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 Water Jutsu for Akira

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Beleth



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PostSubject: Water Jutsu for Akira   Mon Nov 13, 2017 9:53 am

Name:Mizu no Waruasobi (Trick of Water)
Rank: E
Power: E
Activation Cost: 1
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 4m
Speed: Instant
Element: Water
Skill: N/A
Classification: Yuki, Yugno, Akira (Exclusive)
Requirements: Must be Taught by Akira, Coordination
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: None
Description: A very simple technique which involves a simple flick of one's hands and a muster of sweat in the fingers. A precise flick comes from of the hands or even a shake can be made as if trying to get something off one's hands. The water streaks from the hand of the user and towards the enemy's eye. This unexpected irritation can blur their vision.
Weaknesses: Short Range

Name: Mizu Kagami no Jutsu (Water Mirror Technique)
Rank: E
Power: E
Activation Cost: 1
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 15m
Speed: Instant
Element: Water
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Yuki, Yugno, Akira (Exclusive)
Requirements: Must be Taught by Akira
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: None
Description:  A simple jutsu that allows the user to turn a quantity of water as small as a drop and as large as a small puddle into a mirrored surface. This can allow the user to see behind himself, and around corners with careful application of the technique.
Weaknesses: Short Range

Name: Uo Tsuba (Fish Spit)
Rank: E
Power: E
Activation Cost: 1
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 12 feet
Speed: Strength
Element: Water
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Yuki, Yugno, Akira (Exclusive)
Requirements: Must be Taught by Akira
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: None
Description:  A simple jet of water shot from the mouth. It can hit with enough force to stun you if it hits properly. It can be done up to 5 times in succession, or one jet can be shot. To give an example of its power, Mist academy students usually use this technique to play a game much like tag.
Weaknesses: Limited to 12 fet


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PostSubject: Re: Water Jutsu for Akira   Mon Nov 13, 2017 6:49 pm

Trick of Water- This looks like it'd behave under the projectile guidelines. Coordination would be the stat it uses as a base, though, since that determines arm/hand movement speed.

Water Mirror- The range is self, but it targets water outside of the body. That doesn't leave a lot of possibilities.

Fish Spit- Seems like Strength would be a better determining factor for the speed of the water. Also, we use numerical values in meters or feet to determine range. Short, Mid, and Long are too vague.

Water Manipulation- This one goes beyond the level of Suiton. Freezing is an aspect of Ice Release and boiling is a part of Boil Release. Pulling moisture from the air is fine; a lot of techniques do that already, but if this applies to techniques that normally require a source, it'll need to specify costs associated with drawing large amounts of water from thin air to circumvent a known weakness to many Suiton techniques.
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PostSubject: Re: Water Jutsu for Akira   Wed Nov 15, 2017 9:24 am

Fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Water Jutsu for Akira   Tue Dec 05, 2017 12:35 pm

Trick of Water: Should say User's Coordination under Speed. You don't need to mention Coordination in the requirements; everyone has Coordination. Note somewhere that it follows normal projectile rules, or just say Varies under Range. Saying 50m implies that it always travels 50m, which is crazy.

Water Mirror: This doesn't appear able to move the water that's turned into a mirror, so the Speed should be either N/A or however fast the water becomes mirrored, which I'd assume is nearly instant; either way, I don't see it relating to User's Speed at all. Drop the range to 15m or increase the rank by one.

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PostSubject: Re: Water Jutsu for Akira   Thu Dec 14, 2017 6:47 pm

Fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Water Jutsu for Akira   Fri Dec 15, 2017 9:04 pm

Trick of Water: Range is going to need way reduced on this. Like, 2 meters at most if it's a flick of the wrist. 25 meters is usually D or C rank elemental ninjutsu minimum.


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PostSubject: Re: Water Jutsu for Akira   Sun Dec 17, 2017 9:51 pm

Fixed changed to 4 meters.
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PostSubject: Re: Water Jutsu for Akira   Thu Dec 21, 2017 8:40 pm

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Name:Mizu no Waruasobi (Trick of Water)
Rank: E
Power: E
Activation Cost: 1
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 4m
Speed: Instant
Element: Water
Skill: N/A
Classification: Yuki, Yugno, Akira (Exclusive)
Requirements: Must be Taught by Akira, Coordination
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: None
Description: A very simple technique which involves a simple flick of one's hands and a muster of sweat in the fingers. A precise flick comes from of the hands or even a shake can be made as if trying to get something off one's hands. The water streaks from the hand of the user and towards the enemy's eye. This unexpected irritation can blur their vision.
Weaknesses: Short Range


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PostSubject: Re: Water Jutsu for Akira   Fri Dec 22, 2017 7:23 am

Err.... So is it approved or not...?
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PostSubject: Re: Water Jutsu for Akira   Fri Dec 29, 2017 9:14 am

Lol yes, that means Approved.
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