Shin's Arsenal

Ready to be checked:

Name: Doton: Crushing Technique
Rank: B-rank
Power: A-rank
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: None
Range: Wide enough to cover the holes affected by Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Speed: B-rank
Element: Doton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Knowledge of Earth Release: Moving Earth Core.
Parent Technique: Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Hand Seals: Same as parent technique.
Description: This jutsu was designed to close holes. It allows the user, very much like the Moving Earth Core, to shift the position of the terrain. However, instead of doing so vertically, this technique allows the user to shift the terrain horizontally, on the same scale. It is important to note that this jutsu does not actually create holes, as it can't shift earth vertically.
It can, however, completely shut off holes by applying chakra to one of the hole's walls in order to make it expand into the hole and go against the opposite wall- effectively crushing anything within it. The process of casting is very simple and similar to its parent technique. The user makes the necessary seals and places a hand on the ground or affected wall, activating the technique.
Weaknesses: N/A?
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Still WIP

Name: Kazehana Style: Royal Antlion Technique
Rank: S-rank
Power: S-rank
Activation Cost: 25 or 45
Upkeep Cost: None
Range:
Same as:
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Great_Moving_Earth_Corefor 45 points
or
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Moving_Earth_Core
for 25 pts
Speed: S-rank
Element:
Skill:
Classification:
Requirements:
Parent Technique:
Hand Seals:
Description:
Weaknesses:

Shin Kazehana wrote:Ready to be checked:

Name:  Doton: Crushing Technique
Rank: B-rank
Power: A-rank
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: None
Range: Wide enough to cover the holes affected by Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Speed: B-rank
Element: Doton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Knowledge of Earth Release: Moving Earth Core.
Parent Technique:  Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Hand Seals: Same as parent technique.
Description: This jutsu was designed to close holes. It allows the user, very much like the Moving Earth Core, to shift the position of the terrain. However, instead of doing so vertically, this technique allows the user to shift the terrain horizontally, on the same scale. It is important to note that this jutsu does not actually create holes, as it can't shift earth vertically.
It can, however, completely shut off holes by applying chakra to one of the hole's walls in order to make it expand into the hole and go against the opposite wall- effectively crushing anything within it. The process of casting is very simple and similar to its parent technique. The user makes the necessary seals and places a hand on the ground or affected wall, activating the technique.
Weaknesses: N/A?

If this is going to be at A-rank power, it needs an A-rank cost. Change it to 15 and you'll be gucci

Shin Kazehana wrote:Ready to be checked:

Name:  Doton: Crushing Technique
Rank: B-rank
Power: A-rank
Activation Cost: 15
Upkeep Cost: None
Range: Wide enough to cover the holes affected by Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Speed: B-rank
Element: Doton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Knowledge of Earth Release: Moving Earth Core.
Parent Technique:  Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Hand Seals: Same as parent technique.
Description: This jutsu was designed to close holes. It allows the user, very much like the Moving Earth Core, to shift the position of the terrain. However, instead of doing so vertically, this technique allows the user to shift the terrain horizontally, on the same scale. It is important to note that this jutsu does not actually create holes, as it can't shift earth vertically.
It can, however, completely shut off holes by applying chakra to one of the hole's walls in order to make it expand into the hole and go against the opposite wall- effectively crushing anything within it. The process of casting is very simple and similar to its parent technique. The user makes the necessary seals and places a hand on the ground or affected wall, activating the technique.
Weaknesses: N/A?

Ta-da!

Shin Kazehana wrote:Ready to be checked:

Name:  Doton: Crushing Technique
Rank: B-rank
Power: A-rank
Activation Cost: 15
Upkeep Cost: None
Range: Wide enough to cover the holes affected by Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Speed: B-rank
Element: Doton
Skill: Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Knowledge of Earth Release: Moving Earth Core.
Parent Technique:  Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Hand Seals: Same as parent technique.
Description: This jutsu was designed to close holes. It allows the user, very much like the Moving Earth Core, to shift the position of the terrain. However, instead of doing so vertically, this technique allows the user to shift the terrain horizontally, on the same scale. It is important to note that this jutsu does not actually create holes, as it can't shift earth vertically.
It can, however, completely shut off holes by applying chakra to one of the hole's walls in order to make it expand into the hole and go against the opposite wall- effectively crushing anything within it. The process of casting is very simple and similar to its parent technique. The user makes the necessary seals and places a hand on the ground or affected wall, activating the technique.
Weaknesses: N/A?

Approved

Name: Shinigami no Mai
Rank: C-rank
Power: C-rank
Activation Cost: C-rank
Upkeep Cost: D-rank
Range: 100 meters
Speed: Non-appliable.
Element: None
Skill: Kugutsu/Fuuinjutsu/Ninjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: Knowledge of Puppet Technique, Minimum B-ranked coordination.
Parent Technique: Puppet Technique (C-rank)
Hand Seals: N/A, puppetry.
Description: This technique is a combination of very simple Fuuinjutsu and Puppet Technique. It was born out of Shin's wish to be able to control puppets in a stealthier way. His first attempt was to design a seal that allowed him to control an entire puppet, but that proved to be incredibly taxing on his chakra reserves, and ultimately inefficient.
So, instead, he came up with a brilliant way to control puppets by combining very simple Fuuinjutsu with his Kugutsu knowledge. By placing incredibly simple seals on key points of his puppets, Shin is able to connect these seals with chakra strings *inside the puppet*. This allows him to use the seal's simple functions: Push, Pull, and Hold, to control the chakra threads connecting the seals and thus puppet from the inside.
Then, he places very small seals on the tip of his fingers, which allow him to control the seals inside the puppets following the same restrictions as the puppet technique. Because he doesn't have to extend chakra threads from his fingertips to his puppets, this allows him a lot more maneuverability on controlling his puppets without entangling chakra strings, and a small extension of range.
This is the combination of very simple concepts:
-Connected seals that hold, push and pull strings.
-The expert kugutsu knowledge to know where to put these seals on the puppets.
And finally the extreme coordination required to control puppets this way.

Weaknesses:
Has the same limitations as its parent technique regarding the amount of puppets that can be controlled at once:

D: 1 Puppet/ D Ranked Puppets
C: 4 Puppets/ C Ranked Puppets
B: 6 Puppets/ B Ranked Puppets
A: 8 Puppets/ A Ranked Puppets
S: 10 Puppets/ S Ranked Puppets

Additionally, users who utilize this technique must have a minimum of B-rank coordination and at least A-ranked coordination in order for their puppets not to suffer a -- penalty on speed and coordination.

The use of this technique requires intimate knowledge of the puppets being used. As such, it requires preparation, study and possibly even modifications if the puppet wasn't designed with this style in mind. If a person happens to snatch a puppet on a battlefield, they cannot immediately use this technique on it.

Does this allow for manipulation of the puppet just the same as though you were using chakra strings? Their movements are not restricted to just push, pull, and hold? If so this needs to be bumped up a rank. Also cut the range down from 100 meters to a maximum of 60. Drawbacks should include some means of interfering with the connection between the seals on your fingertips and those within the puppet (ie barriers, maybe an elemental weakness, etc etc).