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    The Barber Shop

    Zhengti
    Zhengti
    Jounin

    Posts : 39
    Join date : 2017-11-20

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    Skills & Elements: None
    Class: B
    Ryo: 50,000

    The Barber Shop Empty The Barber Shop

    Post by Zhengti on Sat Dec 16, 2017 1:24 am

    Code:
    [b]Name:[/b] (Any name will work to help make each one distinctive.)
    [b]Rank:[/b] (See guide to determine ranking.)
    [b]State:[/b] (Gas, Solid, or Liquid)
    [b]Price:[/b] (See guide to determine pricing.)
    [b]Symptoms:[/b] (These are the "tell" of the poison. It is what the victim feels during the countdown and duration of the poison.)
    [b]Effects:[/b] (Effects are the hard facts about the poison. Temporary/Permanent stat damage, organ failure, etc.)
    [b]Countdown:[/b] (The preamble to the poison before its Effects take place.)
    [b]Duration:[/b] (The length of time the Effects take place. For products whose Effects deal in absolute [perma-stat damage, death, KO, etc] this acts as a second countdown until they take place.)


    Drugs:


    Code:
    [b]Name:[/b] (Any name will work to help make each one distinctive.)
    [b]Rank:[/b] (See guide to determine ranking.)
    [b]Price:[/b] (See guide to determine pricing.)
    [b]Symptoms:[/b] (What the user feels when ingesting the drug.)
    [b]Effects:[/b] (What the drug actually does.)
    [b]Drawbacks:[/b] (The undesirable side effects.)
    [b]Countdown:[/b] (The preamble to the drug before its Effects take place.)
    [b]Duration:[/b] (The length of time the Effects take place.)
    [b]Cooldown:[/b] (The amount of time needed before taking another dose of any Chemistry creation and the length of time the drawbacks take place.)



    Provisions:


    Code:
    [b]Name:[/b] (Any name will work to help make each one distinctive.)
    [b]Rank:[/b] (See guide to determine ranking.)
    [b]Food or Drink?:[/b] (One or the other)
    [b]Price:[/b] (See guide to determine pricing.)
    [b]Description:[/b] (What is your dish in detail?)
    [b]Effects:[/b] (Where the stat bonuses are applied.)



    Medicine:


    Code:
    [b]Name:[/b] (Any name will work to help make each one distinctive.)
    [b]Rank:[/b] (See guide to determine ranking.)
    [b]Price:[/b] (See guide to determine pricing.)
    [b]Application:[/b] (Ingestion, rub, injection, etc...)
    [b]Effects:[/b] (The function of the medicine.)
    [b]Duration:[/b] (How long it takes for the medicine to fully take place.)
    [b]Cooldown:[/b] (The amount of time needed before taking another dose of any Chemistry creation.)



    Compounds:


    Code:
    [b]Name:[/b] (Any name will work to help make each one distinctive.)
    [b]Rank:[/b] (Scales directly with intelligence.)
    [b]Price:[/b] (Stay within reason.)
    [b]Form:[/b] (Paste, Liquid, Powder, Solid, Gas, etc)
    [b]Application:[/b] (Does it need heat to activate? Combined with another product?)
    [b]Description:[/b] (Describe the properties of the Compound if needed.)
    [b]Effects:[/b] (What does it do?)
    [b]Quantity:[/b] (Be sure to scale your price with the amount you're creating.)


    Last edited by Zhengti on Thu Dec 21, 2017 6:53 pm; edited 1 time in total
    Zhengti
    Zhengti
    Jounin

    Posts : 39
    Join date : 2017-11-20

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: None
    Class: B
    Ryo: 50,000

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    Post by Zhengti on Sat Dec 16, 2017 2:06 am

    Name: Pirelli's Miracle Elixir
    Rank: A
    Food or Drink?: Drink
    Price: 40,000
    Description: A mouth-watering, heavily refreshing concoction especially popular in the desert and after long sporting events, this miraculous liquid comes packaged in lovely, rectangular glass container with rounded corners and edges and is most commonly seen in two different shades: gold and pitch black. Essentially an extravagantly priced lemonade, the beverage is marketed such that the quality of similar drinks can be measured by the rate of separation between the lemonade and activated charcoal. In this drink's case, it settles in less than one minute (guaranteed). Shaken before drinking, the agitation fully incorporates the lightly honeyed lemonade with the rosemary oil infused charcoal, rounding the beverage off with a heady first taste, light, crisp body, warm undertones, and a pungent kick of lemon.
    Effects:
    1 tier to Constitution
    ++ to Strength
    Preparation: 4 posts
    Countdown: 15 posts
    Serving:10 oz is 2 servings (or 4 if you sip)
    Duration: 10 posts
    Cooldown: 7 posts

    Name: Super Vitamin Pill
    Rank: B
    Price: 75,000
    Application: Ingestion
    Effects: A concentrated mixture of all major vitamin groups, berry flavorings, and a touch of plant fats, these small gel capsules offer unprecedented protection against illness and injury. For the duration of the effect, the person who consumes this is insulated from the first 5 minuses that would debuff their stats (except for perception debuffs). However, this protection comes in the order that the debuffs are received, allowing a small opening for an exceedingly clever opponent.
    Duration: 15
    Cooldown: 13


    Last edited by Zhengti on Wed Dec 20, 2017 1:57 am; edited 1 time in total
    Masuyo Kaede
    Masuyo Kaede
    Jounin Commander

    Posts : 1195
    Join date : 2016-12-07

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Fire | Earth | Wind | Water | Bukijutsu | Ninjutsu | Taijutsu
    Class: S
    Ryo: 30,000

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    Post by Masuyo Kaede on Mon Dec 18, 2017 2:07 pm

    @Zhengti wrote:Name: Pirelli's Miracle Elixir
    Rank: A
    Food or Drink?: Drink
    Price: 70,000
    Description: A mouth-watering, heavily refreshing concoction especially popular in the desert and after long sporting events, this miraculous liquid comes packaged in lovely, rectangular glass container with rounded corners and edges and is most commonly seen in two different shades: gold and pitch black. Essentially an extravagantly priced lemonade, the beverage is marketed such that the quality of similar drinks can be measured by the rate of separation between the lemonade and activated charcoal. In this drink's case, it settles in less than one minute (guaranteed). Shaken before drinking, the agitation fully incorporates the lightly honeyed lemonade with the rosemary oil infused charcoal, rounding the beverage off with a heady first taste, light, crisp body, warm undertones, and a pungent kick of lemon.
    Effects:
    1 tier to Constitution
    ++ to Strength
    Preparation: 4 posts
    Serving:10 oz is 2 servings (or 4 if you sip)
    Duration: 10 posts
    Cooldown: 7 posts

    For starters, and this is an error on my behalf when making the template, add a countdown portion after Preparation and before Serving. Since this is a beverage, it can achieve the minimum of 15.

    The price does not need to be so high. In fact, if you wish to keep the 2 servings and duration of 10 posts you can decrease the price down to 40,000 ryo.



    Name: Super Vitamin Pill
    Rank: B
    Price: 75,000
    Application: Ingestion
    Effects: A concentrated mixture of all major vitamin groups, berry flavorings, and a touch of plant fats, these small gel capsules offer unprecedented protection against illness and injury. For the duration of the effect, the person who consumes this is insulated from the first 5 minuses that would debuff their stats (except for perception debuffs). However, this protection comes in the order that the debuffs are received, allowing a small opening for an exceedingly clever opponent.
    Duration: 15
    Cooldown: 13

    I'm not quite sure what you are trying to achieve with this. You speak of five minuses that debuff the user's stats, but provide no information where they come from.

    Does this medicine prevent the user from being debuffed for the first five minuses they will receive?


    _________________
    Strength: C
    Constitution: B
    Stamina: B
    Speed: A+
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: B
    Perception: A

    Spoiler:


      Thigh Holster
    • 1 Kunai
      Front Holster
    • 10 Shuriken
      Back Holster
    • 10 Shuriken
      Right Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 6 Chili Pepper Bombs
    • 150 ft. Steel Wire
    • 5 Red Tags
    • 20 Military Ration Pills
    • Bandage Wrap
      Left Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 3 Flash Bombs
    • 3 Smoke Bombs
    • 50 Caltrops
    • 30 ft. Manriki
      Utility Belt
    • Canteen
    • Blacktongue
      Flak Jacket Scroll Holster
    • Small Sealed Weapon Scroll



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    Zhengti
    Zhengti
    Jounin

    Posts : 39
    Join date : 2017-11-20

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: None
    Class: B
    Ryo: 50,000

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    Post by Zhengti on Wed Dec 20, 2017 1:59 am

    Ok I fixed the things you said for the first one. Thanks for the help and what does the countdown do exactly?

    The Vitamin Pill is supposed to protect you from future debuffs yes. I don't know if that's ok or not.
    Masuyo Kaede
    Masuyo Kaede
    Jounin Commander

    Posts : 1195
    Join date : 2016-12-07

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Fire | Earth | Wind | Water | Bukijutsu | Ninjutsu | Taijutsu
    Class: S
    Ryo: 30,000

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    Post by Masuyo Kaede on Fri Dec 22, 2017 5:17 pm

    @Zhengti wrote:Name: Pirelli's Miracle Elixir
    Rank: A
    Food or Drink?: Drink
    Price: 40,000
    Description: A mouth-watering, heavily refreshing concoction especially popular in the desert and after long sporting events, this miraculous liquid comes packaged in lovely, rectangular glass container with rounded corners and edges and is most commonly seen in two different shades: gold and pitch black. Essentially an extravagantly priced lemonade, the beverage is marketed such that the quality of similar drinks can be measured by the rate of separation between the lemonade and activated charcoal. In this drink's case, it settles in less than one minute (guaranteed). Shaken before drinking, the agitation fully incorporates the lightly honeyed lemonade with the rosemary oil infused charcoal, rounding the beverage off with a heady first taste, light, crisp body, warm undertones, and a pungent kick of lemon.
    Effects:
    1 tier to Constitution
    ++ to Strength
    Preparation: 4 posts
    Countdown: 15 posts
    Serving:10 oz is 2 servings (or 4 if you sip)
    Duration: 10 posts
    Cooldown: 7 posts

    Approved

    The countdown is the digestion period. So ideally, a provision is best eaten/drunk before a battle or confrontation.

    Name: Super Vitamin Pill
    Rank: B
    Price: 75,000
    Application: Ingestion
    Effects: A concentrated mixture of all major vitamin groups, berry flavorings, and a touch of plant fats, these small gel capsules offer unprecedented protection against illness and injury. For the duration of the effect, the person who consumes this is insulated from the first 5 minuses that would debuff their stats (except for perception debuffs). However, this protection comes in the order that the debuffs are received, allowing a small opening for an exceedingly clever opponent.
    Duration: 15
    Cooldown: 13

    Approved


    _________________
    Strength: C
    Constitution: B
    Stamina: B
    Speed: A+
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: B
    Perception: A

    Spoiler:


      Thigh Holster
    • 1 Kunai
      Front Holster
    • 10 Shuriken
      Back Holster
    • 10 Shuriken
      Right Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 6 Chili Pepper Bombs
    • 150 ft. Steel Wire
    • 5 Red Tags
    • 20 Military Ration Pills
    • Bandage Wrap
      Left Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 3 Flash Bombs
    • 3 Smoke Bombs
    • 50 Caltrops
    • 30 ft. Manriki
      Utility Belt
    • Canteen
    • Blacktongue
      Flak Jacket Scroll Holster
    • Small Sealed Weapon Scroll



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