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PostSubject: Blondie's Techniques   Thu Nov 16, 2017 6:32 pm

Name: Thunderclap
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: S
Upkeep Cost: B
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: Raiton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals:: Snake → Rat → Ox → Boar → Tiger → Ram → Snake → Hare → Ox → Dragon → Clap hands
Description: The user envelopes themselves in a dense shroud of lightning chakra that appears as white and yellow/blue. After encasing themselves in the potent chakra they zoom forth at any place that was in their line of vision prior to accelerating. While under the effect of the technique, the user's Speed is boosted by 2 tiers. While using this technique, no other ones can be performed, and any that were being maintained prior are automatically deactivated. Taijutsu styles are an exclusion to this, but otherwise this technique serves only as a method of on-foot transportation, similar to Shunshin, apart from the linear movement [so long as he can see where he's going, he still has to have reasonable Perception]. As added flavor effect, the user appears as a lightning bolt while moving.
Weaknesses: Can only be used to move from point A to point B. Since this doesn't boost Perception at all either, using this technique without the proper setup is suicidal most of the time.

Name: Lightning Release: Lightning Shiver
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost: B
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: 0-20 m.
Speed: B
Element: Raiton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: N/A
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: Ram → Monkey → Boar → Ox → Rat → Snake
Description: After properly kneading their chakra and forming the needed handseals, the user slams their hand palmfirst into a structure, dispersing their lightning chakra. In an explosive, shockwave-like effect, a lethal current of lightning chakra rips across the surroundings as a lethal current that fluently flickers around them, traveling up to the 20 meters allotted by the technique. When used in direct contact with the ground, the bolts tear across, destroying the earth in the range of the technique and leaving it a crater in its wake, much like Cherry Blossom Impact.
Weaknesses: N/A

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PostSubject: Re: Blondie's Techniques   Thu Nov 16, 2017 10:44 pm

@Blonde wrote:
Name: Thunderclap
Rank: S
Power: -
Activation Cost: S
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: Raiton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: N/A (for Simon at least, though the technique normally requires 10 handseals)
Description: The user envelopes themselves in a dense shroud of lightning chakra that appears as white and yellow/blue. After encasing themselves in the potent chakra they zoom forth at any place that was in their line of vision prior to accelerating. While under the effect of the technique, the user's Speed is boosted by 2 tiers. While using this technique, no other ones can be performed, and any that were being maintained prior are automatically deactivated. Taijutsu styles are an exclusion to this, but otherwise this technique serves only as a method of on-foot transportation, similar to Shunshin. Unlike Shunshin, though, this technique is able to push them past the boundaries of their limits, in exchange for it's intense drain [bypasses the necessity of a base stat of S to reach X in Speed]. As added flavor effect, the user appears as a lightning bolt while moving.
Weaknesses: Can only be used to move from point A to point B. Since this doesn't boost Perception at all either, using this technique without the proper setup is suicidal most of the time.

Power will still need to be added here. For a two tier boost, this would be S rank in power. The upkeep for this will also need to be B rank, as it reads like a technique that may be maintained over multiple posts. While you may not require handseals for this technique, the handseals normally required for this will need to be added. Or you can just make it cost none normally.

Bypassing the need for a S tier base stat for X rank speed is going to need removed, I can't see any way of balancing that within any custom registration. Also, this says that it is similar to Shunshin. Does that mean you are only allowed to travel in a straight line with this technique?

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Name: Lightning Release: Lightning Shiver
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost: B
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: 0-20 m.
Speed: B
Element: Raiton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: N/A
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: Ram → Monkey → Boar → Ox → Rat → Snake
Description: After properly kneading their chakra and forming the needed handseals, the user slams their hand palmfirst into a structure, dispersing their lightning chakra. In an explosive, shockwave-like effect, a lethal current of lightning chakra rips across the surroundings as a lethal current that fluently flickers around them. When used in direct contact with the ground, the bolts tear across, destroying the earth in the range of the technique and leaving it a crater in its wake, much like Cherry Blossom Impact.
Weaknesses: N/A


I'm having a difficult time envisioning the first described application of this technique against structures. Could you please elaborate on what actually happens when used in this manner? I'd also like to see a solid range on this instead of the varying one. If you want to restrain the damage or range you may do so in the course of roleplay, but for the registration process, I'd like to just see what the maximum range is please.

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PostSubject: Re: Blondie's Techniques   Thu Nov 16, 2017 11:20 pm

Alrighty, made the changes.

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PostSubject: Re: Blondie's Techniques   Sat Nov 18, 2017 1:02 pm

@Blonde wrote:
Name: Thunderclap
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: S
Upkeep Cost: B
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: Raiton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals:: Snake → Rat → Ox → Boar → Tiger → Ram → Snake → Hare → Ox → Dragon → Clap hands
Description: The user envelopes themselves in a dense shroud of lightning chakra that appears as white and yellow/blue. After encasing themselves in the potent chakra they zoom forth at any place that was in their line of vision prior to accelerating. While under the effect of the technique, the user's Speed is boosted by 2 tiers. While using this technique, no other ones can be performed, and any that were being maintained prior are automatically deactivated. Taijutsu styles are an exclusion to this, but otherwise this technique serves only as a method of on-foot transportation, similar to Shunshin, apart from the linear movement [so long as he can see where he's going, he still has to have reasonable Perception]. As added flavor effect, the user appears as a lightning bolt while moving.
Weaknesses: Can only be used to move from point A to point B. Since this doesn't boost Perception at all either, using this technique without the proper setup is suicidal most of the time.

Name: Lightning Release: Lightning Shiver
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost: B
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: 0-20 m.
Speed: B
Element: Raiton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: N/A
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: Ram → Monkey → Boar → Ox → Rat → Snake
Description: After properly kneading their chakra and forming the needed handseals, the user slams their hand palmfirst into a structure, dispersing their lightning chakra. In an explosive, shockwave-like effect, a lethal current of lightning chakra rips across the surroundings as a lethal current that fluently flickers around them, traveling up to the 20 meters allotted by the technique. When used in direct contact with the ground, the bolts tear across, destroying the earth in the range of the technique and leaving it a crater in its wake, much like Cherry Blossom Impact.
Weaknesses: N/A


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PostSubject: Re: Blondie's Techniques   Sat Nov 18, 2017 11:31 pm

Name: Raijin
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: S
Upkeep Cost: B
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: Raiton
Skill: Ninjutsu, Senory
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Sensory Technique
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals:: Snake → Clap hands
Description: A unique technique wherein the user engulfs themselves in a small, but dense field of whiteish-blue lightning chakra that coats their body, illuminating its entirety in a mix of white and blue, with a glow of the same color. In addition, their hair spikes up partially, while sparks occasionally dances along their frame. The external and internal flow of chakra through their body can be used to shock what comes in physical contact with them, so long as they desire that to be the case.

As opposed to relying on the nervous system, the user utilizes their lightning chakra in it's place, using it to manually send and receive signals throughout the body based on instinct alone. Raijin's general function is made up of two abilities, that work simultaneously while Raijin is active:

Genzai (現在: lit. meaning 'current'): Genzai uses the environment as a cue for the user's actions, causing them to be performed based on instinct, rather than thought. This is the technique's more basic stage of utilization, and boosts the user's Speed by two tiers, and their tier of tracking capabilities for Perception by one. At the same time, the user's predictive abilities are reduced by one tier.
Raiu (雷雨 lit. meaning 'lightning storm'): Raiu is the more advanced variation of Raijin, allowing the user to weaponize themselves. The user is able to reduce their two-tier Speed boost to one, and allocate that tier to Strength or Coordination. Additionally, they can change which stat that one tier is applied to by will.

Raijin's duration of use is dependent on the user's Constitution. For every tier of Constitution the user has, the duration increases by two posts. Once those posts elapse, Raijin ends and cannot be used for the rest of that thread.
Weaknesses: Limited to one use per thread. Additionally, only taijutsu can be used while the technique is active.

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PostSubject: Re: Blondie's Techniques   Sun Nov 19, 2017 11:29 am

@Blonde wrote:
Name: Raijin
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: No idea
Upkeep Cost: No idea
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: Raiton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals:: Snake → Clap hands
Description: After concentrating lightning chakra throughout their person, the user coats themselves in a thin veil of the element, causing their frame to faintly shine and their hair to stand up. Apart from serving as a visual indication that they've entered "Raijin", this technique's lightning chakra also offensively uses it. Upon coming in contact with physical contact with a foe, the lightning chakra coating the user strikes them in tandem with their body, adding a shocking and numbing effect to the user's blows that has the capacity to stun people without S-Rank Constitution for one round. Raijin additionally helps speed up the frequency and accuracy of the user's blows, giving a unique boost of one tier to Perception, and another to Speed.
Weaknesses: Disables use of techniques other than ones with a taijutsu or Raiton basis to them.


So, this is listed as having a Unique Boost rather than a generic boost. Your one Unique Boost custom can only boost a maximum of ++ in total. It also increases the rank of the technique's costs by one, meaning other boosts for it will be smaller than usually allowed for a technique that rank barring other drawbacks making up for that boost. The way this technique is described, it also has no real merit for a boost to Perception.

That being said, I feel like this is just LCM with less Raiton. I want to avoid copying village exclusive and restricted techniques as much as possible, so I'd be willing to approve this only after you fix the above and drop the power down to a maximum of B rank along with the relative boosts which will also only be able to be applied to Strength, Speed, and Coordination. Anyone with a brain can figure out how to coat themselves in Raiton, so I don't want to deny it based on that alone, but I'm afraid I'm going to be less liberal than I usually would be with custom techniques because of this similarity to LCM.


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Name: Thundersurge
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: S
Upkeep Cost: B
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: Raiton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals:: Horse → Snake → Dog → Hare → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Dragon → Snake → Clap hands
Description: This Lightning Release technique functions entirely off of nullifying the use of the body's nervous system. By interfering with the brain's electrical impulses through the use of lightning chakra, the channeling of chakra at breakneck speeds is used to actively shift the brain's messages to their destination far faster than what's necessary. As a result, the user's reactionary prowess and means of perception are boosted incredibly, allowing them to perform feats they're normally incapable of without the technique. They gain one  tier of Perception and one tier of Coordination while this technique is active.
Weaknesses: Cannot be used with any other techniques aside from Raijin or Thunderclap.


This is going to need either Sensory or Ijutsu as an additional skill requirement, as controlling your nervous system with raiton is a more complex technique than most other jutsu of the same element would normally be even at higher ranks. That's the requirement I have for my own version of this, and it's the one I'm going to stick with for others too. I also feel like flooding your nervous system with a S rank amount of chakra is going to do some damage unless your Constitution is sufficiently high, as in A rank minimum to avoid damage once the technique ends.

This can be remedied by reducing the overall power to around B rank, otherwise a Constitution check is going to have to be added. I'd say one - to the boosted stats for every tier of Constitution below A for the remainder of the thread. You also will not be able to use other Raiton techniques with this at all. Issuing such fine control over your nervous system is going to take a lot of your focus, and firing more electricity through your body would only disturb that focus. And lastly, I'd like to see a post limit for this technique before you have to give your nervous system a break before reactivating it again.

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PostSubject: Re: Blondie's Techniques   Sun Nov 19, 2017 2:41 pm

So basically I have to make Raijin a normal booster if I want it to retain the normal boosts? Also I can't have one of them be Perception-based? And I'm guessing Thundersurge can't boost Perception by other means? It was intended to control the movement of the brain's electrical pulses (whether in or out of Raijin) rather than the nervous system, so that the nervous system wouldn't be needed while the technique is being used. I'd also figured if an intelligence requirement was stuck on it it'd be fine for the concept at least.

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PostSubject: Re: Blondie's Techniques   Mon Nov 20, 2017 4:43 pm

Correct for Raijin, up to a maximum of B rank due to the similarity with LCM. And you can have a technique that boosts Perception, but it has to make some sort of sense in relation to the technique. Simply coating your body in a relatively little amount of lightning is not going to increase your ability to track people or guess at what they're going to do any better than normal. This would act more as a boost to your body, hence me giving the listed stats as its limits.

For Thundersurge, impulses to your body's muscles from your brain happens along the nervous system which targets specific muscle groups. Taking control of your brain's electrical signals is taking control of your nervous system, as that's the system of the body the brain belongs to. The effect is the same no matter which way you describe it. You wouldn't be able to divert the current through your body any other way without causing damage or making every muscle in your body seize up as your desired signal reaches the desired muscle. The nervous system isn't exactly tough as nails either, which is why I say that flooding so much chakra into it in one shot is going to damage you without enough Constitution.

This is why I say it would require another skill other than Ninjutsu too, as most Ninjutsu don't exact the amount of finesse a technique like this would actually require to pull off without damaging your body irreparably. Techniques that require finesse are usually derived from Ninjutsu, but have been refined into something else such as Ijutsu and Fuuinjutsu. I believe a technique like this would require more finesse than a normal Ninjutsu would, hence my requirement for Ijutsu or Sensory. I also don't mind this having a boost to Perception or a boost to Coordination, both of those make sense in the context of this technique and its functionality. But in order for the technique to function in a balanced way on the site, the edits I explained will need to happen which is also why I suggested multiple paths. If you have other suggestions, I'm more than willing to hear them out and if I like it then we can talk from there.

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PostSubject: Re: Blondie's Techniques   Thu Nov 23, 2017 2:00 pm

Followed what you suggested for Raijin and added in the new description and the other stuff. Removed Thundersurge as well. I kept the original weakness for having limited technique-use to balance it out, unless the Constitution thing is enough.

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PostSubject: Re: Blondie's Techniques   Fri Nov 24, 2017 9:41 am

@Blonde wrote:
Name: Raijin
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: S
Upkeep Cost: B
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: Raiton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Sensory skill
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals:: Snake → Clap hands
Description: A unique technique wherein the user engulfs themselves in a small, but dense field of whiteish-blue lightning chakra that coats their body, illuminating its entirety in a mix of white and blue, with a glow of the same color. In addition, their hair spikes up partially, while sparks occasionally dances along their frame. The external and interanl flow of chakra through their body can be used to shock what comes in physical contact with them, so long as they desire that to be the case.

As opposed to relying on the nervous system, the user utilizes their lightning chakra in it's place, using it to manually send and receive signals throughout the body based on instinct alone. Raijin's general function is made up of two abilities, that work simultaneously while Raijin is active:

Genzai (現在: lit. meaning 'current'): Genzai uses the environment as a cue for the user's actions, causing them to be performed based on instinct, rather than thought. This is the technique's more basic stage of utilization, and boosts the user's Speed by two tiers, and their tier of tracking capabilities for Perception by one. At the same time, the user's predictive abilities are reduced by one tier.
Raiu (雷雨 lit. meaning 'lightning storm'): Raiu is the more advanced variation of Raijin, allowing the user to weaponize themselves. The user is able to reduce their two-tier Speed boost to one, and allocate that tier to Strength or Coordination. Additionally, they can change which stat that one tier is applied to by will.

Raijin's duration of use is dependent on the user's Constitution. For every tier of Constitution the user has, the duration increases by two posts. Once those posts elapse, Raijin ends and cannot be used for the rest of that thread.
Weaknesses: Limited to one use per thread. Additionally, only taijutsu can be used while the technique is active.




Put Sensory as a second skill in the skill field and tag the Sensory technique as a requirement. If a skill is listed in the Skill field, it is not required to be in the requirements field. Once that's done, this should be good to go.

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PostSubject: Re: Blondie's Techniques   Fri Nov 24, 2017 4:29 pm

alright, did that.

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PostSubject: Re: Blondie's Techniques   Sun Nov 26, 2017 9:54 pm

@Blonde wrote:
Name: Raijin
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: S
Upkeep Cost: B
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: Raiton
Skill: Ninjutsu, Senory
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Sensory Technique
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals:: Snake → Clap hands
Description: A unique technique wherein the user engulfs themselves in a small, but dense field of whiteish-blue lightning chakra that coats their body, illuminating its entirety in a mix of white and blue, with a glow of the same color. In addition, their hair spikes up partially, while sparks occasionally dances along their frame. The external and interanl flow of chakra through their body can be used to shock what comes in physical contact with them, so long as they desire that to be the case.

As opposed to relying on the nervous system, the user utilizes their lightning chakra in it's place, using it to manually send and receive signals throughout the body based on instinct alone. Raijin's general function is made up of two abilities, that work simultaneously while Raijin is active:

Genzai (現在: lit. meaning 'current'): Genzai uses the environment as a cue for the user's actions, causing them to be performed based on instinct, rather than thought. This is the technique's more basic stage of utilization, and boosts the user's Speed by two tiers, and their tier of tracking capabilities for Perception by one. At the same time, the user's predictive abilities are reduced by one tier.
Raiu (雷雨 lit. meaning 'lightning storm'): Raiu is the more advanced variation of Raijin, allowing the user to weaponize themselves. The user is able to reduce their two-tier Speed boost to one, and allocate that tier to Strength or Coordination. Additionally, they can change which stat that one tier is applied to by will.

Raijin's duration of use is dependent on the user's Constitution. For every tier of Constitution the user has, the duration increases by two posts. Once those posts elapse, Raijin ends and cannot be used for the rest of that thread.
Weaknesses: Limited to one use per thread. Additionally, only taijutsu can be used while the technique is active.



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PostSubject: Re: Blondie's Techniques   Fri Apr 27, 2018 11:31 pm

Name: Lightning Release: Conducted Lightning Acceleration Cannon (or just "Railgun")
Rank: A
Power: A
Activation Cost: A
Upkeep Cost: ---
Range: 0-80m
Speed: A
Element: Raiton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Chakra Flow, B-Rank Coordination
Parent Technique: ---
Hand Seals: Dragon → Horse → Snake → Ram → Hare → Dog → Snake → Seal of Confrontation
Description: A highly-advanced Lightning Release technique that involves utilizing electricity-conductive objects as mediums. Lightning Release chakra is flowed into the user's hand, more specifically the thumb and the pointer finger. Upon lining up the conductive object with their closed fist (with the thumb tucked in), the user flicks their thumb up, unleashing a powerful discharge that immediately gathers at the medium, and then uses its conductive properties to reinforce the conglomerate of chakra.

The large amount of lightning chakra focused into the object eradicates it in the process, but releases a concentrated, penetrative wave of lightning chakra. It tears apart most of the general surroundings and generates immense amounts of air pressure as it advances to a given target,
Weaknesses: Requires a conductor to be used with.

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PostSubject: Re: Blondie's Techniques   Sun Apr 29, 2018 10:27 pm

@Blonde wrote:
Name: Lightning Release: Conducted Lightning Acceleration Cannon (or just "Railgun")
Rank: A
Power: A
Activation Cost: A
Upkeep Cost: ---
Range: 0-120m
Speed: A
Element: Raiton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Chakra Flow, B-Rank Coordination
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: A highly-advanced Lightning Release technique that involves utilizing electricity-conductive objects as mediums. Lightning Release chakra is flowed into the user's hand, more specifically the thumb and the pointer finger. Upon lining up the conductive object with their closed fist (with the thumb tucked in), the user flicks their thumb up, unleashing a powerful discharge that immediately gathers at the medium, and then uses its conductive properties to reinforce the conglomerate of chakra.

The large amount of lightning chakra focused into the object eradicates it in the process, but releases a concentrated, penetrative wave of lightning chakra. It tears apart most of the general surroundings and generates immense amounts of air pressure as it advances to a given target,
Weaknesses: Requires a conductive to be used with, to make up for the lack of handseals required.

This should have handseals or a charge time.

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PostSubject: Re: Blondie's Techniques   Mon Apr 30, 2018 9:25 pm

Changed accordingly.

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PostSubject: Re: Blondie's Techniques   Mon Apr 30, 2018 9:43 pm

@Blonde wrote:
Name: Lightning Release: Conducted Lightning Acceleration Cannon (or just "Railgun")
Rank: A
Power: A
Activation Cost: A
Upkeep Cost: ---
Range: 0-80m
Speed: A
Element: Raiton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Chakra Flow, B-Rank Coordination
Parent Technique: ---
Hand Seals: Dragon → Horse → Snake → Ram → Hare → Dog → Snake → Seal of Confrontation
Description: A highly-advanced Lightning Release technique that involves utilizing electricity-conductive objects as mediums. Lightning Release chakra is flowed into the user's hand, more specifically the thumb and the pointer finger. Upon lining up the conductive object with their closed fist (with the thumb tucked in), the user flicks their thumb up, unleashing a powerful discharge that immediately gathers at the medium, and then uses its conductive properties to reinforce the conglomerate of chakra.

The large amount of lightning chakra focused into the object eradicates it in the process, but releases a concentrated, penetrative wave of lightning chakra. It tears apart most of the general surroundings and generates immense amounts of air pressure as it advances to a given target,
Weaknesses: Requires a conductor to be used with.

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