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    Fire Fist

    Post by Cherry Blossom on Wed Jun 13, 2018 3:56 am

    Name: Fire Fist (火拳; Hiken)
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: --
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: Katon
    Skill: Nintaijutsu
    Classification: Hiden
    Requirements: C-Rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
    Hand Seals: Horse → Tiger → Clap Hands
    Description: A specialized fighting style that starts off with the user forming the three required handseals, and beginning to concentrate. This fighting style in specific involves directly flowing fire-natured chakra to one’s hands and/or feet for quick usage or execution. By concentrating small amounts of fire-natured chakra to parts of the body, it remains there without actually becoming visible due to lack of a focused allocation.

    When the user wills it, they can discharge quick bursts of fire from their hands or feet, coating them in the flow of fire-natured chakra. This coating of flames functions as extra damage behind the user’s attacks, as they possess C-Rank Power behind them that’s added to standard hand-to-hand maneuvers. This costs the standard upkeep for the technique per blast that's released. Naturally, when released, the flames become visible to others near the user, making it ideal for the user to time the point in which they release them.
    Weaknesses: Useless against Water Release.

    Name: Flame Burst (炎バースト; Honō Bāsuto)
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: --
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: User’s Speed
    Element: Katon
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Hiden
    Requirements: Fire Fist
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Clap Hands
    Description: After clapping one’s hands, preexisting fire-natured chakra that’s been gathered within them can be propelled out in a short burst. After the initial burst, more can be released at a moment’s notice for quick attacks equal to the technique’s Power and mobility purposes, boosting the user’s Speed by a tier briefly. Each burst requires activation cost to be utilized, and can propel the user in a given direction based on where they're aiming.
    Weaknesses: N/A


    Last edited by Cherry Blossom on Sat Aug 04, 2018 3:47 am; edited 5 times in total


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    Re: Fire Fist

    Post by The Founder on Thu Jun 14, 2018 10:02 am

    Fire Fist- People's own chakra rarely damages themselves. This is why spitting a fireball doesn't fry a person's fingers, hand, mouth, and throat. It would be a good drawback, but your style doesn't appear to need it, since it doesn't actually burn the enemy.
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    Re: Fire Fist

    Post by Cherry Blossom on Thu Jun 14, 2018 7:32 pm

    That's a fair point. Would I still need the drawback if I made the style just immerse my fists or feet in flames, like Chakra Flow if it was just with my own body? It'd burn for C-Rank Power when coming in contact with people, and require the upkeep cost listed in the style to maintain each post. I'm sure I'd have to buff the upkeep cost to C/5 though to do that.


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    Re: Fire Fist

    Post by Cherry Blossom on Tue Jul 10, 2018 11:00 am

    Err, bump.


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    Re: Fire Fist

    Post by Akame on Tue Jul 10, 2018 5:03 pm

    For Fire Fist, doling out C rank damage at will is going to either increase the upkeep, you need to lose one plus to the boost, or add a weakneas such as a minus to one stat while in use for example.

    For the second one, since it's a ninjutsu, you need an activation cost rather than an upkeep. An upkeep is for techs that give the same effect over many posts that does not require another activation (Earth Spear, fighting styles, etc) while an activation is needed to actually jumpstart the technique similar to a capacitor. Activation is also for one time use jutsu such as this and genjutsu, with additional activations needed to use it again (such as Body Flicker, Great Fireball, etc). The activation for a C rank boost is 5, but this can be lowered via stat losses in other stats or other suitable weaknesses. I'm willing to work with you if you have any ideas, don't be afraid to ask.


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    Re: Fire Fist

    Post by Cherry Blossom on Thu Jul 12, 2018 12:18 pm

    For Fire Fist I removed the 1-tier Coordination boost if that works.

    For Flame Burst I made it the standard 5 activation cost and removed the upkeep, unless you meant it needing Activation Cost and Upkeep.


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    Re: Fire Fist

    Post by Akame on Sat Jul 14, 2018 9:39 am

    By one plus, I meant that you could keep two plusses out of the boost while retaining the effect. You can write this in your tech as "2+" to indicate the level of boost. I also forgot to mention that I'd like to see each usage of these small bursts of fire should have a cost separate from the boost. One point per burst should be okay with the upkeep since it's a small area of effect. Removing the boost entirely is fine too, and that'll allow you to use the fire related ability with just the upkeep.


    Name: Flame Burst (炎バースト; Honō Bāsuto)
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: --
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: User’s Speed
    Element: Katon
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Hiden
    Requirements: Fire Fist
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Clap Hands
    Description: After clapping one’s hands, preexisting fire-natured chakra that’s been gathered within them can be propelled out in a short burst. After the initial burst, more can be released at a moment’s notice for quick attacks equal to the technique’s Power and mobility purposes, boosting the user’s Speed by a tier briefly. Each burst requires activation cost to be utilized, and can propel the user in a given direction based on where they're aiming.
    Weaknesses: N/A


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    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: B


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    • Physical: 2
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    Re: Fire Fist

    Post by Cherry Blossom on Sat Jul 21, 2018 2:35 am

    So if I keep the boost out I can just have the fire-related ability with that 1 cost upkeep each time I use it? I edited it to match that, but if not then I'll make the necessary changes.


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    Re: Fire Fist

    Post by Akame on Tue Jul 31, 2018 11:56 am

    Sorry this took so long to check, long couple weeks. Please note that it's 1 point per burst of fire, not one point for all bursts in one post. After that it should be fine.


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    Re: Fire Fist

    Post by Cherry Blossom on Sat Aug 04, 2018 3:48 am

    Tossed in.


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    Re: Fire Fist

    Post by Akame on Mon Aug 06, 2018 5:44 pm

    @Cherry Blossom wrote:Name: Fire Fist (火拳; Hiken)
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: --
    Upkeep Cost: 1
    Range: Self
    Speed: N/A
    Element: Katon
    Skill: Nintaijutsu
    Classification: Hiden
    Requirements: C-Rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
    Hand Seals: Horse → Tiger → Clap Hands
    Description: A specialized fighting style that starts off with the user forming the three required handseals, and beginning to concentrate. This fighting style in specific involves directly flowing fire-natured chakra to one’s hands and/or feet for quick usage or execution. By concentrating small amounts of fire-natured chakra to parts of the body, it remains there without actually becoming visible due to lack of a focused allocation.

    When the user wills it, they can discharge quick bursts of fire from their hands or feet, coating them in the flow of fire-natured chakra. This coating of flames functions as extra damage behind the user’s attacks, as they possess C-Rank Power behind them that’s added to standard hand-to-hand maneuvers. This costs the standard upkeep for the technique per blast that's released. Naturally, when released, the flames become visible to others near the user, making it ideal for the user to time the point in which they release them.
    Weaknesses: Useless against Water Release.

    Name: Flame Burst (炎バースト; Honō Bāsuto)
    Rank: C
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: --
    Range: 0-5m
    Speed: User’s Speed
    Element: Katon
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Hiden
    Requirements: Fire Fist
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals: Clap Hands
    Description: After clapping one’s hands, preexisting fire-natured chakra that’s been gathered within them can be propelled out in a short burst. After the initial burst, more can be released at a moment’s notice for quick attacks equal to the technique’s Power and mobility purposes, boosting the user’s Speed by a tier briefly. Each burst requires activation cost to be utilized, and can propel the user in a given direction based on where they're aiming.
    Weaknesses: N/A




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    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: B


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