Zen's Custom Creations

Overdrawn:

Snap Shot:

Sniper's Sight:

Arc Sparrow:

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Name: Sniper's Sight
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: 3
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Kyujutsu Skill
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: -
Description: By closing one eye and channeling chakra into their dominant eye, the user of this technique is able to increase their Perception by 1-Tier in terms of sight. In addition to allowing the user to scope their sight effectively allowing the user to double their range of sight, this technique also grants the user complete spatial awareness in relation to their eyesight. Thus allowing them to instantly know and calculate the exact distance their target is away from them and their speed (if moving), the wind direction and speed, and the trajectory they will would need to shoot in order to hit their mark.
Weaknesses: This sight cannot see through solid objects; Walls/Boulders/Trees/Ground/People/etc. And can only be used to e through non-corporal hindrances that do not possess a mass.

Name: Arc Sparrow
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Kyujutsu Skill
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: -
Description: similar to how other weapon users imbue chakra into their weapons through chakra flow, the user imbues chakra into their arrow as they notch it, upon loosing the arrow the chakra activates surrounding the arrow in a visible aura of chakra that extends to twice the size of the arrow. This chakra causes the arrow to act as though it was 1 grade higher in terms of hardness, in addition to allowing it to pierce through weak obstacles in it's path. (Trees, mountains, walls or lower grade than arrow, people) until it reaches it's max distance following projectile rules.
Weaknesses: -

Name: Rain of Terror
Rank: B
Power: A
Activation Cost: 15
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: 120 meters/ 30m Radius
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Kyujutsu Skill
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: -
Description: Zen draws an empty bow where he focuses his chakra into the creation of a single arrow made of pure chakra. This arrow after travelling 60 meters will explode into 50 separate arrows which then rains down upon a 25 meter radius. Each individual arrow of this technique is comparable to a B-Grade arrow in terms of quality.
Weaknesses: Not wise to shoot into an area with allies in it.

Name: Sniper's Sight
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: 3
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Kyujutsu Skill
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: -
Description: By closing one eye and channeling chakra into their dominant eye, the user of this technique is able to increase their Perception by 1-Tier in terms of sight. While this technique is active the user is capable of seeing in perfect detail without hindrance of lights/darkness/smoke/mist/etc. In addition to allowing the user to scope their sight effectively allowing the user to double their range of sight, this technique also grants the user complete spatial awareness in relation to their eyesight. Thus allowing them to instantly know and calculate the exact distance their target is away from them and their speed (if moving), the wind direction and speed, and the trajectory they will would need to shoot in order to hit their mark.
Weaknesses: This sight cannot see through solid objects; Walls/Boulders/Trees/Ground/People/etc. And can only be used to e through non-corporal hindrances that do not possess a mass.

Not capable of seeing through hindrances like Light, Dark, Smoke, and Mist.

Name: Overdrawn
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: 3
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Kyujutsu Skill
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals:-
Description: Flowing chakra into their bow the user is capable of enhancing their bow beyond it's limits. The chakra increases the strength (draw power) of the bowstring allowing it to act as though it was 1 grade higher in quality, this in turn increases the velocity (speed) of the arrow as well as how far it travels.
Weaknesses: User must possess the appropriate strength for the increased draw power.

Approved

Name: Snap Shot
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: 3
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: B-Tier Coordination, Kyujutsu Skill
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: -
Description: Through the use of charka the user is able to stimulate their muscles in such a way that the are able to make multiple shots with their bow, allowing for quick firing in close quarters. (B-Tier=2shots/s, A-Tier=3shots/s, S-Tier=5shots/s, X-Tier=8shots/s)
Weaknesses: Though being able to fire multiple shots comes in handy, it sacrifices the strength of the shot as if it had been shot from a bow with a draw power of 1 rank lower.

Approved

Name: Arc Sparrow
Rank: B
Power: A
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Kyujutsu Skill
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: -
Description: similar to how other weapon users imbue chakra into their weapons through chakra flow, the user imbues chakra into their arrow as they notch it, upon loosing the arrow the chakra activates surrounding the arrow in a visible aura of chakra that extends to twice the size of the arrow. This chakra causes the arrow to act as though it was 1 grade higher in terms of hardness, in addition to allowing it to pierce through weak obstacles in it's path. (Trees, mountains, walls or lower grade than arrow, people) until it reaches it's max distance following projectile rules.
Weaknesses: -

Lower the power to B, or bring the cost to A. I suggest lowering the power to B.

Name: Rain of Terror
Rank: B
Power: A
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: 120 meters/ 30m Radius
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Kyujutsu Skill
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: -
Description: Zen draws an empty bow where he focuses his chakra into the creation of a single arrow made of pure chakra. This arrow after travelling 120 meters will explode into 100 separate arrows which then rains down upon a 30 meter radius. Each individual arrow of this technique is comparable to a B-Grade arrow in terms of quality.
Weaknesses: Not wise to shoot into an area with allies in it.

This is Ninjutsu.
This is also better than the Shadow Clone Shuriken thing for a less cost. It either needs less arrows made (refer to Shadow Clone Shuriken), or a higher cost. Cost needs to meet power.

Edits have been made.

On Rain of Terror, I was told in discord I could create an arrow out of chakra to be shot from a bow through kyujutsu without requiring Ninjutsu which is why I elected to not have that skill if that is not the case then I was told wrong and will have to figure something else out.

DarhkMyr wrote:Name: Sniper's Sight
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: 3
Range: Self
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Kyujutsu Skill
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: -
Description: By closing one eye and channeling chakra into their dominant eye, the user of this technique is able to increase their Perception by 1-Tier in terms of sight. In addition to allowing the user to scope their sight effectively allowing the user to double their range of sight, this technique also grants the user complete spatial awareness in relation to their eyesight. Thus allowing them to instantly know and calculate the exact distance their target is away from them and their speed (if moving), the wind direction and speed, and the trajectory they will would need to shoot in order to hit their mark.
Weaknesses: This sight cannot see through solid objects; Walls/Boulders/Trees/Ground/People/etc. And can only be used to e through non-corporal hindrances that do not possess a mass.

Name: Arc Sparrow
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: -
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: Kyujutsu Skill
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: -
Description: similar to how other weapon users imbue chakra into their weapons through chakra flow, the user imbues chakra into their arrow as they notch it, upon loosing the arrow the chakra activates surrounding the arrow in a visible aura of chakra that extends to twice the size of the arrow. This chakra causes the arrow to act as though it was 1 grade higher in terms of hardness, in addition to allowing it to pierce through weak obstacles in it's path. (Trees, mountains, walls or lower grade than arrow, people) until it reaches it's max distance following projectile rules.
Weaknesses: -

Name: Rain of Terror
Rank: B
Power: A
Activation Cost: 15
Upkeep Cost: -
Range: 120 meters/ 30m Radius
Speed: -
Element: -
Skill: Kyujutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Kyujutsu Skill
Parent Technique: -
Hand Seals: -
Description: Zen draws an empty bow where he focuses his chakra into the creation of a single arrow made of pure chakra. This arrow after travelling 60 meters will explode into 50 separate arrows which then rains down upon a 25 meter radius. Each individual arrow of this technique is comparable to a B-Grade arrow in terms of quality.
Weaknesses: Not wise to shoot into an area with allies in it.

Sniper's Sight and Arc Sparrow are approved

Deferring to Nozomi's opinion on Rain of Terror