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PostSubject: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Fri Nov 10, 2017 4:25 am

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Activation Cost:
Upkeep Cost:
Range:
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill:
Classification:
Requirements:
Parent Technique:
Hand Seals: -
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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Fri Nov 10, 2017 1:35 pm

@Halcyon Yomi wrote:
Name: Rising Side Kick
Rank: D
Power: C
Activation Cost: 1
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: Melee
Speed: N/A
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: -
Description:
The user swiftly launches their leg from standstil position into an at most 6-7' high side-swipe kick. While using this technique, if the user has the taijutsu skill, this technique's power becomes C rank as a display of their mastery of the ways of taijutsu.
Weaknesses: -

Name: Rising Scissor Kick
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: 1
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: melee
Speed: N/A
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: -
Description:
The user raises on leg 180° into the air from standstill, dropping said leg/foot onto an opponent. This can also be used while jumping. If the user has the taijutsu skill, this technique's power becomes C rank as a display of their mastery of the ways of taijutsu.
Weaknesses:-

Name: Rising Defense Kick
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: melee
Speed:N/A
Element: -
Skill:Taijutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Taijutsu
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: -
Description:
When facing a low ranked (D at most) attack or technique of a solid nature (won't work on raiton for instance) the user rather than defending with their hands, raise their leg and use the soles of their shoes/feet to defend and redirect the attack to the ground.
Weaknesses: -

Approved.

For the Jigoku Style you are boosting two tiers (one for str the other for coor) that's an S Rank boost which means its pretty powerful. It will need a higher rank and chakra cost.

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  • Strength: D
  • Constitution: D
  • Stamina: A
  • Speed: D
  • Coordination: S
  • Intelligence: A
  • Perception: S
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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Fri Nov 10, 2017 1:49 pm

removed jigoku for now...needs some extra time to figure that out

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Mon Nov 13, 2017 4:31 pm

retry on jigoku no ken

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Mon Nov 13, 2017 7:04 pm

It needs a description on the method of fighting that includes the reason those boosts are there and why it can be used with just Tai or just Ijutsu. Higher requirements do some good for making a technique more powerful than it would be without them, but the difference shown here is too much. By having both Skills, you would be getting an S-Rank level Tai Style booster at a rank less cost than normal. That's too much of a perk for this kind of requirement to apply to.

You could make the Con Debuff apply whenever both boosts are active, but other than that, you'll probably have to increase the cost and go for another aspect to represent the dual nature of the style. It's hard to offer suggestions when there's no description for how it works.
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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Wed Nov 15, 2017 2:02 pm

think I nailed it this time

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Fri Nov 17, 2017 6:38 pm

@Halcyon Yomi wrote:

Name:Water Release: Marine Battle Formation Jutsu
Rank: B
Power: A
Activation Cost: 15
Upkeep Cost: 5
Range: 15m radius
Speed: A
Element: Suiton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Existing water source
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals:Boar → Dog → Horse → Tiger
Description:
After making the necessary handseals, the user can direct a large spiraling stream of water into any direction they desire, letting it crash upon or against opponents from any desired angle or direction.
Weaknesses: Can only be used when in close proximity of a pre-existing water source such as a lake or a river. Raiton techniques of C rank or higher can dissolve the entire stream and even electrocute the user with a +1 power.

This sounds sorta like Water Release: Water Fang Bullet, which is a canon water technique already registered in the library. However, it is approved.

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Name: Jigoku no Ken [Hell's Fist]
Rank: B
Power: A
Activation Cost: -
Upkeep Cost: 10
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: B rank strength/ C rank strength with either Taijutsu or Ijutsu skill/ D rank strength when user has both Taijutsu and Ijutsu skill.
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: -
Description:
A Taijutsu school that leans heavily on the skills and chakra control usually found in practicioners of Ijutsu, the Jgoku no Ken utilizes precise and unrelenting strikes and kicks with minimal movement and maximum output, combining the strength of taijutsu with the precision and coordination of Ijutsu. When utilizing the Jigoku no Ken, it grants ++ in strength and coordination.
Weaknesses:Users that do not have both taijutsu and Ijutsu, only get a + boost to Strength and Coordination.

Seeing as this combines Taijutsu and Ijutsu, it could yield a greater effect. You can combine the paralysis effects of Serpent Jab to this fighting style overall, and then register Serpent Jab as a technique that will actually grant you a statistical benefit, like a buff to Coordination and/or Perception.

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Name: Serpent Jab
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: C rank coordination
Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken
Hand Seals: -
Description:
A swift straightforward jab with extended fingers, applied on an opponent's pressure points. when used twice on a single limb in one post, if succesful, the targeted limb will be paralyzed for one post.
Weaknesses: -


Assuming you don't want to make any of the changes I suggested, these can all be approved.


If not, feel free to make the edits and bump :p

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Constitution: B
Stamina: C
Speed: B
Coordination: B
Intelligence: C
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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Tue Nov 21, 2017 10:15 am

1.Water Release: Marine Battle Formation Jutsu, it's an actual jutsu on the wikia and used in the anime. the dragon fang bullet doesn't need someone to direct it with their hands and just their mind, that's the difference.

2. Jigoku no Ken [Hell's Fist]: as seen in previous comments, this technique had to be toned down, so "upping" the boost would make it a discussion for staff again...which might be a good idea in time, but for now I'll keep it as is.

3. Serpent Jab: I actually think in it's current form it might be better as a D rank with D rank cost, any thoughts?

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Wed Nov 22, 2017 2:12 am

@Halcyon Yomi wrote:
1.Water Release: Marine Battle Formation Jutsu, it's an actual jutsu on the wikia and used in the anime. the dragon fang bullet doesn't need someone to direct it with their hands and just their mind, that's the difference.

2.  Jigoku no Ken [Hell's Fist]: as seen in previous comments, this technique had to be toned down, so "upping" the boost would make it a discussion for staff again...which might be a good idea in time, but for now I'll keep it as is.

3. Serpent Jab: I actually think in it's current form it might be better as a D rank with D rank cost, any thoughts?

1. If that's the case, and seeing as you had the classification as Open, I will add it to the library.

2. I would not suggest upping the stat boost. My suggestion was to apply the paralysis effect, like you mentioned in Serpent's Jab, for the fighting style in general. So using this fighting style you can induce paralysis on an opponent after successful, consecutive attacks.

3. As for this I suggested this technique can grant a stat boost. Something like "One tier to Coordination for two strikes with the fingers." This will stack the boosts granted by the original fighting style, as well as carry over the paralysis effects.

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Wed Nov 22, 2017 2:04 pm

battle formation removed due to library inclusion (just need to c/p it when I want it now xD)

jigoku no ken edited with extra effect

serpent jab given its own effect and temporary stacking boost.

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Fri Nov 24, 2017 4:56 am

@Halcyon Yomi wrote:

Name: Jigoku no Ken [Hell's Fist]
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost: -
Upkeep Cost: 10
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: B rank strength/ C rank strength with either Taijutsu or Ijutsu skill/ D rank strength when user has both Taijutsu and Ijutsu skill.
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: -
Description:
A Taijutsu school that leans heavily on the skills and chakra control usually found in practicioners of Ijutsu, the Jgoku no Ken utilizes precise and unrelenting strikes and kicks with minimal movement and maximum output, combining the strength of taijutsu with the precision and coordination of Ijutsu. When utilizing the Jigoku no Ken, it grants ++ in strength and coordination.

Whenever someone using this style hits someone twice on a limb in a single post, that limb will be paralyzed for one post.

Weaknesses:Users that do not have both taijutsu and Ijutsu, only get a + boost to Strength and Coordination.

Name: Serpent Jab
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: C rank coordination
Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken
Hand Seals: -
Description:
A triple swift straightforward jab with extended fingers with a boost of +1 tier to coordination while using this technique.
Weaknesses: -

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Fri Dec 15, 2017 5:09 am

few new techniques ready to be looked at

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Fri Dec 15, 2017 9:00 pm

Please post these and any future techniques in a new post. Then they will be checked by staff. Thank you!

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Fri Dec 15, 2017 9:21 pm

If you prefer a less organized and cluttered registry, I'll comply...for now. I point out that this system is already being used in crafting and has so far been greatly accepted by other mods due to simplicity.

Name: Front Stance
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken
Hand Seals: -
Description:
This is not so much a technique and more a battle preperation, allowing the user to utilize their offensive capabilities to a maximum. They flex their muscles and bend slightly through one knee, pulling back a closed fist to their side while holding one hand in an open palm in front of them. For three posts after using this stance, the user's strength is boosted with ++.
Weaknesses: During these 3 posts the user can't use any defensive techniques such as barriers or walls.

Name: Back Stance
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken
Hand Seals: -
Description:
This is not so much a technique and more a battle preperation, allowing the user to utilize their defensive capabilities to a maximum. They tense their muscles and bend slightly through one knee, holding their two hands with open palm loosely in front of themselves, allowing them to react in a near perfect defensive way to anything thrown at them. For three posts after using this stance, the user's coordination is boosted with ++.
Weaknesses: During these 3 posts the user can't use any purely offensive non-taijutsu techniques.

Name: Iaigiri no Ken
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken - Front Stance
Hand Seals: -
Description:
This technique can only be utilized when having the Jigoku no Ken-Front Stance active, stretching out their fingers and using them like a swordsman would use their swords, this technique uses a swift and surprising slash to mercilessly strike an opponent. Boosts strength for one tier during the slash and if there's a difference of two tiers between the user's strength and the opponent's constitution during the slash, it will be able to cut through C rank quality armor without issue.
Weaknesses: Must have Front Stance Active

Name: Flowing Force
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken - Back Stance
Hand Seals: -
Description: This technique can only be utilized when having the Jigoku no Ken-Back Stance active, the user can intercept and swiftly deal with incoming taijutsu techniques by simply redirecting the force with their open palm hands, allowing for openings in the opponent's form ready to be exploited with a counter attack. Coordination is boosted by a tier during the use of this technique.

Weaknesses: Must have Back Stance active

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Fri Dec 15, 2017 10:31 pm

Front Stance and Back Stance are things you can do in the base style and don't really do anything additional to enhance what the style does. Gonna have to deny both of those.




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Name: Iaigiri no Ken
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken - Front Stance
Hand Seals: -
Description:
This technique can only be utilized when having the Jigoku no Ken-Front Stance active, stretching out their fingers and using them like a swordsman would use their swords, this technique uses a swift and surprising slash to mercilessly strike an opponent. Boosts strength for one tier during the slash and if there's a difference of two tiers between the user's strength and the opponent's constitution during the slash, it will be able to cut through C rank quality armor without issue.
Weaknesses: Must have Front Stance Active

Gonna say no to the armor part of this, as that would be determined by comparing armor durability to Strength and has nothing to do with the target's Constitution. Also take out any mentions of Front Stance and this should be good to go.



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Name: Flowing Force
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken - Back Stance
Hand Seals: -
Description: This technique can only be utilized when having the Jigoku no Ken-Back Stance active, the user can intercept and swiftly deal with incoming taijutsu techniques by simply redirecting the force with their open palm hands, allowing for openings in the opponent's form ready to be exploited with a counter attack. Coordination is boosted by a tier during the use of this technique.

Weaknesses: Must have Back Stance active

Same as the above technique, remove any mentions of Back Stance and you'll be good to go with this one.

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Sat Dec 16, 2017 1:26 pm

Name: Iaigiri no Ken
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken - Front Stance
Hand Seals: -
Description:
This technique can only be utilized when having the Jigoku no Ken-Front Stance active, stretching out their fingers and using them like a swordsman would use their swords, this technique uses a swift and surprising slash to mercilessly strike an opponent. Boosts strength for one tier during the slash.
Weaknesses:-

Name: Flowing Force
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken - Back Stance
Hand Seals: -
Description: This technique can only be utilized when having the Jigoku no Ken-Back Stance active, the user can intercept and swiftly deal with incoming taijutsu techniques by simply redirecting the force with their open palm hands, allowing for openings in the opponent's form ready to be exploited with a counter attack. Coordination is boosted by a tier during the use of this technique.

Weaknesses: -

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Sat Dec 16, 2017 10:55 pm

Both of these still have Front/Back Stance in the descriptions and are still listed as a parent technique.

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Sun Dec 17, 2017 6:16 am

Name: Iaigiri no Ken
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken
Hand Seals: -
Description:
This technique can only be utilized when having the Jigoku no Ken active, stretching out their fingers and using them like a swordsman would use their swords, this technique uses a swift and surprising slash to mercilessly strike an opponent. Boosts strength for one tier during the slash.
Weaknesses:-

Name: Flowing Force
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken
Hand Seals: -
Description: This technique can only be utilized when having the Jigoku no Ken active, the user can intercept and swiftly deal with incoming taijutsu techniques by simply redirecting the force with their open palm hands, allowing for openings in the opponent's form ready to be exploited with a counter attack. Coordination is boosted by a tier during the use of this technique.

Weaknesses: -

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Sun Dec 17, 2017 10:35 am

@Halcyon Yomi wrote:
Name: Iaigiri no Ken
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken
Hand Seals: -
Description:
This technique can only be utilized when having the Jigoku no Ken active, stretching out their fingers and using them like a swordsman would use their swords, this technique uses a swift and surprising slash to mercilessly strike an opponent. Boosts strength for one tier during the slash.
Weaknesses:-

Name: Flowing Force
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken
Hand Seals: -
Description: This technique can only be utilized when having the Jigoku no Ken active, the user can intercept and swiftly deal with incoming taijutsu techniques by simply redirecting the force with their open palm hands, allowing for openings in the opponent's form ready to be exploited with a counter attack. Coordination is boosted by a tier during the use of this technique.

Weaknesses: -

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Mon Dec 25, 2017 3:35 pm

Name: Superior Pressure Strike
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Intelligence B rank
Parent Technique: Pressure Strike
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Description: Just as with the regular Pressure Strike Technique, the user presses their thumbs upon the nodes of chakra near the muscles where they want to strengthen their chakra flow through. By pressuring these points/nodes, the user can greatly enhance the capacity an effectiveness of their muscles. This technique increases either speed, strength or constitution for three posts by one tier.

This technique can be used three times consecutively in one post.

Weaknesses: when a user uses this technique more than once in a single post, the user's speed gets lowered by 1 tier for 3 posts. (If the user consecutively uses it twice or more, this penalty occurs after the technique's positive effect wears off)

Name: Chrysantemum
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: C rank coordination
Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken
Hand Seals: -
Description:
This technique can only be used with Jigoku no ken active, with the user performing a double upward palm strike with their wrists touching each other. This technique is good at breaking an opponent's guard and allowing for a swift follow up. During the use of this technique, the user gains a momentary boost in strength of 1 tier.
Weaknesses: -

Name: Twisting Chrysantemum
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: C rank strength
Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken
Hand Seals: -
Description: Can only be used when Jigoku no Ken is active, the user performs a forward double palm thrust with both wrists together, yet at the point of impact the user twists their arms, allowing the force of their attack to flow in a circular motion when connecting to an opponent with the ability to unbalance their foe in doing so. During the palm strike, the user gains 1 tier in strength.
Weaknesses: -

Name: Chrysantemum Dance
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Taijutsu/Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: C rank coordination
Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken
Hand Seals: -
Description:
Can only be used when Jigoku no Ken is active, the user starts sliding their feet across the ground, almost as if they were performing a kata or martial arts dance around their opponent, allowing for swift reaction to any Taijutsu technique used by the opponent. This technique allows for a boost of one tier coordination for two posts.
Weaknesses: -

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Fri Dec 29, 2017 9:34 am

Superior Pressure Strike- This technique can potentially boost up to three stats by up to two tiers each for a cost of 30 points. This would be okay if our stamina system didn't have a steep cost for increasing boosts: 5 points for a tier, 10 points for a tier+, etc.. So to keep from flat out beating the Stamina system, you can do one of a few things:
1. Make three separate versions of this, one for each stat, with a maximum boost of one tier or with a matching stat drop for any boosts over the first tier. You can make the costs higher to lessen the drop or the drop higher to lessen the costs; a matching drop to any boost generally means that the boost doesn't cost you anything extra.
2. Adjust the cost in such a way that stacking this technique won't beat the stamina system.
3. Make the Speed reduction match all boosts over the first tier of the first stat. You could add in other stats to make it less detrimental to your Speed; the important thing is that the only unmatched boost is one tier. Again, you can play with costs and drops to find a suitable balance for you; a boost with an equally matching drop is generally free.

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Sun Jan 07, 2018 10:55 am

Name: Superior Pressure Strike
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Intelligence B rank
Parent Technique: Pressure Strike
Hand Seals: -
Description: Just as with the regular Pressure Strike Technique, the user presses their thumbs upon the nodes of chakra near the muscles where they want to strengthen their chakra flow through. By pressuring these points/nodes, the user can greatly enhance the capacity an effectiveness of their muscles. This technique increases either speed, strength or constitution for three posts by one tier.

This technique can be used three times consecutively in one post, but only for a single stat (you can either increase speed, strength or constitution, you can't use it to boost more than one stat)

Weaknesses: when a user uses this technique more than once in a single post, the user's speed gets lowered by 1 tier for 3 posts. (If the user consecutively uses it twice or more, this penalty occurs after the technique's positive effect wears off)


-This technique can actually only boost one stat with up to three tiers when used consecutively. You are basically using the technique three times in a single post, so it's actually completely according to the tech rules. However, if necessary... I could make it a one use/fight kind of technique?

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Mon Jan 08, 2018 11:00 pm

@Halcyon Yomi wrote:
Name: Superior Pressure Strike
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Intelligence B rank
Parent Technique: Pressure Strike
Hand Seals: -
Description: Just as with the regular Pressure Strike Technique, the user presses their thumbs upon the nodes of chakra near the muscles where they want to strengthen their chakra flow through. By pressuring these points/nodes, the user can greatly enhance the capacity an effectiveness of their muscles. This technique increases either speed, strength or constitution for three posts by one tier.

This technique can be used three times consecutively in one post, but only for a single stat (you can either increase speed, strength or constitution, you can't use it to boost more than one stat)

Weaknesses: when a user uses this technique more than once in a single post, the user's speed gets lowered by 1 tier for 3 posts. (If the user consecutively uses it twice or more, this penalty occurs after the technique's positive effect wears off)


-This technique can actually only boost one stat with up to three tiers when used consecutively. You are basically using the technique three times in a single post, so it's actually completely according to the tech rules. However, if necessary... I could make it a one use/fight kind of technique?

Keep in mind that there is a cap of two tiers for generic boosts. Your stat won't be increased three tiers above its amount unless you designate one of the boosts as unique.

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  • Constitution: D
  • Stamina: A
  • Speed: D
  • Coordination: S
  • Intelligence: A
  • Perception: S
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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Tue Jan 09, 2018 1:20 am

Name: Superior Pressure Strike
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Intelligence B rank
Parent Technique: Pressure Strike
Hand Seals: -
Description: Just as with the regular Pressure Strike Technique, the user presses their thumbs upon the nodes of chakra near the muscles where they want to strengthen their chakra flow through. By pressuring these points/nodes, the user can greatly enhance the capacity an effectiveness of their muscles. This technique increases either speed, strength or constitution for three posts with ++.

This technique can be used three times consecutively in one post.

Weaknesses: -

Edited the technique so that it only has ++ rather than a full tier, making the max boost 2 tiers and removing the weakness in the process since the weakness was only there to compensate for the big boost and to make it "weaker" than stuff like eight gates, etc...

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PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Wed Jan 10, 2018 4:54 pm

@Halcyon Yomi wrote:
Name: Superior Pressure Strike
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Personal
Requirements: Intelligence B rank
Parent Technique: Pressure Strike
Hand Seals: -
Description: Just as with the regular Pressure Strike Technique, the user presses their thumbs upon the nodes of chakra near the muscles where they want to strengthen their chakra flow through. By pressuring these points/nodes, the user can greatly enhance the capacity an effectiveness of their muscles. This technique increases either speed, strength or constitution for three posts with ++.

This technique can be used three times consecutively in one post.

Weaknesses: -


Mmmmmm, I feel like 3 posts is too long without an upkeep of some sort with a potential boost this large. It's either gotta have a weakness, or the post count needs lowered to 2.

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