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Sora Inazuma

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Class: E
Ryo: 0

PostSubject: Inazuma, Sora   Tue Nov 14, 2017 4:58 pm



Name: Sora Inazuma
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: genin
Title: n/a

Clan: Inazuma
Bloodline: ranton
Element(s): suiton
Skill(s): taijutsu, ninjutsu

Stats

  • Strength:D
  • Constitution:E
  • Stamina:E
  • Speed:D
  • Coordination:D
  • Intelligence:C
  • Perception:D


Unique Abilities:

Enhanced speed
Gotten through his bloodline and through the training he got from his mother. Sora excels in using his surrounding to his advantage and slowly making him an escape artist and excellent chaser. He is especially good in running fights and counters because of this.
Sora's taijutsu improves by. Sora is known for using his environment to his advantage and uses the speed boost to get to certain places quicker. He fights more like a monkey then  actual human using his flexibility and faster body movement to hit his opponent from everywhere

Using this ability Sora's persception goes one tier down and his speed goes one tier up

Detail Intuition:
Sora has the ability to see things quicker and learn things quicker with this. When he watches someone he just doesn't take on the movement. He takes in every muscle, joint and power the person takes into it. He can't feel the chakra the person uses or how the person uses the chakra.

This ability also helps Sora solve and track people quicker since he takes in every little detail of everything he sees. Going from huge commercial sign to small chips missing in a wooden fence or a light footprint on the ground.

Sora has to look at the object to examine them straight on. His eyes basically roam over everything at a rapid speed in his line of sight.

This enhances Sora's perception by one tier when activated. It takes away one tier coordination.

Appearance:
Sora stands 5'10" tall. He isn't really big and not exactly small either. He has a pretty athletic built that get covered by his slightly tanned skin. His muscles are toned. Not extreme but toned enough they can be seen from a small distance. Sora's hair is pitch black and falls in front of his left eye. His eyes are blue with a shade of grey.

Sora prefers to wear his black slim fit pants that are stretchy so he can still move easily in it. on top he prefers to wear his grey baggy hoody and mostly wears the hood over his head and has his hands in the kangaroo pocket. Under the hoody he mostly wears a red slim fit tank top that goes pretty tight around his body. His shoes are standard ninja shoes and he wears his ninja pouch on his left leg.

History:
Sora grew up as a single child. No older brother or sister. He only had his parents and of course the rest of his family and clan that always got his back. Sora Grew up a bit different than most people since his mom was an Inazuma shinobi and his dad was an employee in the hot springs of Kumo.

Sora grew up pretty happily also pretty rough because of his mother that trained him on his free day making sure he would pass the academy. The training he got from his mother had a drawback though. Because Sora was already partly trained when he got into the academy it made him lazy since he knew half of it already and only had to focus on the things he needed to learn.

Sora slowly grew more lazy and lazy over the years and he quite got the reputation with it. He became the one that never did a thing but still passed all his classes. This was because he never did anything in class. He learned himself allot of things at home. He learned them on his way and his way only. It made him a bit different than all the other student in the academy but more creative. He had his own style.

He was in the Academy for 4 years. He passed everything easily. In does 4 years Sora made some friends. He didn't make a lot of friends since he was mostly getting the reputation as a lazy person. On the other side is that he made sure he got everyone to know that if they needed him to do something he would it a hundred percent.


Personality:
Sora would come over as a lazy ass most of the time. He has this tired look in his eyes when you look at him and mostly walking around with his hands in his pocket. It always feels like he isn't in the mood for anything. Sora prefers to stay quiet most of the time because he thinks actions speak louder than words.

On the other hand, Sora has passion burning in to conquer every fear he has. Because he likes a good adrenaline rush. He wouldn't be the one making the last move but sure as hell he tries to be the one who makes the last one.   He is always ready for actions although not looking like it. He just wants to do things his own way without too many questions asked or too many people looking over his shoulder to see if he does it right.

Sora has a small thing though. He is kind of a perv. He isn't afraid to flirt with anyone when he has the chance although this sometimes ends up in him getting slapped in the face.


Roleplay Sample:
he stands with his left foot forward and his turned 45 degrees to the outside. he lifts the heel of his left foot a bit up until the ball of his left foot barely touches the ground. He holds his right hand next to his chin with his elbows lifted to chest height with his left elbow bend 45 degrees while the left hand was also at chin height only in front of his chin but pretty far away. His hands were a mix between a grabbing hand and a punching hand because his pinky and ring finger are making a fist while the rest of his fingers were ready to grab something that comes his way. Sora jumps up with his right foot for a bit while he places the ball of his left foot right on the ground so he can turn on it. He turns 135 degrees on the ball of his foot while he turns he places his lower right leg horizontal at waist height with a full bended knee while he leans with his upper body backward. After the turn he extends his right knee quickly so he makes a roundhouse kick against the palm tree although the places he hit was covered with blood and on his shin there wasn’t any trace of skin left you could even see pieces of bone through the flesh on several places. The moment his leg touches the tree Sora flinches a bit and hops a bit on his feet when he puts his foot on the ground.

Sora switches his stance so his right foot was forwards now and does the exact something again and switches leg again. He continuous to do this until the tree breaks. After Sora broke the tree he would smile a bit before he looks around him before he says “I thought there would be more.” Every palm tree was broken in 100 yards around him. “Well that means I’m done.” Sora struggle walks towards the barracks. With every step he takes he flinches because of the injuries on his shin. You could almost see the full bone and the bones are dented all over the place while some blood was flowing next to the bone. Sora looks towards his shin and says calmly. “I guess someone should look at this.” He smiled looking at his shins


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PostSubject: Re: Inazuma, Sora   Tue Nov 14, 2017 9:37 pm

You don't need to list Ranton in your elements since you technically don't have it yet. Besides that, skill point allocation and experience distribution looks fine. When you're approved, you can claim the 250 site opening experience and the 50k starting ryo in an update. One thing to note is that we use the term Speed and not Agility when determining how fast a character is moving. There are a couple other issues with this application, however.


For both of your Unique Abilities, you describe a boost of some sort but do not actually give what the boost is. For the sake of making it easier to keep track of and calculate things, I'm going to need an actual amount for this boost. Unique Abilities allow you to boost up to one tier per Unique Ability with a cap of A rank for this boost. Whatever you boost, you're going to need to take away from another stat the same amount. You're also going to need to specify when this change in stats is applied, such as combat in general or when you're using taijutsu to give a couple examples. This will need to be applied to both of your Unique Abilities. That second one as it reads now doesn't take away from another stat, which it will need to do if you wish to boost your Perception.

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PostSubject: Re: Inazuma, Sora   Wed Nov 15, 2017 9:42 am

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Skills & Elements: Fire | Earth | Wind | Bukijutsu | Ninjutsu | Taijutsu
Class: B
Ryo: 99775

PostSubject: Re: Inazuma, Sora   Wed Nov 15, 2017 3:58 pm

Quote :
Enhanced speed
Gotten through his bloodline and through the training he got from his mother. Sora excels in using his surrounding to his advantage and slowly making him an escape artist and excellent chaser. He is especially good in running fights and counters because of this.
Sora's taijutsu improves by. Sora is known for using his enviremont to his advantage and uses the speed boost to get to certain places quicker. He fights more like a monkey then actual human using his flexibility and faster body movement to hit his opponent from everywhere

Using this ability Sora's strength goes one tier down and his speed goes one tier up

This is fine for the Taijutsu portion, however for fleeing combat and chasing this would have to affect your Perception as a balancing factor rather than strength.

Quote :
Detail Intuition:
Sora has the ability to see things quicker and learn things quicker with this. When he watches someone he just doesn't take on the movement. He takes in every muscle, joint and power the person takes into it. He can't feel the chakra the person uses or how the person uses the chakra.

This ability also helps Sora solve and track people quicker since he takes in every little detail of everything he sees. Going from huge commercial sign to small chips missing in a wooden fence or a light footprint on the ground.

Sora has to look at the object to examine them straight on. His eyes basically roam over everything at a rapid speed in his line of sight.


What does this UA do exactly? Finding detailing would be a Perception buff. Doing this would call for a debuff on another stat when it's active. A debuff in Coordination would be sufficient of equal value.

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Strength: C
Constitution: B
Stamina: C
Speed: B
Coordination: B
Intelligence: C
Perception: B

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Skills & Elements: Fire | Earth | Wind | Bukijutsu | Ninjutsu | Taijutsu
Class: B
Ryo: 99775

PostSubject: Re: Inazuma, Sora   Wed Nov 15, 2017 4:43 pm

@Sora Inazuma wrote:


Name: Sora Inazuma
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: genin
Title: n/a

Clan: Inazuma
Bloodline: ranton
Element(s): fuuton
Skill(s): taijutsu, ninjutsu

Stats

  • Strength:D
  • Constitution:E
  • Stamina:E
  • Speed:D
  • Coordination:D
  • Intelligence:C
  • Perception:D


Unique Abilities:

Enhanced speed
Gotten through his bloodline and through the training he got from his mother. Sora excels in using his surrounding to his advantage and slowly making him an escape artist and excellent chaser. He is especially good in running fights and counters because of this.
Sora's taijutsu improves by. Sora is known for using his environment to his advantage and uses the speed boost to get to certain places quicker. He fights more like a monkey then  actual human using his flexibility and faster body movement to hit his opponent from everywhere

Using this ability Sora's persception goes one tier down and his speed goes one tier up

Detail Intuition:
Sora has the ability to see things quicker and learn things quicker with this. When he watches someone he just doesn't take on the movement. He takes in every muscle, joint and power the person takes into it. He can't feel the chakra the person uses or how the person uses the chakra.

This ability also helps Sora solve and track people quicker since he takes in every little detail of everything he sees. Going from huge commercial sign to small chips missing in a wooden fence or a light footprint on the ground.

Sora has to look at the object to examine them straight on. His eyes basically roam over everything at a rapid speed in his line of sight.

This enhances Sora's perception by one tier when activated. It takes away one tier coordination.

Appearance:
Sora stands 5'10" tall. He isn't really big and not exactly small either. He has a pretty athletic built that get covered by his slightly tanned skin. His muscles are toned. Not extreme but toned enough they can be seen from a small distance. Sora's hair is pitch black and falls in front of his left eye. His eyes are blue with a shade of grey.

Sora prefers to wear his black slim fit pants that are stretchy so he can still move easily in it. on top he prefers to wear his grey baggy hoody and mostly wears the hood over his head and has his hands in the kangaroo pocket. Under the hoody he mostly wears a red slim fit tank top that goes pretty tight around his body. His shoes are standard ninja shoes and he wears his ninja pouch on his left leg.

History:
Sora grew up as a single child. No older brother or sister. He only had his parents and of course the rest of his family and clan that always got his back. Sora Grew up a bit different than most people since his mom was an Inazuma shinobi and his dad was an employee in the hot springs of Kumo.

Sora grew up pretty happily also pretty rough because of his mother that trained him on his free day making sure he would pass the academy. The training he got from his mother had a drawback though. Because Sora was already partly trained when he got into the academy it made him lazy since he knew half of it already and only had to focus on the things he needed to learn.

Sora slowly grew more lazy and lazy over the years and he quite got the reputation with it. He became the one that never did a thing but still passed all his classes. This was because he never did anything in class. He learned himself allot of things at home. He learned them on his way and his way only. It made him a bit different than all the other student in the academy but more creative. He had his own style.

He was in the Academy for 4 years. He passed everything easily. In does 4 years Sora made some friends. He didn't make a lot of friends since he was mostly getting the reputation as a lazy person. On the other side is that he made sure he got everyone to know that if they needed him to do something he would it a hundred percent.


Personality:
Sora would come over as a lazy ass most of the time. He has this tired look in his eyes when you look at him and mostly walking around with his hands in his pocket. It always feels like he isn't in the mood for anything. Sora prefers to stay quiet most of the time because he thinks actions speak louder than words.

On the other hand, Sora has passion burning in to conquer every fear he has. Because he likes a good adrenaline rush. He wouldn't be the one making the last move but sure as hell he tries to be the one who makes the last one.   He is always ready for actions although not looking like it. He just wants to do things his own way without too many questions asked or too many people looking over his shoulder to see if he does it right.

Sora has a small thing though. He is kind of a perv. He isn't afraid to flirt with anyone when he has the chance although this sometimes ends up in him getting slapped in the face.


Roleplay Sample:
he stands with his left foot forward and his turned 45 degrees to the outside. he lifts the heel of his left foot a bit up until the ball of his left foot barely touches the ground. He holds his right hand next to his chin with his elbows lifted to chest height with his left elbow bend 45 degrees while the left hand was also at chin height only in front of his chin but pretty far away. His hands were a mix between a grabbing hand and a punching hand because his pinky and ring finger are making a fist while the rest of his fingers were ready to grab something that comes his way. Sora jumps up with his right foot for a bit while he places the ball of his left foot right on the ground so he can turn on it. He turns 135 degrees on the ball of his foot while he turns he places his lower right leg horizontal at waist height with a full bended knee while he leans with his upper body backward. After the turn he extends his right knee quickly so he makes a roundhouse kick against the palm tree although the places he hit was covered with blood and on his shin there wasn’t any trace of skin left you could even see pieces of bone through the flesh on several places. The moment his leg touches the tree Sora flinches a bit and hops a bit on his feet when he puts his foot on the ground.

Sora switches his stance so his right foot was forwards now and does the exact something again and switches leg again. He continuous to do this until the tree breaks. After Sora broke the tree he would smile a bit before he looks around him before he says “I thought there would be more.” Every palm tree was broken in 100 yards around him. “Well that means I’m done.” Sora struggle walks towards the barracks. With every step he takes he flinches because of the injuries on his shin. You could almost see the full bone and the bones are dented all over the place while some blood was flowing next to the bone. Sora looks towards his shin and says calmly. “I guess someone should look at this.” He smiled looking at his shins


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Constitution: B
Stamina: C
Speed: B
Coordination: B
Intelligence: C
Perception: B

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Class: B
Ryo: 99775

PostSubject: Re: Inazuma, Sora   Fri Nov 17, 2017 4:57 pm

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Strength: C
Constitution: B
Stamina: C
Speed: B
Coordination: B
Intelligence: C
Perception: B

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Skills & Elements: Fire | Earth | Wind | Bukijutsu | Ninjutsu | Taijutsu
Class: B
Ryo: 99775

PostSubject: Re: Inazuma, Sora   Fri Nov 17, 2017 4:59 pm

@Sora Inazuma wrote:


Name: Sora Inazuma
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: genin
Title: n/a

Clan: Inazuma
Bloodline: ranton
Element(s): suiton
Skill(s): taijutsu, ninjutsu

Stats

  • Strength:D
  • Constitution:E
  • Stamina:E
  • Speed:D
  • Coordination:D
  • Intelligence:C
  • Perception:D


Unique Abilities:

Enhanced speed
Gotten through his bloodline and through the training he got from his mother. Sora excels in using his surrounding to his advantage and slowly making him an escape artist and excellent chaser. He is especially good in running fights and counters because of this.
Sora's taijutsu improves by. Sora is known for using his environment to his advantage and uses the speed boost to get to certain places quicker. He fights more like a monkey then  actual human using his flexibility and faster body movement to hit his opponent from everywhere

Using this ability Sora's persception goes one tier down and his speed goes one tier up

Detail Intuition:
Sora has the ability to see things quicker and learn things quicker with this. When he watches someone he just doesn't take on the movement. He takes in every muscle, joint and power the person takes into it. He can't feel the chakra the person uses or how the person uses the chakra.

This ability also helps Sora solve and track people quicker since he takes in every little detail of everything he sees. Going from huge commercial sign to small chips missing in a wooden fence or a light footprint on the ground.

Sora has to look at the object to examine them straight on. His eyes basically roam over everything at a rapid speed in his line of sight.

This enhances Sora's perception by one tier when activated. It takes away one tier coordination.

Appearance:
Sora stands 5'10" tall. He isn't really big and not exactly small either. He has a pretty athletic built that get covered by his slightly tanned skin. His muscles are toned. Not extreme but toned enough they can be seen from a small distance. Sora's hair is pitch black and falls in front of his left eye. His eyes are blue with a shade of grey.

Sora prefers to wear his black slim fit pants that are stretchy so he can still move easily in it. on top he prefers to wear his grey baggy hoody and mostly wears the hood over his head and has his hands in the kangaroo pocket. Under the hoody he mostly wears a red slim fit tank top that goes pretty tight around his body. His shoes are standard ninja shoes and he wears his ninja pouch on his left leg.

History:
Sora grew up as a single child. No older brother or sister. He only had his parents and of course the rest of his family and clan that always got his back. Sora Grew up a bit different than most people since his mom was an Inazuma shinobi and his dad was an employee in the hot springs of Kumo.

Sora grew up pretty happily also pretty rough because of his mother that trained him on his free day making sure he would pass the academy. The training he got from his mother had a drawback though. Because Sora was already partly trained when he got into the academy it made him lazy since he knew half of it already and only had to focus on the things he needed to learn.

Sora slowly grew more lazy and lazy over the years and he quite got the reputation with it. He became the one that never did a thing but still passed all his classes. This was because he never did anything in class. He learned himself allot of things at home. He learned them on his way and his way only. It made him a bit different than all the other student in the academy but more creative. He had his own style.

He was in the Academy for 4 years. He passed everything easily. In does 4 years Sora made some friends. He didn't make a lot of friends since he was mostly getting the reputation as a lazy person. On the other side is that he made sure he got everyone to know that if they needed him to do something he would it a hundred percent.


Personality:
Sora would come over as a lazy ass most of the time. He has this tired look in his eyes when you look at him and mostly walking around with his hands in his pocket. It always feels like he isn't in the mood for anything. Sora prefers to stay quiet most of the time because he thinks actions speak louder than words.

On the other hand, Sora has passion burning in to conquer every fear he has. Because he likes a good adrenaline rush. He wouldn't be the one making the last move but sure as hell he tries to be the one who makes the last one.   He is always ready for actions although not looking like it. He just wants to do things his own way without too many questions asked or too many people looking over his shoulder to see if he does it right.

Sora has a small thing though. He is kind of a perv. He isn't afraid to flirt with anyone when he has the chance although this sometimes ends up in him getting slapped in the face.


Roleplay Sample:
he stands with his left foot forward and his turned 45 degrees to the outside. he lifts the heel of his left foot a bit up until the ball of his left foot barely touches the ground. He holds his right hand next to his chin with his elbows lifted to chest height with his left elbow bend 45 degrees while the left hand was also at chin height only in front of his chin but pretty far away. His hands were a mix between a grabbing hand and a punching hand because his pinky and ring finger are making a fist while the rest of his fingers were ready to grab something that comes his way. Sora jumps up with his right foot for a bit while he places the ball of his left foot right on the ground so he can turn on it. He turns 135 degrees on the ball of his foot while he turns he places his lower right leg horizontal at waist height with a full bended knee while he leans with his upper body backward. After the turn he extends his right knee quickly so he makes a roundhouse kick against the palm tree although the places he hit was covered with blood and on his shin there wasn’t any trace of skin left you could even see pieces of bone through the flesh on several places. The moment his leg touches the tree Sora flinches a bit and hops a bit on his feet when he puts his foot on the ground.

Sora switches his stance so his right foot was forwards now and does the exact something again and switches leg again. He continuous to do this until the tree breaks. After Sora broke the tree he would smile a bit before he looks around him before he says “I thought there would be more.” Every palm tree was broken in 100 yards around him. “Well that means I’m done.” Sora struggle walks towards the barracks. With every step he takes he flinches because of the injuries on his shin. You could almost see the full bone and the bones are dented all over the place while some blood was flowing next to the bone. Sora looks towards his shin and says calmly. “I guess someone should look at this.” He smiled looking at his shins


Approved

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Strength: C
Constitution: B
Stamina: C
Speed: B
Coordination: B
Intelligence: C
Perception: B

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