A couple of tweaks for the Otsutsuki Clan Chigetsu and I thought of that I threw at Nyg. He wanted me to put them in a post, so here it is.
First off is looking at this
This is just the ability for the Otsu in question to learn all five basic elements, but it's held back by the fact that they have to pay a cost to switch elements. While they can do so as many times as they want in a post, the cost, is still annoying.
The proposed change is to remove the jutsu and make it a simple passive ability unlocked by sacrificing the skill points and the exp. Which will then simply give all otsu's access to all five elements.
The second proposed change is to clarify the following ability
The vagueness of this ability makes it difficult to use. What's the quality? What can it pierce? It clearly states what strength is needed to break them, but the rest of uncertain. Clarifying this will make the ability more useful and give Otsu's an idea of what these guys can do.
That's what was liked so far, any other suggestions?
First off is looking at this
- Elemental Mastery:
Name: Elemental Mastery
Rank: A
Power: -
Activation Cost: -
Upkeep Cost: 5
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: Yin-Yang Release
Skill: Doujutsu
Classification: Group Exclusive (Rin'negan)
Requirements: Rin'negan
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: -
Description: Affords the user access to any one of the five basic elements at a time.
To unlock/learn this technique, the user must spend 3 Skill Points and 500 Experience Points.
Weaknesses: Access lasts for one post, after which another element may be chosen, so long as the upkeep continues to be paid. The user must still learn the techniques for any element accessed. While this ability can grant access to more than one element in a single post, the upkeep will need to be paid again for each additional element and these elements cannot be used at the same time.
This is just the ability for the Otsu in question to learn all five basic elements, but it's held back by the fact that they have to pay a cost to switch elements. While they can do so as many times as they want in a post, the cost, is still annoying.
The proposed change is to remove the jutsu and make it a simple passive ability unlocked by sacrificing the skill points and the exp. Which will then simply give all otsu's access to all five elements.
The second proposed change is to clarify the following ability
- Black Receivers:
Name: Black Receivers
Rank: C
Power: -
Activation Cost: 0.2
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: 0-3m
Speed: Varies
Element: Yin-Yang Release
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Group Exclusive (Otsutsuki)
Requirements: Rin'negan
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: Ram
Description: The user creates one black receiver, a metal-like rod of up to 3 meters in length which acts as a Chakra demodulator. This allows the user to remotely transmit his chakra into the rod and, by extension, anything the rod is embedded in. The maximum range for this effect is 500m, but can be extending up to 3km by embedding black receivers into oneself.
To unlock/learn this technique, the user must spend 200 Experience Points.
Weaknesses: The rods can be snapped by B-Tier or higher Strength and disintegrate if their creator is killed or incapacitated. Embedding receivers into one's own body for extended range reduces Speed by one tier until the rods are removed and their damage recovered.
The vagueness of this ability makes it difficult to use. What's the quality? What can it pierce? It clearly states what strength is needed to break them, but the rest of uncertain. Clarifying this will make the ability more useful and give Otsu's an idea of what these guys can do.
That's what was liked so far, any other suggestions?