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    Riku's Ninja Magic

    Riku
    Riku

    Posts : 363
    Join date : 2018-03-06

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Chemistry, Ninjutsu, Ijutsu
    Class: C
    Ryo: 113,150

    Riku's Ninja Magic Empty Riku's Ninja Magic

    Post by Riku on Sun Apr 21, 2019 11:44 pm

    Non Elemental Techs:
    E

    • Body Replacement Technique
    • Tree Climbing Practice
    • Water Surface Walking Practice
    • Clone Technique

    D

    • Body Flicker Technique
    • Temporary Paralysis Technique

    C
    B
    A
    S
    Water Techs:
    D

    • Hiding in Mist Technique

    C

    • Water Release: Bullet Technique
    • Water Release: Gunshot
    • Water Clone Technique
    • Water Release: Water Whip
    • Water Release: Starch Syrup Capture Field
    • Water Release: Wild Bubble Wave
    • Poison Dart Frog Technique
    • Drowning Water Blob Technique

    B
    • Water Release:Exploding Water Colliding Wave
    • Water Release: Formation Wall
    • Thousand Flying Water Needles of Death

    A

    Ijutsu:
    D

    • Soft Body Manipulation
    • Soft Body Manipulation -Surprise Whip
    • Soft Body Manipulation: Writhing Agony Fangs
    • Ijutsu-Reverse Chakra Palm
    • Ijutsu-Chakra Palm
    • Pressure Strike
    • Healing Hands



    Last edited by Riku on Fri May 24, 2019 3:16 pm; edited 4 times in total


    _________________

    Items:


    • 1 Medikit (5000 ryo)
      Medikit contents:


      • 1 syringe
      • 1 blood drawing kit
      • 2 rolls of bandage wrap
      • grain alcohol
      • 1 tournaquet
      • 1 roll of gauze
      • soothing cream
      • needle
      • thread
      • tweezers
      • scalpel
      • sheers


    • 1 Hip pouch
    • 1 Holster
    • 1 Ink Pot 50ml
    • 1 Ink Brush
    • 5 kunai
    • 10 senbon
    • 5 shuriken


    Stats/Effects:


    • Strength D
    • Constitution C
    • Stamina C
    • Speed C
    • Coordination C
    • Intelligence B
    • Perception C+


    + to Perception for proper housing in Kiri
    Riku
    Riku

    Posts : 363
    Join date : 2018-03-06

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Chemistry, Ninjutsu, Ijutsu
    Class: C
    Ryo: 113,150

    Riku's Ninja Magic Empty Re: Riku's Ninja Magic

    Post by Riku on Tue Apr 23, 2019 9:52 am

    Name: Poison Dart Frog Technique
    Rank: C
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost:3
    Range:Self
    Speed: D
    Element: Water
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Exclusive
    Requirements: Water element, Ninjutsu skill
    Parent Technique:  N/A
    Hand Seals: Rat
    Description: Riku has learned to combine chemicals with her water form and water ninjutsu by absorbing them using her water nature chakra. Riku imbued herself or a water jutsu with a chemical. Afterwards, contact with opponents inflicts them with the chemical's effects.
    Weaknesses: This technique is only effective with chemicals that can be applied topically. She must also pay the cost for the upkeep of the technique during the countdown.


    _________________

    Items:


    • 1 Medikit (5000 ryo)
      Medikit contents:


      • 1 syringe
      • 1 blood drawing kit
      • 2 rolls of bandage wrap
      • grain alcohol
      • 1 tournaquet
      • 1 roll of gauze
      • soothing cream
      • needle
      • thread
      • tweezers
      • scalpel
      • sheers


    • 1 Hip pouch
    • 1 Holster
    • 1 Ink Pot 50ml
    • 1 Ink Brush
    • 5 kunai
    • 10 senbon
    • 5 shuriken


    Stats/Effects:


    • Strength D
    • Constitution C
    • Stamina C
    • Speed C
    • Coordination C
    • Intelligence B
    • Perception C+


    + to Perception for proper housing in Kiri
    Uchiha Akihiro
    Uchiha Akihiro
    Anbu

    Posts : 606
    Join date : 2018-08-06
    Age : 23

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    Skills & Elements:
    Class: S
    Ryo: a looot

    Riku's Ninja Magic Empty Re: Riku's Ninja Magic

    Post by Uchiha Akihiro on Wed Apr 24, 2019 5:51 am

    @Riku wrote:Name: Poison Dart Frog Technique
    Rank: C
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost:3
    Range:Self
    Speed: D
    Element: Water
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Exclusive
    Requirements: Water element, Ninjutsu skill
    Parent Technique:  N/A
    Hand Seals: Rat
    Description: Riku has learned to combine chemicals with her water form and water ninjutsu by absorbing them using her water nature chakra. Riku imbued herself or a water jutsu with a chemical. Afterwards, contact with opponents inflicts them with the chemical's effects.
    Weaknesses: This technique is only effective with chemicals that can be applied topically. She must also pay the cost for the upkeep of the technique during the countdown.

    So basically you infuse your water darts with poison? I like it.
    Can't really be applied to gaseous poisons tho.

    I'd also like you to detail how big these darts are and how many darts can you imbue with 1 dose of a given chemical.

    Also detail "contact with opponents". Because if a poison requires entering through the bloodstream to have effects, simple dart contact with the skin (no puncturing) won't be enough.
    Riku
    Riku

    Posts : 363
    Join date : 2018-03-06

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    Skills & Elements: Chemistry, Ninjutsu, Ijutsu
    Class: C
    Ryo: 113,150

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    Post by Riku on Wed Apr 24, 2019 10:18 am

    Name: Poison Dart Frog Technique
    Rank: C
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: Self
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Exclusive
    Requirements:Ninjutsu skill, Hydrification Technique
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Rat
    Description: Riku herself can become poisonous, much like the brightly colored amphibians of the rain forest. She combines a topical chemical with her water form, creating a fine layer of liquid poison on her skin when solid or turning her into a poisonous blob when liquefied. This allows Riku to poison people through physical contact.
    Weaknesses: Riku must wait the count down period after ingesting a drug, medicine, or poison while paying the upkeep cost before she is imbued with its effects. This does not negate the effects of the chemicals on Riku. This technique does not work with solids because those must be eaten/forced into the bloodstream of an opponent.

    Name: Water Release: Poison Style
    Rank: B
    Power:C
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: N/A
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Exclusive
    Requirements: Ninjutsu Skill, Water Element, Chemistry Skill
    Parent Techniques: N/A
    Hand Seals: Rat, Ram, Ox
    Description: Riku combines her prowess with water techniques and chemistry to poison her water jutsu. Through this technique, Riku can dissolve chemicals in a water jutsu, imbuing it with the effects of that substance. While maintaining this technique, Riku uses her water jutsu as a medium to poison opponents.
    Weaknesses: Solids cannot be dissolved and added to water techniques. Riku may only perform Water techniques while maintaining this jutsu.


    _________________

    Items:


    • 1 Medikit (5000 ryo)
      Medikit contents:


      • 1 syringe
      • 1 blood drawing kit
      • 2 rolls of bandage wrap
      • grain alcohol
      • 1 tournaquet
      • 1 roll of gauze
      • soothing cream
      • needle
      • thread
      • tweezers
      • scalpel
      • sheers


    • 1 Hip pouch
    • 1 Holster
    • 1 Ink Pot 50ml
    • 1 Ink Brush
    • 5 kunai
    • 10 senbon
    • 5 shuriken


    Stats/Effects:


    • Strength D
    • Constitution C
    • Stamina C
    • Speed C
    • Coordination C
    • Intelligence B
    • Perception C+


    + to Perception for proper housing in Kiri
    Riku
    Riku

    Posts : 363
    Join date : 2018-03-06

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    Skills & Elements: Chemistry, Ninjutsu, Ijutsu
    Class: C
    Ryo: 113,150

    Riku's Ninja Magic Empty Re: Riku's Ninja Magic

    Post by Riku on Wed Apr 24, 2019 10:56 am

    Name: Poison Dart Frog Technique
    Rank: C
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: Self
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Exclusive
    Requirements:Ninjutsu skill, Hydrification Technique
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Rat
    Description: Riku herself can become poisonous, much like the brightly colored amphibians of the rain forest. She combines a topical chemical with her water form, creating a fine layer of liquid poison on her skin when solid or turning her into a poisonous blob when liquefied. This allows Riku to poison people through physical contact.
    Weaknesses: Riku must wait the count down period after ingesting a drug, medicine, or poison while paying the upkeep cost before she is imbued with its effects. This only works with poisons/drugs/compounds that can be absorbed through the skin. One dose of chemical must be consumed for each poisoning.


    _________________

    Items:


    • 1 Medikit (5000 ryo)
      Medikit contents:


      • 1 syringe
      • 1 blood drawing kit
      • 2 rolls of bandage wrap
      • grain alcohol
      • 1 tournaquet
      • 1 roll of gauze
      • soothing cream
      • needle
      • thread
      • tweezers
      • scalpel
      • sheers


    • 1 Hip pouch
    • 1 Holster
    • 1 Ink Pot 50ml
    • 1 Ink Brush
    • 5 kunai
    • 10 senbon
    • 5 shuriken


    Stats/Effects:


    • Strength D
    • Constitution C
    • Stamina C
    • Speed C
    • Coordination C
    • Intelligence B
    • Perception C+


    + to Perception for proper housing in Kiri
    Ann Yuki
    Ann Yuki

    Posts : 80
    Join date : 2019-03-24

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    Post by Ann Yuki on Wed Apr 24, 2019 11:17 am

    @Riku wrote:Name: Poison Dart Frog Technique
    Rank: C
    Power: D
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: Self
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Exclusive
    Requirements:Ninjutsu skill, Hydrification Technique
    Parent Technique:
    Hand Seals: Rat
    Description: Riku herself can become poisonous, much like the brightly colored amphibians of the rain forest. She combines a topical chemical with her water form, creating a fine layer of liquid poison on her skin when solid or turning her into a poisonous blob when liquefied. This allows Riku to poison people through physical contact.
    Weaknesses: Riku must wait the count down period after ingesting a drug, medicine, or poison while paying the upkeep cost before she is imbued with its effects. This only works with poisons/drugs/compounds that can be absorbed through the skin. One dose of chemical must be consumed for each poisoning.

    Approved
    Riku
    Riku

    Posts : 363
    Join date : 2018-03-06

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Chemistry, Ninjutsu, Ijutsu
    Class: C
    Ryo: 113,150

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    Post by Riku on Tue Apr 30, 2019 8:12 pm

    Name: Water Release: Poison Style
    Rank: B
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: N/A
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Exclusive
    Requirements: Ninjutsu Skill, Water Element, Chemistry Skill
    Parent Techniques: Poison Dart Frog Technique
    Hand Seals: Rat, Ram, Ox
    Description: Riku consumes a harmful drug, poison, or compound in order to imbue water techniques with it. For each dose she consumes, one use of a technique is poisoned. For techniques that create large volumes of water, she must consume three doses for each use.
    Weaknesses: Only works with chemicals that can affect opponents through the skin or mucous membranes; does not protect Riku from the effects of the chemical consumed


    _________________

    Items:


    • 1 Medikit (5000 ryo)
      Medikit contents:


      • 1 syringe
      • 1 blood drawing kit
      • 2 rolls of bandage wrap
      • grain alcohol
      • 1 tournaquet
      • 1 roll of gauze
      • soothing cream
      • needle
      • thread
      • tweezers
      • scalpel
      • sheers


    • 1 Hip pouch
    • 1 Holster
    • 1 Ink Pot 50ml
    • 1 Ink Brush
    • 5 kunai
    • 10 senbon
    • 5 shuriken


    Stats/Effects:


    • Strength D
    • Constitution C
    • Stamina C
    • Speed C
    • Coordination C
    • Intelligence B
    • Perception C+


    + to Perception for proper housing in Kiri
    Shimiko Chinoike
    Shimiko Chinoike
    Jounin

    Posts : 1252
    Join date : 2017-09-21

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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike on Wed May 01, 2019 1:39 am

    @Riku wrote:Name: Water Release: Poison Style
    Rank: B
    Power: C
    Activation Cost: 20
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: N/A
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Exclusive
    Requirements: Ninjutsu Skill, Water Element, Chemistry Skill
    Parent Techniques: Poison Dart Frog Technique
    Hand Seals: Rat, Ram, Ox
    Description: Riku consumes a harmful drug, poison, or compound in order to imbue water techniques with it. For each dose she consumes, one use of a technique is poisoned. For techniques that create large volumes of water, she must consume three doses for each use.
    Weaknesses: Only works with chemicals that can affect opponents through the skin or mucous membranes; does not protect Riku from the effects of the chemical consumed


    Approved.


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    Riku's Ninja Magic 1pwf20

    Character Name: Shimiko Chinoike
    Stats:

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: A
    • Speed: A
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence:  A
    • Perception: A

    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1


    Gear

    • 2x Kālīkoroshimasu
    • 10x Serrated Kunai
    • Six Sai of Serration
    • Chinowakugumi Armour
    • Twin Tessen of Terror


    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t344-shimiko-s-updates
    Link to Character Application: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t260-shimiko-chinoike
    Link to Known Techniques:

    Shimiko's ANBU Mask
    Riku
    Riku

    Posts : 363
    Join date : 2018-03-06

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Chemistry, Ninjutsu, Ijutsu
    Class: C
    Ryo: 113,150

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    Post by Riku on Thu May 30, 2019 1:35 pm

    Name: Water Release: 100 arrows
    Rank: B
    Cost: 10
    Upkeep: 5
    Range: 50 m.
    Speed: A
    Element: Water
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: N/A
    Requirement: N/A
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Handseals: Tiger > Ox > Tiger > Rat > Ram
    Description: The user kneads water chakra and spits out several concentrated bursts of water at the opponent. These small streams of water move at high velocity and deal a lot of damage on impact due to this and can penetrate C-grade steel.


    _________________

    Items:


    • 1 Medikit (5000 ryo)
      Medikit contents:


      • 1 syringe
      • 1 blood drawing kit
      • 2 rolls of bandage wrap
      • grain alcohol
      • 1 tournaquet
      • 1 roll of gauze
      • soothing cream
      • needle
      • thread
      • tweezers
      • scalpel
      • sheers


    • 1 Hip pouch
    • 1 Holster
    • 1 Ink Pot 50ml
    • 1 Ink Brush
    • 5 kunai
    • 10 senbon
    • 5 shuriken


    Stats/Effects:


    • Strength D
    • Constitution C
    • Stamina C
    • Speed C
    • Coordination C
    • Intelligence B
    • Perception C+


    + to Perception for proper housing in Kiri
    Masuyo Kaede
    Masuyo Kaede
    Jounin Commander

    Posts : 1195
    Join date : 2016-12-07

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Fire | Earth | Wind | Water | Bukijutsu | Ninjutsu | Taijutsu
    Class: S
    Ryo: 30,000

    Riku's Ninja Magic Empty Re: Riku's Ninja Magic

    Post by Masuyo Kaede on Fri May 31, 2019 9:44 pm

    @Riku wrote:
    Name: Water Release: 100 arrows
    Rank: B
    Cost: 10
    Upkeep: 5
    Range: 50 m.
    Speed: A
    Element: Water
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: N/A
    Requirement: N/A
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Handseals: Tiger > Ox > Tiger > Rat > Ram
    Description: The user kneads water chakra and spits out several concentrated bursts of water at the opponent. These small streams of water move at high velocity and deal a lot of damage on impact due to this and can penetrate C-grade steel.

    Specify how many bursts of water can be fired in the description

    Once the amount is specified I can then judge the other balancing parts more critically.


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    Strength: C
    Constitution: B
    Stamina: B
    Speed: A+
    Coordination: A
    Intelligence: B
    Perception: A

    Spoiler:


      Thigh Holster
    • 1 Kunai
      Front Holster
    • 10 Shuriken
      Back Holster
    • 10 Shuriken
      Right Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 6 Chili Pepper Bombs
    • 150 ft. Steel Wire
    • 5 Red Tags
    • 20 Military Ration Pills
    • Bandage Wrap
      Left Hip Pouch
    • 15 Kunai
    • 3 Flash Bombs
    • 3 Smoke Bombs
    • 50 Caltrops
    • 30 ft. Manriki
      Utility Belt
    • Canteen
    • Blacktongue
      Flak Jacket Scroll Holster
    • Small Sealed Weapon Scroll



    Character Updates
    Riku
    Riku

    Posts : 363
    Join date : 2018-03-06

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Chemistry, Ninjutsu, Ijutsu
    Class: C
    Ryo: 113,150

    Riku's Ninja Magic Empty Re: Riku's Ninja Magic

    Post by Riku on Fri May 31, 2019 10:00 pm

    Name: Water Release: One Hundred Arrows
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 15
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: 50m
    Speed: A
    Element: Suiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Open
    Requirements: N/A
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals:Tiger > Ox > Monkey > Snake > Rat > Ram
    Description: The user generates chakra and converts it into water before spitting out several rapid paced water projectiles. As many as 50 of these cylindrical, arrow-like streams of water can be spit in a single post. They move so quickly that they are impossible to count and can penetrate C grade steel due to the velocity of these small projectiles.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    Name: Hozuki Artillery Technique
    Rank: C
    Power: N/A
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 1m
    Speed: N/A
    Element: Water
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Hozuki Specific
    Requirements: Hydrification Technique
    Parent Technique: Tree Climbing Practice, Hydrification Technique
    Hand Seals: Half ram
    Description: Riku had discovered how to apply the principle of Tree Walking to her entire body, allowing her to affix herself to a willing host while liquefied. Riku loses independent control of her movement as she is stuck to the host with chakra and suffers a -2 tier reduction in speed. However, Riku gains 1 tier of perception and 1 tier of coordination because she no longer has to focus on moving around as much. The host gains a mounted water gun (Riku, who can cast other techniques while attached) and a 1 tier boost to coordination as they do not have to use as much of their focus to watch their back.
    Weaknesses: -2 tiers of speed to Riku


    _________________

    Items:


    • 1 Medikit (5000 ryo)
      Medikit contents:


      • 1 syringe
      • 1 blood drawing kit
      • 2 rolls of bandage wrap
      • grain alcohol
      • 1 tournaquet
      • 1 roll of gauze
      • soothing cream
      • needle
      • thread
      • tweezers
      • scalpel
      • sheers


    • 1 Hip pouch
    • 1 Holster
    • 1 Ink Pot 50ml
    • 1 Ink Brush
    • 5 kunai
    • 10 senbon
    • 5 shuriken


    Stats/Effects:


    • Strength D
    • Constitution C
    • Stamina C
    • Speed C
    • Coordination C
    • Intelligence B
    • Perception C+


    + to Perception for proper housing in Kiri
    Nozomi
    Nozomi
    S-Rank
    S-Rank

    Posts : 655
    Join date : 2017-10-09
    Age : 24

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    Post by Nozomi on Sat Jun 01, 2019 9:20 pm

    Name: Water Release: One Hundred Arrows
    Rank: B
    Power: B
    Activation Cost: 15
    Upkeep Cost: 10
    Range: 50m
    Speed: A
    Element: Suiton
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Open
    Requirements: N/A
    Parent Technique: N/A
    Hand Seals:Tiger > Ox > Monkey > Snake > Rat > Ram
    Description: The user generates chakra and converts it into water before spitting out several rapid paced water projectiles. As many as 50 of these cylindrical, arrow-like streams of water can be spit in a single post. They move so quickly that they are impossible to count and can penetrate C grade steel due to the velocity of these small projectiles.
    Weaknesses: N/A
    Approved

    Name: Hozuki Artillery Technique
    Rank: C
    Power: N/A
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 1m
    Speed: N/A
    Element: Water
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Hozuki Specific
    Requirements: Hydrification Technique
    Parent Technique: Tree Climbing Practice, Hydrification Technique
    Hand Seals: Half ram
    Description: Riku had discovered how to apply the principle of Tree Walking to her entire body, allowing her to affix herself to a willing host while liquefied. Riku loses independent control of her movement as she is stuck to the host with chakra and suffers a -2 tier reduction in speed. However, Riku gains 1 tier of perception and 1 tier of coordination because she no longer has to focus on moving around as much. The host gains a mounted water gun (Riku, who can cast other techniques while attached) and a 1 tier boost to coordination as they do not have to use as much of their focus to watch their back.
    Weaknesses: -2 tiers of speed to Riku
    So, first thing I'm seeing is that your weakness shouldn't really apply. If you're attached to someone, you don't move at all, so your movement speed is completely negated.
    However, you're attempting to gain 2 tiers of stats, and give 1 tier of stats, which is 3 tiers of boosting total. While you're losing your speed, your host doesn't lose any, so it's not really a proper drawback for the amount of boosting you'd be receiving.


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    Spoiler:
    Character Name: Nozomi Himitsu
    Spendable Experience: 20
    Total Experience:  5320
    Renown: 2725
    Ryo: 190,000
    Stats:

    • Strength: B
    • Constitution: B
    • Stamina: B+
    • Speed: A
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence: C
    • Perception: A

    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 0
    • Technique: 0
    • Destiny: 1

    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t381-nozomi-s-updates#2015
    Link to Character Application: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t380-himitsu-nozomi#2009
    Link to Known Techniques: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t382-nozomi-s-jutsu#2017
    Riku
    Riku

    Posts : 363
    Join date : 2018-03-06

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Chemistry, Ninjutsu, Ijutsu
    Class: C
    Ryo: 113,150

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    Post by Riku on Sun Jun 02, 2019 2:19 pm

    Name: Hozuki Artillery Technique
    Rank: C
    Power: N/A
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 1m
    Speed: N/A
    Element: Water
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Hozuki Specific
    Requirements: Hydrification Technique
    Parent Technique: Tree Climbing Practice, Hydrification Technique
    Hand Seals: Half ram
    Description: Riku had discovered how to apply the principle of Tree Walking to her entire body, allowing her to affix herself to a willing host while liquefied. While mounted Riku and her host gain +1 tier to coordination and perception due to their attachment allowing them to see attacks from most directions and only needing to focus on protecting one mass while joined.
    Weaknesses: Riku's speed is reduced to E tier as she is completely reliant on her host for movement and speed buffs do not work on her while the technique is active. The host must have C tier strength or more to carry Riku without suffering a -1 tier to speed.


    _________________

    Items:


    • 1 Medikit (5000 ryo)
      Medikit contents:


      • 1 syringe
      • 1 blood drawing kit
      • 2 rolls of bandage wrap
      • grain alcohol
      • 1 tournaquet
      • 1 roll of gauze
      • soothing cream
      • needle
      • thread
      • tweezers
      • scalpel
      • sheers


    • 1 Hip pouch
    • 1 Holster
    • 1 Ink Pot 50ml
    • 1 Ink Brush
    • 5 kunai
    • 10 senbon
    • 5 shuriken


    Stats/Effects:


    • Strength D
    • Constitution C
    • Stamina C
    • Speed C
    • Coordination C
    • Intelligence B
    • Perception C+


    + to Perception for proper housing in Kiri
    Shimiko Chinoike
    Shimiko Chinoike
    Jounin

    Posts : 1252
    Join date : 2017-09-21

    Riku's Ninja Magic Empty Re: Riku's Ninja Magic

    Post by Shimiko Chinoike on Sun Jun 02, 2019 11:08 pm

    Reduce the boost to 1 tier and make lightning jutsu 1 rank stronger against em


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    Riku's Ninja Magic 1pwf20

    Character Name: Shimiko Chinoike
    Stats:

    • Strength: D
    • Constitution: C
    • Stamina: A
    • Speed: A
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence:  A
    • Perception: A

    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 1
    • Technique: 1
    • Destiny: 1


    Gear

    • 2x Kālīkoroshimasu
    • 10x Serrated Kunai
    • Six Sai of Serration
    • Chinowakugumi Armour
    • Twin Tessen of Terror


    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t344-shimiko-s-updates
    Link to Character Application: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t260-shimiko-chinoike
    Link to Known Techniques:

    Shimiko's ANBU Mask
    Riku
    Riku

    Posts : 363
    Join date : 2018-03-06

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Chemistry, Ninjutsu, Ijutsu
    Class: C
    Ryo: 113,150

    Riku's Ninja Magic Empty Re: Riku's Ninja Magic

    Post by Riku on Tue Jun 04, 2019 11:52 am

    Note: I wanted to keep this technique more powerful so I added the lightning weakness and more hand seals to help balance the buffs

    Name: Hozuki Artillery Technique
    Rank: C
    Power: N/A
    Activation Cost: 10
    Upkeep Cost: 5
    Range: 1m
    Speed: N/A
    Element: Water
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Hozuki Specific
    Requirements: Hydrification Technique
    Parent Technique: Tree Climbing Practice, Hydrification Technique
    Hand Seals: Boar > Bird > Horse > Rat > Hare > Snake
    Description: Riku had discovered how to apply the principle of Tree Walking to her entire body, allowing her to affix herself to a willing host while liquefied. While mounted Riku and her host gain +1 tier to coordination and perception due to their attachment allowing them to see attacks from most directions and only needing to focus on protecting one mass while joined.
    Weaknesses: Riku's speed is reduced to E tier as she is completely reliant on her host for movement and speed buffs do not work on her while the technique is active. The host is more vulnerable to lightning attacks due to being coated in water, increasing the damage of raiton techniques to the host by 1 tier. Hosts with less than C tier strength also suffer a -1 tier to speed.


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    Items:


    • 1 Medikit (5000 ryo)
      Medikit contents:


      • 1 syringe
      • 1 blood drawing kit
      • 2 rolls of bandage wrap
      • grain alcohol
      • 1 tournaquet
      • 1 roll of gauze
      • soothing cream
      • needle
      • thread
      • tweezers
      • scalpel
      • sheers


    • 1 Hip pouch
    • 1 Holster
    • 1 Ink Pot 50ml
    • 1 Ink Brush
    • 5 kunai
    • 10 senbon
    • 5 shuriken


    Stats/Effects:


    • Strength D
    • Constitution C
    • Stamina C
    • Speed C
    • Coordination C
    • Intelligence B
    • Perception C+


    + to Perception for proper housing in Kiri
    Nozomi
    Nozomi
    S-Rank
    S-Rank

    Posts : 655
    Join date : 2017-10-09
    Age : 24

    Riku's Ninja Magic Empty Re: Riku's Ninja Magic

    Post by Nozomi on Tue Jun 04, 2019 9:28 pm

    Even with the handseals increased, and the weakness, it still is above what a single C rank technique can achieve. At the cost that you have currently, it's the equivalent of a B rank technique, which would allow you 4 advantages to disperse as you want between yourself and the host, given that even an S rank technique can normally boost 2 Tiers, which is 6 advantages, what you want (4 tiers, 2 for each of you, a total of 12 advantages) is way out of the purview of the technique, especially when factoring in cost.

    My suggestion, limit what this technique can do, and build a line of other techniques with this one as a parent technique. In that way, you can let this technique do one thing well and cheaply, and have other techniques that supplement it for what you want.


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    Spoiler:
    Character Name: Nozomi Himitsu
    Spendable Experience: 20
    Total Experience:  5320
    Renown: 2725
    Ryo: 190,000
    Stats:

    • Strength: B
    • Constitution: B
    • Stamina: B+
    • Speed: A
    • Coordination: A
    • Intelligence: C
    • Perception: A

    Limit Break Points:

    • Physical: 0
    • Technique: 0
    • Destiny: 1

    Link to Character Updates: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t381-nozomi-s-updates#2015
    Link to Character Application: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t380-himitsu-nozomi#2009
    Link to Known Techniques: http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com/t382-nozomi-s-jutsu#2017
    Riku
    Riku

    Posts : 363
    Join date : 2018-03-06

    Character File
    Skills & Elements: Chemistry, Ninjutsu, Ijutsu
    Class: C
    Ryo: 113,150

    Riku's Ninja Magic Empty Re: Riku's Ninja Magic

    Post by Riku on Wed Jun 05, 2019 12:14 pm

    Thanks for the feedback Noz, yours was the most helpful for developing this tech

    Name: Hozuki Cloak Technique
    Rank: C
    Power: N/A
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: 1m
    Speed: N/A
    Element: Water
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Hozuki Specific
    Requirements: Hydrification Technique
    Parent Technique: Tree Climbing Practice, Hydrification Technique
    Hand Seals: Monkey > Snake > Ram
    Description: Riku had discovered how to apply the principle of Tree Walking to her entire body, allowing her to affix herself to a willing host while liquefied. While mounted Riku and her host gain +1 tier to perception due to their attachment allowing them to see attacks from most directions and only needing to focus on protecting one mass while joined.
    Weaknesses: Riku's speed is reduced to E tier as she is completely reliant on her host for movement and speed buffs do not work on her while the technique is active. The host is more vulnerable to lightning attacks due to being coated in water, increasing the damage of raiton techniques to the host by 1 tier.

    Name: Hozuki Cloak: Mounted Artillery
    Rank: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep: 3
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Requirements: Hydrification Technique, B tier intelligence
    Parent Technique: Hozuki Cloak Technique
    Hand Seals: Half ram
    Description: While Hozuki Cloak Technique is active, Riku can use her connection with her host to increase both of their coordination by 1 tier by fine-tuning her awareness of their movements within her and reacting accordingly.
    Weaknesses: N/A


    _________________

    Items:


    • 1 Medikit (5000 ryo)
      Medikit contents:


      • 1 syringe
      • 1 blood drawing kit
      • 2 rolls of bandage wrap
      • grain alcohol
      • 1 tournaquet
      • 1 roll of gauze
      • soothing cream
      • needle
      • thread
      • tweezers
      • scalpel
      • sheers


    • 1 Hip pouch
    • 1 Holster
    • 1 Ink Pot 50ml
    • 1 Ink Brush
    • 5 kunai
    • 10 senbon
    • 5 shuriken


    Stats/Effects:


    • Strength D
    • Constitution C
    • Stamina C
    • Speed C
    • Coordination C
    • Intelligence B
    • Perception C+


    + to Perception for proper housing in Kiri
    Uchiha Akihiro
    Uchiha Akihiro
    Anbu

    Posts : 606
    Join date : 2018-08-06
    Age : 23

    Character File
    Skills & Elements:
    Class: S
    Ryo: a looot

    Riku's Ninja Magic Empty Re: Riku's Ninja Magic

    Post by Uchiha Akihiro on Thu Jun 13, 2019 8:40 pm

    @Riku wrote:Thanks for the feedback Noz, yours was the most helpful for developing this tech

    Name: Hozuki Cloak Technique
    Rank: C
    Power: N/A
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep Cost: 3
    Range: 1m
    Speed: N/A
    Element: Water
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Classification: Hozuki Specific
    Requirements: Hydrification Technique
    Parent Technique: Tree Climbing Practice, Hydrification Technique
    Hand Seals: Monkey > Snake > Ram
    Description: Riku had discovered how to apply the principle of Tree Walking to her entire body, allowing her to affix herself to a willing host while liquefied. While mounted Riku and her host gain +1 tier to perception due to their attachment allowing them to see attacks from most directions and only needing to focus on protecting one mass while joined.
    Weaknesses: Riku's speed is reduced to E tier as she is completely reliant on her host for movement and speed buffs do not work on her while the technique is active. The host is more vulnerable to lightning attacks due to being coated in water, increasing the damage of raiton techniques to the host by 1 tier.

    This technique should only boost perception in terms of sight. This is because the stat "Perception" affects everything, from sight to hearing and even smelling. Investigation and tracking also rely on perception. And your technique doesn't seem to have a way of boosting hearing, for example. Add that in and I'll stamp it.

    Name: Hozuki Cloak: Mounted Artillery
    Rank: C
    Activation Cost: 5
    Upkeep: 3
    Range: N/A
    Speed: N/A
    Element: N/A
    Skill: Ninjutsu
    Requirements: Hydrification Technique, B tier intelligence
    Parent Technique: Hozuki Cloak Technique
    Hand Seals: Half ram
    Description: While Hozuki Cloak Technique is active, Riku can use her connection with her host to increase both of their coordination by 1 tier by fine-tuning her awareness of their movements within her and reacting accordingly.
    Weaknesses: N/A

    This is denied, as I can't allow a C-rank technique to boost two Coordination tiers. Even if distributed, You're still boosting yours and your host's Coord by a Tier each for a C-rank chakra amount. Edit it to follow the Stat Boosting and Debuffing guide guidelines in terms of tier boosts and chakra costs, and I'll stamp it.
    Usually for a technique to boost 2 tiers it needs to be very high rank. Since this is distributed I *could* see it working with less chakra and a maximum tier cap, but definitely not C-rank.

      Current date/time is Thu Oct 17, 2019 9:36 pm