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    Water Jutsu for Akira

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    Beleth

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    Water Jutsu for Akira

    Post by Beleth on Mon Nov 13, 2017 9:53 am

    Name:Mizu no Waruasobi (Trick of Water)
    Rank: E
    Power: E
    Activation Cost: 1
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: 4m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: Water
    Skill: N/A
    Classification: Yuki, Yugno, Akira (Exclusive)
    Requirements: Must be Taught by Akira, Coordination
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: None
    Description: A very simple technique which involves a simple flick of one's hands and a muster of sweat in the fingers. A precise flick comes from of the hands or even a shake can be made as if trying to get something off one's hands. The water streaks from the hand of the user and towards the enemy's eye. This unexpected irritation can blur their vision.
    Weaknesses: Short Range

    Name: Mizu Kagami no Jutsu (Water Mirror Technique)
    Rank: E
    Power: E
    Activation Cost: 1
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: 15m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: Water
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Yuki, Yugno, Akira (Exclusive)
    Requirements: Must be Taught by Akira
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: None
    Description:  A simple jutsu that allows the user to turn a quantity of water as small as a drop and as large as a small puddle into a mirrored surface. This can allow the user to see behind himself, and around corners with careful application of the technique.
    Weaknesses: Short Range

    Name: Uo Tsuba (Fish Spit)
    Rank: E
    Power: E
    Activation Cost: 1
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: 12 feet
    Speed: Strength
    Element: Water
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Yuki, Yugno, Akira (Exclusive)
    Requirements: Must be Taught by Akira
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: None
    Description:  A simple jet of water shot from the mouth. It can hit with enough force to stun you if it hits properly. It can be done up to 5 times in succession, or one jet can be shot. To give an example of its power, Mist academy students usually use this technique to play a game much like tag.
    Weaknesses: Limited to 12 fet


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    Re: Water Jutsu for Akira

    Post by The Founder on Mon Nov 13, 2017 6:49 pm

    Trick of Water- This looks like it'd behave under the projectile guidelines. Coordination would be the stat it uses as a base, though, since that determines arm/hand movement speed.

    Water Mirror- The range is self, but it targets water outside of the body. That doesn't leave a lot of possibilities.

    Fish Spit- Seems like Strength would be a better determining factor for the speed of the water. Also, we use numerical values in meters or feet to determine range. Short, Mid, and Long are too vague.

    Water Manipulation- This one goes beyond the level of Suiton. Freezing is an aspect of Ice Release and boiling is a part of Boil Release. Pulling moisture from the air is fine; a lot of techniques do that already, but if this applies to techniques that normally require a source, it'll need to specify costs associated with drawing large amounts of water from thin air to circumvent a known weakness to many Suiton techniques.

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    Re: Water Jutsu for Akira

    Post by Beleth on Wed Nov 15, 2017 9:24 am

    Fixed.
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    Re: Water Jutsu for Akira

    Post by The Founder on Tue Dec 05, 2017 12:35 pm

    Trick of Water: Should say User's Coordination under Speed. You don't need to mention Coordination in the requirements; everyone has Coordination. Note somewhere that it follows normal projectile rules, or just say Varies under Range. Saying 50m implies that it always travels 50m, which is crazy.

    Water Mirror: This doesn't appear able to move the water that's turned into a mirror, so the Speed should be either N/A or however fast the water becomes mirrored, which I'd assume is nearly instant; either way, I don't see it relating to User's Speed at all. Drop the range to 15m or increase the rank by one.

    @Beleth wrote:
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    Name: Uo Tsuba (Fish Spit)
    Rank: E
    Power: E
    Activation Cost: 1
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: 12 feet
    Speed: Strength
    Element: Water
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Yuki, Yugno, Akira (Exclusive)
    Requirements: Must be Taught by Akira
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: None
    Description:  A simple jet of water shot from the mouth. It can hit with enough force to stun you if it hits properly. It can be done up to 5 times in succession, or one jet can be shot. To give an example of its power, Mist academy students usually use this technique to play a game much like tag.
    Weaknesses: Limited to 12 fet
    Approved.

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    Re: Water Jutsu for Akira

    Post by Beleth on Thu Dec 14, 2017 6:47 pm

    Fixed.
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    Re: Water Jutsu for Akira

    Post by Akame on Fri Dec 15, 2017 9:04 pm

    Trick of Water: Range is going to need way reduced on this. Like, 2 meters at most if it's a flick of the wrist. 25 meters is usually D or C rank elemental ninjutsu minimum.


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    Name: Mizu Kagami no Jutsu (Water Mirror Technique)
    Rank: E
    Power: E
    Activation Cost: 1
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: 15m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: Water
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Yuki, Yugno, Akira (Exclusive)
    Requirements: Must be Taught by Akira
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: None
    Description: A simple jutsu that allows the user to turn a quantity of water as small as a drop and as large as a small puddle into a mirrored surface. This can allow the user to see behind himself, and around corners with careful application of the technique.
    Weaknesses: Short Range

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    Character Name: Akame Sasumi
    Experience:  0/4700
    Renown: 3000
    Ryo: 0
    Stats:

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: B


    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 2
    • Technique: 0
    • Destiny: 1

    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t219-tsuyo-s-updates#1371






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    Re: Water Jutsu for Akira

    Post by Beleth on Sun Dec 17, 2017 9:51 pm

    Fixed changed to 4 meters.
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    Re: Water Jutsu for Akira

    Post by Akame on Thu Dec 21, 2017 8:40 pm

    Name:Mizu no Waruasobi (Trick of Water)
    Rank: E
    Power: E
    Activation Cost: 1
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: 4m
    Speed: Instant
    Element: Water
    Skill: N/A
    Classification: Yuki, Yugno, Akira (Exclusive)
    Requirements: Must be Taught by Akira, Coordination
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: None
    Description: A very simple technique which involves a simple flick of one's hands and a muster of sweat in the fingers. A precise flick comes from of the hands or even a shake can be made as if trying to get something off one's hands. The water streaks from the hand of the user and towards the enemy's eye. This unexpected irritation can blur their vision.
    Weaknesses: Short Range


    Sure


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    Spoiler:
    Character Name: Akame Sasumi
    Experience:  0/4700
    Renown: 3000
    Ryo: 0
    Stats:

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: B


    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 2
    • Technique: 0
    • Destiny: 1

    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t219-tsuyo-s-updates#1371






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    Re: Water Jutsu for Akira

    Post by Beleth on Fri Dec 22, 2017 7:23 am

    Err.... So is it approved or not...?
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    Re: Water Jutsu for Akira

    Post by The Founder on Fri Dec 29, 2017 9:14 am

    Lol yes, that means Approved.

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