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    Kaori's Custom Jutsu

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    Kaori
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    Kaori's Custom Jutsu

    Post by Kaori on Sun Nov 05, 2017 11:20 am

    Name: Poison Liquid
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 0-1m
    Speed: D
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Chemistry & Ijutsu
    Classification: Village Exclusive - Sunagakure
    Requirements: The user must have created the poison they are spewing or have sufficient analyzed or learned another poison in order to reproduce it within their body. The poison must be able to take a liquid form.
    Parent Technique: Poison Mist
    Hand Seals: Ram
    Description: Chakra is kneaded within the body and transformed into a chemical substance (specifically a poison that the user already knows well), which then comes out of the mouth. The liquid poison can either be spit from the mouth or can be dripped onto something. Each use has the strength of one dose. The poison expires within the topic. When learning this technique you must learn it with each different poison you make. The rank of the poison being used can be equal to the technique rank or lower.
    Weaknesses: This can only be used with liquid poisons and has a very short range.

    Name: Medicine Liquid
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 15
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Chemistry & Ijutsu
    Classification: Village Exclusive - Sunagakure
    Requirements: The user must have created the medicine they are perspiring or have sufficient analyzed or learned another medicine in order to reproduce it within their body. The medicine must be able to take a liquid form (no pills).
    Parent Technique: Poison Mist
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description: Chakra is kneaded within the body and transformed into a chemical substance (specifically a medicine that the user already knows well), which then perspires out onto the hands of the user. Each use has the strength of one dose. When learning this technique you must learn it with each different medicine you make. The rank of the medicine being used can be equal to the technique rank or lower. The medicine expires within the topic.
    Weaknesses: This can only be used with liquid medicines and has a very short range.


    Last edited by Kaori on Sun Nov 05, 2017 2:45 pm; edited 2 times in total


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    Re: Kaori's Custom Jutsu

    Post by Masuyo Kaede on Sun Nov 05, 2017 12:50 pm

    @Kaori wrote:Name: Poison Liquid
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: C
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 0-1m
    Speed: D
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Chemistry & Ijutsu
    Classification: Village Exclusive - Sunagakure
    Requirements: The user must have created the poison they are spewing or have sufficient analyzed or learned another poison in order to reproduce it within their body. The poison must be able to take a liquid form.
    Parent Technique: Poison Mist
    Hand Seals: Ram
    Description: Chakra is kneaded within the body and transformed into a chemical substance (specifically a poison that the user already knows well), which then comes out of the mouth. The liquid poison can either be spit from the mouth or can be dripped onto something. Each use has the strength of one dose.
    Weaknesses: This can only be used with liquid poisons and has a very short range.

    Change the Activation Cost to a B-rank value.

    Also use numeric value instead of letter. So a B-rank activation will be 10.

    When learning this technique you must learn it with each different poison you make. So for every different strand of liquid poison you plan to use with this technique, you must "re-train" it for that particular poison.

    Note the poison expires within the topic.

    Also note the rank of the poison being used can be equal to the technique rank or lower.

    Name: Medicine Liquid
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: C
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Chemistry & Ijutsu
    Classification: Village Exclusive - Sunagakure
    Requirements: The user must have created the medicine they are perspiring or have sufficient analyzed or learned another medicine in order to reproduce it within their body. The medicine must be able to take a liquid form (no pills).
    Parent Technique: Poison Mist
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description: Chakra is kneaded within the body and transformed into a chemical substance (specifically a medicine that the user already knows well), which then perspires out onto the hands of the user. Each use has the strength of one dose.
    Weaknesses: This can only be used with liquid medicines and has a very short range.

    The same as the other technique. Also, because medicines are quite powerful and more complex I would need you to amp up the rank and cost to A-rank.


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    Re: Kaori's Custom Jutsu

    Post by Kaori on Sun Nov 05, 2017 1:54 pm

    Edited!


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    Re: Kaori's Custom Jutsu

    Post by Masuyo Kaede on Sun Nov 05, 2017 2:29 pm

    Still gotta edit in the Medicine Liquid that it expires within the topic :v


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    Re: Kaori's Custom Jutsu

    Post by Kaori on Sun Nov 05, 2017 2:45 pm

    Oops >.> Fixed!


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    Re: Kaori's Custom Jutsu

    Post by Masuyo Kaede on Sun Nov 05, 2017 3:20 pm

    @Kaori wrote:Name: Poison Liquid
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 0-1m
    Speed: D
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Chemistry & Ijutsu
    Classification: Village Exclusive - Sunagakure
    Requirements: The user must have created the poison they are spewing or have sufficient analyzed or learned another poison in order to reproduce it within their body. The poison must be able to take a liquid form.
    Parent Technique: Poison Mist
    Hand Seals: Ram
    Description: Chakra is kneaded within the body and transformed into a chemical substance (specifically a poison that the user already knows well), which then comes out of the mouth. The liquid poison can either be spit from the mouth or can be dripped onto something. Each use has the strength of one dose. The poison expires within the topic. When learning this technique you must learn it with each different poison you make. The rank of the poison being used can be equal to the technique rank or lower.
    Weaknesses: This can only be used with liquid poisons and has a very short range.

    Name: Medicine Liquid
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 15
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Chemistry & Ijutsu
    Classification: Village Exclusive - Sunagakure
    Requirements: The user must have created the medicine they are perspiring or have sufficient analyzed or learned another medicine in order to reproduce it within their body. The medicine must be able to take a liquid form (no pills).
    Parent Technique: Poison Mist
    Hand Seals: Bird
    Description: Chakra is kneaded within the body and transformed into a chemical substance (specifically a medicine that the user already knows well), which then perspires out onto the hands of the user. Each use has the strength of one dose. When learning this technique you must learn it with each different medicine you make. The rank of the medicine being used can be equal to the technique rank or lower. The medicine expires within the topic.
    Weaknesses: This can only be used with liquid medicines and has a very short range.

    Approved


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    Re: Kaori's Custom Jutsu

    Post by Kaori on Sun Nov 05, 2017 11:19 pm

    Name: Cleanse
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Within reach
    Speed: -
    Element: Yoton
    Skill: Ijutsu
    Classification: Open
    Requirements: C-Rank Intelligence
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ram
    Description: The user’s hands emit a green light, similarl to the mystical palm technique, and when put over someone effected by a poison of C-rank or lower, will be healed and cleansed of the poison’s effects (like a D-rank medicine). This takes one post.
    Weaknesses: Only works with poisons and cannot be used to treat even minor injuries such as small cuts and bruises.

    Name: Chakra Poisoning
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: A
    Element: Yoton/Fūton
    Skill: Ijutsu/Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C-rank coordination and some form of projectile (senbon, kunai, etc.)
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ox -> Dog -> Tiger
    Description: The user coats a projectile with a type of chakra molded from ijutsu, which specifically effects the target’s chakra. It poisons the target’s entire chakra system, causing widespread pain and an internal burning sensation like that of scalding water. It causes internal burns. The object must puncture the skin for the chakra to seep in. The jutsu only lasts for one post. The projectile is launched with a burst of fūton.
    Weaknesses: Range is rather short and can only be applied to small projectiles (kunai knife or smaller).


    Last edited by Kaori on Wed Nov 08, 2017 4:57 am; edited 4 times in total


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    Re: Kaori's Custom Jutsu

    Post by The Founder on Mon Nov 06, 2017 11:34 am

    Add a C-Tier Intelligence requirement to Cleanse; as that's the required level for creating a D-Rank Medicine.

    How long does the chakra poison last when on the projectile? I'm assuming it's one use only, but there will also need to be a time limit on how long it can be applied to a weapon without being used before it expires. Also, does it affect the entire chakra system, or just the spot hit by the projectile?
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    Re: Kaori's Custom Jutsu

    Post by Kaori on Mon Nov 06, 2017 1:32 pm

    Fixed Cleanse

    It effects the whole chakra system and the entire jutsu lasts one post from the moment it’s activated to the moment the post is over, so someone would have to use it right away instead of applying it one post and using it another (edited all that in.)


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    Re: Kaori's Custom Jutsu

    Post by Masuyo Kaede on Wed Nov 08, 2017 4:42 am

    @Kaori wrote:Name: Cleanse
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Within reach
    Speed: -
    Element: Yoton
    Skill: Ijutsu
    Classification: Open
    Requirements: C-Rank Intelligence
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ram
    Description: The user’s hands emit a green light, similarl to the mystical palm technique, and when put over someone effected by a poison of C-rank or lower, will be healed and cleansed of the poison’s effects (like a D-rank medicine).
    Weaknesses: Only works with poisons and cannot be used to treat even minor injuries such as small cuts and bruises.

    Note this takes an entire post.


    Name: Chakra Poisoning
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: A
    Element: Yoton/Fūton
    Skill: Ijutsu/Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C-rank coordination and some form of projectile (senbon, kunai, etc.)
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ox -> Dog -> Tiger
    Description: The user coats a projectile with a type of chakra molded from ijutsu, which specifically effects the target’s chakra. It poisons the target’s entire chakra system, causing widespread pain and an internal burning sensation like that of scalding water. It causes internal second degree burns. The jutsu only lasts for one post. The projectile is launched with a burst of fūton.
    Weaknesses: Range is rather short and can only be applied to small projectiles (kunai knife or smaller).

    I feel like the internal burning damage should be restricted to a small area around where the damage is done. Causing an entire 2nd degree burn throughout the entire body will be very one-shotty.

    Also the 2nd degree burn is subjective to the target's Constitution. Just state the technique causes burns. Seeing as it's B-rank and foreign chakra entering the opponent's body should tell enough about the damage done.

    I'm also assuming this requires the item to enter the body to work as well. Contact with the chakra will not yield the effects.


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    Re: Kaori's Custom Jutsu

    Post by Kaori on Wed Nov 08, 2017 4:57 am

    Edited Smile


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    Re: Kaori's Custom Jutsu

    Post by Masuyo Kaede on Thu Nov 09, 2017 4:28 pm

    @Kaori wrote:Name: Cleanse
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Within reach
    Speed: -
    Element: Yoton
    Skill: Ijutsu
    Classification: Open
    Requirements: C-Rank Intelligence
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ram
    Description: The user’s hands emit a green light, similarl to the mystical palm technique, and when put over someone effected by a poison of C-rank or lower, will be healed and cleansed of the poison’s effects (like a D-rank medicine). This takes one post.
    Weaknesses: Only works with poisons and cannot be used to treat even minor injuries such as small cuts and bruises.

    Name: Chakra Poisoning
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: A
    Element: Yoton/Fūton
    Skill: Ijutsu/Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: C-rank coordination and some form of projectile (senbon, kunai, etc.)
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ox -> Dog -> Tiger
    Description: The user coats a projectile with a type of chakra molded from ijutsu, which specifically effects the target’s chakra. It poisons the target’s entire chakra system, causing widespread pain and an internal burning sensation like that of scalding water. It causes internal burns. The object must puncture the skin for the chakra to seep in. The jutsu only lasts for one post. The projectile is launched with a burst of fūton.
    Weaknesses: Range is rather short and can only be applied to small projectiles (kunai knife or smaller).


    Approved


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    Constitution: B
    Stamina: C
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    Coordination: B
    Intelligence: C
    Perception: B

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    • 3 Smoke Bombs
    • 50 Caltrops
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