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PostSubject: Kamizuru Clan   Wed Sep 27, 2017 7:09 am


Kamizuru clan
Iwagakure
Bee Summoning Hidan
Iwagakure Settlement: Kurosho Kurokana [92 years old]

  • Torusho Kamizuru
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Clan History/Description

The Kamizuru clan were once considered to be the weakest clan within the land of Wind, most commonly bullied by the Nature clan and their brutish ways, the Kamizuru clan where one of the few clans that helped over throw the Nature clan when independence came to them as the state of Iwagakure, it was during this time that the Kamizuru clan began to make a name for themselves once the land of stone no longer held its desert appearance and had begun to blossom greenery in to the large cracks of the snow, the bee's of the Kamizuru clan pollinated all the greenary within Iwagakure helping the new Village in the Stone to literally blossom. During this time as Iwagakure the Kamizuru clan's battle experience and hardness began to form, they no longer simply pollinated or remained passive but under their Tsuchikages care and tutelage they grew into a fearsome clan filled with skilled fighters.

Alas though the Kamizuru clan would suffer a defeat during a mission given to them by the senile first Tsuchikage, with their abilities and bee summoning skills, they where experts at espionage and could even infiltrate villages with ease, though the clan argued against taking such a mission, Hòu Zhuān's dust release was used to murder the current clan leader Evelynne Kamizuru, the beloved leader of the clan. This did not sit well, but upon threat of this happening to the entire clan, the large fighting squad of the Kamizuru took up the mission to infiltrate Getsugakure and take it over. This was the belief within the village that though the mission was indeed dangerous, the Kamizuru clan would be able to succeed due to their abilities.

What they did not forsee was a clan far superior to them when it came to wielding bugs, they infiltrated Getsugakure easily enough and even managed via their bee like jutsu to take out a large amount of its shinobi, its difficult to fight something so small yet deadly, and with the vast amount of Kamizuru clan members whom had take up the call, victory for one clan to take over the Village hidden under the moon looked assured. Until the Kikachu came. Call it luck, fate, destiny, whatever but for some reason Konoha's big users the Aburame clan burst forth from deep within the hidden village and via their chakra absorption, soon lay waste to the bee's surrounding the village, able to follow this chakra back to the source, the vast amount of Kamizuru clan well over two hundred members where wiped out to a mere fifteen within one night.

Only three members returned to Iwagakure, to report to the senile Tsuchikage, though it would seem by their return their fears of the old dust user eradicating their clan would be unfounded though with such a failed mission, the clans name was in disgrace and their numbers and practitioners began to dwindle within Iwagakure.

With only three returning to the land of Stone, this meant twelve members of the Kamizuru clan would leave their village behind, turning to the life of a missing ninja, four of which swore revenge on Konohagakures Aburame clan for their defeat, while eight of the remaining members wished to simply live. It was these eight whom would find themselves in many other villages, spreading information on the Kamizuru clan to bolster its reputation.

The four members whom angered by Konoha would one day return, believing themselves to be stronger, went after one of the most unique bugs in history though where defeated by a Hyuuga a Senju and an Aburame. News travelled which angered Iwagakure that four more of this clan had been defeated by mere konoha ninja.

Clan/Bloodline Traits & Characteristics

There is no unique traits or characteristics of this clan. Perhaps the only shared capability is this clan is the only clan whom has access to the Bee summoning scroll.

Bloodline Description & Abilities

A common misconception of the Kamizuru clan is that they are summoners, that they utilize the summoning jutsu to bring forth their insects. To those not trained in the Kamizuru way this would be how it seems. This would be wrong, for you see the Kamizuru clan members are somewhat proficent in the use of Yin release, gaining the ability to create something out of nothing, by applying physical chakra to these miniature structures the user actually creates these bee's out of their chakra.

Capable of using all and any part of the "bee" the users of these techniques seemingly gain the ability to actually hide within such a small creature via the hiding in bee technique, they are capable of not only summoning forth bee's themselves but wielding honey and wax in which is also created by the bee's, via beeswax clones or honey like traps as well as wielding poisonous stingers, the Kamizuru clan has a far wider reach in terms of arsenal than many believe, like the aburame clan they are able to interact with bee's though not all insects, it only seems to be bee's hornets or wasps in which the clan is able to wield and communicate with.

Naturally due to their bee like affinity, they hold the ability to utilize bee summoning if they wish requires summoning jutsu]


Bloodline Limits & Drawbacks

The Aburame clan has the advantage against the Kamizuru if wielding Kikachu, Kikachu chakra absorption skills act as two ranks higher when used against any bee skill.

Fire release does +1 damage to bee's


Clan Techniques

Clan Specific:
 



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PostSubject: Re: Kamizuru Clan   Wed Sep 27, 2017 10:08 am

kamizuru is specific to Iwa unfortunately there is no kiri branch
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PostSubject: Re: Kamizuru Clan   Wed Sep 27, 2017 10:11 am

Thats no problem Kiri branch has been removed

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PostSubject: Re: Kamizuru Clan   Wed Sep 27, 2017 4:38 pm

Welcome to Gladius and as Tsuchikage I want to thank you for registering this clan! You've done a lot of good work here but we just need to fix a few things before this clan is ready to go!

@Eevee wrote:

Due to their unique Hidan though their chakra is described as sweet, honey sucjle in scent and more honey coloured in colour when seen. Thanks to the unique hidan of creation, their chakra control is immence and they can hold their jutsu far longer without requiring an upkeep cost, allowing any and all clan technique to require upkeep cost to be paid every three posts instead.

This ability is too powerful and therefore denied. Eliminating upkeep is a big no no.

@Eevee wrote:

This would be wrong, for you see the Kamizuru clan members are somewhat proficent in the use of Yin-Yang Release. The ability to create something out of nothing and give it form, believed to be the power of the great sages.

Yin-Yang Release is a restricted advanced element atm that is unavailable to anyone regardless of how toned down or weak it is compared to the canon usage. So this part will need to be taken out as well.

@Eevee wrote:

Bloodline Limits & Drawbacks

The Aburame clan has the advantage against the Kamizuru if wielding Kikachu, Kikachu chakra absorption skills act as two ranks higher when used against any bee skill.

Add in an elemental weakness as well. Like fire being one rank stronger than the bees.



Clan Techniques

Some of the jutsu areas incomplete for these techniques, generally jutsu C Rank and above should require handseals.

@Eevee wrote:
Bee wax clone

You may want to look at our Shadow Clone Technique that's under the Non-Elemental Ninjutsu thread in the Jutsu Library forum. Try to compare the two and make yours similar, if there are any differences be sure to note why this functions differently than the generic shadow clone jutsu.


@Eevee wrote:

Name: One Hundred Deadly Stingers Technique
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost:
Upkeep Cost:
Range: 50ms
Speed: C
Element: N/A
Skill: N/A
Classification: Clan Jutsu
Requirements: Kamizuru Clan
Parent Technique: Twenty Deadly Stingers Technique
Hand Seals:
Description: The user has two ways of doing this technique, the first is to summon bee's that are solely for this purpose, by creating the seal the user brings forth one hundred bee's with large senbon like stingers, that can then be used to assault the targets by stabbing them, the user can also have the bee's fire the stingers from their bodies which dispels the bee's. Now at this rank the bee's stingers are poisonous but move slower than their counterpart. The poison within a single stinger is enough to paralyse a single limb for a single post, by applying more stingers to the area this is increased per amount of stinger applied to that area. If the head is struck the entire body is deemed paralysed by the amount of stingers within said head. Though generally a head shot is also deadly due to the sharp senbon stingers.
Weaknesses:

Senbon move slower than their un-poisoned counter part.
Can be blown away or defended against.
Bee's can be prematurely destroyed before the stingers are used.

This lacks a cost. Should probably be A Rank

@Eevee wrote:

Name: Thousand Deadly Stings
Rank: S
Power: B
Activation Cost: 25
Upkeep Cost: 15
Range: 150m's
Speed: S
Element: N/A
Skill: N/A
Classification: Clan Jutsu
Requirements: Kamizuru Clan
Parent Technique: One Hundred Deadly Stings Technique
Hand Seals: Clan Specefic
Description: The user has two ways of doing this technique, the first is to summon bee's that are solely for this purpose, by creating the seal the user brings forth one thousand bee's with large senbon like stingers, that can then be used to assault the targets by stabbing them, the user can also have the bee's fire the stingers from their bodies which dispels the bee's. Now at this rank the bee's stingers are poisonous but move slower than their counterpart. The poison within a single stinger is enough to paralyse a single limb for a single post, by applying more stingers to the area this is increased per amount of stinger applied to that area. If the head is struck the entire body is deemed paralysed by the amount of stingers within said head. Though generally a head shot is also deadly due to the sharp senbon stingers. If the opponent is struck with more than one hundred of these stingers, their body will give out from the poison being pumped into the system, killing them.
Weaknesses:

Weak in terms of physical power, can be blown away/halted by strong enough technique.

Strong enough technique needs more quantifying. I'd say anything A Rank and above.
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PostSubject: Re: Kamizuru Clan   Wed Sep 27, 2017 4:53 pm

@Nee-san Tetsudashi wrote:
Welcome to Gladius and as Tsuchikage I want to thank you for registering this clan! You've done a lot of good work here but we just need to fix a few things before this clan is ready to go!

@Eevee wrote:

Due to their unique Hidan though their chakra is described as sweet, honey sucjle in scent and more honey coloured in colour when seen. Thanks to the unique hidan of creation, their chakra control is immence and they can hold their jutsu far longer without requiring an upkeep cost, allowing any and all clan technique to require upkeep cost to be paid every three posts instead.

This ability is too powerful and therefore denied. Eliminating upkeep is a big no no.

I lowered it to upkeep paid every two posts, so hopefully thats better than three, given with this style it requires a constant presence of the creatures, hopefully this will be a better trade off.
@Eevee wrote:

This would be wrong, for you see the Kamizuru clan members are somewhat proficent in the use of Yin-Yang Release. The ability to create something out of nothing and give it form, believed to be the power of the great sages.

Yin-Yang Release is a restricted advanced element atm that is unavailable to anyone regardless of how toned down or weak it is compared to the canon usage. So this part will need to be taken out as well.

Thats a shame, it fit so much better, changed to yin style so hopefully that suffices

@Eevee wrote:

Bloodline Limits & Drawbacks

The Aburame clan has the advantage against the Kamizuru if wielding Kikachu, Kikachu chakra absorption skills act as two ranks higher when used against any bee skill.


Add in an elemental weakness as well. Like fire being one rank stronger than the bees.

added in



Clan Techniques

Some of the jutsu areas incomplete for these techniques, generally jutsu C Rank and above should require handseals.


@Eevee wrote:
Bee wax clone

You may want to look at our Shadow Clone Technique that's under the Non-Elemental Ninjutsu thread in the Jutsu Library forum. Try to compare the two and make yours similar, if there are any differences be sure to note why this functions differently than the generic shadow clone jutsu.

gave information on why this isnt the same as shadow clones, given it uses a substance and doesn't have the same capabilities or execution, this is similar in a way to the water clone jutsu over the shadow clone technique



@Eevee wrote:

Name: One Hundred Deadly Stingers Technique
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost:
Upkeep Cost:
Range: 50ms
Speed: C
Element: N/A
Skill: N/A
Classification: Clan Jutsu
Requirements: Kamizuru Clan
Parent Technique: Twenty Deadly Stingers Technique
Hand Seals:
Description: The user has two ways of doing this technique, the first is to summon bee's that are solely for this purpose, by creating the seal the user brings forth one hundred bee's with large senbon like stingers, that can then be used to assault the targets by stabbing them, the user can also have the bee's fire the stingers from their bodies which dispels the bee's. Now at this rank the bee's stingers are poisonous but move slower than their counterpart. The poison within a single stinger is enough to paralyse a single limb for a single post, by applying more stingers to the area this is increased per amount of stinger applied to that area. If the head is struck the entire body is deemed paralysed by the amount of stingers within said head. Though generally a head shot is also deadly due to the sharp senbon stingers.
Weaknesses:

Senbon move slower than their un-poisoned counter part.
Can be blown away or defended against.
Bee's can be prematurely destroyed before the stingers are used.

This lacks a cost. Should probably be A Rank

upgraded to A-rank, costs added

@Eevee wrote:

Name: Thousand Deadly Stings
Rank: S
Power: B
Activation Cost: 25
Upkeep Cost: 15
Range: 150m's
Speed: S
Element: N/A
Skill: N/A
Classification: Clan Jutsu
Requirements: Kamizuru Clan
Parent Technique: One Hundred Deadly Stings Technique
Hand Seals: Clan Specefic
Description: The user has two ways of doing this technique, the first is to summon bee's that are solely for this purpose, by creating the seal the user brings forth one thousand bee's with large senbon like stingers, that can then be used to assault the targets by stabbing them, the user can also have the bee's fire the stingers from their bodies which dispels the bee's. Now at this rank the bee's stingers are poisonous but move slower than their counterpart. The poison within a single stinger is enough to paralyse a single limb for a single post, by applying more stingers to the area this is increased per amount of stinger applied to that area. If the head is struck the entire body is deemed paralysed by the amount of stingers within said head. Though generally a head shot is also deadly due to the sharp senbon stingers. If the opponent is struck with more than one hundred of these stingers, their body will give out from the poison being pumped into the system, killing them.
Weaknesses:

Weak in terms of physical power, can be blown away/halted by strong enough technique.

Strong enough technique needs more quantifying. I'd say anything A Rank and above.

could you clarify on this one, im not too sure what you mean?
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PostSubject: Re: Kamizuru Clan   Thu Sep 28, 2017 1:35 am

Everything looks good but as for clan history, the Hokage is not okay with his clans almost getting rekt by bees. You'll have to take that portion out or replace it with something else entirely.

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PostSubject: Re: Kamizuru Clan   Thu Sep 28, 2017 6:26 am

HOKAGE WHY SO INSECURE!!!! :'(

I'v edited it to be Getsugakure, iv noticed it doesn't seem present on the site or any where significant so hopefully that will be it for the hoop diving. Unless I also need permission to actually have the Aburame clan involved, then hopefully this will be all the edits needed
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PostSubject: Re: Kamizuru Clan   Thu Sep 28, 2017 11:40 am

Much better but again because Aburame is a Konoha Clan I wanna get the Hokage's permission on this.

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PostSubject: Re: Kamizuru Clan   Thu Sep 28, 2017 1:53 pm

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Kamizuru clan
Iwagakure
Bee Summoning Hidan
Iwagakure Settlement: Kurosho Kurokana [92 years old]

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Clan History/Description

The Kamizuru clan were once considered to be the weakest clan within the land of Wind, most commonly bullied by the Nature clan and their brutish ways, the Kamizuru clan where one of the few clans that helped over throw the Nature clan when independence came to them as the state of Iwagakure, it was during this time that the Kamizuru clan began to make a name for themselves once the land of stone no longer held its desert appearance and had begun to blossom greenery in to the large cracks of the snow, the bee's of the Kamizuru clan pollinated all the greenary within Iwagakure helping the new Village in the Stone to literally blossom. During this time as Iwagakure the Kamizuru clan's battle experience and hardness began to form, they no longer simply pollinated or remained passive but under their Tsuchikages care and tutelage they grew into a fearsome clan filled with skilled fighters.

Alas though the Kamizuru clan would suffer a defeat during a mission given to them by the senile first Tsuchikage, with their abilities and bee summoning skills, they where experts at espionage and could even infiltrate villages with ease, though the clan argued against taking such a mission, Hòu Zhuān's dust release was used to murder the current clan leader Evelynne Kamizuru, the beloved leader of the clan. This did not sit well, but upon threat of this happening to the entire clan, the large fighting squad of the Kamizuru took up the mission to infiltrate Getsugakure and take it over. This was the belief within the village that though the mission was indeed dangerous, the Kamizuru clan would be able to succeed due to their abilities.

What they did not forsee was a clan far superior to them when it came to wielding bugs, they infiltrated Getsugakure easily enough and even managed via their bee like jutsu to take out a large amount of its shinobi, its difficult to fight something so small yet deadly, and with the vast amount of Kamizuru clan members whom had take up the call, victory for one clan to take over the Village hidden under the moon looked assured. Until the Kikachu came. Call it luck, fate, destiny, whatever but for some reason Konoha's big users the Aburame clan burst forth from deep within the hidden village and via their chakra absorption, soon lay waste to the bee's surrounding the village, able to follow this chakra back to the source, the vast amount of Kamizuru clan well over two hundred members where wiped out to a mere fifteen within one night.

Only three members returned to Iwagakure, to report to the senile Tsuchikage, though it would seem by their return their fears of the old dust user eradicating their clan would be unfounded though with such a failed mission, the clans name was in disgrace and their numbers and practitioners began to dwindle within Iwagakure.

With only three returning to the land of Stone, this meant twelve members of the Kamizuru clan would leave their village behind, turning to the life of a missing ninja, four of which swore revenge on Konohagakures Aburame clan for their defeat, while eight of the remaining members wished to simply live. It was these eight whom would find themselves in many other villages, spreading information on the Kamizuru clan to bolster its reputation.

The four members whom angered by Konoha would one day return, believing themselves to be stronger, went after one of the most unique bugs in history though where defeated by a Hyuuga a Senju and an Aburame. News travelled which angered Iwagakure that four more of this clan had been defeated by mere konoha ninja.

Clan/Bloodline Traits & Characteristics

There is no unique traits or characteristics of this clan. Perhaps the only shared capability is this clan is the only clan whom has access to the Bee summoning scroll.

Bloodline Description & Abilities

A common misconception of the Kamizuru clan is that they are summoners, that they utilize the summoning jutsu to bring forth their insects. To those not trained in the Kamizuru way this would be how it seems. This would be wrong, for you see the Kamizuru clan members are somewhat proficent in the use of Yin release, gaining the ability to create something out of nothing, by applying physical chakra to these miniature structures the user actually creates these bee's out of their chakra.

Capable of using all and any part of the "bee" the users of these techniques seemingly gain the ability to actually hide within such a small creature via the hiding in bee technique, they are capable of not only summoning forth bee's themselves but wielding honey and wax in which is also created by the bee's, via beeswax clones or honey like traps as well as wielding poisonous stingers, the Kamizuru clan has a far wider reach in terms of arsenal than many believe, like the aburame clan they are able to interact with bee's though not all insects, it only seems to be bee's hornets or wasps in which the clan is able to wield and communicate with.

Naturally due to their bee like affinity, they hold the ability to utilize bee summoning if they wish requires summoning jutsu]


Bloodline Limits & Drawbacks

The Aburame clan has the advantage against the Kamizuru if wielding Kikachu, Kikachu chakra absorption skills act as two ranks higher when used against any bee skill.

Fire release does +1 damage to bee's


Clan Techniques

Clan Specific:
 


Approved w/ understanding that hiding in bee will be registered as a separate technique and is not an innate ability.
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