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PostSubject: Yumi's Workshop   Thu Feb 01, 2018 3:21 am

Possess UA to utilise Genjutsu outside of my class allowance.

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PostSubject: Re: Yumi's Workshop   Fri Feb 02, 2018 6:18 am

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Possess UA to utilise Genjutsu outside of my class allowance.

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PostSubject: Re: Yumi's Workshop   Sat Feb 03, 2018 6:31 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Yumi's Workshop   Sun Feb 04, 2018 10:05 am

@Yumi wrote:

[*]Name: Soft Body Modification V1
Rank: D
Power: N/A
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: 3
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu, Taijutsu
Classification: Secret / Exclusive (Taught only by creator)
Requirements: Ijutsu, Soft Body Manipulation
Parent Technique:  Soft Body Manipulation
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: The Soft Body Modification technique is an experimental technique designed by Hateshiginai, Yumi based off of its parent technique the Soft Body Manipulation. Like the Soft Body Manipulation the caster actives the cells in their body to such a degree they become malleable, but instead of extending the limbs the user will use it to soften the body to their advantage. By manipulating the bodies cells to become malleable, it gives the user's body rubber-like qualities. When attacked at the point of impact by allowing the technique to take place the body will become flexible like rubber and will instead manipulate around the attack. The body will absorb and direct the impact from a single point to the entire body spreading the damage out equally to nullify it.

At D rank the Soft Body Modification is only effective against attacks of equal or lower strength. D Rank Damage and D rank Jutsu.

Weaknesses:Due to the complex nature of the technique it consumes more chakra equal to one rank up (C Rank). Can't use this technique when stamina is below 10

Suffice to say this technique should only work against techniques/attacks that inflict blunt trauma? It would be ineffective against say a D Rank Katon technique. If so that language should be in the weaknesses section.

@Yumi wrote:

[*]Name: Oshiken (Pressure Fist)
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 3
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu, Taijutsu
Classification: Secret / Exclusive (Taught only by creator)
Requirements: Ijutsu, Intelligence C or higher Coordination D+
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: Based off the Hyuga's gentle fist combining knowledge of not only the human body but pressure points the Pressure Fist focuses on precise speedy movements to attack the enemies pressure points. Pressure points are located throughout the body and when hit can have varying effects on the body. Some of these effects can be used for medical purposes to help stimulate the bodies regenerative abilities or to relieve pain. When used for combat purpose, however, can be used paralyse limbs, cause a great degree of pain or even make the target faint.

Boosts Speed by one tier with the taijutsu skill and by one plus without it.

  • Strength higher then Constitution by 2 Tiers+: Extreme Pain: Wears off in 4 posts
  • Strength higher then Constitution by 1 Tier: High Pain: Wears off in 3 posts
  • Strength equal to Constitution: Mild Pain: Wears off in 2 posts
  • Strength lower Constitution by 1 Tier: Low pain: Wears off in 1 post.

Weaknesses: Does not work against those with a constitution two tiers higher than the user's strength.

In order to create a style derivative from Gentle Fist you need to KNOW how Gentle Fist functions. That's determined by your Intelligence stat as per the rules. Although, for something like this you probably don't even need to know of Gentle Fist's existence. I'd suggest removing the mention of gentle fist as all this really does is target the weak points of the human body and anybody with medical knowledge would know what those are without being familiar with the Gentle Fist style.

@Yumi wrote:

[*]Name: Kyosen Point
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu, Taijutsu
Classification: Secret / Exclusive (Taught only by creator)
Requirements: Ijutsu, Oshiken, Coordination D+
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: Using the Oshiken the user channels chakra into their fingertips and targets the kyosen pressure point. The Kyosen pressure point is located at the xiphoid appendix of the sternum at its end. The striking of the kyosen pressure point a key point is designed to release pain from the impact throughout the enemies body to hinder them. The higher ones strength compared to the target's constitution the more pain felt.

  • Strength higher then Constitution by 2 Tiers+: Extreme Pain: Wears off in 4 posts
  • Strength higher then Constitution by 1 Tier: High Pain: Wears off in 3 posts
  • Strength equal to Constitution: Mild Pain: Wears off in 2 posts
  • Strength lower to Constitution by 1 Tier: Low pain: Wears off in 1 post.

Weaknesses: A constitution two tiers higher than the user's strength will be unaffected.

This looks good and will be approved when the parent style is fixed.

@Yumi wrote:


  • Name: Suigetsu Point
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ijutsu, Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret / Exclusive (Taught only by creator)
    Requirements: Ijutsu, Oshiken, Coordination D+
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: Using the Oshiken the user channels chakra into their fingertips and targets the suigetsu pressure point, the solar plexus. The blow does not require a great amount of force only to hit the point and release chakra on impact to strike a blow to the pressure point. The striking of the suigetsu pressure point a key point is designed to release pain from the impact throughout the enemies body to hinder them. The higher ones strength compared to the target's constitution the more pain felt.

    • Strength higher then Constitution by 2 Tiers+: Extreme Pain: Wears off in 4 posts
    • Strength higher then Constitution by 1 Tier: High Pain: Wears off in 3 posts
    • Strength equal to Constitution: Mild Pain: Wears off in 2 posts
    • Strength lower to Constitution by 1 Tier: Low pain: Wears off in 1 post

    Weaknesses: A constitution two tiers higher than the user's strength will be unaffected.

Same as above.

@Yumi wrote:


  • Name: Sann Point
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ijutsu, Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret / Exclusive (Taught only by creator)
    Requirements: Ijutsu, Oshiken, Coordination D+
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: Using the Oshiken the user channels chakra into their fingertips and targets the Sann-li or San-bra pressure point located at the anterosuperior of the first external radial of the forearm. The striking of this point is to induce paralysis in the arm struck.

    Effects to take place:

    • E Rank Constitution: Immediate effect
    • D Rank Constitution: 2 posts for effect to take place. Numbing effect is felt at the first post.
    • C Rank Constitution: 3 Posts for effect to take place. Numbing effect is felt at the second post
    • B Rank Constitution: 6 Posts for effect to take place. Numbing effect is felt at the fourth post
    • A Rank Constitution: 7 Posts for effect to take place. Numbing effect is felt at the fifth post
    • S Rank Constitution: 10 Posts for effect to take place. Numbing effect is felt at the seventh post

    Effects for Paralysis to wear off:

    • E Rank Constitution: 5 posts
    • D Rank Constitution: 4 posts
    • C Rank Constitution: 3 post.
    • B Rank Constitution: 2 post.
    • A Rank Constitution: 1 post.
    • S Rank Constitution: 1 post.

    Weaknesses: A constitution two tiers higher than the user's strength will be unaffected.

Same as above.

@Yumi wrote:


  • Name: Acupuncture Healing Level 1
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ijutsu
    Classification: Secret / Exclusive (Taught only by creator)
    Requirements: Ijutsu, Senbon, Coordination D+
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Ram -> Boar -> Dog -> Rat -> Snake
    Description: Utilising senbon needles the user channels chakra into the tips stabs with the needle aiming for pressure points in the body. The chakra is used to reinforce the needle tip to allow it entry beneath the skin. This technique is purely for medical purposes as it requires the user to jab multiple needles into the target's body hitting key acupuncture points to help stimulate the bodies natural regeneration abilities or to help relieve pain. While stimulating the bodies regenerative capabilities, this technique helps to heal small cuts, shallow bruises and first degree burns within moments. But for more difficult wounds a longer healing process is required, can only be used to heal non-life threatening injuries. Can be used in conjunction with other healing techniques reducing healing time by 1 for each technique used in combination.

    • 5 Posts: medium cuts, larger bruising and mild second-degree burns.
    • 10 Posts: Large cuts, deep bruising and severe second-degree burns.
    • 15 posts: Deep cuts, severe bruising and mild third-degree burns.

    Weaknesses: Target must be completely still.

Approved.


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  • Name: Acupuncture: Knock Out
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: 0
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ijutsu
    Classification: Secret / Exclusive (Taught only by creator)
    Requirements: Ijutsu, Senbon, Coordination D+
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: Utilising a senbon needle or two fingers, the caster channels chakra to the tip and jabs or stabs in one of two places. The first at the rear below the lobule of the ear, near the angle of the jaw the second point at the middle part of the sternocleidomastoid muscle, the right side of the neck, on the path of the carotid artery making sure to avoid the artery when using a needle. This is to induce fainting in the target to ensure they remain mobile while the Acupuncture procedure takes place. The higher one's constitution, the more chakra required to knock them out.

    • E-D Constitution: 3
    • C Constitution: 5

    Weaknesses: When using a senbon needle at the second point requires C+ coordination. Does not work on those with a constitution B or higher.

Approved

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  • Name: Paralysis Blow: Arm
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: 0
    Range: 0-20m
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ijutsu
    Classification: Secret / Exclusive (Taught only by creator)
    Requirements: Ijutsu, Senbon, Coordination D+
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: A technique that combines the senbon needle and the art of acupuncture to create an attack. The user channels chakra into the tip of a senbon or senbons and throws them aiming for the point located on the anterosuperior of the first external radial of the forearm right or left. When the needle pierces into the point the chakra surges out to cause numbness that travels up and down the arm before it turns into a temporary paralysis of the limb.

    Effects to take place:

    • E Rank Constitution: Immediate effect
    • D Rank Constitution: 2 posts for effect to take place. Numbing effect is felt at the first post.
    • C Rank Constitution: 3 Posts for effect to take place. Numbing effect is felt at the second post.


    Effects for Paralysis to wear off:

    • E Rank Constitution: 3 posts
    • D Rank Constitution: 2 posts
    • C Rank Constitution: 1 post.

    Weaknesses: Does not work on those with a constitution B or higher. Pressure point is at the front of the body, cannot be hit form the rear

Approved.

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  • Name: Paralysis Blow: Leg
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: 0
    Range: 0-20m
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ijutsu
    Classification: Secret / Exclusive (Taught only by creator)
    Requirements: Ijutsu, Senbon, Coordination D+
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: A technique that combines the senbon needle and the art of acupuncture to create an attack. The user channels chakra into the tip of a senbon or senbons and throws them aiming for the point on the anterolateral aspect of the thigh, above the upper edge of the patella, a palm across it. When the needle pierces into the point, the chakra surges out to cause numbness that travels up and down the leg before it turns into a temporary paralysis of the limb.
    Effects to take place:

    • E Rank Constitution: Immediate effect
    • D Rank Constitution: 2 posts for effect to take place. Numbing effect is felt at the first post.
    • C Rank Constitution: 3 Posts for effect to take place. Numbing effect is felt at the second post.


    Effects for Paralysis to wear off:

    • E Rank Constitution: 3 posts
    • D Rank Constitution: 2 posts
    • C Rank Constitution: 1 post.

    Weaknesses: Does not work on those with a constitution B or higher. Pressure point is at the front of the body, cannot be hit form the rear

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  • Stamina: B
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  • Coordination: C
  • Intelligence: C
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PostSubject: Re: Yumi's Workshop   Sun Feb 04, 2018 2:39 pm

Soft body modification and Oshiken have been fixed as asked. Bump.

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PostSubject: Re: Yumi's Workshop   Sun Feb 04, 2018 4:23 pm

Quote :

[*]Name: Soft Body Modification V1
Rank: D
Power: N/A
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: 3
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu, Taijutsu
Classification: Secret / Exclusive (Taught only by creator)
Requirements: Ijutsu, Soft Body Manipulation
Parent Technique:  Soft Body Manipulation
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: The Soft Body Modification technique is an experimental technique designed by Hateshiginai, Yumi based off of its parent technique the Soft Body Manipulation. Like the Soft Body Manipulation the caster actives the cells in their body to such a degree they become malleable, but instead of extending the limbs the user will use it to soften the body to their advantage. By manipulating the bodies cells to become malleable, it gives the user's body rubber-like qualities. When attacked at the point of impact by allowing the technique to take place the body will become flexible like rubber and will instead manipulate around the attack. The body will absorb and direct the impact from a single point to the entire body spreading the damage out equally to nullify it.

At D rank the Soft Body Modification is only effective against attacks of equal or lower strength. D Rank Damage and D rank Jutsu.

Weaknesses:Due to the complex nature of the technique it consumes more chakra equal to one rank up (C Rank). Can't use this technique when stamina is below 10. Works only against blunt force trauma.

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[*]Name: Oshiken (Pressure Fist)
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 3
Range: Self
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Ijutsu, Taijutsu
Classification: Secret / Exclusive (Taught only by creator)
Requirements: Ijutsu, Intelligence C or higher Coordination D+
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: Combining knowledge of not only the human body but pressure points the Pressure Fist focuses on precise speedy movements to attack the enemies pressure points. Pressure points are located throughout the body and when hit can have varying effects on the body. Some of these effects can be used for medical purposes to help stimulate the bodies regenerative abilities or to relieve pain. When used for combat purpose, however, can be used paralyse limbs, cause a great degree of pain or even make the target faint.

Boosts Speed by one tier with the taijutsu skill and by one plus without it.

  • Strength higher then Constitution by 2 Tiers+: Extreme Pain: Wears off in 4 posts
  • Strength higher then Constitution by 1 Tier: High Pain: Wears off in 3 posts
  • Strength equal to Constitution: Mild Pain: Wears off in 2 posts
  • Strength lower Constitution by 1 Tier: Low pain: Wears off in 1 post.

Weaknesses: Does not work against those with a constitution two tiers higher than the user's strength.
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I notice you're using Speed as the boosted stat for this technique. Speed solely refers to your movement speed on foot. I believe Coordination might best interest you with this technique, as Coordination performs more like Dexterity, allowing better striking.

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  • Name: Kyosen Point
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ijutsu, Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret / Exclusive (Taught only by creator)
    Requirements: Ijutsu, Oshiken, Coordination D+
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: Using the Oshiken the user channels chakra into their fingertips and targets the kyosen pressure point. The Kyosen pressure point is located at the xiphoid appendix of the sternum at its end. The striking of the kyosen pressure point a key point is designed to release pain from the impact throughout the enemies body to hinder them. The higher ones strength compared to the target's constitution the more pain felt.

    • Strength higher then Constitution by 2 Tiers+: Extreme Pain: Wears off in 4 posts
    • Strength higher then Constitution by 1 Tier: High Pain: Wears off in 3 posts
    • Strength equal to Constitution: Mild Pain: Wears off in 2 posts
    • Strength lower to Constitution by 1 Tier: Low pain: Wears off in 1 post.

    Weaknesses: A constitution two tiers higher than the user's strength will be unaffected.

I noticed that technique does not grant any particular boosts. Is this intentional? You can provide stat boosts to your Taijutsu technique, which stack on top of the Taijutsu style when used in conjunction.

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  • Name: Suigetsu Point
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ijutsu, Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret / Exclusive (Taught only by creator)
    Requirements: Ijutsu, Oshiken, Coordination D+
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: Using the Oshiken the user channels chakra into their fingertips and targets the suigetsu pressure point, the solar plexus. The blow does not require a great amount of force only to hit the point and release chakra on impact to strike a blow to the pressure point. The striking of the suigetsu pressure point a key point is designed to release pain from the impact throughout the enemies body to hinder them. The higher ones strength compared to the target's constitution the more pain felt.

    • Strength higher then Constitution by 2 Tiers+: Extreme Pain: Wears off in 4 posts
    • Strength higher then Constitution by 1 Tier: High Pain: Wears off in 3 posts
    • Strength equal to Constitution: Mild Pain: Wears off in 2 posts
    • Strength lower to Constitution by 1 Tier: Low pain: Wears off in 1 post

    Weaknesses: A constitution two tiers higher than the user's strength will be unaffected.


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  • Name: Sann Point
    Rank: D
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 3
    Upkeep Cost: N/A
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ijutsu, Taijutsu
    Classification: Secret / Exclusive (Taught only by creator)
    Requirements: Ijutsu, Oshiken, Coordination D+
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: N/A
    Description: Using the Oshiken the user channels chakra into their fingertips and targets the Sann-li or San-bra pressure point located at the anterosuperior of the first external radial of the forearm. The striking of this point is to induce paralysis in the arm struck.

    Effects to take place:

    • E Rank Constitution: Immediate effect
    • D Rank Constitution: 2 posts for effect to take place. Numbing effect is felt at the first post.
    • C Rank Constitution: 3 Posts for effect to take place. Numbing effect is felt at the second post
    • B Rank Constitution: 6 Posts for effect to take place. Numbing effect is felt at the fourth post
    • A Rank Constitution: 7 Posts for effect to take place. Numbing effect is felt at the fifth post
    • S Rank Constitution: 10 Posts for effect to take place. Numbing effect is felt at the seventh post

    Effects for Paralysis to wear off:

    • E Rank Constitution: 5 posts
    • D Rank Constitution: 4 posts
    • C Rank Constitution: 3 post.
    • B Rank Constitution: 2 post.
    • A Rank Constitution: 1 post.
    • S Rank Constitution: 1 post.

    Weaknesses: A constitution two tiers higher than the user's strength will be unaffected.

For paralysis-inducing technique such as this, I would like to see it be at least C-rank.

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PostSubject: Re: Yumi's Workshop   Sun Feb 04, 2018 7:28 pm

Bump necessary edits have been made.

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PostSubject: Re: Yumi's Workshop   Sun Feb 04, 2018 10:17 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Yumi's Workshop   Mon Feb 05, 2018 5:15 am

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PostSubject: Re: Yumi's Workshop   Thu Feb 08, 2018 12:28 am

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PostSubject: Re: Yumi's Workshop   Thu Feb 08, 2018 12:30 am

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PostSubject: Re: Yumi's Workshop   Sat Feb 10, 2018 6:33 pm

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It appears I did forget to mention one thing: For Pressure Fists and its related technique do need to have a sort of "build up" for its pain yield. Something like three consecutive strikes in the same area, or you can increase the rank to C and power to B, following an increase of chakra. If you plan to deal a lasting, localized pain it would require an effort rather than me stubbing your toe and poking your forehead to draw such effects.

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PostSubject: Re: Yumi's Workshop   Tue Feb 13, 2018 5:43 pm

Made edits to Oshiken and the three techniques under it.

The other four listed aren't apart of it do they require editing for the same purpose when two are only used for healing?

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PostSubject: Re: Yumi's Workshop   Sun Feb 18, 2018 8:59 pm

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That was a quoting issue on my behalf.


Regardless, reapproved

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PostSubject: Re: Yumi's Workshop   Sun Feb 18, 2018 9:14 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Yumi's Workshop   Mon Feb 19, 2018 2:17 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Yumi's Workshop   Fri Feb 23, 2018 8:29 pm

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