said, I have made is so now ALL petals that this technique makes have to be launched, and that they all need to travel in the same direction, to kill a little bit of the versatility.

    Reworked Deflection so it's more of a technique on its own.

    Cherry Blossom Shuriken: Why would I need to pay more to generate the petals rather than using pre-existing ones? For the sake of getting it approved, I made it 1, as petals aren't really all that chakra intensive to make, no more so than elemental chakra is to shape and launch. It's calculated into the cost of the technique already. Other library techniques that create multiple projectiles not only make more projectiles (Ie, Phoenix Sage Fire that creates 16 fireballs that are all controllable and can have shuriken inside it, and is a C rank jutsu, for instance) but also larger ones (These are shuriken sized, while those are fireballs) for only 5 chakra.

    Battousai, changes done as requested, removed Petal Storm as the base, switched it with Petal Dance.

    I'll put Petal Storm of the Mist on the Bench for the moment. I can't train it if it is A rank until I'm B class, and I need these techniques to go through modding faster, so I'll lighten the load if it has to be A rank. If there's any way it can stay C Rank, or even B rank, I'll get back to it, or just make one weak enough. Suggestions would be helpful so I can make something that can be approved to replace this.
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    Name: Petal Shuriken Technique
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: 0-50 Meters
    Speed: C
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description: After forming the Bird seal, within a meter around the user, 50 Chakra petals form. Every turn after, as long as this jutsu is active, 30 more passively form. At any time the user is capable of selecting a direction and performing the half (bird) handseal to project all the stored chakra petals in any direction in a straight line, although any petals that would path themselves through the user would twist around them harmlessly, not entering the meter safety ring.
    Weaknesses: While the petals are numerous, they are individually small, taking up a small paper thin amount of space, and are only about 1/3 inch wide in total. While the user is able to send the petals in any direction in a single line, they can't control it beyond the initial launch without the aid of another jutsu. Additionally, if an opponent enters within the meter safety ring that the petals are created at, the user cannot send these petals towards them, as the petals are stopped from entering that ring.

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    Name: Cherry Blossom Shuriken
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: 0-30 meters
    Speed: C
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Shuriken Technique
    Hand Seals: Half-Bird
    Description: The user creates a set of 10 beautiful shuriken out of 5 Petal Blades for each shuriken, either formed on hand for an additional 1 Chakra, or from preexisting Petal Blades scattered around the field, the petals being recalled to the user. The shuriken from there float above the user’s palm, spinning almost like a sawblade in a tight and nearly flat circle until launched at a target. When not launched, the shuriken can act like a sawblade, allowing the user to slice through an opponent. However, the shuriken can also be launched, using the rotational force of the weapons and stopping the upkeep of the technique. The shuriken, being collected remnants of Chakra Petals, allow these shuriken to be destroyed after they have been launched, breaking back into the 5 original condensed petal like chakra constructs upon impact with an object.
    Weaknesses: N/a

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    Name: Petal Dance of the Mist, Deflection
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: N/a
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: Unlike Petal Dance of the Mist, this technique creates more petals that coat not just the hand, but also the forearm in a scale like pattern of petals. The petals, rather than breaking off from each strike to embed themselves in an opponent, stay on the arm, helping to assist in protection. This allows the user to utilize Taijutsu against weapons with greater defense than their arm, but its meant more for deflection of a strike rather than taking it all head on. It can be used to allow the user to safely deflect or catch the blades of shuriken and kunai.
    Weaknesses: This technique is meant for safer deflection, reducing the risk of cutting yourself from a blade, but a full forced strike will power through the defense rather easily. This isn't meant to take attacks other than weak slashes or thrusts head on.

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    Name: Battousai
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: 10 Meters
    Speed: C
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: This is an odd jutsu, as it is meant to deceive the target. The user fakes an attack towards their opponent, sending a vortex of chakra petals at them. Just before striking the target, the vortex dissipates, the petals dropping to the ground. At this point, the user will act as if the jutsu failed, playing along the deception portion of the jutsu. At any point after of the user's choosing however, the chakra petals will build around the target's feet if they step into the trap's radius of 5 meters, and erupt upwards, taking the vague appearance of a person holding a sword and spinning around the target, with the sword pointed inward. The chakra sword is sharp, capable of slicing like a real sword.
    Weaknesses: N/a


    Last edited by Nozomi on Tue Jan 16, 2018 3:42 pm; edited 1 time in total


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    • Stamina: C
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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Akame on Mon Jan 15, 2018 10:38 pm

    For Cherry Blossom, the reason you have to pay stamina to generate additional petals is because the technique itself is not a petal generating technique. It has a different function and the default level would be using petals already in existence so creating petals would thus cost some chakra as that's an addition to the technique. For Petal Storm, you can make it B rank if you make the maximum speed one minus below your Coordination and retain the drawbacks. This would mean using your mind would be one tier lower than base Coordination and using both hands would be one minus less than base.




    Name: Petal Shuriken Technique
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: 0-50 Meters
    Speed: C
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description: After forming the Bird seal, within a meter around the user, 50 Chakra petals form. Every turn after, as long as this jutsu is active, 30 more passively form. At any time the user is capable of selecting a direction and performing the half (bird) handseal to project all the stored chakra petals in any direction in a straight line, although any petals that would path themselves through the user would twist around them harmlessly, not entering the meter safety ring.
    Weaknesses: While the petals are numerous, they are individually small, taking up a small paper thin amount of space, and are only about 1/3 inch wide in total. While the user is able to send the petals in any direction in a single line, they can't control it beyond the initial launch without the aid of another jutsu. Additionally, if an opponent enters within the meter safety ring that the petals are created at, the user cannot send these petals towards them, as the petals are stopped from entering that ring.


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    Name: Cherry Blossom Shuriken
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: 0-30 meters
    Speed: C
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Shuriken Technique
    Hand Seals: Half-Bird
    Description: The user creates a set of 10 beautiful shuriken out of 5 Petal Blades for each shuriken, either formed on hand for an additional 1 Chakra, or from preexisting Petal Blades scattered around the field, the petals being recalled to the user. The shuriken from there float above the user’s palm, spinning almost like a sawblade in a tight and nearly flat circle until launched at a target. When not launched, the shuriken can act like a sawblade, allowing the user to slice through an opponent. However, the shuriken can also be launched, using the rotational force of the weapons and stopping the upkeep of the technique. The shuriken, being collected remnants of Chakra Petals, allow these shuriken to be destroyed after they have been launched, breaking back into the 5 original condensed petal like chakra constructs upon impact with an object.
    Weaknesses: N/a


    Approved



    Name: Petal Dance of the Mist, Deflection
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: N/a
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: Unlike Petal Dance of the Mist, this technique creates more petals that coat not just the hand, but also the forearm in a scale like pattern of petals. The petals, rather than breaking off from each strike to embed themselves in an opponent, stay on the arm, helping to assist in protection. This allows the user to utilize Taijutsu against weapons with greater defense than their arm, but its meant more for deflection of a strike rather than taking it all head on. It can be used to allow the user to safely deflect or catch the blades of shuriken and kunai.
    Weaknesses: This technique is meant for safer deflection, reducing the risk of cutting yourself from a blade, but a full forced strike will power through the defense rather easily. This isn't meant to take attacks other than weak slashes or thrusts head on.


    Approved, but do note that this is more for glancing blows or projectiles. If someone smashes a kunai down onto your arm, it'll be the same as if they were using a sword. No need to edit, just want to make that clear so no future squabbles about what it can do happen.




    For Battousai, please add the weakness field even if it's blank and it should be good to go.




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    Experience:  0/4200
    Renown: 3000
    Ryo: 0
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: A
    • Perception: B


    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 2
    • Technique: 0
    • Destiny: 1

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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Nozomi on Wed Jan 17, 2018 12:49 pm

    Spoiler:
    I changed some of the stuff around as per our discussion, to fit into a Cubic Meter as a standard of measurement for the petals. Only putting in the tech that really needed the petal volume accounted for, or had any need for change. Also, sorry for the math. I think I have everything mentioned, if I forgot something, let me know, this was a lot of words and thoughts for me to sort through and fix up.

    Petal Shuriken Technique: Since I'd be adding in 1/5 of a cubic meter's worth of petals every post the upkeep is maintained, I upped the Upkeep cost to 4 instead of 3 to reflect the additional petals added per turn.

    Cherry Blossom Shuriken: Removed the 1 chakra creation cost, as 500 shuriken of 5 petals each is actually much much less than even 1/5 of a cubic meter of petals, which would be equal to 1 chakra as per our discussion (I think you said a cubic foot could contain like 62,000 if condensed and that's 1/35 of a cubic meter, so it's really an insignificant amount of chakra to form these petals, or 1/7 of 1/5 a cubic meter, and 2500 petals being almost 1/25 of that. So that's 1/875 of a cubic meter's worth of petals.). Changed up a bit of the wording to be more descriptive, and added in the size of each shuriken, less than an inch long in an direction but vertical, and paper thin.

    Battousai: Cleaned up some of the wording, expanded on its effects a little bit. As it would create a cubic meter of petals as well as it's own effects, increased the cost by 5, and the maintenance of the petals by 1. Provided a weakness to the trap as well.

    Petal Storm: I did the earlier requested changes that you asked for, changed the rank to B, and regarding to the speed of the technique and specified the volume of creation and control for the petals, as well as how much could be controlled per rank of coordination.


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    Name: Petal Shuriken Technique
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 4
    Range: 0-50 Meters
    Speed: C
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description: After forming the Bird seal, in a ring around the user with a meter's distance from the user in the center, multiple hundreds of Chakra petals form, taking up enough space that should they be condensed into a box, they would occupy about half a cubic meter. Every turn after, as long as this jutsu is active, more petals form, equating to about 1/5 of a cubic meter in total. At any time, the user is capable of selecting a direction and performing the half (bird) handseal to project all the stored chakra petals in any direction in a straight line, although any petals that would path themselves through the user would twist around them harmlessly, not entering the meter safety ring.
    Weaknesses: While the petals are numerous, they are individually small, taking up a small paper thin amount of space, and are only about 1/3 inch wide in total. While the user is able to send the petals in any direction in a single line, they can't control it beyond the initial launch without the aid of another jutsu. Additionally, if an opponent enters within the meter safety ring that the petals are created at, the user cannot send these petals towards them, as the petals are stopped from entering that ring.

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    Name: Cherry Blossom Shuriken
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: 0-30 meters
    Speed: C
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Shuriken Technique
    Hand Seals: Half-Bird
    Description: The user creates a set of 500 beautiful, but small shuriken out of 5 Petal Blades for each shuriken, either formed on hand, or from preexisting Petal Blades scattered around the field, the petals being recalled to the user. As this technique creates much less petals than most techniques, the chakra cost for creating them is insignificant. The shuriken from there float above and around the user’s palm, spinning almost like a sawblade in a tight and nearly flat disk until launched at a target. When not launched, the shuriken can act like a sawblade, allowing the user to slice through an opponent or clash with a blade. However, the shuriken can also be launched, using the rotational force of the weapons and stopping the upkeep of the technique.
    Upon their launch, the disk breaks up into the tiny gatherings of shuriken, launching like a swarm of bees. The shuriken, being collected remnants of Chakra Petals, allow these shuriken to be destroyed after they have been launched, breaking back into the 5 original condensed petal like chakra constructs upon impact with an object.
    Weaknesses: Even as Shuriken, the size of these petals is incredibly small, each shuriken no larger than an inch long in any direction, and still just as flat as paper.

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    Name: Battousai
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 2
    Range: 10 Meters
    Speed: C
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: This is an odd jutsu, as it is meant to deceive the target. The user fakes an attack towards their opponent, sending a large vortex of chakra petals at them, enough to occupy a cubic meter. Just before striking the target, or at the edge of it's range, the vortex dissipates, the petals scattering across the ground harmlessly. At this point, the user will act as if the jutsu failed, playing along the deception portion of the jutsu. At any point after of the user's choosing however, the chakra petals will build around the target's feet if they step into the trap's radius of 5 meters, and erupt upwards, taking the vague appearance of a person holding a sword and spinning around the target, with the sword pointed inward. The chakra sword is sharp, capable of slicing like a real sword, and the remaining petals that aren't used by the person swarm through the air, creating small cuts as well, forming into a smaller vortex than the original launch made, in order to keep the victim in the trap. The vortex condenses in so that they are wall to wall only about 2 meters apart, the spinning Petal Person at the edge of the wall, blade extending out a meter, almost touching the other wall, falling short about half a foot.
    Weaknesses: The vortex isn't fully enclosed, and should the person inside be able to clear a 5 meter high jump, can escape the trap. Additionally, the trap itself can be avoided by not entering within 5 meters of it.

    -

    Name: Petal Storm of the Mist: Thousand Cherry Blossoms
    Rank: B
    Power: E-S
    Activation Cost: Varies on Power + C rank for every cubic meter of petals created (Can use the petals created from other jutsu assuming the cost has been paid to make an equivalent amount)
    Upkeep Cost: 1 Rank below Activation + E rank for every cubic meter of petals maintaining control over
    Range: 15 meters per rank of power
    Speed: User's Coordination -1 (Each hand used for control gives a '+')
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: Bird - Snake - Dragon
    Description: The user creates or controls a stream of hardened chakra that look like petal blades. The user can control these petal blades with their hands and eyes much like Gaara's sand, except this requires actual control from the user. Sending out the hardened chakra petals through the air and controlling the path through their Chakra.

    This technique allows the user to block incoming attacks with a barrage of petal blades, and launch counter attacks from a range using that same barrage of blades. The power of this technique comes directly from the control over the blades that the user is able to create, and the higher the coordination of the user, the more petals they are able to control. For every rank of coordination the user has, they are able to control 1 Cubic Meter's worth of Petals, capping out at 5 Cubic Meter's worth at S rank. Each Cubic Meter's worth of petals controlled increases the power of this technique by a rank, any amount of petals controlled below or up to 1 cubic meter's worth resulting in D rank power, 2 cubic meter's worth being C rank power, 3 cubic meter's worth being B rank power, 4 cubic meter's worth being A rank power, and all 5 cubic meter's worth being controlled equating to S rank power.

    Should the user simply be controlling the Petal Storm with only their mind, the speed of the technique is reduced to one tier below their coordination, as their full attention is not given. However, they can increase the speed of the technique by dedicating their full control by guiding the petals with their mind and their hands, raising the speed of the technique by one advantage for each hand used to guide the petals.
    Weaknesses: The petals released from the user don't enter a range closer than 1 meter to the user, providing a small exploitable safe space from the technique close to the user. If the user is controlling the petals with both their hands and their mind together, increasing the speed of the technique, the safe space can be removed, however the user risks injuring themselves with their own attack if they can't quite perceive the speed enough to stop it from injuring them after entering that space.

    When controlling the petals at the heightened level of speed, the concentration required is intense. While not enough to cancel other maintained techniques, the user is unable to activate any new techniques while controlling the petals with both of their hands.

    Maintaining such a sheer volume of petals isn't without it's costs. Every Cubic Meter of petals created by this technique costs 5 Chakra to make, and is maintained by 1 chakra, meaning 25 chakra must  have been spent on petals in order to have 5 Cubic meter's worth of petals in the first place, and those petals would have to be maintained for 5 chakra a post. While strong, this technique is chakra intensive at it's lowest levels, let alone the higher ones.


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    Character Name: Nozomi Himitsu
    Spendable Experience: 105
    Total Experience:  4005
    Renown: something
    Ryo: 40,000
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: B
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: A
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence: C
    • Perception: A

    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 0
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1

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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Masuyo Kaede on Fri Jan 19, 2018 4:37 pm

    @Nozomi wrote:
    Spoiler:
    I changed some of the stuff around as per our discussion, to fit into a Cubic Meter as a standard of measurement for the petals. Only putting in the tech that really needed the petal volume accounted for, or had any need for change. Also, sorry for the math. I think I have everything mentioned, if I forgot something, let me know, this was a lot of words and thoughts for me to sort through and fix up.

    Petal Shuriken Technique: Since I'd be adding in 1/5 of a cubic meter's worth of petals every post the upkeep is maintained, I upped the Upkeep cost to 4 instead of 3 to reflect the additional petals added per turn.

    Cherry Blossom Shuriken: Removed the 1 chakra creation cost, as 500 shuriken of 5 petals each is actually much much less than even 1/5 of a cubic meter of petals, which would be equal to 1 chakra as per our discussion (I think you said a cubic foot could contain like 62,000 if condensed and that's 1/35 of a cubic meter, so it's really an insignificant amount of chakra to form these petals, or 1/7 of 1/5 a cubic meter, and 2500 petals being almost 1/25 of that. So that's 1/875 of a cubic meter's worth of petals.). Changed up a bit of the wording to be more descriptive, and added in the size of each shuriken, less than an inch long in an direction but vertical, and paper thin.

    Battousai: Cleaned up some of the wording, expanded on its effects a little bit. As it would create a cubic meter of petals as well as it's own effects, increased the cost by 5, and the maintenance of the petals by 1. Provided a weakness to the trap as well.

    Petal Storm: I did the earlier requested changes that you asked for, changed the rank to B, and regarding to the speed of the technique and specified the volume of creation and control for the petals, as well as how much could be controlled per rank of coordination.


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    Name: Petal Shuriken Technique
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 4
    Range: 0-50 Meters
    Speed: C
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description: After forming the Bird seal, in a ring around the user with a meter's distance from the user in the center, multiple hundreds of Chakra petals form, taking up enough space that should they be condensed into a box, they would occupy about half a cubic meter. Every turn after, as long as this jutsu is active, more petals form, equating to about 1/5 of a cubic meter in total. At any time, the user is capable of selecting a direction and performing the half (bird) handseal to project all the stored chakra petals in any direction in a straight line, although any petals that would path themselves through the user would twist around them harmlessly, not entering the meter safety ring.
    Weaknesses: While the petals are numerous, they are individually small, taking up a small paper thin amount of space, and are only about 1/3 inch wide in total. While the user is able to send the petals in any direction in a single line, they can't control it beyond the initial launch without the aid of another jutsu. Additionally, if an opponent enters within the meter safety ring that the petals are created at, the user cannot send these petals towards them, as the petals are stopped from entering that ring.

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    Name: Cherry Blossom Shuriken
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: 0-30 meters
    Speed: C
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Shuriken Technique
    Hand Seals: Half-Bird
    Description: The user creates a set of 500 beautiful, but small shuriken out of 5 Petal Blades for each shuriken, either formed on hand, or from preexisting Petal Blades scattered around the field, the petals being recalled to the user. As this technique creates much less petals than most techniques, the chakra cost for creating them is insignificant. The shuriken from there float above and around the user’s palm, spinning almost like a sawblade in a tight and nearly flat disk until launched at a target. When not launched, the shuriken can act like a sawblade, allowing the user to slice through an opponent or clash with a blade. However, the shuriken can also be launched, using the rotational force of the weapons and stopping the upkeep of the technique.
    Upon their launch, the disk breaks up into the tiny gatherings of shuriken, launching like a swarm of bees. The shuriken, being collected remnants of Chakra Petals, allow these shuriken to be destroyed after they have been launched, breaking back into the 5 original condensed petal like chakra constructs upon impact with an object.
    Weaknesses: Even as Shuriken, the size of these petals is incredibly small, each shuriken no larger than an inch long in any direction, and still just as flat as paper.

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    Name: Battousai
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 2
    Range: 10 Meters
    Speed: C
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: N/a
    Description: This is an odd jutsu, as it is meant to deceive the target. The user fakes an attack towards their opponent, sending a large vortex of chakra petals at them, enough to occupy a cubic meter. Just before striking the target, or at the edge of it's range, the vortex dissipates, the petals scattering across the ground harmlessly. At this point, the user will act as if the jutsu failed, playing along the deception portion of the jutsu. At any point after of the user's choosing however, the chakra petals will build around the target's feet if they step into the trap's radius of 5 meters, and erupt upwards, taking the vague appearance of a person holding a sword and spinning around the target, with the sword pointed inward. The chakra sword is sharp, capable of slicing like a real sword, and the remaining petals that aren't used by the person swarm through the air, creating small cuts as well, forming into a smaller vortex than the original launch made, in order to keep the victim in the trap. The vortex condenses in so that they are wall to wall only about 2 meters apart, the spinning Petal Person at the edge of the wall, blade extending out a meter, almost touching the other wall, falling short about half a foot.
    Weaknesses: The vortex isn't fully enclosed, and should the person inside be able to clear a 5 meter high jump, can escape the trap. Additionally, the trap itself can be avoided by not entering within 5 meters of it.

    Approved

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    Name: Petal Storm of the Mist: Thousand Cherry Blossoms
    Rank: B
    Power: E-S
    Activation Cost: Varies on Power + C rank for every cubic meter of petals created (Can use the petals created from other jutsu assuming the cost has been paid to make an equivalent amount)
    Upkeep Cost: 1 Rank below Activation + E rank for every cubic meter of petals maintaining control over
    Range: 15 meters per rank of power
    Speed: User's Coordination -1 (Each hand used for control gives a '+')
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: Bird - Snake - Dragon
    Description: The user creates or controls a stream of hardened chakra that look like petal blades. The user can control these petal blades with their hands and eyes much like Gaara's sand, except this requires actual control from the user. Sending out the hardened chakra petals through the air and controlling the path through their Chakra.

    This technique allows the user to block incoming attacks with a barrage of petal blades, and launch counter attacks from a range using that same barrage of blades. The power of this technique comes directly from the control over the blades that the user is able to create, and the higher the coordination of the user, the more petals they are able to control. For every rank of coordination the user has, they are able to control 1 Cubic Meter's worth of Petals, capping out at 5 Cubic Meter's worth at S rank. Each Cubic Meter's worth of petals controlled increases the power of this technique by a rank, any amount of petals controlled below or up to 1 cubic meter's worth resulting in D rank power, 2 cubic meter's worth being C rank power, 3 cubic meter's worth being B rank power, 4 cubic meter's worth being A rank power, and all 5 cubic meter's worth being controlled equating to S rank power.

    Should the user simply be controlling the Petal Storm with only their mind, the speed of the technique is reduced to one tier below their coordination, as their full attention is not given. However, they can increase the speed of the technique by dedicating their full control by guiding the petals with their mind and their hands, raising the speed of the technique by one advantage for each hand used to guide the petals.
    Weaknesses: The petals released from the user don't enter a range closer than 1 meter to the user, providing a small exploitable safe space from the technique close to the user. If the user is controlling the petals with both their hands and their mind together, increasing the speed of the technique, the safe space can be removed, however the user risks injuring themselves with their own attack if they can't quite perceive the speed enough to stop it from injuring them after entering that space.

    When controlling the petals at the heightened level of speed, the concentration required is intense. While not enough to cancel other maintained techniques, the user is unable to activate any new techniques while controlling the petals with both of their hands.

    Maintaining such a sheer volume of petals isn't without it's costs. Every Cubic Meter of petals created by this technique costs 5 Chakra to make, and is maintained by 1 chakra, meaning 25 chakra must  have been spent on petals in order to have 5 Cubic meter's worth of petals in the first place, and those petals would have to be maintained for 5 chakra a post. While strong, this technique is chakra intensive at it's lowest levels, let alone the higher ones.


    Currently on hold as it's being discussed


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    Strength: C+
    Constitution: B
    Stamina: B
    Speed: A
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: B
    Perception: A

    Spoiler:


      Thigh Holster
    • 1 Kunai
      Front Holster
    • 10 Shuriken
      Back Holster
    • 10 Shuriken
      Right Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 6 Chili Pepper Bombs
    • 150 ft. Steel Wire
    • 5 Red Tags
    • 20 Military Ration Pills
    • Bandage Wrap
      Left Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 3 Flash Bombs
    • 3 Smoke Bombs
    • 50 Caltrops
    • 30 ft. Manriki
      Utility Belt
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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Masuyo Kaede on Fri Feb 09, 2018 4:29 am

    Name: Petal Storm of the Mist: Thousand Cherry Blossoms
    Rank: B
    Power: E-S
    Activation Cost: Varies on Power + C rank for every cubic meter of petals created (Can use the petals created from other jutsu assuming the cost has been paid to make an equivalent amount)
    Upkeep Cost: 1 Rank below Activation + E rank for every cubic meter of petals maintaining control over
    Range: 15 meters per rank of power
    Speed: User's Coordination -1 (Each hand used for control gives a '+')
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: Bird - Snake - Dragon
    Description: The user creates or controls a stream of hardened chakra that look like petal blades. The user can control these petal blades with their hands and eyes much like Gaara's sand, except this requires actual control from the user. Sending out the hardened chakra petals through the air and controlling the path through their Chakra.

    This technique allows the user to block incoming attacks with a barrage of petal blades, and launch counter attacks from a range using that same barrage of blades. The power of this technique comes directly from the control over the blades that the user is able to create, and the higher the coordination of the user, the more petals they are able to control. For every rank of coordination the user has, they are able to control 1 Cubic Meter's worth of Petals, capping out at 5 Cubic Meter's worth at S rank. Each Cubic Meter's worth of petals controlled increases the power of this technique by a rank, any amount of petals controlled below or up to 1 cubic meter's worth resulting in D rank power, 2 cubic meter's worth being C rank power, 3 cubic meter's worth being B rank power, 4 cubic meter's worth being A rank power, and all 5 cubic meter's worth being controlled equating to S rank power.

    Should the user simply be controlling the Petal Storm with only their mind, the speed of the technique is reduced to one tier below their coordination, as their full attention is not given. However, they can increase the speed of the technique by dedicating their full control by guiding the petals with their mind and their hands, raising the speed of the technique by one advantage for each hand used to guide the petals.
    Weaknesses: The petals released from the user don't enter a range closer than 1 meter to the user, providing a small exploitable safe space from the technique close to the user. If the user is controlling the petals with both their hands and their mind together, increasing the speed of the technique, the safe space can be removed, however the user risks injuring themselves with their own attack if they can't quite perceive the speed enough to stop it from injuring them after entering that space.

    When controlling the petals at the heightened level of speed, the concentration required is intense. While not enough to cancel other maintained techniques, the user is unable to activate any new techniques while controlling the petals with both of their hands.

    Maintaining such a sheer volume of petals isn't without it's costs. Every Cubic Meter of petals created by this technique costs 5 Chakra to make, and is maintained by 1 chakra, meaning 25 chakra must  have been spent on petals in order to have 5 Cubic meter's worth of petals in the first place, and those petals would have to be maintained for 5 chakra a post. While strong, this technique is chakra intensive at it's lowest levels, let alone the higher ones.


    Currently on hold as it's being discussed [/quote]


    As it stands now, the only concern I have left for this technique is its Speed. The general baseline for all manipulation techniques is having the -1 Coordination, and manipulation techniques with the -1 Coordination generally start at B-rank. So while this part is fine and dandy, you seem to have designed a way around that penalty by recovering a + by dedicating both hands and your "mind" for the end result of having your technique run at equal Coordination speed.

    Occupying your hands are valid weaknesses to allowing the + in Coordination to return. However I would like to have the focusing your "Mind" be more written out. In this case, having a -1 to Perception would be the best way to offset this.


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    Constitution: B
    Stamina: B
    Speed: A
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: B
    Perception: A

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      Thigh Holster
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      Front Holster
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      Back Holster
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      Right Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 6 Chili Pepper Bombs
    • 150 ft. Steel Wire
    • 5 Red Tags
    • 20 Military Ration Pills
    • Bandage Wrap
      Left Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 3 Flash Bombs
    • 3 Smoke Bombs
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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Nozomi on Fri Mar 02, 2018 9:54 am

    Spoiler:
    Added this into the weaknesses:
    Additionally, because the user is preoccupied with controlling the petals, they suffer a '-' to their perception due to the intense focus placed on the jutsu for every tier above their intelligence they are controlling. [No debuff to their perception occurs if the power of this technique is equal to their intelligence, whereas a 4 tier difference results in -1 Tier and 1 disadvantage debuff]

    I thought it worked better to scale the debuff off the user's intelligence, since it is a mind focusing thing, and a smarter user would be able to negate the perception loss a little, whereas a dumber user would suffer even more as they focused further on it. Since it's tied to the power, the greater the amount of petals, the worse the strain on the user's mind, and thus their perception has to focus even more on the jutsu.

    Name: Petal Storm of the Mist: Thousand Cherry Blossoms
    Rank: B
    Power: E-S
    Activation Cost: Varies on Power + C rank for every cubic meter of petals created (Can use the petals created from other jutsu assuming the cost has been paid to make an equivalent amount)
    Upkeep Cost: 1 Rank below Activation + E rank for every cubic meter of petals maintaining control over
    Range: 15 meters per rank of power
    Speed: User's Coordination -1 (Each hand used for control gives a '+')
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: Bird - Snake - Dragon
    Description: The user creates or controls a stream of hardened chakra that look like petal blades. The user can control these petal blades with their hands and eyes much like Gaara's sand, except this requires actual control from the user. Sending out the hardened chakra petals through the air and controlling the path through their Chakra.

    This technique allows the user to block incoming attacks with a barrage of petal blades, and launch counter attacks from a range using that same barrage of blades. The power of this technique comes directly from the control over the blades that the user is able to create, and the higher the coordination of the user, the more petals they are able to control. For every rank of coordination the user has, they are able to control 1 Cubic Meter's worth of Petals, capping out at 5 Cubic Meter's worth at S rank. Each Cubic Meter's worth of petals controlled increases the power of this technique by a rank, any amount of petals controlled below or up to 1 cubic meter's worth resulting in D rank power, 2 cubic meter's worth being C rank power, 3 cubic meter's worth being B rank power, 4 cubic meter's worth being A rank power, and all 5 cubic meter's worth being controlled equating to S rank power.

    Should the user simply be controlling the Petal Storm with only their mind, the speed of the technique is reduced to one tier below their coordination, as their full attention is not given. However, they can increase the speed of the technique by dedicating their full control by guiding the petals with their mind and their hands, raising the speed of the technique by one advantage for each hand used to guide the petals.
    Weaknesses: The petals released from the user don't enter a range closer than 1 meter to the user, providing a small exploitable safe space from the technique close to the user. If the user is controlling the petals with both their hands and their mind together, increasing the speed of the technique, the safe space can be removed, however the user risks injuring themselves with their own attack if they can't quite perceive the speed enough to stop it from injuring them after entering that space.

    When controlling the petals at the heightened level of speed, the concentration required is intense. While not enough to cancel other maintained techniques, the user is unable to activate any new techniques while controlling the petals with both of their hands. Additionally, because the user is preoccupied with controlling the petals, they suffer a '-' to their perception due to the intense focus placed on the jutsu for every tier above their intelligence they are controlling. [No debuff to their perception occurs if the power of this technique is equal to their intelligence, whereas a 4 tier difference results in -1 Tier and 1 disadvantage debuff]

    Maintaining such a sheer volume of petals isn't without it's costs. Every Cubic Meter of petals created by this technique costs 5 Chakra to make, and is maintained by 1 chakra, meaning 25 chakra must have been spent on petals in order to have 5 Cubic meter's worth of petals in the first place, and those petals would have to be maintained for 5 chakra a post. While strong, this technique is chakra intensive at it's lowest levels, let alone the higher ones.


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    • Constitution: B
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    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence: C
    • Perception: A

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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Akame on Fri Mar 02, 2018 11:48 am

    @Nozomi wrote:
    Spoiler:
    Added this into the weaknesses:
    Additionally, because the user is preoccupied with controlling the petals, they suffer a '-' to their perception due to the intense focus placed on the jutsu for every tier above their intelligence they are controlling. [No debuff to their perception occurs if the power of this technique is equal to their intelligence, whereas a 4 tier difference results in -1 Tier and 1 disadvantage debuff]

    I thought it worked better to scale the debuff off the user's intelligence, since it is a mind focusing thing, and a smarter user would be able to negate the perception loss a little, whereas a dumber user would suffer even more as they focused further on it. Since it's tied to the power, the greater the amount of petals, the worse the strain on the user's mind, and thus their perception has to focus even more on the jutsu.

    Name: Petal Storm of the Mist: Thousand Cherry Blossoms
    Rank: B
    Power: E-S
    Activation Cost: Varies on Power + C rank for every cubic meter of petals created (Can use the petals created from other jutsu assuming the cost has been paid to make an equivalent amount)
    Upkeep Cost: 1 Rank below Activation + E rank for every cubic meter of petals maintaining control over
    Range: 15 meters per rank of power
    Speed: User's Coordination -1 (Each hand used for control gives a '+')
    Element: N/a
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Petal Dance of the Mist
    Hand Seals: Bird - Snake - Dragon
    Description: The user creates or controls a stream of hardened chakra that look like petal blades. The user can control these petal blades with their hands and eyes much like Gaara's sand, except this requires actual control from the user. Sending out the hardened chakra petals through the air and controlling the path through their Chakra.

    This technique allows the user to block incoming attacks with a barrage of petal blades, and launch counter attacks from a range using that same barrage of blades. The power of this technique comes directly from the control over the blades that the user is able to create, and the higher the coordination of the user, the more petals they are able to control. For every rank of coordination the user has, they are able to control 1 Cubic Meter's worth of Petals, capping out at 5 Cubic Meter's worth at S rank. Each Cubic Meter's worth of petals controlled increases the power of this technique by a rank, any amount of petals controlled below or up to 1 cubic meter's worth resulting in D rank power, 2 cubic meter's worth being C rank power, 3 cubic meter's worth being B rank power, 4 cubic meter's worth being A rank power, and all 5 cubic meter's worth being controlled equating to S rank power.

    Should the user simply be controlling the Petal Storm with only their mind, the speed of the technique is reduced to one tier below their coordination, as their full attention is not given. However, they can increase the speed of the technique by dedicating their full control by guiding the petals with their mind and their hands, raising the speed of the technique by one advantage for each hand used to guide the petals.
    Weaknesses: The petals released from the user don't enter a range closer than 1 meter to the user, providing a small exploitable safe space from the technique close to the user. If the user is controlling the petals with both their hands and their mind together, increasing the speed of the technique, the safe space can be removed, however the user risks injuring themselves with their own attack if they can't quite perceive the speed enough to stop it from injuring them after entering that space.

    When controlling the petals at the heightened level of speed, the concentration required is intense. While not enough to cancel other maintained techniques, the user is unable to activate any new techniques while controlling the petals with both of their hands. Additionally, because the user is preoccupied with controlling the petals, they suffer a '-' to their perception due to the intense focus placed on the jutsu for every tier above their intelligence they are controlling. [No debuff to their perception occurs if the power of this technique is equal to their intelligence, whereas a 4 tier difference results in -1 Tier and 1 disadvantage debuff]

    Maintaining such a sheer volume of petals isn't without it's costs. Every Cubic Meter of petals created by this technique costs 5 Chakra to make, and is maintained by 1 chakra, meaning 25 chakra must  have been spent on petals in order to have 5 Cubic meter's worth of petals in the first place, and those petals would have to be maintained for 5 chakra a post. While strong, this technique is chakra intensive at it's lowest levels, let alone the higher ones.


    Considering all my concerns were fixed, and it looks to me as if Masuyo's were addressed as well, I'm going to tentatively approve this. Masuyo can weigh in on anything he might have as a concern, if anything, but I see no further issues. Approved.


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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Masuyo Kaede on Fri Apr 13, 2018 8:28 pm


    Name: Oculus Enhancement
    Rank: C rank
    Power: C rank
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: Suiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: N/a
    Parent Technique: N/a
    Hand Seals: Tiger - Bird - Dog
    Description: The user, by flowing Suiton Chakra into their ocular nerves, are able to increase their perceptive abilities as if wearing a lense. The filter of Suiton Chakra acts to help more clearly amplify the sight of the user, and as such only increases the perceptive clues of the user's sight. This increase is the equivalent of a tier of perception.
    Weaknesses: Bright lights such as those caused by flash bombs can cause a glare in the lense that temporarily blind the user if they stare at them directly

    This needs one quickie of an edit.

    This particular technique requires an additional drawback and a more defined version of the one you have posted. This is because:

    1.) You're attempting to achieve a reduced upkeep.
    2.) The nature of the technique itself is amplifying light, which will have your current weakness as a requirement in itself.
    3.) Having the Water element act as a magnifying glass to increase visual perception somewhat overextends the boundaries of the nature. This is fine, as it is very creative, however it would need a form of drawback.

    As your current weakness stands, it's very ordinary for a bright light such as a flash bomb to cause temporary blindness. Here is my suggestion to reinforce the current weakness to make it great enough to stand alone:

     "When in brightly lit spaces or experiencing a sudden shifts of light (such as those caused by flash bombs, combustion, or explosions) the positives of the technique becomes negatives for one post after the effects have ceased."

    This is to simulate the effects of, for example, coming inside a dark house after spending hours outside midday in summer, or staring at your phone in your room at night and then turning the screen off, however on a greatly more amplified level. This edit makes you also susceptible to bright spaces in general as well as defines the consequences of the drawback and gives it a length of time it will affect you as the user.


    You must add on an additional weakness to excuse Water being used as a lens to grant you that boost. Here is a suggestion for that:

    Tack on a concentration drawback, similar to the one we have for Shadow Clones and various Genjutsu. Maintaining a thin film of water over your eyes that amplifies your vision and doesn't make it blurry is something that would require precise chakra control. Something such as a heavy or direct impact should be able to break your concentration requiring a reactivation. This will also explain the minimalist approach, by maintaining such a thin veil of water


    Let me know if you have any questions regarding the technique or need for edit.


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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Nozomi on Tue Jul 31, 2018 7:35 pm

    Name: Oculus Enhancement
    Rank: C rank
    Power: C rank
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: Suiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: N/a
    Parent Technique: N/a
    Hand Seals: Tiger - Bird - Dog
    Description: The user, by flowing Suiton Chakra into their ocular nerves, are able to increase their perceptive abilities by using the suiton chakra to assist in the speed at which their bio-electrical impulses convert and process information into images. This increase of information processing is the equivalent of a tier of perception, as she has a few more moments to process what she sees and react to them.
    Weaknesses: Since the suiton chakra serves to transfer electrical impulses from the eyes to the brain, if a Raiton technique specifically hits the user in the face, it overloads her brain and forces her to cancel the technique, as the Raiton has a pathway directly to her brain.

    I changed it up a little bit to fit my original vision for the technique. Like techniques such as LRA, which overloads the electrical impulses in the brain to make the body move and react faster, I decided to make this an electrical impulse related technique, although using Suiton rather than Raiton to help the pathway connection a little smoother and faster.

    I included a similar concentration type drawback, although made it Raiton specific, and more towards the head, because it makes sense to have that if you are *requiring* a drawback to increase my perception, but since I increased the price to a normal C rank technique, I didn't think I needed a drawback as much as originally, since this is the base-line of what a C rank technique should be able to boost *without* a drawback as per the guidelines.

    Hence I made the technique Raiton weak, but only directly on a face shot, so it isn't useless in combat, as it was supposed to be a combat oriented technique.


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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Masuyo Kaede on Fri Aug 03, 2018 8:43 am

    Since the suiton chakra serves to transfer electrical impulses from the eyes to the brain, if a Raiton technique specifically hits the user in the face, it overloads her brain and forces her to cancel the technique, as the Raiton has a pathway directly to her brain.

    I don't feel this is a suitable drawback. Getting hit directly by Raiton, in the face for that matter, to simply force reactivation is too weak.


    Not to mention you've rewritten the technique to the point where you overextended the boundaries of Water. Having it operate as a lens was logical, but influencing your ocular nerves " to assist in the speed at which their bio-electrical impulses convert and process information into images" with JUST water is too much.


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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Nozomi on Tue Aug 07, 2018 10:50 am

    Name: Oculus Enhancement
    Rank: C rank
    Power: C rank
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: Suiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: N/a
    Parent Technique: N/a
    Hand Seals: Tiger - Bird - Dog
    Description: The user, by flowing Suiton Chakra into their ocular nerves, are able to increase their perceptive abilities as if wearing a lense. The filter of Suiton Chakra acts to help more clearly amplify the sight of the user, and as such only increases the perceptive clues of the user's sight. This increase is the equivalent of a tier of perception.
    Weaknesses: When experiencing a sudden shifts of light from the adjusted to light of normal surroundings (such as those caused by flash bombs, combustion, or explosions) the positives of the technique becomes negatives for one post after the effects have ceased.

    I changed up the wording a bit on your proposed weakness, as it originally said "Brightly lit area" and people could argue that I could never use it outside. Instead, a radical change from a room or area in which you've already acclimated to in which more light is introduced is my proposal, as it still conveys the whole "Blinded by glare" thing.

    Speaking of which, as someone who wears glasses, contacts, and frequently looks through binoculars, glare is negligible, nearly unnoticeable, and I think requiring a glare caveat is a stupid drawback to begin with, as explosions and flashbangs already blind you temporarily, and wouldn't persist to a negative following because increased glare. I would *like* to just not have the drawback, as I'm paying a normal chakra cost for what a technique of this rank would allow for, with a guideline following buff, and has no other added benefit to it.


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    Re: Nozomi's Registry

    Post by Ryuko on Thu Aug 23, 2018 7:43 pm

    @Nozomi wrote:
    Name: Oculus Enhancement
    Rank: C rank
    Power: C rank
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/a
    Element: Suiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: N/a
    Parent Technique: N/a
    Hand Seals: Tiger - Bird - Dog
    Description: The user, by flowing Suiton Chakra into their ocular nerves, are able to increase their perceptive abilities as if wearing a lense. The filter of Suiton Chakra acts to help more clearly amplify the sight of the user, and as such only increases the perceptive clues of the user's sight. This increase is the equivalent of a tier of perception.
    Weaknesses: When experiencing a sudden shifts of light from the adjusted to light of normal surroundings (such as those caused by flash bombs, combustion, or explosions) the positives of the technique becomes negatives for one post after the effects have ceased.

    I changed up the wording a bit on your proposed weakness, as it originally said "Brightly lit area" and people could argue that I could never use it outside. Instead, a radical change from a room or area in which you've already acclimated to in which more light is introduced is my proposal, as it still conveys the whole "Blinded by glare" thing.

    Speaking of which, as someone who wears glasses, contacts, and frequently looks through binoculars, glare is negligible, nearly unnoticeable, and I think requiring a glare caveat is a stupid drawback to begin with, as explosions and flashbangs already blind you temporarily, and wouldn't persist to a negative following because increased glare. I would *like* to just not have the drawback, as I'm paying a normal chakra cost for what a technique of this rank would allow for, with a guideline following buff, and has no other added benefit to it.

    Approved


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