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    Name: Fujio, Abriu
    Age: 16
    Gender: Male
    Village: Kumogakure
    Rank: E
    Title: Genin

    Clan:  Fujio Clan
    Bloodline: Scorch Release
    Element(s): Katon, Fuuton
    Skill(s): Ninjutsu,

    Stats

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: D
    • Speed: D
    • Coordination: D
    • Intelligence: D
    • Perception: D


    Unique Abilities:
    One-handed Seals: A player may be able to perform one-handed seals, this time without a one tier penalty to their Coordination.


    Appearance:
    At first glance, Abiru would strike someone as a charming and handsome young man, his near perfectly angular face gives him a young yet mature look, which only adds to his smile and pearly white, but slightly sharpened, teeth. He has a slightly long but straight nose that matches the angular effect set by his jawline and chin. His face is completely free of all blemishes or scars, showing only smooth and soft flesh on his well framed face, though despite this, Abiru has a slightly pale complexion that catches light in interesting ways.

    His eyes are a bright and deeply colored sapphire blue, each always lit up by the light around him in a way that makes his eyes dance and shimmer that add to the kind and charming effect given off by the rest of his face. If one were to really stare deep into Abiru's eyes, the shining reflection and handsome appearance will fall away, revealing a cold and harsh look behind the animated mask set by his seemingly "nice" features.

    Abiru's hair is a baby blue, its color changing slightly lighter during the summer and darker to a degree during the winter seasons. Though always Abiru has it cut to mid length, there it stays in this cut fashion. Although Abiru never tends to his hair in any way, it somehow always spikes itself in a neat pattern on the tops and sides, leaving the sideburns, bangs, and back to straighten out and even more neatly frame his cheeks and face. The handsome face of Abiru's features, to those who know him, are all to misleading, as Abiru's true personality is nothing like what his handsome smile and sparkling eyes may lead many to believe.

    Abiru has even set and firm shoulders, the slightly pale skin if bare, reveal a cut and strong set of muscles that hint at his training with swords and weapons. Following along the his arms, the rest of Abiru follows suit of his shoulders, his muscles strong and toned, more pronounced around the forearms then the rest of his arms, all attributed to his focus in ninjutsu. If one pays attention, they can see Abiru's veins slightly bulging out when his arms flex and move during battle or his periodic training sessions, although they are by no means highly accentuated on his skin, which is a sure sign of overbuilding of the bodies muscles.

    Abiru's chest, like the rest of his body has no scars or other blemishes that would hide or effect his pale but smooth flesh. His pecks are slightly firm, as well as sides, and his abdomen, which shows a lightly cut six pack. Though like his arms, Abiru's torso and chest are almost always covered by some type of clothing, blocking any view one might have.


    History:

    *Abiru was born 16 years ago into a family of the Fuijo clan and was raised well with loving parents. His father had big hopes for him and swore to see his son become a great ninja. Unfortunately, his father had misson gone bad and he left Abiru at a young age. His father died in a battle with the a Sound shinobi. Abiru was hit hard, even at the very young age he was.

    *Abiru was raised in the ninja arts from an early age, showing good promise as he quickly understood ninjutsu and he had a good understanding of Kuchiyose. His mother raised him by herself and the two got by well but were always aware of the shadow over them; the loss they suffered hurt them and it also hurt Abirus grandfather who left the village. The two most important men in Abirus life were gone.

    *Abiru did well at the academy, he was naturally talented and many believed it was because of the genes in his family as his father had been a talented ninja and his grandfather was well known to be powerful. Abiru was happy to know how respected they were. He passed the academy well as one of the best in class and became a genin.

    *His genin squad was one of great talent as it consisted of Abiru Fujio, Dotou Kazehana and Kisara Ueda. Three great clans together in a squad and a powerful jounin meant the squad did plenty of dangerous missions because they were considered good enough. A rivalry was built between the three over who was the best out of them. Kisara did not care as much so Abiru and Dotou were the true rivals and a strong friendship was built between them. They took on many missions and did well and Abiru was happy he had found someone who he got on well with and understood, he was happy to have true friends and he felt true happiness for the first time in a long time.

    *A mission was accepted by his cell and a 12 year old Abiru experienced horror he had never faced before. He saw many die, including Kisara which scared him as he believed she was too strong to die and it made him realize how weak he still was. This death hurt him as he hated all the murder and wanted it to stop but unfortunately for him things were about to get worse. He was left as one of the few survivors and when he was leaving he was grabbed from behind with a kunai to his throat. He turned to see, much to his despair, Dotou held the kunai at his neck. It turned out that Dotous brother had told him how to get a with Jiton by killing his best friend and the mission had done much damage to the fragile mind of the young Kazehana. Abiru escaped his hold and then fought against a crazed Dotou who kept apologizing while fighting. With tears in his eyes, Abiru landed a fierce blow against Dotou and when he went to pick him up to take him to the medics, Dotou plunged his kunai into his chest and killed himself while still apologizing. Abiru left the battlefield in deep sadness as his only friend had tried to kill him and then committed suicide and he had lost his faith in the world. It was made worse when his mother had also died. She had gone out on her own looking for him to stop him as she had already lost her husband to war. Unfortunately for her she was caught in the crossfire of battle and lost her life as well. He returned to Suna completely broken and alone.

    *Years have passed since he came back from that mission and he grew stronger over the time. The return of his grandfather helped him slowly get back to his old self but he had a new resolve which was to stop the pain in the world. His belief was by becoming a strong ninja of the Sand he would gain the power needed to stop any future war and suffering. He also learned of his Will of peace and thought that if things were to change then his Will would need to be inherited by all ninja of the Sand. He still deeply misses his friends and family but thanks them for the strength they have given him and he made a promise at their graves that their deaths would not be in vain and that he would make all of them proud. For this reason Abrui packed his things and traveled to start in own personal mission in the Village hidden in the Clouds.


    Personality:
    Abiru comes across as a quiet, patience and mild mannered youth who rarely seems to get emotional. People see him as a bit of loner since he frequently spends time on his own when not on mission and seems to have few real friends. Many considered Abiru very mature for his age. He no longer pretends to be awkward as he once did and moves and acts with unhidden confidence though he still doesn’t exude any arrogance

    For those truly capable of seeing the underneath Abiru is worrying enigma. Abiru might once have been a shy, timid and impressionable boy but this isn’t reflected in his stance which is confident and surprisingly for an orphan, flawless. Any one who managed to follow him to observe him train, a task even the most skilled trackers find difficult given how he seems almost to embrace the shadows as he moves, would have no doubt why such a young Nin leads Sunagakure's most elite squad. The boy moves with fluid graze of a dancer, every step precise and perfect, utilizing a techniques not seen before in Sunagakure. Perhaps stranger still is the rare off chance of seeing him mutter to himself or rather to some non existent third party with a devotion and with warmth he has never uses with his peers.

    Abiru is a not a good person in any ordinary sense of the word, anyone who serves a malevolent blood seeking dark God by routinely performing murder in his name hardly fits this description yet he is not truly evil, he does not seek to bring destruction on all and sundry only those who cast a shadow on the world. Abiru only cares that he is devoted and that he regularly sacrifices people to him, the choice of target is his own. Abiru oddly enough for a mass murderer uses ethics to guide his choices, initially killing those who he believes to be blight on society, the drug pushers, rapists and con-men and more recently missing Nin who threaten civilized society and Sunagakure itself. Furthermore he is not outwardly offensive and doesn’t harass or torment people for no reason. He has surprisingly strong respect for his fellow Nin and the office of the Kazekage and takes his duties seriously. Currently he has no intention of leaving the village any time soon, wanting to fight it as his father did. However if he was forced to choose between his God and his village, then that day would be marked with the blood of Sunagakure and the sonorous laughs of his master.

    Abiru has developed a certain bond with a number of other Shinobi. Not precisely friendship for the disciple seeks no friends, at least none he would admit too, but comrades in arms so to speak to whom he feels shared respect. Two individuals of note are the incumbent Dotou Kazehana, and Kisara Udea, ex-team members of Abiru’s. Abiru has also unfortunately developed a weakness lately he has not found a way to resolve. His girl free early life has left him wholly unprepared for them in later life and he is very awkward in their company. Many people find it highly amusing that Abiru who often is very serious and hardworking and competent in battle seems so phased by the opposite gender. This issue is made all the worse because his looks and has status as prodigy thanks to his meteoric rise through Sunagakure’s ranks has drawn quite a number of admirers. Abiru has a rather substantial number of fan girls who worry him no end and tries to avoid them like the plague.



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    Post by Ryuko Sun Sep 23, 2018 10:33 pm

    Could you please edit your backstory a bit.  What you have now doesn't entirely make sense

    In your backstory it says Abiru was born 16 years ago,  Yet earlier in your profile his age is set to 15

    His father died in a battle with the Sound.    The problem with that is while Sound exists here is is an irrelevant minor country. I'm not saying he didn't die, but how'd that happen when they don't have the forces to go to war with Suna?

    Speaking of wars who was Suna fighting with?   According to the timeline their hasn't been any major wars since before the villages where founded.  

    https://gladiusnarutorp.forumotion.com/t140-site-lore-timeline

    Lastly how did Abiru end up abandoning Suna and ending up in Kiri?   After it was devistated by the plauge sweeping across the lands  generally most of the refugess went to kumo so it'd be nice to know how and why he ended up somewhere else.


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    Constitution: B
    Stamina: A-> A++ (Arch Angel's Tiara)
    Speed: B
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: A
    Perception: B
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    Aries wrote:Name: Fujio, Abriu
    Age: 16
    Gender: Male
    Village: Kumogakure
    Rank: E
    Title: Genin

    Clan:  Fujio Clan
    Bloodline: Scorch Release
    Element(s): Katon, Fuuton
    Skill(s): Ninjutsu,

    Stats

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: D
    • Stamina: D
    • Speed: D
    • Coordination: D
    • Intelligence: D
    • Perception: D


    Unique Abilities:
    One-handed Seals: A player may be able to perform one-handed seals, this time without a one tier penalty to their Coordination.


    Appearance:
    At first glance, Abiru would strike someone as a charming and handsome young man, his near perfectly angular face gives him a young yet mature look, which only adds to his smile and pearly white, but slightly sharpened, teeth. He has a slightly long but straight nose that matches the angular effect set by his jawline and chin. His face is completely free of all blemishes or scars, showing only smooth and soft flesh on his well framed face, though despite this, Abiru has a slightly pale complexion that catches light in interesting ways.

    His eyes are a bright and deeply colored sapphire blue, each always lit up by the light around him in a way that makes his eyes dance and shimmer that add to the kind and charming effect given off by the rest of his face. If one were to really stare deep into Abiru's eyes, the shining reflection and handsome appearance will fall away, revealing a cold and harsh look behind the animated mask set by his seemingly "nice" features.

    Abiru's hair is a baby blue, its color changing slightly lighter during the summer and darker to a degree during the winter seasons. Though always Abiru has it cut to mid length, there it stays in this cut fashion. Although Abiru never tends to his hair in any way, it somehow always spikes itself in a neat pattern on the tops and sides, leaving the sideburns, bangs, and back to straighten out and even more neatly frame his cheeks and face. The handsome face of Abiru's features, to those who know him, are all to misleading, as Abiru's true personality is nothing like what his handsome smile and sparkling eyes may lead many to believe.

    Abiru has even set and firm shoulders, the slightly pale skin if bare, reveal a cut and strong set of muscles that hint at his training with swords and weapons. Following along the his arms, the rest of Abiru follows suit of his shoulders, his muscles strong and toned, more pronounced around the forearms then the rest of his arms, all attributed to his focus in ninjutsu. If one pays attention, they can see Abiru's veins slightly bulging out when his arms flex and move during battle or his periodic training sessions, although they are by no means highly accentuated on his skin, which is a sure sign of overbuilding of the bodies muscles.

    Abiru's chest, like the rest of his body has no scars or other blemishes that would hide or effect his pale but smooth flesh. His pecks are slightly firm, as well as sides, and his abdomen, which shows a lightly cut six pack. Though like his arms, Abiru's torso and chest are almost always covered by some type of clothing, blocking any view one might have.


    History:

    *Abiru was born 16 years ago into a family of the Fuijo clan and was raised well with loving parents. His father had big hopes for him and swore to see his son become a great ninja. Unfortunately, his father had misson gone bad and he left Abiru at a young age. His father died in a battle with the a Sound shinobi. Abiru was hit hard, even at the very young age he was.

    *Abiru was raised in the ninja arts from an early age, showing good promise as he quickly understood ninjutsu and he had a good understanding of Kuchiyose. His mother raised him by herself and the two got by well but were always aware of the shadow over them; the loss they suffered hurt them and it also hurt Abirus grandfather who left the village. The two most important men in Abirus life were gone.

    *Abiru did well at the academy, he was naturally talented and many believed it was because of the genes in his family as his father had been a talented ninja and his grandfather was well known to be powerful. Abiru was happy to know how respected they were. He passed the academy well as one of the best in class and became a genin.

    *His genin squad was one of great talent as it consisted of Abiru Fujio, Dotou Kazehana and Kisara Ueda. Three great clans together in a squad and a powerful jounin meant the squad did plenty of dangerous missions because they were considered good enough. A rivalry was built between the three over who was the best out of them. Kisara did not care as much so Abiru and Dotou were the true rivals and a strong friendship was built between them. They took on many missions and did well and Abiru was happy he had found someone who he got on well with and understood, he was happy to have true friends and he felt true happiness for the first time in a long time.

    *A mission was accepted by his cell and a 12 year old Abiru experienced horror he had never faced before. He saw many die, including Kisara which scared him as he believed she was too strong to die and it made him realize how weak he still was. This death hurt him as he hated all the murder and wanted it to stop but unfortunately for him things were about to get worse. He was left as one of the few survivors and when he was leaving he was grabbed from behind with a kunai to his throat. He turned to see, much to his despair, Dotou held the kunai at his neck. It turned out that Dotous brother had told him how to get a with Jiton by killing his best friend and the mission had done much damage to the fragile mind of the young Kazehana. Abiru escaped his hold and then fought against a crazed Dotou who kept apologizing while fighting. With tears in his eyes, Abiru landed a fierce blow against Dotou and when he went to pick him up to take him to the medics, Dotou plunged his kunai into his chest and killed himself while still apologizing. Abiru left the battlefield in deep sadness as his only friend had tried to kill him and then committed suicide and he had lost his faith in the world. It was made worse when his mother had also died. She had gone out on her own looking for him to stop him as she had already lost her husband to war. Unfortunately for her she was caught in the crossfire of battle and lost her life as well. He returned to Suna completely broken and alone.

    *Years have passed since he came back from that mission and he grew stronger over the time. The return of his grandfather helped him slowly get back to his old self but he had a new resolve which was to stop the pain in the world. His belief was by becoming a strong ninja of the Sand he would gain the power needed to stop any future war and suffering. He also learned of his Will of peace and thought that if things were to change then his Will would need to be inherited by all ninja of the Sand. He still deeply misses his friends and family but thanks them for the strength they have given him and he made a promise at their graves that their deaths would not be in vain and that he would make all of them proud. For this reason Abrui packed his things and traveled to start in own personal mission in the Village hidden in the Clouds.


    Personality:
    Abiru comes across as a quiet, patience and mild mannered youth who rarely seems to get emotional. People see him as a bit of loner since he frequently spends time on his own when not on mission and seems to have few real friends. Many considered Abiru very mature for his age. He no longer pretends to be awkward as he once did and moves and acts with unhidden confidence though he still doesn’t exude any arrogance

    For those truly capable of seeing the underneath Abiru is worrying enigma. Abiru might once have been a shy, timid and impressionable boy but this isn’t reflected in his stance which is confident and surprisingly for an orphan, flawless. Any one who managed to follow him to observe him train, a task even the most skilled trackers find difficult given how he seems almost to embrace the shadows as he moves, would have no doubt why such a young Nin leads Sunagakure's most elite squad. The boy moves with fluid graze of a dancer, every step precise and perfect, utilizing a techniques not seen before in Sunagakure. Perhaps stranger still is the rare off chance of seeing him mutter to himself or rather to some non existent third party with a devotion and with warmth he has never uses with his peers.

    Abiru is a not a good person in any ordinary sense of the word, anyone who serves a malevolent blood seeking dark God by routinely performing murder in his name hardly fits this description yet he is not truly evil, he does not seek to bring destruction on all and sundry only those who cast a shadow on the world. Abiru only cares that he is devoted and that he regularly sacrifices people to him, the choice of target is his own. Abiru oddly enough for a mass murderer uses ethics to guide his choices, initially killing those who he believes to be blight on society, the drug pushers, rapists and con-men and more recently missing Nin who threaten civilized society and Sunagakure itself. Furthermore he is not outwardly offensive and doesn’t harass or torment people for no reason. He has surprisingly strong respect for his fellow Nin and the office of the Kazekage and takes his duties seriously. Currently he has no intention of leaving the village any time soon, wanting to fight it as his father did. However if he was forced to choose between his God and his village, then that day would be marked with the blood of Sunagakure and the sonorous laughs of his master.

    Abiru has developed a certain bond with a number of other Shinobi. Not precisely friendship for the disciple seeks no friends, at least none he would admit too, but comrades in arms so to speak to whom he feels shared respect. Two individuals of note are the incumbent Dotou Kazehana, and Kisara Udea, ex-team members of Abiru’s. Abiru has also unfortunately developed a weakness lately he has not found a way to resolve. His girl free early life has left him wholly unprepared for them in later life and he is very awkward in their company. Many people find it highly amusing that Abiru who often is very serious and hardworking and competent in battle seems so phased by the opposite gender. This issue is made all the worse because his looks and has status as prodigy thanks to his meteoric rise through Sunagakure’s ranks has drawn quite a number of admirers. Abiru has a rather substantial number of fan girls who worry him no end and tries to avoid them like the plague.



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