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PostSubject: Xing's Technique Scrolls   Sun Nov 19, 2017 9:32 am

Name: Dissection Blade
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: D
Range: Varies
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu/Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Ijutsu; D-Rank Coordination
Parent Technique: Chakra Scalpel
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This is a fighting style created to diversify the utilization of the Chakra Scalpel Technique, and to increase it's application in both medical uses as well as for combat purposes. Like the original technique even the most skilled medic is unable to utilize the Chakra Scalpel technique to deliver fatal cuts without the proper levels of Coordination, however this fighting style is aimed towards improving the viability of using the Chakra Scalpel technique in conjunction with normal combat. This fighting style, rather than granting boosts to any stats, reduces the Coordination requirement to use the Chakra Scalpel technique effectively in combat by two tiers. Despite perverting the original intentions of the technique Dissection Blade remains at it's core a Medical Ninjutsu fighting style as it's combat applications can also be applied to surgery.
Weaknesses: -

Name: Dissection Blade: Extension
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: D
Upkeep Cost: E
Range: Varies
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Ijutsu; Dissection Blade
Parent Technique: Dissection Blade
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This technique focuses on extending the length of the user's Chakra Scalpels as in it's base form the chakra scalpel technique surrounds the user's palms and thus has a very small blade length 2 inches to be exact. By applying more chakra onto the base fighting style, the user is capable of increasing the length of the scalpel by an amount based on their Coordination, 2 Inches per Tier in the stat for a maximum of 12 Inches at S Tier. This will also cost an additional point of stamina per two inches added to the scalpel's length. This not only increases the danger of the chakra scalpel technique in combat likewise allows it to be used for surgeries with large animals and not just humans.
Weaknesses: -

Name: Dissection Blade: Focusing
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: D
Upkeep Cost: D
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Ijutsu; Dissection Blade
Parent Technique: Dissection Blade
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: By focusing more chakra to the user's palms they are able to produce a sharper, tangible Chakra Scalpel. While it does consume a constant chakra price to maintain in this focused form it does make it more viable for combat purposes as well as cutting through something that may pose a danger to their patient's life, or it can be used to block blows from another weapon due to the tangible nature. Offensively, it makes it more dangerous as the cuts inflicted by a focused Chakra Scalpel are incapable of healing naturally, requiring an Ijutsu technique to be used to heal the wound. As a result the scalpel looses its ability to cause internal wounds without breaking the skin, while becoming capable of being blocked by metal armors C-Rank or higher, or non-metal armors B-Rank or higher.
Weaknesses: -

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PostSubject: Re: Xing's Technique Scrolls   Sun Nov 19, 2017 12:02 pm

@Xing wrote:
Name: Dissection Blade
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: D
Upkeep Cost: -
Range:
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Ijutsu; D-Rank Coordination
Parent Technique: Chakra Scalpel
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This is a fighting style created to diversify the utilization of the Chakra Scalpel Technique, and to increase it's application in both medical uses as well as for combat purposes. Like the original technique even the most skilled medic is unable to utilize the Chakra Scalpel technique to deliver fatal cuts without the proper levels of Coordination, however this fighting style is aimed towards improving the viability of using the Chakra Scalpel technique in conjunction with normal combat. This fighting style, rather than granting boosts to any stats, reduces the Coordination requirement to use the Chakra Scalpel technique effectively in combat by two tiers. Despite perverting the original intentions of the technique Dissection Blade remains at it's core a Medical Ninjutsu fighting style as it's combat applications can also be applied to surgery.
Weaknesses: -

Reducing the amount of Coordination necessary to use Chakra Scalpel by TWO tiers will need to cost a bit more chakra.

@Xing wrote:
Name: Dissection Blade: Extension
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: D
Upkeep Cost: D
Range: Varies
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Ijutsu; Dissection Blade
Parent Technique: Dissection Blade
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This technique focuses on extending the length of the user's Chakra Scalpels as in it's base form the chakra scalpel technique surrounds the user's palms and thus has a very small blade length 2 inches to be exact. By applying more chakra onto the base fighting style, the user is capable of increasing the length of the scalpel by an amount based on their Coordination, 2 Inches per Tier in the stat for a maximum of 12 Inches at S Tier. This not only increases the danger of the chakra scalpel technique in combat likewise allows it to be used for surgeries with large animals and not just humans.
Weaknesses: -

This looks good once the parent is changed.

@Xing wrote:

Name: Dissection Blade: Focusing
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: D
Upkeep Cost: D
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Ijutsu; Dissection Blade
Parent Technique: Dissection Blade
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: By focusing more chakra to the user's palms they are able to produce a sharper, solidified Chakra Scalpel. While it does consume a constant chakra price to maintain in this focused form it does make it more viable for combat purposes as well as cutting through something that may pose a danger to their patient's life, such as armor that cannot be removed with ease. Offensively, it makes it more dangerous as the cuts inflicted by a focused Chakra Scalpel are capable of damaging one's chakra coils, and will not heal naturally, requiring an Ijutsu technique to be used to heal the wound.
Weaknesses: -

Damaging chakra coils is a bit iffy and may infringe on gentle fist. I think in this case its fine because you aren't necessarily damaging stamina like gentle fist does. If that is your intention then I think this technique would be unacceptable but if you can come up with a creative effect of damaging chakra nodes without referencing stamina that could work as it would be distinguished from Gentle Fist.


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PostSubject: Re: Xing's Technique Scrolls   Sun Nov 19, 2017 12:28 pm

I have some concerns as well, if you don't mind Nyg


@Xing wrote:
Name: Dissection Blade
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: D
Upkeep Cost: -
Range:
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Ijutsu; D-Rank Coordination
Parent Technique: Chakra Scalpel
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This is a fighting style created to diversify the utilization of the Chakra Scalpel Technique, and to increase it's application in both medical uses as well as for combat purposes. Like the original technique even the most skilled medic is unable to utilize the Chakra Scalpel technique to deliver fatal cuts without the proper levels of Coordination, however this fighting style is aimed towards improving the viability of using the Chakra Scalpel technique in conjunction with normal combat. This fighting style, rather than granting boosts to any stats, reduces the Coordination requirement to use the Chakra Scalpel technique effectively in combat by two tiers. Despite perverting the original intentions of the technique Dissection Blade remains at it's core a Medical Ninjutsu fighting style as it's combat applications can also be applied to surgery.
Weaknesses: -

List Taijutsu as an additional skill, since this is a fighting style and fighting styles require an actual physical skill in order to be used. Additionally, fighting styles require an upkeep. Since you have the Chakra scalpel upkeep too, make this a E rank upkeep with no activation.


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Name: Dissection Blade: Extension
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: D
Upkeep Cost: D
Range: Varies
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Ijutsu; Dissection Blade
Parent Technique: Dissection Blade
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This technique focuses on extending the length of the user's Chakra Scalpels as in it's base form the chakra scalpel technique surrounds the user's palms and thus has a very small blade length 2 inches to be exact. By applying more chakra onto the base fighting style, the user is capable of increasing the length of the scalpel by an amount based on their Coordination, 2 Inches per Tier in the stat for a maximum of 12 Inches at S Tier. This not only increases the danger of the chakra scalpel technique in combat likewise allows it to be used for surgeries with large animals and not just humans.
Weaknesses: -

Require an additional point of activation for every two inches added, lower the upkeep to E, and you'll be good to go.


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Name: Dissection Blade: Focusing
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: D
Upkeep Cost: D
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Ijutsu; Dissection Blade
Parent Technique: Dissection Blade
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: By focusing more chakra to the user's palms they are able to produce a sharper, solidified Chakra Scalpel. While it does consume a constant chakra price to maintain in this focused form it does make it more viable for combat purposes as well as cutting through something that may pose a danger to their patient's life, such as armor that cannot be removed with ease. Offensively, it makes it more dangerous as the cuts inflicted by a focused Chakra Scalpel are capable of damaging one's chakra coils, and will not heal naturally, requiring an Ijutsu technique to be used to heal the wound.
Weaknesses: -


This kinda takes away the purpose of Chakra Scalpel. It makes cuts on the inside of the body without making any kind of outside incision, so I'm not sure how it would cut through armor. As to damaging chakra coils, you'd need to be able to sense or otherwise see the chakra network in order to specifically target and damage it with a precision attack like this. If you want to cut through armor, you'll need a technique unrelated to Chakra Scalpel. Damaging the chakra network in any way would also result in a stamina penalty which needs calculated and would increase the power of this technique to C rank at the very least. I'd also assume that this could cause larger internal incisions than the normal Chakra Scalpel technique?

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PostSubject: Re: Xing's Technique Scrolls   Sun Nov 19, 2017 2:44 pm

Changes to Dissection Blade and Extension were made

Focusing is supposed to be a way for the Chakra Scalpel to be used more in combat, solidifying the chakra into a tangible blade while increasing the damage it can cause. I also removed the bit about damaging chakra coils, as I feel that was overreaching a bit.

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PostSubject: Re: Xing's Technique Scrolls   Mon Nov 20, 2017 4:51 pm

You still have two tiers listed in the description for the first one. Both Nyg and my requests will need to be done.

With Focusing, since you're saying it essentially turns Chakra Scalpel into a regular chakra flowed hand, does that mean you're doing external cutting damage to bodies with this rather than sticking to internal cuts? If so, you're going to need to add that metal armors of C rank and higher are immune and armor of other materials of B rank and higher are immune due to Chakra Scalpel's rank. Will it retain its ability to cause cuts without breaking the skin?

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PostSubject: Re: Xing's Technique Scrolls   Mon Nov 20, 2017 7:03 pm

Nyg requested that the chakra price be increased due to lowering the requirement two tiers, thus I increased the chakra cost for activation from D to C. Your requests negated that, so I was unsure what to do. I changed the upkeep to D instead, to reflect the increase that Nyg requested. If you would like me to increase it further, please let me know.

I made the changes to Focusing to make it crystal clear about blocking the blade and that it loses the ability to make internal cuts without breaking the skin.

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PostSubject: Re: Xing's Technique Scrolls   Thu Nov 23, 2017 11:27 am

@Xing wrote:
Name: Dissection Blade
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: D
Range: Varies
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu/Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Ijutsu; D-Rank Coordination
Parent Technique: Chakra Scalpel
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This is a fighting style created to diversify the utilization of the Chakra Scalpel Technique, and to increase it's application in both medical uses as well as for combat purposes. Like the original technique even the most skilled medic is unable to utilize the Chakra Scalpel technique to deliver fatal cuts without the proper levels of Coordination, however this fighting style is aimed towards improving the viability of using the Chakra Scalpel technique in conjunction with normal combat. This fighting style, rather than granting boosts to any stats, reduces the Coordination requirement to use the Chakra Scalpel technique effectively in combat by two tiers. Despite perverting the original intentions of the technique Dissection Blade remains at it's core a Medical Ninjutsu fighting style as it's combat applications can also be applied to surgery.
Weaknesses: -

Name: Dissection Blade: Extension
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: D
Upkeep Cost: E
Range: Varies
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Ijutsu; Dissection Blade
Parent Technique: Dissection Blade
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This technique focuses on extending the length of the user's Chakra Scalpels as in it's base form the chakra scalpel technique surrounds the user's palms and thus has a very small blade length 2 inches to be exact. By applying more chakra onto the base fighting style, the user is capable of increasing the length of the scalpel by an amount based on their Coordination, 2 Inches per Tier in the stat for a maximum of 12 Inches at S Tier. This will also cost an additional point of stamina per two inches added to the scalpel's length. This not only increases the danger of the chakra scalpel technique in combat likewise allows it to be used for surgeries with large animals and not just humans.
Weaknesses: -

Name: Dissection Blade: Focusing
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: D
Upkeep Cost: D
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Ijutsu; Dissection Blade
Parent Technique: Dissection Blade
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: By focusing more chakra to the user's palms they are able to produce a sharper, tangible Chakra Scalpel. While it does consume a constant chakra price to maintain in this focused form it does make it more viable for combat purposes as well as cutting through something that may pose a danger to their patient's life, or it can be used to block blows from another weapon due to the tangible nature. Offensively, it makes it more dangerous as the cuts inflicted by a focused Chakra Scalpel are incapable of healing naturally, requiring an Ijutsu technique to be used to heal the wound. As a result the scalpel looses its ability to cause internal wounds without breaking the skin, while becoming capable of being blocked by metal armors C-Rank or higher, or non-metal armors B-Rank or higher.
Weaknesses: -



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