Renny's Crafting

Name: Healthy
Rank: S
Function: Passive
Price: 500,000 Ryo
Description: The user cannot have their healing negated by S-rank effects and below. Examples include the Rasenshuriken or another enchantment. The item the enchantment is placed upon must be touching the user.

Restricted and artifact-based effects bypass this enchantment.

Attunement Slot: No
Charges: 40 Uses

Name: Injection
Rank: A
Function: Active
Price: 100,000 Ryo
Description: The user can inject their chemistry items into a target in contact or themselves. The item the enchantment is placed upon must be touching the user or target's body.
Attunement Slot: No
Charges: 30 Uses

Name: Debuff
Rank: S
Function: Active
Price: 500,000 Ryo
Description: The user debuffs an enemy in Strength by -1 tier. The item the enchantment is placed upon must be touching the user to affect strikes hitting them, or the target's body for a flat debuff.
Attunement Slot: Yes, debuff
Charges: 40 Uses

Name: Protection From Arrows
Rank: S
Function: Passive
Price: 500,000 Ryo
Description: The user debuffs projectiles that affect them by -1 tier. One tier for Strength. The item the enchantment is placed upon must be touching the user's or thrower's body.
Attunement Slot: Yes, debuff
Charges: 40 Uses

Renny wrote:Name: Healthy
Rank: S
Function: Passive
Price: 500,000 Ryo
Description: The user cannot have their healing negated by S-rank effects and below.
Attunement Slot: No
Charges: 40 Uses

What "effects?" This needs to be more specific otherwise it's denied due to overbroad vagueness.

Name: Injection
Rank: A
Function: Active
Price: 100,000 Ryo
Description: The user can inject their chemistry items into a target in contact or themselves and activate them off a preset condition.
Attunement Slot: No
Charges: 30 Uses

What conditions? This needs more specificity.

Name: Operation
Rank: A
Function: Active
Price: 100,000 Ryo
Description: The user can sense the innards of what they or their chakra contacts.
Attunement Slot: No
Charges: 30 Uses

I don't understand this sentence.

Name: Debuff
Rank: S
Function: Active
Price: 500,000 Ryo
Description: The user debuffs an enemy in Strength by -2 tiers through what they or their chakra contacts.
Attunement Slot: Yes, debuff
Charges: 40 Uses

Through what "they or their chakra contacts" is an incomplete thought. I don't fully get home this works.

o/ Completed edits

Renny wrote:Name: Healthy
Rank: S
Function: Passive
Price: 500,000 Ryo
Description: The user cannot have their healing negated by S-rank effects and below. Examples include the Rasenshuriken or another enchantment.
Attunement Slot: No
Charges: 40 Uses

All S-Rank effects is still too overbroad. Needs further limitations and exceptions.

Renny wrote:
Name: Injection
Rank: A
Function: Active
Price: 100,000 Ryo
Description: The user can inject their chemistry items into a target in contact or themselves.
Attunement Slot: No
Charges: 30 Uses

Write in that the item that this enchantment is placed upon must be touching the user or target's body.

Renny wrote:
Name: Operation
Rank: A
Function: Active
Price: 100,000 Ryo
Description: The user can sense inside a target's body, activated by making contact or by having their chakra make contact such as by healing.
Attunement Slot: No
Charges: 30 Uses

This should require Sensory. Also, Enchantments are placed on items so the item in question would have to contact the person not their body.

Renny wrote:
Name: Debuff
Rank: S
Function: Active
Price: 500,000 Ryo
Description: The user debuffs an enemy in Strength by -2 tiers. The user's body or chakra contacts their target to seal Strength.
Attunement Slot: Yes, debuff
Charges: 40 Uses

Enchantments are placed on items so the item in question would have to contact the person not their body.

Name: Protection From Arrows
Rank: S
Function: Passive
Price: 500,000 Ryo
Description: The user debuffs projectiles that affect them by -2 tiers. One tier for Strength, one tier for Speed for responding to projectiles.
Attunement Slot: Yes, debuff
Charges: 40 Uses

Enchantments are placed on items so the item in question would have to contact the person not their body.

o/ Completed edits

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Renny wrote:Name: Healthy
Rank: S
Function: Passive
Price: 500,000 Ryo
Description: The user cannot have their healing negated by S-rank effects and below. Examples include the Rasenshuriken or another enchantment. The item the enchantment is placed upon must be touching the user.

The enchantment can only be used on one other effect ever, even if more charges are used.
The enchantment can't be used to heal others.

Attunement Slot: No
Charges: 40 Uses

I meant limitations on what cannot be negated. Obviously an entity ability that stops healing should not be stopped by a mere enchantment. So definitely Restricted based effects as well as Artifact based effects should be exceptions to this enchantment.

Renny wrote:
Name: Injection
Rank: A
Function: Active
Price: 100,000 Ryo
Description: The user can inject their chemistry items into a target in contact or themselves. The item the enchantment is placed upon must be touching the user or target's body.
Attunement Slot: No
Charges: 30 Uses

Approved.

Name: Debuff
Rank: S
Function: Active
Price: 500,000 Ryo
Description: The user debuffs an enemy in Strength by -2 tiers. The item the enchantment is placed upon must be touching the user to affect strikes hitting them, or the target's body for a flat debuff.
Attunement Slot: Yes, debuff
Charges: 40 Uses

Enchantment debuffs are capped at one tier.

Name: Protection From Arrows
Rank: S
Function: Passive
Price: 500,000 Ryo
Description: The user debuffs projectiles that affect them by -2 tiers. One tier for Strength, one tier for Speed for responding to projectiles. The item the enchantment is placed upon must be touching the user's or thrower's body.
Attunement Slot: Yes, debuff
Charges: 40 Uses

Enchantment debuffs are capped at one tier.

 Edits completed

Renny wrote:Name: Healthy
Rank: S
Function: Passive
Price: 500,000 Ryo
Description: The user cannot have their healing negated by S-rank effects and below. Examples include the Rasenshuriken or another enchantment. The item the enchantment is placed upon must be touching the user.

Restricted and artifact-based effects bypass this enchantment.

Attunement Slot: No
Charges: 40 Uses

Approved.

Renny wrote:
Name: Injection
Rank: A
Function: Active
Price: 100,000 Ryo
Description: The user can inject their chemistry items into a target in contact or themselves. The item the enchantment is placed upon must be touching the user or target's body.
Attunement Slot: No
Charges: 30 Uses

Approved.

Name: Debuff
Rank: S
Function: Active
Price: 500,000 Ryo
Description: The user debuffs an enemy in Strength by -1 tier. The item the enchantment is placed upon must be touching the user to affect strikes hitting them, or the target's body for a flat debuff.
Attunement Slot: Yes, debuff
Charges: 40 Uses

Approved.

Name: Protection From Arrows
Rank: S
Function: Passive
Price: 500,000 Ryo
Description: The user debuffs projectiles that affect them by -1 tier. One tier for Strength. The item the enchantment is placed upon must be touching the user's or thrower's body.
Attunement Slot: Yes, debuff
Charges: 40 Uses

Should be touching the thrower's body only right? I mean unless you are aiming to debuff your own Str.