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Halcyon Yomi
Chuunin
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Posts : 157
Join date : 2017-11-09
Age : 28

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Skills & Elements: Suiton | Taijutsu, Ijutsu, Ninjutsu, Armor Crafting, Fuuinjutsu
Class: B
Ryo: 32,150

PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Sun Apr 15, 2018 2:53 am

Name: Assassin Technique - Perfect Vision
Rank: C
Power: -
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: 1
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: Yin - Snake
Description:
After making the handseals Yin- Snake, the user of this technique touches their eyelids with their fingers, attaching a bit of chakra to them and after blinking once, the chakra will act as a magnifier for their eyes, also adjusting their eyes with medical chakra to this new acquired level of sight by relieving the eyes from any strain on them when looking too long through these focused lenses made out of chakra.

While using this technique, the user's perception increases by +1 tier.

Weaknesses: Any sort of extreme change in lighting (be it sudden darkness or sudden bright light depending on time and place of usage) will in stead lower both perception and coordination with -- for one post after the occurance of said change of lighting.

So, I changed the drawback in a way comparable to your advice, but made it slightly harsher on coordination as well, due to the fact that logically speaking when something like that happens, you'll also be slightly disoriented which affects as we kno: Coordination. The total drawback would thus be higher than the advantage... which I hope allows for it to be cheaper in cost than with your proposal? *fingers crossed*

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Masuyo Kaede
Jounin
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Posts : 627
Join date : 2016-12-07

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Skills & Elements: Fire | Earth | Wind | Bukijutsu | Ninjutsu | Taijutsu
Class: B
Ryo: 19775

PostSubject: Re: Halcyon Yomi's Arsenal   Sun Apr 15, 2018 3:09 am

@Halcyon Yomi wrote:
Name: Assassin Technique - Perfect Vision
Rank: C
Power: -
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: 1
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: -
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: Yin - Snake
Description:
After making the handseals Yin- Snake, the user of this technique touches their eyelids with their fingers, attaching a bit of chakra to them and after blinking once, the chakra will act as a magnifier for their eyes, also adjusting their eyes with medical chakra to this new acquired level of sight by relieving the eyes from any strain on them when looking too long through these focused lenses made out of chakra.

While using this technique, the user's perception increases by +1 tier.

Weaknesses: Any sort of extreme change in lighting (be it sudden darkness or sudden bright light depending on time and place of usage) will in stead lower both perception and coordination with -- for one post after the occurance of said change of lighting.

So, I changed the drawback in a way comparable to your advice, but made it slightly harsher on coordination as well, due to the fact that logically speaking when something like that happens, you'll also be slightly disoriented which affects as we kno: Coordination. The total drawback would thus be higher than the advantage... which I hope allows for it to be cheaper in cost than with your proposal? *fingers crossed*


Looks great.

Approved

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Strength: C
Constitution: B
Stamina: C
Speed: B
Coordination: B
Intelligence: C
Perception: B

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