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    Post by Kyoji Wed May 01, 2019 5:13 pm

    Name: Water Prison Shark Dance Technique
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 15
    Range: 300m (300m in diameter, 100m in height)
    Speed: A (Once formed, moves at users speed)
    Element: -
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Hoshigaki Exclusive
    Requirements: Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: After using the Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave, the user acts as the center of the resultant giant dome of water. Once this technique has been activated, the dome alters its position in order to reflect the direction of the user’s movements, making it difficult for their target to escape as long as they continue their pursuit.

    This technique provides the user a tremendous field advantage, as their fused form grants them the ability to breathe and freely move underwater, while his target continues to drown as they attempt to futilely escape the large body of water.
    Weaknesses: This technique is extremely effective in one on one fights, but the user would probably not be able to contain two enemies fleeing in opposite directions.

    Name: Water Release: Great Shark Bullet Technique
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 50
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 150m
    Speed: S
    Element: Suiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Hoshigaki Exclusive
    Requirements: Large body of water
    Parent Technique: Water Release: Water Shark Bullet Technique
    Hand Seals:
    : Ram → Clone seal → Dog → Technique specific seal → Rat → Ram → Clone seal → Dog → Technique specific seal → Rat → Ram
    Description: The user creates a gigantic shark out of water and, by thrusting both hands forward, sends it to attack the opponent. This technique differs from the original, since this is able to absorb the chakra from an opponent's technique and in turn, use that chakra to grow larger and more powerful. Therefore, the stronger the opponent's technique is, the stronger this technique will get. A-rank techniques add an extra + to power. S-rank techniques can add an extra ++ to max at S++.
    Weaknesses: This absorption can only work on Ninjutsu techniques and will not work on any other skill.


    Last edited by Kyoji on Fri May 24, 2019 8:05 am; edited 5 times in total


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    Post by Uchiha Akihiro Wed May 01, 2019 7:11 pm

    Kyoji wrote:Name: Tool Creation Technique
    Rank: A
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 25
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: 80m
    Speed: A
    Element: -
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Village Exclusive
    Requirements: B-rank Coordination
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: The user has the ability to manifest special red, glowing, malleable chakra, which, when on standby, floats in a chakram-like formation behind their back. The user is able to manipulate it to form various makeshift tools and weapons, similar to Truth-Seeking Balls. The tools created were powerful enough to create craters when struck against the ground. Not only can the user manifest multiple tools and weapons at once, but they can also manipulate the tools telekinetically.

    When dispelling the technique or otherwise, the user is able to disintegrate the tools like shattered glass and reshape them.
    Weaknesses:

    Denied. This is basically the Okumura Clan technique.


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    Name: Water Release: Great Shark Bullet Technique
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 150m
    Speed: S+
    Element: Suiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Hoshigaki Exclusive
    Requirements: Large body of water
    Parent Technique: Water Release: Water Shark Bullet Technique
    Hand Seals:
    Clap Hands Together → Snake → Technique Specific Seal
    Description: The user creates a gigantic shark out of water and, by thrusting both hands forward, sends it to attack the opponent. This technique differs from the original, since this is able to absorb the chakra from an opponent's technique and in turn, use that chakra to grow larger and more powerful. Therefore, the stronger the opponent's technique is, the stronger this technique will get. A-rank techniques add an extra ++ to power. S-rank techniques can add an extra 1 tier to power, to make this X-rank in power.
    Weaknesses: This absorption can only work on Ninjutsu techniques and will not work on any other skill.

    Also denied. You're not creating a jutsu which neutralizes literally every chakra form and grows stronger by immediately absorbing techniques.
    Plus S+ speed and ability to hit X-rank? This way too overpowered.
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    Post by Kyoji Wed May 01, 2019 8:09 pm

    Ok this is the crazy part. I just saw that clan. I never really looked at it before. But it has Tool Creation as its clan move. But Tool Creation is a technique the Otsusukis were using. And on this site it's an exclusive that O'zu has, idk Copy made it into a clan. But i was regging a canon tech as an exclusive from  O'zu island.

    And for the second one is a canon technique as well. I just might've bellished the speed and power a bit but i lowered both. But that description is straight from the wiki. This was used against Guy when he used 7 gates the Hirudora. But it only works on ninjutsus not Taijutsus thats why it beat Kisame.

    Kisame explains it better at 7:14


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    Post by Uchiha Akihiro Wed May 01, 2019 8:40 pm

    Kyoji wrote:Ok this is the crazy part. I just saw that clan. I never really looked at it before. But it has Tool Creation as its clan move. But Tool Creation is a technique the Otsusukis were using. And on this site it's an exclusive that O'zu has, idk Copy made it into a clan. But i was regging a canon tech as an exclusive from  O'zu island.1)

    And for the second one is a canon technique as well. I just might've bellished the speed and power a bit but i lowered both. But that description is straight from the wiki. This was used against Guy when he used 7 gates the Hirudora. But it only works on ninjutsus not Taijutsus thats why it beat Kisame.2)

    1) I really don't know what to make of this o.o So basically this tech is an exclusive from O'zu, used by Otsutsuki and that it is also registered in a clan? Is that what you're saying?

    2) I believe this is a canon technique, but it's just took broken to be used like this. The way it's worded, it basically neutralizes Ninjutsu. That's a big no. Even Rinnegan's ability to neutralize ninjutsu and absorb chakra is severely limited. This neutralizes everything with no care for elemental weaknesses or w/e and in addition to neutralizing it makes the technique more powerful. This is better than Rinnegan's jutsu.
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    Post by Kyoji Wed May 01, 2019 8:57 pm

    1. Yes thats exactly what I'm saying lol. Since its been approved for the clan, perhaps we could replace the artifact with another from the list that could be exclusive for O'uzu.

    2. It doesn't neutralize their technique. But it does make the jutsu stronger. Yea the difference with the Rinnegan and Dark Chakra absorption is that they actually absorb the entire thing. They can absorb the entire technique while this one takes chakra away from it to make it stronger.  Now used against a weakness like Doton or something I believe it would lower the Suiton by one tier. But still give it its boost in Power so if it was an S power Doton attack. It would lower it to A but get the two ++ in power. Making it A++ vs S power. It would lose. Making it still have its regular weaknesses.


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    Perception: A
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    Post by Kyoji Thu May 02, 2019 12:38 pm

    Ok talked to Nyg about Tool creation and got it all figured out. Made another jutsu instead to learn, also canon.


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    Post by Uchiha Akihiro Thu May 23, 2019 11:32 am

    Kyoji wrote:Name: Water Prison Shark Dance Technique
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 15
    Range: 300m
    Speed: A (Once formed, moves at users speed)
    Element: -
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Hoshigaki Exclusive
    Requirements: Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: After using the Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave, the user acts as the center of the resultant giant dome of water. Once this technique has been activated, the dome alters its position in order to reflect the direction of the user’s movements, making it difficult for their target to escape as long as they continue their pursuit.

    This technique provides the user a tremendous field advantage, as their fused form grants them the ability to breathe and freely move underwater, while his target continues to drown as they attempt to futilely escape the large body of water.
    Weaknesses: This technique is extremely effective in one on one fights, but the user would probably not be able to contain two enemies fleeing in opposite directions.

    Considering the amount of water I'd lik you to detail if the range is 300 meters radius or diameter. Also need to detail the the height.

    Kyoji wrote:Name: Water Release: Great Shark Bullet Technique
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 150m
    Speed: S
    Element: Suiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Hoshigaki Exclusive
    Requirements: Large body of water
    Parent Technique: Water Release: Water Shark Bullet Technique
    Hand Seals:
    Clap Hands Together → Snake → Technique Specific Seal
    Description: The user creates a gigantic shark out of water and, by thrusting both hands forward, sends it to attack the opponent. This technique differs from the original, since this is able to absorb the chakra from an opponent's technique and in turn, use that chakra to grow larger and more powerful. Therefore, the stronger the opponent's technique is, the stronger this technique will get. A-rank techniques add an extra + to power. S-rank techniques can add an extra ++ to max at S++.
    Weaknesses: This absorption can only work on Ninjutsu techniques and will not work on any other skill.

    Denied, as this neutralizes all forms of Ninjutsu and I find that to be overpowered added to the fact that this technique not only weaknes every ninjutsu, but it actually grows stronger while doing so. Feel free to get a second opinion.
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    Post by Kyoji Thu May 23, 2019 5:21 pm

    I dropped some details earlier but must've been missed but for the first tech its been edited.

    I mentioned a lil of this on a earlier post but...This version doesn't neutralize their technique. But it does make the jutsu stronger. Yea the difference with the Rinnegan and Dark Chakra absorption is that they actually absorb the entire thing. They can absorb the entire technique while this one takes chakra away from it to make it stronger.  Now used against a weakness like Doton or something I believe it would lower the Suiton by one tier. But still give it its boost in Power so if it was an S power Doton attack. It would lower it to A but get the two ++ in power. Making it A++ vs S power. It would lose. Making it still have its regular weaknesses. So basically instead of being canceled out by other elements of the same power (S) It would usually win. But if that tech is S++ then it would cancel it.

    This site version would not lower the power of the opponents tech to give a chance.


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    Constitution: B > A (Kaguya)
    Stamina: A++ (Senju)
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    Post by Uchiha Akihiro Thu May 23, 2019 8:19 pm

    This still neutralizes most ninjutsu because it'll just grow to a point where it matches its power (or equals it) and then overpowers it.

    Kyoji wrote:o basically instead of being canceled out by other elements of the same power (S) It would usually win.
    This is still a huge a advantage. It means this technique can only really be beaten by Doton and can't even be matched by any other element. There's no other S-rank technique of any element that afford this for regular chakra cost, so few hand seals and S-rank speed.

    I feel it is currently unbalanced. So pick 2 out of; more chakra cost, more hand-seals, less speed.


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    Post by Kyoji Thu May 23, 2019 8:59 pm

    More chakra and more handseals. Also edited both techniques.


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    Post by Uchiha Akihiro Fri May 24, 2019 9:45 am

    Kyoji wrote:Name: Water Prison Shark Dance Technique
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 15
    Range: 300m (300m in diameter, 100m in height)
    Speed: A (Once formed, moves at users speed)
    Element: -
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Hoshigaki Exclusive
    Requirements: Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: After using the Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave, the user acts as the center of the resultant giant dome of water. Once this technique has been activated, the dome alters its position in order to reflect the direction of the user’s movements, making it difficult for their target to escape as long as they continue their pursuit.

    This technique provides the user a tremendous field advantage, as their fused form grants them the ability to breathe and freely move underwater, while his target continues to drown as they attempt to futilely escape the large body of water.
    Weaknesses: This technique is extremely effective in one on one fights, but the user would probably not be able to contain two enemies fleeing in opposite directions.

    Name: Water Release: Great Shark Bullet Technique
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 50
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: 150m
    Speed: S
    Element: Suiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Hoshigaki Exclusive
    Requirements: Large body of water
    Parent Technique: Water Release: Water Shark Bullet Technique
    Hand Seals:
    : Ram → Clone seal → Dog → Technique specific seal → Rat → Ram → Clone seal → Dog → Technique specific seal → Rat → Ram
    Description: The user creates a gigantic shark out of water and, by thrusting both hands forward, sends it to attack the opponent. This technique differs from the original, since this is able to absorb the chakra from an opponent's technique and in turn, use that chakra to grow larger and more powerful. Therefore, the stronger the opponent's technique is, the stronger this technique will get. A-rank techniques add an extra + to power. S-rank techniques can add an extra ++ to max at S++.
    Weaknesses: This absorption can only work on Ninjutsu techniques and will not work on any other skill.

    Approved.
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    Post by Kyoji Tue Jun 18, 2019 4:11 pm

    Name: Chimera Technique
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Contact
    Speed: S
    Element: -
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Restricted Technique
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ox → Horse → Hare → Boar → Horse  → Technique specific seal
    Description: It was originally meant to combine separate living bodies of organisms into one combined organism bearing the original characteristics of the organisms, and therefore create a synthetic body. The user uses the technique to integrate the bodies of others with his own, allowing him to obtain any kekkei genkai they possess, as well as other special physical traits and absorb their chakra. The technique is also used by the user to create formidable creatures which bear the traits of multiple animals.

    The maximum number of kekkei genkai that the Chimera Technique can absorb alone is four, which even so is an incomplete absorption, and requires certain conditions to acquire the fifth, as well as fully absorb the previous four. When assimilating victims, the users body exudes a large mass of deep blue, viscous fluid that covers a large area (30m). While assimilating victims, he can use the fluid to attack enemies with gelatinous, reforming (and rebounding) extensions.

    The ritual for immortality is to gather five Kekkei Genkai users. Then they must be brought to a temple in Mount Shumisen, there they must wait till there is a Solar Eclipse. Completing the three part ritual, 'Heaven' 'Earth' and 'Human' . Once the five bodies have been completely absorbed, the person will have immortality. They will still feel pain, and limbs are still able to be removed. But the user is immune to natural death and time. If the bodies absorbed have certain elements that the user does not have, he can possibly attain all five elements.

    Weaknesses: It should be noted that the technique can be stopped (with seemingly relative ease) from the inside out by using a dimension-manipulating technique such as Kamui. Takes a full post for assimilation to be complete. Any interruption to the technique will cancel it out and must began again from the start.

    Name: Mystic Safety Bell Seal: Release
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 15
    Range: Self
    Speed: Instant
    Element: -
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Exclusive
    Requirements: Must have The Bell on person
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ox → Horse → Hare → Boar
    Description: This technique is used by the holder of the Bell. He releases power through his bell, and completely transforms. An angelic form in every facet, a halo appears over them. White and powerful feathered wings sprout from his back, giving him very quick flight. The wingspan is ten feet and the feathers are four feet long. An aura of white and gold chakra can be seen emanating from the form. This form allows the user to perform many powerful techniques in conjunction with the powerful protective bell as its core. The form also provides very powerful physical enhancements. Speed ++, Coordination ++, Strength ++. These boosts last as long as the upkeep is paid.
    Weaknesses: If at any point the Bell is removed from the person, the user can no longer access the Mystic Release. Also it takes a huge amount of strength and chakra to maintain, as such leaves. A cooldown of 5 IC posts is needed to conjure the power to activate the Mystic Release again.


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    Constitution: B > A (Kaguya)
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    Post by Valen Minamoto Sat Jul 13, 2019 10:05 pm

    Kyoji wrote:Name: Chimera Technique
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Contact
    Speed: S
    Element: -
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Restricted Technique
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ox → Horse → Hare → Boar → Horse  → Technique specific seal
    Description: It was originally meant to combine separate living bodies of organisms into one combined organism bearing the original characteristics of the organisms, and therefore create a synthetic body. Kyoji uses the technique to integrate the bodies of others with his own, allowing him to obtain any kekkei genkai they possess, as well as other special physical traits and absorb their chakra. The technique is also used by Kyoji to create formidable creatures which bear the traits of multiple animals.

    The maximum number of kekkei genkai that the Chimera Technique can absorb alone is four, which even so is an incomplete absorption, and requires certain conditions to acquire the fifth, as well as fully absorb the previous four. When assimilating victims, Kyoji's body exudes a large mass of deep blue, viscous fluid that covers a large area (30m). While assimilating victims, he can use the fluid to attack enemies with gelatinous, reforming (and rebounding) extensions. Once the five bodies have been completely absorbed, the person will have immortality and mastery over the five elements.
    Weaknesses: It should be noted that the technique can be stopped (with seemingly relative ease) from the inside out by using a dimension-manipulating technique such as Kamui. Additionally, the technique requires body modification, due to the body requiring space for the user to assimilate targets. Takes a full post for assimilation to be complete. Any interruption to the technique will cancel it out and must be began again from the start.

    Alrighty, first remove any mention of your name from the 'what it does' and instead replace it with 'the user' or something similar. Basically, you could teach others this, or give it to others even and the wording needs to reflect that isn't just a personal custom, but something that could be taken from you, etc.

    You talk about specific conditions to absorb the fifth and even fully develop the other four, then never mention what those are. This is especially important because you state the bonus' obtained after getting the fifth person.

    Following that line of thought, and I'll admit to being unsure how we do 'immortality' I will ask you to define what that is in this instance. Is the user simply immune to time, and natural death? Or can I poison you? Etc.

    Finally, all five elements seems fine, however not just because you have five other bodies in you. I'd like to see the stipulation that as long as the five elements are present amongst the victims, you'll get up to all five them. So for example, if you kirby 5 people and none of them have fire, you don't. Make sense?

    Name: Mystic Safety Bell Seal: Release
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 15
    Range: Self
    Speed: Instant
    Element: -
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Exclusive
    Requirements: Must have The Bell on person
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ox → Horse → Hare → Boar
    Description: This technique is used by Kyoji. He releases power through his bell, and completely transforms. An angelic form in every facet, a halo appears over him. White and powerful feathered wings sprout from his back, giving him very quick flight. An aura of white and gold chakra can be seen emanating from the form. This form allows Kyoji to perform many powerful techniques in conjunction with the powerful protective bell as its core. The form also provides very powerful physical enhancements. Speed ++, Coordination ++, Strength ++. These boosts last as long as the upkeep is paid.
    Weaknesses: If at any point the Bell is removed from the person, the user can no longer access the Mystic Release. Also it takes a huge amount of strength and chakra to maintain, as such leaves. A cooldown of 5 IC posts is needed to conjure the power to activate the Mystic Release again.

    Dimensions on those wings please
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    Post by Kyoji Mon Jul 15, 2019 5:32 pm

    Edited both. Idk how to do dimensions so I just put feet.


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    Post by Valen Minamoto Mon Jul 29, 2019 11:41 am

    Kyoji wrote:Name: Chimera Technique
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Contact
    Speed: S
    Element: -
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Restricted Technique
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ox → Horse → Hare → Boar → Horse  → Technique specific seal
    Description: It was originally meant to combine separate living bodies of organisms into one combined organism bearing the original characteristics of the organisms, and therefore create a synthetic body. The user uses the technique to integrate the bodies of others with his own, allowing him to obtain any kekkei genkai they possess, as well as other special physical traits and absorb their chakra. The technique is also used by the user to create formidable creatures which bear the traits of multiple animals.

    The maximum number of kekkei genkai that the Chimera Technique can absorb alone is four, which even so is an incomplete absorption, and requires certain conditions to acquire the fifth, as well as fully absorb the previous four. When assimilating victims, the users body exudes a large mass of deep blue, viscous fluid that covers a large area (30m). While assimilating victims, he can use the fluid to attack enemies with gelatinous, reforming (and rebounding) extensions.

    The ritual for immortality is to gather five Kekkei Genkai users. Then they must be brought to a temple in Mount Shumisen, there they must wait till there is a Solar Eclipse. Completing the three part ritual, 'Heaven' 'Earth' and 'Human' . Once the five bodies have been completely absorbed, the person will have immortality. Like Jashinism they will still feel pain, and limbs are still able to be removed. But the user is immune to natural death and time. If the bodies absorbed have certain elements that the user does not have, he can possibly attain all five elements.

    Weaknesses: It should be noted that the technique can be stopped (with seemingly relative ease) from the inside out by using a dimension-manipulating technique such as Kamui. Takes a full post for assimilation to be complete. Any interruption to the technique will cancel it out and must began again from the start.

    As finicky as this sounds, remove the reference to Jashinism as that hasn't been made yet.

    Name: Mystic Safety Bell Seal: Release
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 15
    Range: Self
    Speed: Instant
    Element: -
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Exclusive
    Requirements: Must have The Bell on person
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ox → Horse → Hare → Boar
    Description: This technique is used by the holder of the Bell. He releases power through his bell, and completely transforms. An angelic form in every facet, a halo appears over him. White and powerful feathered wings sprout from his back, giving him very quick flight. The wings are three feet wide and the feathers are four feet long. An aura of white and gold chakra can be seen emanating from the form. This form allows the user to perform many powerful techniques in conjunction with the powerful protective bell as its core. The form also provides very powerful physical enhancements. Speed ++, Coordination ++, Strength ++. These boosts last as long as the upkeep is paid.
    Weaknesses: If at any point the Bell is removed from the person, the user can no longer access the Mystic Release. Also it takes a huge amount of strength and chakra to maintain, as such leaves. A cooldown of 5 IC posts is needed to conjure the power to activate the Mystic Release again.

    Ah, let's do wingspan in this case, say, 10 meter wingspan. That actually equates to about 30 feet (15 feet for each wing) which has the added benefit of being about accurate for what you'd need for lift anyway if my guess is right. Keep the 'four feet long' aspect as that gives them the other critical dimension they need.

    For the record, I apologize for taking so long, I got kinda busy and won't lie, kinda forgot this was here. Don't be afraid to reach out to me if it's been a couple of days, I dislike making people wait.
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    Post by Kyoji Tue Jul 30, 2019 9:55 am

    No problem. I made the necessary edits as well.


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    Post by Valen Minamoto Wed Jul 31, 2019 9:06 am

    Kyoji wrote:Name: Chimera Technique
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Contact
    Speed: S
    Element: -
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Restricted Technique
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ox → Horse → Hare → Boar → Horse  → Technique specific seal
    Description: It was originally meant to combine separate living bodies of organisms into one combined organism bearing the original characteristics of the organisms, and therefore create a synthetic body. The user uses the technique to integrate the bodies of others with his own, allowing him to obtain any kekkei genkai they possess, as well as other special physical traits and absorb their chakra. The technique is also used by the user to create formidable creatures which bear the traits of multiple animals.

    The maximum number of kekkei genkai that the Chimera Technique can absorb alone is four, which even so is an incomplete absorption, and requires certain conditions to acquire the fifth, as well as fully absorb the previous four. When assimilating victims, the users body exudes a large mass of deep blue, viscous fluid that covers a large area (30m). While assimilating victims, he can use the fluid to attack enemies with gelatinous, reforming (and rebounding) extensions.

    The ritual for immortality is to gather five Kekkei Genkai users. Then they must be brought to a temple in Mount Shumisen, there they must wait till there is a Solar Eclipse. Completing the three part ritual, 'Heaven' 'Earth' and 'Human' . Once the five bodies have been completely absorbed, the person will have immortality. They will still feel pain, and limbs are still able to be removed. But the user is immune to natural death and time. If the bodies absorbed have certain elements that the user does not have, he can possibly attain all five elements.

    Weaknesses: It should be noted that the technique can be stopped (with seemingly relative ease) from the inside out by using a dimension-manipulating technique such as Kamui. Takes a full post for assimilation to be complete. Any interruption to the technique will cancel it out and must began again from the start.

    Name: Mystic Safety Bell Seal: Release
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 15
    Range: Self
    Speed: Instant
    Element: -
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Exclusive
    Requirements: Must have The Bell on person
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ox → Horse → Hare → Boar
    Description: This technique is used by the holder of the Bell. He releases power through his bell, and completely transforms. An angelic form in every facet, a halo appears over them. White and powerful feathered wings sprout from his back, giving him very quick flight. The wingspan is ten feet and the feathers are four feet long. An aura of white and gold chakra can be seen emanating from the form. This form allows the user to perform many powerful techniques in conjunction with the powerful protective bell as its core. The form also provides very powerful physical enhancements. Speed ++, Coordination ++, Strength ++. These boosts last as long as the upkeep is paid.
    Weaknesses: If at any point the Bell is removed from the person, the user can no longer access the Mystic Release. Also it takes a huge amount of strength and chakra to maintain, as such leaves. A cooldown of 5 IC posts is needed to conjure the power to activate the Mystic Release again.

    Approved
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    Post by Kyoji Sun Aug 18, 2019 1:58 pm

    Name: Chimera Technique
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Contact
    Speed: S
    Element: -
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Restricted Technique
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ox → Horse → Hare → Boar → Horse  → Technique specific seal
    Description: It was originally meant to combine separate living bodies of organisms into one combined organism bearing the original characteristics of the organisms, and therefore create a synthetic body. The user uses the technique to integrate the bodies of others with his own, allowing him to obtain any kekkei genkai they possess, as well as other special physical traits and absorb their chakra. The technique is also used by the user to create formidable creatures which bear the traits of multiple animals.

    The maximum number of kekkei genkai that the Chimera Technique can absorb alone is four, which even so is an incomplete absorption, and requires certain conditions to acquire the fifth, as well as fully absorb the previous four. When assimilating victims, the users body exudes a large mass of deep blue, viscous fluid that covers a large area (30m). While assimilating victims, he can use the fluid to attack enemies with gelatinous, reforming (and rebounding) extensions.

    The ritual for immortality is to gather five Kekkei Genkai users. Then they must be brought to a temple in Mount Shumisen, there they must wait till there is a Solar Eclipse. Completing the three part ritual, 'Heaven' 'Earth' and 'Human' . Once the five bodies have been completely absorbed, the person will have immortality. They will still feel pain, and limbs are still able to be removed. But the user is immune to natural death and time. If the bodies absorbed have certain elements that the user does not have, he can possibly attain all five elements.

    Weaknesses: It should be noted that the technique can be stopped (with seemingly relative ease) from the inside out by using a dimension-manipulating technique such as Kamui. Takes a full post for assimilation to be complete. Any interruption to the technique will cancel it out and must began again from the start.

    This technique can only be used on PCs. And if they are declared dead, then they can only be consumed within 5 months from the date.


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    Constitution: B > A (Kaguya)
    Stamina: A++ (Senju)
    Speed: B
    Coordination: B > S (EGF)
    Intelligence: D
    Perception: A
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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Sun Aug 18, 2019 2:00 pm

    Kyoji wrote:Name: Chimera Technique
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Contact
    Speed: S
    Element: -
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Restricted Technique
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ox → Horse → Hare → Boar → Horse  → Technique specific seal
    Description: It was originally meant to combine separate living bodies of organisms into one combined organism bearing the original characteristics of the organisms, and therefore create a synthetic body. The user uses the technique to integrate the bodies of others with his own, allowing him to obtain any kekkei genkai they possess, as well as other special physical traits and absorb their chakra. The technique is also used by the user to create formidable creatures which bear the traits of multiple animals.

    The maximum number of kekkei genkai that the Chimera Technique can absorb alone is four, which even so is an incomplete absorption, and requires certain conditions to acquire the fifth, as well as fully absorb the previous four. When assimilating victims, the users body exudes a large mass of deep blue, viscous fluid that covers a large area (30m). While assimilating victims, he can use the fluid to attack enemies with gelatinous, reforming (and rebounding) extensions.

    The ritual for immortality is to gather five Kekkei Genkai users. Then they must be brought to a temple in Mount Shumisen, there they must wait till there is a Solar Eclipse. Completing the three part ritual, 'Heaven' 'Earth' and 'Human' . Once the five bodies have been completely absorbed, the person will have immortality. They will still feel pain, and limbs are still able to be removed. But the user is immune to natural death and time. If the bodies absorbed have certain elements that the user does not have, he can possibly attain all five elements.

    Weaknesses: It should be noted that the technique can be stopped (with seemingly relative ease) from the inside out by using a dimension-manipulating technique such as Kamui. Takes a full post for assimilation to be complete. Any interruption to the technique will cancel it out and must began again from the start.

    This technique can only be used on PCs. And if they are declared dead, then they can only be consumed within 5 months from the date.

    Approved.


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    Post by Kyoji Thu Aug 22, 2019 1:17 pm

    Name: Chimera Technique
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Contact
    Speed: S
    Element: -
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Restricted Bijuu level Technique
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ox → Horse → Hare → Boar → Horse  → Technique specific seal
    Description: It was originally meant to combine separate living bodies of organisms into one combined organism bearing the original characteristics of the organisms, and therefore create a synthetic body. The user uses the technique to integrate the bodies of others with his own, allowing him to obtain any kekkei genkai they possess, as well as other special physical traits concerning their KKG (ex. Senju, Kaguya physical buffs). The technique is also used by the user to create formidable creatures which bear the traits of multiple animals  (3 small summons, combine to 1 large). They have the options of merging with their Chimeras as well. The maximum number of kekkei genkai that the Chimera Technique can absorb alone is five. When assimilating victims, the users body exudes a large mass of deep blue, viscous fluid that covers a large area (30m). While assimilating victims, they can use the fluid to attack enemies with gelatinous, reforming (and rebounding) extensions. Once they have acquired the final KKG, the person will have immortality. They will still feel pain, and limbs are still able to be removed. But the user is immune to natural death, time and poison.

    This ability also gives the user Chakra Access to their Chimera when they are unsummoned.
    They first start out with access for two posts. The user will get three posts of access after they absorb their first three corpses. Then they will get 10 posts of access after they complete a special ritual for the fourth corpse. The victim has to be B-Class and will need to feed part of it to their Chimera summon then assimilate the leftovers. Afterwards to get 20 posts of access after they must do the same ritual for their fifth corpse but this one has to be A-Class.

    Weaknesses: It should be noted that the technique can be stopped (with seemingly relative ease) from the inside out by using a dimension-manipulating technique such as Kamui. Takes a full post for assimilation to be complete. Any interruption to the technique will cancel it out and must began again from the start.

    Those receiving an non-Doujutsu implant must pay the necessary experience requirements to achieve advancement in the bloodline as normal although this may be done with pre-existing experience. If it is a Doujutsu based implant then the recipient starts with whatever stage was unlocked by the donor. Max Doujutsu is two.

    This technique can only be used on PCs. And if they are declared dead, then they can only be consumed within 5 months from the date (Only applies to the first 3 bodies. The last two have a two week minimum to absorb).


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    Constitution: B > A (Kaguya)
    Stamina: A++ (Senju)
    Speed: B
    Coordination: B > S (EGF)
    Intelligence: D
    Perception: A
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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Thu Aug 22, 2019 8:07 pm

    Checked via discord mkay yall


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Wed Aug 28, 2019 4:43 pm

    Kyoji wrote:Name: Chimera Technique
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: -
    Range: Contact
    Speed: S
    Element: -
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Restricted Bijuu level Technique
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Ox → Horse → Hare → Boar → Horse  → Technique specific seal
    Description: It was originally meant to combine separate living bodies of organisms into one combined organism bearing the original characteristics of the organisms, and therefore create a synthetic body. The user uses the technique to integrate the bodies of others with his own, allowing him to obtain any kekkei genkai they possess, as well as other special physical traits concerning their KKG (ex. Senju, Kaguya physical buffs). The technique is also used by the user to create formidable creatures which bear the traits of multiple animals  (3 small summons, combine to 1 large). They have the options of merging with their Chimeras as well. The maximum number of kekkei genkai that the Chimera Technique can absorb alone is five. When assimilating victims, the users body exudes a large mass of deep blue, viscous fluid that covers a large area (30m). While assimilating victims, they can use the fluid to attack enemies with gelatinous, reforming (and rebounding) extensions. Once they have acquired the final KKG, the person will have immortality. They will still feel pain, and limbs are still able to be removed. But the user is immune to natural death, time and poison.

    This ability also gives the user Chakra Access to their Chimera when they are unsummoned.
    They first start out with access for two posts. The user will get three posts of access after they absorb their first three corpses. Then they will get 10 posts of access after they complete a special ritual for the fourth corpse. The victim has to be B-Class and will need to feed part of it to their Chimera summon then assimilate the leftovers. Afterwards to get 20 posts of access after they must do the same ritual for their fifth corpse but this one has to be A-Class.

    Weaknesses: It should be noted that the technique can be stopped (with seemingly relative ease) from the inside out by using a dimension-manipulating technique such as Kamui. Takes a full post for assimilation to be complete. Any interruption to the technique will cancel it out and must began again from the start.

    Those receiving an non-Doujutsu implant must pay the necessary experience requirements to achieve advancement in the bloodline as normal although this may be done with pre-existing experience. If it is a Doujutsu based implant then the recipient starts with whatever stage was unlocked by the donor. Max Doujutsu is two.

    This technique can only be used on PCs. And if they are declared dead, then they can only be consumed within 5 months from the date (Only applies to the first 3 bodies. The last two have a two week minimum to absorb).

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    Post by Kyoji Fri Oct 11, 2019 5:22 pm

    Name: Secret Techinque: Bloody Hidden Mist
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: 300m
    Speed: S
    Element: Suiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Restricted
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Secret Technique: Mist Rain, Hidden in Mist Technique
    Hand Seals: Seal of Confrontation > Ram > Dog > Rat
    Description: The user creates an even greater thickness of mist followed by rain which devours chakra in its wake. This mist takes on the properties of the Hiding in the Mist technique. Also limiting vision to absolutely zero for everyone caught in the mist.

    This is like the classic Mist Rain but involves a heavy red like mist to cover the entire area. This version devours all Ninjutsu and Genjutsu up to S-rank. Fuuinjutsu, Taijutsu, cloaks, and all other platforms are unaffected by this version. Except the users Suiton jutsu. The user may use Suiton, but only A-rank and above as weaker techniques will also be devoured. The Mist influences external cloaks such as LRA, Susanoo, and Bijuu cloaks. Below shows how the mist rain affects various cloaks:

    For LRA:
    -boosts granted by LRA are not effected by the mist
    -lightning armor shroud is dissolved

    For Susano'o:
    -dissolves all levels
    -dissolves Susano'o techs and Majestic Attire

    For Bijuu:
    -ineffective against non sealed Bijuu
    -ineffective against Tailed Beast Mode (when not used in CM like Naruto)
    -dissolves Bijuudama and Tailed Beast Chakra Arms and other Bijuu techs
    -Tailed Beast Shockwave cannot be used in Kirisame, but can be used outside of it to push it back, though it must be constant.
    -Ineffective against Bijuudama with power ranking X or higher (will probably only be done by non sealed Bijuu -pretty sure)
    -Mostly dissolves cloaks, like Version 1, Version 2, and CM, but leaves enough for you to know that it's active. This will eliminate the perception confusing ability of V1 and the cutting immunity of V2. Chakra Mode will no longer look pretty.
    Weaknesses:


    Name: Mystic Release: Bright Beacon
    Rank: A
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: 50m
    Speed: A
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Exclusive
    Requirements: Mystic Release
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: Dragon
    Description: Though this ability causes no harm to an individual, it can cause them great anguish however. Using the abilities of the Mystic Release, the user can focus the light chakra into their angelic wings. This will cause a great light to emit from the wings. The force of the light can cascade far and wide and cause great stress to look. The chakra enhances the light to a dangerous level, able to blind anyone who looks directly at the wings.

    This technique is able to debuff Perception -2 Tiers when one tries to even gaze in the area surrounding the glowing wings. Upon looking at them a person will be slightly blinded. Similar to the flash of flash bomb but much stronger and constant.
    Weaknesses: The light effects everyone in the area except the user. So allies will be blinded as well. This effect only works if the enemy is looking at the wings specifically. Concentrating on lower parts of the body can serve better. Although the user is able to move is wings elsewhere.



    Name: Storm Chakra Flow
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: Self
    Speed: Instant
    Element: Storm
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: This technique utilizes the Chakra flow mechanics. However one is able to coat their weapon with Storm release chakra. This has a high piercing quality when up against even the toughest of armors. While coated on the blade, it provides a deadly ability when it is met with another blade or weapon. Once it is met with another blade, instead of a shower of sparks, flashes of lightning. This will be directed towards the opponent, lowering their Coordination by -- and their Perception by 1 tier.
    Weaknesses:



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    Constitution: B > A (Kaguya)
    Stamina: A++ (Senju)
    Speed: B
    Coordination: B > S (EGF)
    Intelligence: D
    Perception: A
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    Post by TsukiTatsuda Tue Oct 15, 2019 11:09 pm

    Kyoji wrote:Name: Secret Techinque: Bloody Hidden Mist
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: 300m
    Speed: S
    Element: Suiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Restricted
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Secret Technique: Mist Rain, Hidden in Mist Technique
    Hand Seals: Seal of Confrontation > Ram > Dog > Rat
    Description: The user creates an even greater thickness of mist followed by rain which devours chakra in its wake. This mist takes on the properties of the Hiding in the Mist technique. Also limiting vision to absolutely zero for everyone caught in the mist.

    Version One: This is like the classic Mist Rain but involves a heavy red like mist to cover the entire area. This version devours all Ninjutsu and Genjutsu up to S-rank. Fuuinjutsu, Taijutsu, cloaks, and all other platforms are unaffected by this version. Except the users Suiton jutsu. The user may use Suiton, but only A-rank and above as weaker techniques will also be devoured. The Mist influences external cloaks such as LRA, Susanoo, and Bijuu cloaks. Below shows how the mist rain affects various cloaks:

    For LRA:
    -boosts granted by LRA are not effected by the mist
    -lightning armor shroud is dissolved

    For Susano'o:
    -dissolves all levels
    -dissolves Susano'o techs and Majestic Attire

    For Bijuu:
    -ineffective against non sealed Bijuu
    -ineffective against Tailed Beast Mode (when not used in CM like Naruto)
    -dissolves Bijuudama and Tailed Beast Chakra Arms and other Bijuu techs
    -Tailed Beast Shockwave cannot be used in Kirisame, but can be used outside of it to push it back, though it must be constant.
    -Ineffective against Bijuudama with power ranking X or higher (will probably only be done by non sealed Bijuu -pretty sure)
    -Mostly dissolves cloaks, like Version 1, Version 2, and CM, but leaves enough for you to know that it's active. This will eliminate the perception confusing ability of V1 and the cutting immunity of V2. Chakra Mode will no longer look pretty.
    Weaknesses:
    Denied. No neutralising whole skills especially so many.


    Name: Mystical Release: Bright Beacon
    Rank: A
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: 50m
    Speed: A
    Element: -
    Skill: Taijutsu
    Classification: Exclusive
    Requirements: Mystic Release
    Parent Technique: -
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: Though this ability causes no harm to an individual, it can cause them great anguish. Using the abilities of the Mystic Release, the user can focus the light chakra into their angelic wings. This will cause a great light  to emit from the wings. The force of the light can cascade far and wide and cause great stress to look. The chakra enhances the light to a dangerous level, able to blind anyone who looks directly in their direction. Closing ones eyes will not work in blocking this out, and can blind everyone in the area.

    This technique is able to debuff Perception -2 Tiers when one tries to even gaze in the area surrounding the glowing wings. Upon looking at them a person will be instantly blinded. Similar to the flash of flash bomb but much stronger and constant.
    Weaknesses: The light effects everyone in the area except the user. So allies will be blinded as well.
    Denied. This is an autohit technique which we do not allow. Also I don't know of anything about this Mystical Release, but this is not a Taijutsu technique. This one seems to be more on the Ninjutsu side of things.


    Name: Storm Chakra Flow
    Rank: A
    Power: A
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: Self
    Speed: Instant
    Element: Storm
    Skill: Kenjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Chakra Flow
    Hand Seals: -
    Description: This technique utilizes the Chakra flow mechanics. However one is able to coat their weapon with Storm release chakra. This has a high piercing quality when up against even the toughest of armors. While coated on the blade, it provides a deadly ability when it is met with another blade or weapon. Once it is met with another blade, instead of a shower of sparks, flashes of lightning. This will be directed towards the opponent, lowering their Coordination by -- and their Perception by 1 tier. Using the gale style as well, the user will be able to fire a powerful laser that's able to pierce most armors. This laser is huge in diameter and will follow the path created by the user, able to bend and fold around any obstacle.
    Weaknesses: If one were to use the Homing Laser created from the Storm Chakra flow, the flow will stop and must be reapplied.
    Denied. Speed should not be instant as the lasers would still have A rank. Lastly either lower the debuff amount and lower the laser's power by 1 rank OR keep the debuffs and lower the power of the lasers by 2 ranks. Lastly, increase the Cost of both Active and Upkeep to normal.



    Name: Lazer World Destroyer
    Rank: S
    Power: S
    Activation Cost: 30
    Upkeep Cost: 15
    Range: 100
    Speed: A++
    Element: Storm
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Secret
    Requirements: -
    Parent Technique: Laser Circus
    Hand Seals: Dog → Snake → Rat → Tiger → Boar → Horse → Dragon
    Description: This is an ability created by Kyoji. After making the necessary handsigns. He stomps the ground with on foot and points a hand out towards his opponent. The gale style halo will appear around both appendages. Then it will send a fifty beams of pure energy from below the ground and from the hands. While the enemy is first distracted by the initial beams, the other beams shall travel underground heading to whatever destination enemies head too. Just like the Lazer Circus, these beams can turn at the drop of dime, and can follow the enemy until they are destroyed. A single beam is able to pierce most armors and will leave a person stunned should they survive even one.
    Weaknesses: The user must remain still while this is active, leaving himself open to further attacks.
    Denied. Producing 50 lasers doesn't hold the same power as an S rank. In fact it weakens the power of each individual laser. 50 lasers might be lethal to someone or something of E rank Con/Grade. But otherwise this seems to be underwhelming for an S rank technique.


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    Character Name: Tsuki Tatsuda
    Spendable Experience: 0
    Total Experience: 2,000
    Renown: 50
    Ryo: 281,825
    Stats:

    • Strength: C
    • Constitution: C+
    • Stamina: B
    • Speed: C
    • Coordination: B
    • Intelligence: B
    • Perception: C

    Link to Character Updates: https://gladiusnarutorp.forumotion.com/t2214-igneos-update
    Link to Character Application: https://gladiusnarutorp.forumotion.com/t2213-tsuki-tatsuda-kumo
    Kyoji
    Kyoji


    Posts : 396
    Join date : 2018-05-23
    Age : 32

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Suiton/ Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu, Taijutsu
    Class: A
    Ryo: Ya boy is ballin

    Kyoji Goods Empty Re: Kyoji Goods

    Post by Kyoji Mon Oct 21, 2019 1:40 pm

    1st Jutsu: The Secret technique: Mist Rain...It already neutralizes Ninjutsu...the whole thing to S rank. I'm making this a restricted level tech, by adding Genjutsu and also the user is able to use Suiton jutsu, but only at A-rank and above. It is now mixed with the Hiding in the mist tech so that it obscures vision as well. Genjutsu works by sending chakra to another individual for it to work. This stops all external chakra.

    2nd jutsu: I made it ninjutsu, also its avoidable by not looking up at the wings directly. Similar to Uchiha and Chinoike, which is an auto if you look at and they can cross eyes.

    3rd Jutsu: Took out the lasers period. Pure Kenjutsu move so it gets the rank in reduction. Its S-rank power so it becomes A-rank in power. Thats why I have it at 20cp.

    4th: Not even gonna bother. It was just a pumped up version of the original Lazer circus which is already regged to do the same thing. Removed.


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    Stats:
    Strength: B > S (EGF)
    Constitution: B > A (Kaguya)
    Stamina: A++ (Senju)
    Speed: B
    Coordination: B > S (EGF)
    Intelligence: D
    Perception: A

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