Dante’s Taijutsu Techs

Approved Techs here

Name: Brutality
Rank: B
Power: Users Strength
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: —
Range: Close Range/Hand Combat
Speed: B
Element: —
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: B rank Strength
Parent Technique: Open
Hand Seals: —
Description: Within close combat, the user uses their strength to make one punch that makes it or breaks it. Brutality is a move to be used to knock out an opponent or make them prone for one post by causing them to fall backwards and onto their back. This would give the effect of literally getting the wind knocked out of them. The users strength increases by one tier and an advantage.
Weaknesses: Someone can try and maneuver this attack with a higher coordination than B. However a constitution higher than the users strength will be able to resist the effects of this move.



Name: Vulpine Reversion
Rank: A
Power: A
Activation Cost: 20
Upkeep Cost: 10
Range: —
Speed: A
Element: —
Skill: Osaki Clan, Taijutsu
Classification: Secret (Osaki Clan)
Requirements: Osaki Clan Level 3
Parent Technique: Feral Transformation
Hand Seals: —
Description: Vupline Reversion is able to be done by entering the feral transformation. The Vulpine Reversion increases the hardness of the Osaki’s claws and teeth by one more advantage while increasing Coord by one tier and Speed by ++.. This allows the user to be nimble and to be able to dodge things easily, moving much like a fox would. Whether the user’s animalistic features replicate a fox or not, their ears and tails tend to grow longer, replicating a fox more, while looking feral or like a savage.
Weaknesses: Once the user reaches 30 CP, they will go unconscious UNLESS they have their base stat Stamina as A (which nullifies the exhaustion level).



Name: Downward Strike
Rank: B
Power: users strength
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: —
Range: up to 4m
Speed: Users Speed
Element: —
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: —
Parent Technique: Four Legged Pounce or Air Born
Hand Seals: —
Description: The user performs a downward strike while coming down from the Four Legged Pounce or from being in air. The user will use the speed/momentum to increase the strength of the attack. 0-2 m will be at base strength damage where 2-4m will raise the damage by one rank, giving the user a +1 with an advantage in strength when it comes to the impact.
Weaknesses: If the opponent has higher coordination than speed, they can manipulate where the user may land or even redirect the user. Due to being in air, the user is prone to ninjutsu and long ranged attacks.

Dante Osaki wrote:Name: Brutality
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: —
Range: Close Range/Hand Combat
Speed: B
Element: —
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Open
Requirements: B rank Strength
Parent Technique: Open
Hand Seals: —
Description: Within close combat, the user uses their strength to make one punch that makes it or breaks it. Brutality is a move to be used to knock out an opponent or stagger them for one post. The users strength increases by one tier.
Weaknesses: Someone can try and maneuver this attack with a higher coordination than B. However a defensive/block move will cause the opponent to stagger.

1. 'Stagger' isn't really a definitive term that has an application on site. So you'll need to either define what it does or change the wording.

My suggestion would be to change it to say something along the lines of 'causing the opponents to fall prone. Or 'to their knees', etc.

This needs a stat check. Just say 'Constitution higher than the strength of the user can resist the effect.' For your knowledge this would not allow them to resist the damage unless their con is much higher.

You can raise strength by a full tier and an advantage if you want. Instead of a just a single tier I mean.

Dante Osaki wrote:Name: Vulpine Reversion
Rank: A
Power: A
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: 5
Range: —
Speed: A
Element: —
Skill: Osaki Clan, Taijutsu
Classification: Secret (Osaki Clan)
Requirements: Osaki Clan Level 3
Parent Technique: Feral Transformation
Hand Seals: —
Description: Vupline Reversion is able to be done by entering the feral transformation. The Vulpine Reversion increases the hardness of the Osaki’s claws and teeth by one more advantage while increasing Coord by one tier and Speed by ++.. This allows the user to be nimble and to be able to dodge things easily, moving much like a fox would. Whether the user’s animalistic features replicate a fox or not, their ears and tails tend to grow longer, replicating a fox more, while looking feral or like a savage.
Weaknesses: Vulpine Reversion is commonly used upon anger or intense feelings, causing the user tends to feel a bit sluggish after this usage. Their speed goes down by two negatives when coming out of it or fully becomes incapacitated if it’s used for a long period of time. (This will go off of stamina, resulting in lower than 30 CP. Once the user reaches 30, they will go unconscious).

1. A ranks techs cost 20 CP with 10 upkeep
2. What's the speed stat for?
3. You mention 'one more advantage' in terms of hardness of teeth and claws. State how much the new total increase is.
4. You can remove that drawback, this isn't doing anything particularly game breaking that would need one. If you wanna keep it for thematic effect that's cool too but if so you can slap in there that the drawback goes away if the user has base A stamina (Which is when the exhaustion threshold goes away).

Dante Osaki wrote:Name: Downward Strike
Rank: B
Power: users strength
Activation Cost: 10
Upkeep Cost: —
Range: up to 4m
Speed: Users Speed
Element: —
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: —
Parent Technique: Four Legged Pounce or Air Born
Hand Seals: —
Description: The user performs a downward strike while coming down from the Four Legged Pounce or from being in air. The user will use the speed/momentum to increase the strength of the attack. 0-2 m will be at B rank damage where 2-4m will be at A rank damage, giving the user a +1 in strength when it comes to the impact.
Weaknesses: If the opponent has higher coordination than speed, they can manipulate where the user may land or even redirect the user. Due to being in air, the user is prone to ninjutsu and long ranged attacks.

This gets confusing for a taijutsu.
The power is listed at  'users strength' but then you go on to say the damage is either B or A in the description.
For the record, short of special cases, all Taijutsu's damage is 'user's strength'.

That said that only thing I can suggest is that you just give it a strength buff for the downward swing. I would either do that or rework the tech into something else.