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    Halcyon Yomi
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    Ryo: 32,150

    Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal

    Post by Halcyon Yomi on Sun Apr 15, 2018 2:53 am

    Name: Assassin Technique - Perfect Vision
    Rank: C
    Power: -
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Ijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Yin - Snake
    Description:
    After making the handseals Yin- Snake, the user of this technique touches their eyelids with their fingers, attaching a bit of chakra to them and after blinking once, the chakra will act as a magnifier for their eyes, also adjusting their eyes with medical chakra to this new acquired level of sight by relieving the eyes from any strain on them when looking too long through these focused lenses made out of chakra.

    While using this technique, the user's perception increases by +1 tier.

    Weaknesses: Any sort of extreme change in lighting (be it sudden darkness or sudden bright light depending on time and place of usage) will in stead lower both perception and coordination with -- for one post after the occurance of said change of lighting.

    So, I changed the drawback in a way comparable to your advice, but made it slightly harsher on coordination as well, due to the fact that logically speaking when something like that happens, you'll also be slightly disoriented which affects as we kno: Coordination. The total drawback would thus be higher than the advantage... which I hope allows for it to be cheaper in cost than with your proposal? *fingers crossed*


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    Character Name: Halcyon Yomi
    Spendable Experience: 60
    Total Experience: 2860
    Renown: 290
    Ryo: 32,150

    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: C


    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1


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    Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal

    Post by Masuyo Kaede on Sun Apr 15, 2018 3:09 am

    @Halcyon Yomi wrote:Name: Assassin Technique - Perfect Vision
    Rank: C
    Power: -
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Ijutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Yin - Snake
    Description:
    After making the handseals Yin- Snake, the user of this technique touches their eyelids with their fingers, attaching a bit of chakra to them and after blinking once, the chakra will act as a magnifier for their eyes, also adjusting their eyes with medical chakra to this new acquired level of sight by relieving the eyes from any strain on them when looking too long through these focused lenses made out of chakra.

    While using this technique, the user's perception increases by +1 tier.

    Weaknesses: Any sort of extreme change in lighting (be it sudden darkness or sudden bright light depending on time and place of usage) will in stead lower both perception and coordination with -- for one post after the occurance of said change of lighting.

    So, I changed the drawback in a way comparable to your advice, but made it slightly harsher on coordination as well, due to the fact that logically speaking when something like that happens, you'll also be slightly disoriented which affects as we kno: Coordination. The total drawback would thus be higher than the advantage... which I hope allows for it to be cheaper in cost than with your proposal? *fingers crossed*


    Looks great.

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    Halcyon Yomi
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    Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal

    Post by Halcyon Yomi on Sun Jun 24, 2018 5:44 am

    Name: Severing Void
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: max 5m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu/Ninjutsu
    Classification: Personal
    Requirements: B rank coordination
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user simply snaps their fingers to create an instant wall of about 5m high and three meters wide. This wall is extremely thin and see-through, as if it were cutting through reality itself and is capable of withstanding the impact of various strong forces, it however has no effect on taijutsu and is predominantly used to ward off projectiles and non-physical techniques (ex. grand fire ball). Though it's speed is mentioned as instant, it can't exceed the speed of techniques with a speed two ranks higher than this technique's rank (I.E. It can't hope to outspeed any technique with a speed of S rank or higher)

    Weaknesses: -

    Name: Superior Severing Void
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 15
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: max 5m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu/Ninjutsu
    Classification: Personal
    Requirements: B rank coordination
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user simply snaps their fingers to create an instant wall of about 5m high and three meters wide. This wall is extremely thin and see-through, as if it were cutting through reality itself and is capable of withstanding the impact of various strong forces, it however has no effect on taijutsu and is predominantly used to ward off projectiles and non-physical techniques (ex. grand fire ball). Though it's speed is mentioned as instant, it can't exceed the speed of techniques with a speed two ranks higher than this technique's rank (I.E. It can't hope to outspeed any technique with a speed of S rank or higher)

    Name: Jigoku no Ken - Belladonna Prima
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 25
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 10m
    Speed: A
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/fuuinjutsu/medical ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: B rank coordination, B rank intelligence
    Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    Focusing their chakra intensively, the user forms the handseals yin-dragon-snake to create a rather unique balance in their chakra which allows for it to gain properties of both Iryojutsu for easy penetration and fuuinjutsu for the sealing effect.

    By punching towards a technique or a person, it can cancel out any used and/or maintained techniques within the range of the punch, granted that they are within a straight line of this maximum 1m wide pulse. Anyone caught within it, will have their chakra momentarily cut off for a single instant, which is enough to actively end all but the most powerful of techniques and useages of chakra.

    Weaknesses: -

    Name: Water release- Water drill technique
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Self
    Speed: -
    Element: suiton
    Skill: ninjutsu/taijutsu
    Classification: open
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Water Release: Water Whip
    Hand Seals: Rat-dog-ox
    Description:

    By envelopping their arms just like with the parent jutsu, the user creates two whiplike appendages around their forearms, but forces the water current to rise tremendously, turning the two whips into powerfull drills that can be used to pierce though any armor with a hardness of C or lower. Just like the parent technique, this one also conducts lightning, though this ofcourse can act as both an advantage and a disadvantage.



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    Character Name: Halcyon Yomi
    Spendable Experience: 60
    Total Experience: 2860
    Renown: 290
    Ryo: 32,150

    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: C


    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1


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    Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal

    Post by Tsuyo on Thu Jun 28, 2018 7:17 pm

    @Halcyon Yomi wrote:Name: Severing Void
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: max 5m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu/Ninjutsu
    Classification: Personal
    Requirements: B rank coordination
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user simply snaps their fingers to create an instant wall of about 5m high and three meters wide. This wall is extremely thin and see-through, as if it were cutting through reality itself and is capable of withstanding the impact of various strong forces, it however has no effect on taijutsu and is predominantly used to ward off projectiles and non-physical techniques (ex. grand fire ball). Though it's speed is mentioned as instant, it can't exceed the speed of techniques with a speed two ranks higher than this technique's rank (I.E. It can't hope to outspeed any technique with a speed of S rank or higher)

    Weaknesses: -

    How does this not effect taijutsu but still effects projectiles? It either has an effect on physical objects or it doesn't, and if you want it to be near instant then I'm inclined to say that it doesn't. You could also remove that last little bit about not being as fast as techs higher ranked than it is because the context of the roleplay will likely make that make no sense in most cases. Lower ranked techniques can be higher in speed than higher ranked ones, it all depends on the purpose of said technique.


    Name: Superior Severing Void
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 15
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: max 5m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu/Ninjutsu
    Classification: Personal
    Requirements: B rank coordination
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user simply snaps their fingers to create an instant wall of about 5m high and three meters wide. This wall is extremely thin and see-through, as if it were cutting through reality itself and is capable of withstanding the impact of various strong forces, it however has no effect on taijutsu and is predominantly used to ward off projectiles and non-physical techniques (ex. grand fire ball). Though it's speed is mentioned as instant, it can't exceed the speed of techniques with a speed two ranks higher than this technique's rank (I.E. It can't hope to outspeed any technique with a speed of S rank or higher)

    Same as the first version concern-wise.



    Name: Jigoku no Ken - Belladonna Prima
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 25
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 10m
    Speed: A
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/fuuinjutsu/medical ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: B rank coordination, B rank intelligence
    Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    Focusing their chakra intensively, the user forms the handseals yin-dragon-snake to create a rather unique balance in their chakra which allows for it to gain properties of both Iryojutsu for easy penetration and fuuinjutsu for the sealing effect.

    By punching towards a technique or a person, it can cancel out any used and/or maintained techniques within the range of the punch, granted that they are within a straight line of this maximum 1m wide pulse. Anyone caught within it, will have their chakra momentarily cut off for a single instant, which is enough to actively end all but the most powerful of techniques and useages of chakra.

    Weaknesses: -

    Being able to counter anything at any time is not going to happen. I have a technique that does something very similar to what you're wanting to do here with Nikuyo, so if you want this to work then it can only affect chakra types you yourself know how to manipulate. That is, if you don't know doton then you can't cancel out Earth Spear. The same holds true for other chakras, such as elements, ijutsu, bijuu chakra, senjutsu, etc.


    Name: Water release- Water drill technique
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Self
    Speed: -
    Element: suiton
    Skill: ninjutsu/taijutsu
    Classification: open
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Water Release: Water Whip
    Hand Seals: Rat-dog-ox
    Description:

    By envelopping their arms just like with the parent jutsu, the user creates two whiplike appendages around their forearms, but forces the water current to rise tremendously, turning the two whips into powerfull drills that can be used to pierce though any armor with a hardness of C or lower. Just like the parent technique, this one also conducts lightning, though this ofcourse can act as both an advantage and a disadvantage.


    What are the dimensions for these drills? How far can they extend? This would fall under the "Range" category.


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    Renown: 0
    Ryo: 0
    Stats:

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: D
    • Perception: A


    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1

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    Halcyon Yomi
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    Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal

    Post by Halcyon Yomi on Sat Jun 30, 2018 11:37 pm

    Name: Severing Void
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 2m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu/Ninjutsu
    Classification: Personal
    Requirements: C rank coordination
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user simply snaps their fingers to create an instant wall of about 5m high and three meters wide. This wall is extremely thin and see-through, as if it were cutting through reality itself and is capable of withstanding the impact of various strong forces, it however has no effect on taijutsu or any physical attacks or weapons and is predominantly used to ward off jutsu projectiles and non-physical techniques (ex. grand fire ball).

    Weaknesses: -

    Name: Superior Severing Void
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 2m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu/Ninjutsu
    Classification: Personal
    Requirements: B rank coordination
    Parent Technique: Severing Void
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user simply snaps their fingers to create an instant wall of about 5m high and three meters wide. This wall is extremely thin and see-through, as if it were cutting through reality itself and is capable of withstanding the impact of various strong forces,  it however has no effect on taijutsu or any physical attacks or weapons and is predominantly used to ward off jutsu projectiles and non-physical techniques (ex. grand fire ball).

    Name: Water release- Water drill technique
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Self
    Speed: -
    Element: suiton
    Skill: ninjutsu/taijutsu
    Classification: open
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Water Release: Water Whip
    Hand Seals: Rat-dog-ox
    Description:

    By envelopping their arms just like with the parent jutsu, the user creates two whiplike appendages around their forearms, but forces the water current to rise tremendously, turning the two whips into powerfull drills of about 1m long starting at just shy of the user's elbow to about 4-5 inch beyond the user's hands. These can be used to pierce though any armor with a hardness of C or lower. Just like the parent technique, this one also conducts lightning, though this ofcourse can act as both an advantage and a disadvantage.


    Last edited by Halcyon Yomi on Thu Jul 05, 2018 12:38 pm; edited 3 times in total


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    Character Name: Halcyon Yomi
    Spendable Experience: 60
    Total Experience: 2860
    Renown: 290
    Ryo: 32,150

    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: C


    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1


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    Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal

    Post by Tsuyo on Tue Jul 03, 2018 9:03 pm

    Both Severing Voids: The instant thing still bothers me a little bit. Please reduce the maximum range these may be created with to two meters and it should be fine after that.


    Name: Water release- Water drill technique
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Self
    Speed: -
    Element: suiton
    Skill: ninjutsu/taijutsu
    Classification: open
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Water Release: Water Whip
    Hand Seals: Rat-dog-ox
    Description:

    By envelopping their arms just like with the parent jutsu, the user creates two whiplike appendages around their forearms, but forces the water current to rise tremendously, turning the two whips into powerfull drills of about 1m long starting at just shy of the user's elbow to about 4-5 inch beyond the user's hands. These can be used to pierce though any armor with a hardness of C or lower. Just like the parent technique, this one also conducts lightning, though this ofcourse can act as both an advantage and a disadvantage.


    Approved


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    Character Name: Tsuyo Hyuga
    Experience:  40/3390
    Renown: 0
    Ryo: 0
    Stats:

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: D
    • Perception: A


    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1

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    Halcyon Yomi
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    Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal

    Post by Halcyon Yomi on Thu Jul 05, 2018 12:48 pm

    Name: Severing Void
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 2m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu/Ninjutsu
    Classification: Personal
    Requirements: C rank coordination
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user simply snaps their fingers to create an instant wall of about 5m high and three meters wide. This wall is extremely thin and see-through, as if it were cutting through reality itself and is capable of withstanding the impact of various strong forces, it however has no effect on taijutsu or any physical attacks or weapons and is predominantly used to ward off jutsu projectiles and non-physical techniques (ex. grand fire ball).

    Weaknesses: -

    Name: Superior Severing Void
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 2m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu/Ninjutsu
    Classification: Personal
    Requirements: B rank coordination
    Parent Technique: Severing Void
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user simply snaps their fingers to create an instant wall of about 5m high and three meters wide. This wall is extremely thin and see-through, as if it were cutting through reality itself and is capable of withstanding the impact of various strong forces,  it however has no effect on taijutsu or any physical attacks or weapons and is predominantly used to ward off jutsu projectiles and non-physical techniques (ex. grand fire ball).

    Name: Jigoku no Ken - Restrained Demon Fist
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: -
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/ijutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements: B rank coordination
    Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken style
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user concentrates their chakra into one of their fists, then throwing a single straight punch towards the enemy with incredible speed and precision, unleashing the chakra built within the fist in a small, but powerfull vibrational shockwave which can break an opponent's guard and deal severe damage due to the shockwave's immense pressure.
    Weakness:-

    Name: Jigoku no Ken - Demon Fist
    Rank: B
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 15
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: -
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/ijutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements: B rank coordination
    Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken style
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user concentrates their chakra into one of their fists, then throwing a single straight punch towards the enemy with incredible speed and precision, unleashing the chakra built within the fist in a small, but powerfull vibrational shockwave which can break an opponent's guard and deal severe damage due to the shockwave's immense pressure. With this version being unrestrained, it deals more damage, but also costs more chakra.

    Name: Jigoku no Ken - True Demon Fist
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 15
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: -
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/ijutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements: A rank coordination
    Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken style
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user concentrates their chakra into one of their fists, then throwing a single straight punch towards the enemy with incredible speed and precision, unleashing the chakra built within the fist in
    Weakness: -

    Name: Jigoku no Ken - Demon God Fist
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 40
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: -
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/ijutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements: A rank coordination
    Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken style
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user concentrates their chakra into one of their fists, then throwing a single straight punch towards the enemy with incredible speed and precision, unleashing the chakra built within the fist in a small, but powerfull vibrational shockwave which can break an opponent's guard entirely and literally blow parts of them away as if they'd simply vanished into thin air, leaving not even the molecules of the destroyed part. If used on someone's torso, it may very well blow away the opponant's entire body.
    Weakness:-

    Name: Jigoku no Ken - Ascended Demon God Fist
    Rank: S
    Power: X
    Activation Cost: 50
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: -
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/ijutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements: A rank coordination
    Parent Technique: Mastered Jigoku no Ken style
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user concentrates their chakra into one of their fists, then throwing a single straight punch towards the enemy with incredible speed and precision, unleashing the chakra built within the fist in a small vibrational shockwave which has an insurmountable output and is able to not just break someone's guard but simply erase them from existence entirely. The shockwave itself is so powerful and disruptive that it can negate any armor of any hardnes up to S rank.
    Weakness: This technique replaces the regular Demon god fist and can only be learned after spending 500 exp.


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    Character Name: Halcyon Yomi
    Spendable Experience: 60
    Total Experience: 2860
    Renown: 290
    Ryo: 32,150

    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: C


    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1


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    Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal

    Post by Tsuyo on Sat Jul 07, 2018 3:40 pm

    Need a range for the shockwave in each of the Demon Fist techniques. True Demon Fist also appears to be unfinished, or you changed it to Demon Fist and lowered the rank by one. Either way, it needs fixed. There will also be no blowing away of people's body parts or molecular damage, but causing large amounts of trauma is feasible. The shockwave for each of these is going to need to be pretty small in area of effect as well due to it being a punch as the medium rather than a straight up jutsu. I'd also note in there somewhere that those with equal ranked Constitution or Strength to the power of the technique can lessen its effects. If it's higher, it could be negated altogether. You can lower the S rank power version to 25 for cost and get rid of the X rank power one altogether. Not gonna happen.


    Name: Severing Void
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 2m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu/Ninjutsu
    Classification: Personal
    Requirements: C rank coordination
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user simply snaps their fingers to create an instant wall of about 5m high and three meters wide. This wall is extremely thin and see-through, as if it were cutting through reality itself and is capable of withstanding the impact of various strong forces, it however has no effect on taijutsu or any physical attacks or weapons and is predominantly used to ward off jutsu projectiles and non-physical techniques (ex. grand fire ball).

    Weaknesses: -

    Name: Superior Severing Void
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 2m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: -
    Skill: Fuuinjutsu/Ninjutsu
    Classification: Personal
    Requirements: B rank coordination
    Parent Technique: Severing Void
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user simply snaps their fingers to create an instant wall of about 5m high and three meters wide. This wall is extremely thin and see-through, as if it were cutting through reality itself and is capable of withstanding the impact of various strong forces, it however has no effect on taijutsu or any physical attacks or weapons and is predominantly used to ward off jutsu projectiles and non-physical techniques (ex. grand fire ball).


    Approved


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    Spoiler:
    Character Name: Tsuyo Hyuga
    Experience:  40/3390
    Renown: 0
    Ryo: 0
    Stats:

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: D
    • Perception: A


    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1

    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t219-tsuyo-s-updates#1371






    "Death comes for everyone. I'm just moving you to the front of the line."
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    Halcyon Yomi
    Chuunin

    Posts : 181
    Join date : 2017-11-09
    Age : 28

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Suiton | Taijutsu, Ijutsu, Ninjutsu, Armor Crafting, Fuuinjutsu
    Class: B
    Ryo: 32,150

    Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal

    Post by Halcyon Yomi on Sat Jul 07, 2018 4:51 pm

    Name: Jigoku no Ken - Restrained Demon Fist
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: self
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/ijutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements: B rank coordination, Must have a Pressure Strike active with Strength as chosen stat.
    Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken style
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user concentrates their chakra into one of their fists, then throwing a single straight punch towards the enemy with incredible speed and precision, unleashing the chakra built within the fist upon impact with the opponent's body in the form a small, but powerfull vibrational shockwave which can break an opponent's guard and deal severe damage due to the shockwave's immense pressure. Should someone's consitution be at a lower rank than the power of this technique, they will have severely bruised tissue and can have fractured (but not broken) bones depending on the location where they were hit. This technique completely bypasses D rank or lower armor.

    Weakness: -

    Name: Jigoku no Ken - Demon Fist
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 15
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: self
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/ijutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements: A rank coordination, B rank constitution. Must have a Pressure Strike active with Strength as chosen stat.
    Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken style - Restrained Demon Fist
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user concentrates a slightly larger amount of their chakra into one of their fists compared to the Restrained demon fist. They also need to have a constitution of at least B rank to manage and control the chakra within their hand, which would otherwise be torn to shreds by the built up chakra. By throwing a single straight punch towards the enemy with incredible speed and precision the user unleashes the chakra built within the fist upon impact with the opponent's body in the form a small, but powerfull vibrational shockwave. This technique can break an opponent's guard and deal severe damage due to the shockwave's immense pressure.

    Should someone's consitution be at a lower rank than the power of this technique, they will have severely bruised tissue and can have broken bones, ruptured organs and in some cases even internal bleedings depending on the location where they were hit. This technique completely bypasses C rank or lower armor.

    Weakness: -

    Name: Jigoku no Ken - Demon God Fist
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 25
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: -
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/ijutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements: A rank coordination, A rank Constitution, Must have Superior Pressure Strike active with Strength as chosen stat. Needs one turn to power up. Must have used at least one Demon Fist Technique in the same thread.
    Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken style - Demon Fist
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user concentrates an immense amount of chakra into one of their fists which as it is such a large amount of chakra is very hard to contain and control instantly blowing off the user's hand if they do not have the constitution to back up this overwhelming amount of power. Then, when the chakra has been contained and under control, by throwing a single straight punch towards the enemy with incredible speed and precision, the user can unleash the chakra built within the fist in a small, but powerfull vibrational shockwave which can break an opponent's guard entirely and deal massive amounts of concussive damage to the body.

    Should someone's consitution be at a lower rank than the power of this technique, they will have severe tissue damage, shattered bones, ruptured organs and internal bleedings depending on the location where they were hit. This technique completely bypasses B rank or lower armor.

    Weakness: -

    Name: Jigoku no Ken - Ascended Demon God Fist
    Rank: S
    Power: X
    Activation Cost: 50
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: self
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/ijutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements: A rank coordination, A rank constitution, Must have Superior Pressure Strike active with Strength as chosen stat. Needs one turn to power up. Must have used at least one Demon Fist Technique in the same thread.
    Parent Technique: Mastered Jigoku no Ken style, Jigoku no Ken - Demon God Fist
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user concentrates an immense amount of chakra into one of their fists which as it is such a large amount of chakra is very hard to contain and control instantly blowing off the user's hand if they do not have the constitution to back up this overwhelming amount of power. Then, when the chakra has been contained and under control, by throwing a single straight punch towards the enemy with incredible speed and precision, the user can unleash the chakra built within the fist in a small, but powerfull vibrational shockwave which can break an opponent's guard entirely and deal massive amounts of concussive damage to the body.

    Should someone's consitution be at a lower rank than the power of this technique, it may result in skin, muscle tissue and organs being ripped to shreds, bones crumbled to dust, massive internal bleeding and even death depending on the location of the impact. This technique completely bypasses A rank or lower armor.

    Weakness: -

    Name: Jigoku no Ken - Violet Double Palm Strike
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: self
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/ijutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements: A rank coordination
    Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken style
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user coats both of their hands with some chakra, clenching both fists right before they strike out with one hand after another, the user compresses their chakra to its outmost limit into a small point on the palm of their hands, which will erupt in a vibrational pulse upon impact, able to shatter bone and tear muscle and skin to shreds at the point of impact when the opponent's constitution is B rank or lower. This technique bypasses C rank and lower armor.
    Weakness: -

    Name: Jigoku no Ken - Marigold Reflection
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: self
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/ijutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken style
    Hand Seals: Snake-ox
    Description:
    After making the necessary handseals, the user forces their chakra to run through the very cells of their skin, assisting the cellmembranes and effectively hardening the skin to a mallable, steel like skin which can absorb impacts of great strength and power that the user's unchanged body would not have been able to withstand. As long as this technique is active, the user's constitution is granted a +1 rank.
    Weakness: -


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    General Info:

    Character Name: Halcyon Yomi
    Spendable Experience: 60
    Total Experience: 2860
    Renown: 290
    Ryo: 32,150

    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: C


    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1


    Link to Character Updates: Update Tracker
    Link to Character Application: Character App
    Link to Known Techniques:Technique Registry

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    Shimiko Chinoike
    Genin

    Posts : 215
    Join date : 2017-09-21

    Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal

    Post by Shimiko Chinoike on Sun Jul 08, 2018 8:03 pm

    @Halcyon Yomi wrote:Name: Jigoku no Ken - Restrained Demon Fist
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: self
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/ijutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements: B rank coordination, Must have a Pressure Strike active with Strength as chosen stat.
    Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken style
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user concentrates their chakra into one of their fists, then throwing a single straight punch towards the enemy with incredible speed and precision, unleashing the chakra built within the fist upon impact with the opponent's body in the form a small, but powerfull vibrational shockwave which can break an opponent's guard and deal severe damage due to the shockwave's immense pressure. Should someone's consitution be at a lower rank than the power of this technique, they will have severely bruised tissue and can have fractured (but not broken) bones depending on the location where they were hit. This technique completely bypasses D rank or lower armor.

    Weakness: -

    This depends on your strength. If you have D Rank Strength and use this technique on someone with C-Rank Constitution there is no guarantee you will be severely bruise tissue.

    @Halcyon Yomi wrote:Name: Jigoku no Ken - Demon Fist
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 15
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: self
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/ijutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements: A rank coordination, B rank constitution. Must have a Pressure Strike active with Strength as chosen stat.
    Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken style - Restrained Demon Fist
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user concentrates a slightly larger amount of their chakra into one of their fists compared to the Restrained demon fist. They also need to have a constitution of at least B rank to manage and control the chakra within their hand, which would otherwise be torn to shreds by the built up chakra. By throwing a single straight punch towards the enemy with incredible speed and precision the user unleashes the chakra built within the fist upon impact with the opponent's body in the form a small, but powerfull vibrational shockwave. This technique can break an opponent's guard and deal severe damage due to the shockwave's immense pressure.

    Should someone's consitution be at a lower rank than the power of this technique, they will have severely bruised tissue and can have broken bones, ruptured organs and in some cases even internal bleedings depending on the location where they were hit. This technique completely bypasses C rank or lower armor.

    Weakness: -

    Same as above. The user's strength will play a role.

    @Halcyon Yomi wrote:Name: Jigoku no Ken - Demon God Fist
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 25
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: -
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/ijutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements: A rank coordination, A rank Constitution, Must have Superior Pressure Strike active with Strength as chosen stat. Needs one turn to power up. Must have used at least one Demon Fist Technique in the same thread.
    Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken style - Demon Fist
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user concentrates an immense amount of chakra into one of their fists which as it is such a large amount of chakra is very hard to contain and control instantly blowing off the user's hand if they do not have the constitution to back up this overwhelming amount of power. Then, when the chakra has been contained and under control, by throwing a single straight punch towards the enemy with incredible speed and precision, the user can unleash the chakra built within the fist in a small, but powerfull vibrational shockwave which can break an opponent's guard entirely and deal massive amounts of concussive damage to the body.

    Should someone's consitution be at a lower rank than the power of this technique, they will have severe tissue damage, shattered bones, ruptured organs and internal bleedings depending on the location where they were hit. This technique completely bypasses B rank or lower armor.

    Weakness: -

    Same as above.


    @Halcyon Yomi wrote:Name: Jigoku no Ken - Ascended Demon God Fist
    Rank: S
    Power: X
    Activation Cost: 50
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: self
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/ijutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements: A rank coordination, A rank constitution, Must have Superior Pressure Strike active with Strength as chosen stat. Needs one turn to power up. Must have used at least one Demon Fist Technique in the same thread.
    Parent Technique: Mastered Jigoku no Ken style, Jigoku no Ken - Demon God Fist
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user concentrates an immense amount of chakra into one of their fists which as it is such a large amount of chakra is very hard to contain and control instantly blowing off the user's hand if they do not have the constitution to back up this overwhelming amount of power. Then, when the chakra has been contained and under control, by throwing a single straight punch towards the enemy with incredible speed and precision, the user can unleash the chakra built within the fist in a small, but powerfull vibrational shockwave which can break an opponent's guard entirely and deal massive amounts of concussive damage to the body.

    Should someone's consitution be at a lower rank than the power of this technique, it may result in skin, muscle tissue and organs being ripped to shreds, bones crumbled to dust, massive internal bleeding and even death depending on the location of the impact. This technique completely bypasses A rank or lower armor.

    Weakness: -

    Techniques cannot be X-Rank in power unless boosted to that level by use of a Limit Break Point.


    @Halcyon Yomi wrote:
    Name: Jigoku no Ken - Violet Double Palm Strike
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: self
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/ijutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements: A rank coordination
    Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken style
    Hand Seals: -
    Description:
    The user coats both of their hands with some chakra, clenching both fists right before they strike out with one hand after another, the user compresses their chakra to its outmost limit into a small point on the palm of their hands, which will erupt in a vibrational pulse upon impact, able to shatter bone and tear muscle and skin to shreds at the point of impact when the opponent's constitution is B rank or lower. This technique bypasses C rank and lower armor.
    Weakness: -


    Same as above.



    @Halcyon Yomi wrote:Name: Jigoku no Ken - Marigold Reflection
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: self
    Speed: -
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu/ijutsu
    Classification: secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Jigoku no Ken style
    Hand Seals: Snake-ox
    Description:
    After making the necessary handseals, the user forces their chakra to run through the very cells of their skin, assisting the cellmembranes and effectively hardening the skin to a mallable, steel like skin which can absorb impacts of great strength and power that the user's unchanged body would not have been able to withstand. As long as this technique is active, the user's constitution is granted a +1 rank.
    Weakness: -

    Approved


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    Character Name: Shimiko Chinoike
    Spendable Experience:
    Total Experience:
    Renown: 0
    Ryo: 36,500 Ryo
    Stats:

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: C
    • Speed: D
    • Coordination: C
    • Intelligence:  D
    • Perception: C

    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1

    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t344-shimiko-s-updates
    Link to Character Application: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t260-shimiko-chinoike
    Link to Known Techniques:

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