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    Post by Kanbaru Suruga Thu Apr 05, 2018 12:16 am

    Name: Suruga, Kanbaru
    Age: 20
    Gender: Female
    Village: Kumogakure
    Rank: Jounin
    Title: Kumo's Multi-Faceted Goddess

    Clan: N/A
    Bloodline: N/A
    Element(s): N/A
    Skill(s): Weapon Smithing, Chemistry, Armor Smithing, Kujutsu, Fuinjutsu, Misc. Crafts

    Stats

    • Strength: E
    • Constitution: E
    • Stamina: E
    • Speed: E
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence: A
    • Perception: E


    Unique Abilities:
    - Crafting Expertise: A player may craft an item one rank higher than what their current experience or skill set allows. This can result in a 50% increase in price for material.

    - Chemistry Expertise: A player may create chemistry creations one rank higher than what their current experience or skill set allows. This can result in an increased countdown (for poisons and drugs) or cooldown (for medicines and provisions.) The increase is the next rank's timer increased by .5 (rounding up.)

    - Portable Shop: A player may invest a sum of money and expect returns to a maximum of 5% per month. The player must roll a 1d10 to determine the outcome of the success.  An outcome of 6-10 means that the investment failed and all of the money is lost, but an outcome of 1-5 means a successful investment and 5% of that money is paid to her once per month, permanently.

    - Good Spending: A player may have a permanent 50% discount within their village regarding buying tools or raw materials, but never both without an appropriate drawback. I'll take a reduction for the cost of raw materials.

    - Information Expert: Kanbaru has spent years keeping her ears to the streets, and as such, has piled up an exceptional amount of knowledge on all types of happenings within the village and in the general world -- whether it be about the personal lives of others or to more important matters, if you want information, Kanbaru is your best bet.

    - Relationships Are Overrated: You don't get to know every inch of other's personal matters without a few betrayals and selling out. She has an incredibly hard time forming loyal relationships. Those who wish to befriend her must submit to the fact that information about their personal lives will be subject to purchase through Kanbaru.

    Appearance:
    Spoiler:

    History:

        Born on the morning of the hottest summer in years, Kanbaru had been blessed from the moment she was born. Her mother proudly proclaimed that God himself was smiling upon her birth as reasoning for the blistering heat, much to the chagrin of her other present family members. Though their child was born a girl, Kanbaru's parents had exceptionally high expectations for their daughter. They didn't want to raise a woman who stayed at home waiting for her husband and raising kids. On the contrary, they wanted their daughter to have her own independent, fulfilling life in which she could truly stand on her own as an individual. As a result of these expectations, Kanbaru was bombarded with worldly education from the moment she learned how to read. She spent much of her early years constantly hounded by a multitude of different private tutors, specialists in all different types of professions. Kanbaru's parents weren't concerned with what their daughter would one day want to do with her life, they just wanted her to be someone worthy of maximum respect, an individual others would talk about in high esteem. Luckily for them, Kanbaru was quick learner. She was like a sponge, absorbing information left and right with seemingly no limit.

        As Kanbaru grew older, the topics of interest that garnered her interest continued to grow. History, Chemistry, Politics, etc. She loved all types of subjects. Her parents were secretly ecstatic that their only daughter did not want to take up the path of combat. Instead, she surrounded herself endlessly with books. At about the age of fourteen, Kanbaru's interests began to narrow. She wanted not only to learn about things, but to create them as well. She wanted to be a person capable of bringing a smile to the face of others with things she created. In order to fulfill this adolescent dream of hers, she began to pin her focus on the science behind the creation and application of tools, chemistry, and medicine. Her parents were all too willing to aid their daughter in the pursuit of her dreams, allowing her to study under professionals in the fields of blacksmithing, chemistry, and medicine -- a wide array of skills, no doubt. Much like her brain had accepted all of the knowledge contained within the books she loved to read, it continued to accept the practices required to perform her dream at elite levels. She rose in ability at an exceptional rate, quickly becoming known throughout the village.

        Now twenty years old, Kanbaru has become a common name throughout Kumogakure. Thanks to her elite ability in such a vast range of skills and her contributions to both the village and its citizens, she earned the shinobi rank of Jounin -- one of the few to earn such a title without ever witnessing combat. Her skills were simply too grand to ignore and her value as an asset to the village was undeniable, so it was in their best interest to shower her with as much acclaim as possible in order to maintain her always-wavering loyalty. In return, Kanbaru continues to lead fields of research and development for the village, using the near unlimited access granted to her by the Jounin rank to gain access to knowledge that is usually not privy to the minds of common doctors and blacksmiths. As of today, Kanbaru remains one of the go-to individual for needs relating to weapon making, armor smithing, medicine, or chemistry -- not only in Kumogakure, but in the world. Uninterested with matters outside of her work and hobbies, Kanbaru pays little mind in advancing in the field of relationships, spending most of her time surrounded by clients or mountains of paper work. While her mother has recently become obsessed with the thought of grandchildren, Kanbaru continues to ignore most matters relating to the heart. Still, with so much of her prime years remaining, it's only a matter of time before she begins to expand her circle of friends.

    Personality:

        Kanbaru is a typically serious individual when it comes to her work. She remains absolutely focused, committed to performing at the height of her abilities at all times. She constantly strives to improve her skills and as such she must attack every moment of her profession with absolute seriousness. However, when she's not working, she's completely different. A known prankster and overall jokey person, Kanbaru spends a lot of time messing with people. This extends onto her gambling habits, where she will typically make fun of her "opponents" at the table and play tricks on them.

        Usually far removed from real connections to others, Kanbaru spends a lot of her time in secluded areas -- whether this be in a remote part of the village or in her own home. She's usually putting in extra work hours, researching, reading, or simply just thinking about miscellaneous things, like inventions unable to exist due to technological limitations. On the off chance that she is confronted with someone who shares her interests, Kanbaru will typically spiral into an endless rant about her most recent thoughts regarding the subject.

        Despite her high level of intelligence across a wide variety of topics, Kanbaru will sometimes "play dumb" as a way of teasing others. It brings her joy to see others scramble to impress her, spouting on about topics that they have remedial knowledge of with utmost confidence due to her charade. She doubly enjoys playing this trick on men who approach her with obvious romantic intentions.


    Roleplay Sample:
    Small excerpt from the beginning of a book I've been working on:

    Spoiler:


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    Post by Ryuko Thu Apr 05, 2018 9:26 pm

    Two things

    First could you please list your stats as a letter value. Having just a number is really confusing

    Second, your Ua don't really seem to do anything. Being able to play the piano is great but that's just something you can role play, you don't really need an UA for that. Ideally they should be something that give your character a small edge in the game

    You might want to check https://gladiusnarutorp.forumotion.com/t547-ua-guide-for-newbies to get a better idea of what UA can do


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    Strength: B
    Constitution: B
    Stamina: A-> A++ (Arch Angel's Tiara)
    Speed: B
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: A
    Perception: B
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    Post by Kanbaru Suruga Fri Apr 06, 2018 12:39 am

    Bump. Fixed the complaints (I think). I'd like to leave the Information Expert up as a UA simply because it'll be used to function as an info dealer for the character. If it's still an issue, it can be removed.

    Thank you!
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    Skills & Elements: Bukijutsu | Weapon Crafting
    Class: D
    Ryo: 0

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    Post by Rin Matoi Fri Apr 06, 2018 6:10 pm

    I've noticed (assuming the green texts are your UAs and red texts are Drawbacks) you have the drawback associated with the UA in the UA section, as well as an additional drawback.


    For instance:

    Crafting Expertise: A player may craft an item one rank higher than what their current experience or skill set allows. This can result in a 50% increase in price for material.

    The 50% increase in cost is the drawback associated for this particular UA. You don't need the other drawbacks you have listed in red (despite most of them being invalid.)
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    Post by Kanbaru Suruga Fri Apr 06, 2018 8:54 pm

    I think it's ok now? Bump.
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    Class: D
    Ryo: 0

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    Post by Rin Matoi Sat Apr 07, 2018 12:29 am

    One last thing:


    You have 7 skills. Jounin start with 6 skills. Do that and you'll be golden.
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    Post by Kanbaru Suruga Sat Apr 07, 2018 1:04 am

    Done!

    Thank you!
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    Skills & Elements: Bukijutsu | Weapon Crafting
    Class: D
    Ryo: 0

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    Post by Rin Matoi Sat Apr 07, 2018 1:30 am

    Kanbaru Suruga wrote:Name: Suruga, Kanbaru
    Age: 20
    Gender: Female
    Village: Kumogakure
    Rank: Jounin
    Title: Kumo's Multi-Faceted Goddess

    Clan: N/A
    Bloodline: N/A
    Element(s): N/A
    Skill(s): Weapon Smithing, Chemistry, Armor Smithing, Kujutsu, Fuinjutsu, Misc. Crafts

    Stats

    • Strength: E
    • Constitution: E
    • Stamina: E
    • Speed: E
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence: A
    • Perception: E


    Unique Abilities:
    - Crafting Expertise: A player may craft an item one rank higher than what their current experience or skill set allows. This can result in a 50% increase in price for material.

    - Chemistry Expertise: A player may create chemistry creations one rank higher than what their current experience or skill set allows. This can result in an increased countdown (for poisons and drugs) or cooldown (for medicines and provisions.) The increase is the next rank's timer increased by .5 (rounding up.)

    - Portable Shop: A player may invest a sum of money and expect returns to a maximum of 5% per month. The player must roll a 1d10 to determine the outcome of the success.  An outcome of 6-10 means that the investment failed and all of the money is lost, but an outcome of 1-5 means a successful investment and 5% of that money is paid to her once per month, permanently.

    - Good Spending: A player may have a permanent 50% discount within their village regarding buying tools or raw materials, but never both without an appropriate drawback. I'll take a reduction for the cost of raw materials.

    - Information Expert: Kanbaru has spent years keeping her ears to the streets, and as such, has piled up an exceptional amount of knowledge on all types of happenings within the village and in the general world -- whether it be about the personal lives of others or to more important matters, if you want information, Kanbaru is your best bet.

    - Relationships Are Overrated: You don't get to know every inch of other's personal matters without a few betrayals and selling out. She has an incredibly hard time forming loyal relationships. Those who wish to befriend her must submit to the fact that information about their personal lives will be subject to purchase through Kanbaru.

    Appearance:
    Spoiler:

    History:

        Born on the morning of the hottest summer in years, Kanbaru had been blessed from the moment she was born. Her mother proudly proclaimed that God himself was smiling upon her birth as reasoning for the blistering heat, much to the chagrin of her other present family members. Though their child was born a girl, Kanbaru's parents had exceptionally high expectations for their daughter. They didn't want to raise a woman who stayed at home waiting for her husband and raising kids. On the contrary, they wanted their daughter to have her own independent, fulfilling life in which she could truly stand on her own as an individual. As a result of these expectations, Kanbaru was bombarded with worldly education from the moment she learned how to read. She spent much of her early years constantly hounded by a multitude of different private tutors, specialists in all different types of professions. Kanbaru's parents weren't concerned with what their daughter would one day want to do with her life, they just wanted her to be someone worthy of maximum respect, an individual others would talk about in high esteem. Luckily for them, Kanbaru was quick learner. She was like a sponge, absorbing information left and right with seemingly no limit.

        As Kanbaru grew older, the topics of interest that garnered her interest continued to grow. History, Chemistry, Politics, etc. She loved all types of subjects. Her parents were secretly ecstatic that their only daughter did not want to take up the path of combat. Instead, she surrounded herself endlessly with books. At about the age of fourteen, Kanbaru's interests began to narrow. She wanted not only to learn about things, but to create them as well. She wanted to be a person capable of bringing a smile to the face of others with things she created. In order to fulfill this adolescent dream of hers, she began to pin her focus on the science behind the creation and application of tools, chemistry, and medicine. Her parents were all too willing to aid their daughter in the pursuit of her dreams, allowing her to study under professionals in the fields of blacksmithing, chemistry, and medicine -- a wide array of skills, no doubt. Much like her brain had accepted all of the knowledge contained within the books she loved to read, it continued to accept the practices required to perform her dream at elite levels. She rose in ability at an exceptional rate, quickly becoming known throughout the village.

        Now twenty years old, Kanbaru has become a common name throughout Kumogakure. Thanks to her elite ability in such a vast range of skills and her contributions to both the village and its citizens, she earned the shinobi rank of Jounin -- one of the few to earn such a title without ever witnessing combat. Her skills were simply too grand to ignore and her value as an asset to the village was undeniable, so it was in their best interest to shower her with as much acclaim as possible in order to maintain her always-wavering loyalty. In return, Kanbaru continues to lead fields of research and development for the village, using the near unlimited access granted to her by the Jounin rank to gain access to knowledge that is usually not privy to the minds of common doctors and blacksmiths. As of today, Kanbaru remains one of the go-to individual for needs relating to weapon making, armor smithing, medicine, or chemistry -- not only in Kumogakure, but in the world. Uninterested with matters outside of her work and hobbies, Kanbaru pays little mind in advancing in the field of relationships, spending most of her time surrounded by clients or mountains of paper work. While her mother has recently become obsessed with the thought of grandchildren, Kanbaru continues to ignore most matters relating to the heart. Still, with so much of her prime years remaining, it's only a matter of time before she begins to expand her circle of friends.

    Personality:

        Kanbaru is a typically serious individual when it comes to her work. She remains absolutely focused, committed to performing at the height of her abilities at all times. She constantly strives to improve her skills and as such she must attack every moment of her profession with absolute seriousness. However, when she's not working, she's completely different. A known prankster and overall jokey person, Kanbaru spends a lot of time messing with people. This extends onto her gambling habits, where she will typically make fun of her "opponents" at the table and play tricks on them.

        Usually far removed from real connections to others, Kanbaru spends a lot of her time in secluded areas -- whether this be in a remote part of the village or in her own home. She's usually putting in extra work hours, researching, reading, or simply just thinking about miscellaneous things, like inventions unable to exist due to technological limitations. On the off chance that she is confronted with someone who shares her interests, Kanbaru will typically spiral into an endless rant about her most recent thoughts regarding the subject.

        Despite her high level of intelligence across a wide variety of topics, Kanbaru will sometimes "play dumb" as a way of teasing others. It brings her joy to see others scramble to impress her, spouting on about topics that they have remedial knowledge of with utmost confidence due to her charade. She doubly enjoys playing this trick on men who approach her with obvious romantic intentions.


    Roleplay Sample:
    Small excerpt from the beginning of a book I've been working on:

    Spoiler:

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