Gladius

A free form, text based role playing game based on the universe of the Naruto manga and anime.
 
HomePortalRegisterLog in
After high demand from everyone, we've finally opened a Discord Chat Server for the site! Follow the link and get in touch with everyone: https://discord.gg/gNvU4a6

Share | 
 

 Bushido Black's Customs

Go down 
AuthorMessage
Makahshi Kereko
Jounin
avatar

Posts : 44
Join date : 2017-09-14

PostSubject: Bushido Black's Customs   Thu Oct 26, 2017 1:14 am

Name: Azayakenpo
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 15
Range: Close Contact
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Kereko Clan Exclusive
Requirements: Taijutsu Skill
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: The Kereko Clan have always prided themselves on their vicious and violent approach to fighting. The clan fuels their physical with pure unbridled rage and aggression. Kereko Style emphasizes heavy handed strikes that place a significant amount of body weight and force into each individual blow. The sheer negative emotion that is inherent in the fighting style has given it the name "Azyakenpo" or "Livid Fist". The fighting style grants a tier to Speed and a tier to Strength while engaging in physical combat.
Weaknesses: N/A

Name: Infinitum
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Close Quarters
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Kereko Clan Exclusive
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: The user channels their inner rage and lets loose a fury of physical blows or blocks. The user's hands utilize chakra to create small clouds around their eyes increasing the blur of their physical movements. This technique increases the user's Coordination by a tier and Strength by a +.
Weaknesses: N/A

Name: Thunderclap
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 3
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 0m-1m
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Kereko Clan Exclusive
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: The user brings their open palms together creating a powerful shockwave capable of generating a force a tier higher than the user's Strength. The wave also have a concussive force and generates a knock back effect of three meters. It can also cause severe ear pain if done at close range.
Weaknesses: N/A

Name: Shave
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: 2
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 0m-5m
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Kereko Clan Exclusive
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This is a unique twist on the Body Flicker technique. This technique boosts the user's movement speed by one tier up to 5 meters. Unlike the Body Flicker technique which is in a straight line, Shave is a lateral movement usually executed in order to rapidly change position to commit a strike.
Weaknesses: N/A

Name: Malevolence
Rank: S
Power: A
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 15
Range: Close Quarters
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: The user channels chakra into their arms creating a thin glow of chakra along their arms and fingertips in a manner akin to ultra thin gauntlets. The same can be down with their legs in order to form shin guards The Malevolence Taijutsu style allows the user to block and inflict damage by pulsating the chakra around their arms and/or legs to distribute damage accordingly. This technique can be used to deflect ninjutsu C Rank and below. The user's Strength and Coordination is increased by a single tier.
Weaknesses: Malevolence guards coming into contact with each other cancel each other out.

Name: Malevolence Style: Drill
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 7
Range: Close Quarters
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: Malevolence
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: The user channels chakra into their fingertips forming a minute drill of pure chakra around their fingernails. The technique has the capacity to break through flesh and bone upon contact. The user's Strength and Coordination is increased by a ++.
Weaknesses: N/A


Name:Bushido Black Style
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 15
Range: Close Quarters
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Kenjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This is Makahshi's signature Kenjutsu style. It emphasizes heavy handed slashes, speed, maneuverability, and pure precision.  The style increases the user's Coordination by a tier and Strength by a tier.
Weaknesses: N/A

Name:Cubic Assist
Rank: B
Power: B
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 0m-10m
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Kenjutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: When using this technique the user imagines a cube within themselves at the center. The cube is 10 meters by 10 meters by 10 meters. It increases the user's ability to slice or block objects within the cube with extreme precision and efficiency. The user's Coordination is increased by a tier and a plus for the purpose of blocking or attacking anything within the pre-determined range.
Weaknesses: N/A

_________________
"Makahshi Kereko. But to you my name is Pit, and you're not talking your way out of me"

Strength: C
Constitution: C
Stamina: A
Speed: B
Coordination: A
Intelligence: D
Perception: B


Last edited by Makahshi Kereko on Fri Dec 29, 2017 8:56 am; edited 3 times in total
Back to top Go down
Izumi
Admin
avatar

Posts : 557
Join date : 2012-05-28

Character File
Skills & Elements: All
Class: X
Ryo: All of It

PostSubject: Re: Bushido Black's Customs   Sun Oct 29, 2017 12:13 pm

Infinitum- Should be B-Rank. Cost and everything else are fine.

Thunderclap- Lower the range of this to one meter, since it's supposed to be considered a Taijutsu. You can keep the range longer if you want to lower the boost.

Amatsu Wonkai- The explosion feature of this is too close to Explosion Release. The boost is fine and if the explosion feature is removed, you can take out that drawback.

Malevolence- Should be S-Rank. Exactly what defensive properties does this afford you?

Bushido Black Style- Upkeep should be 15 points.

Anything not mentioned is fine as is.
Back to top Go down
http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com
Makahshi Kereko
Jounin
avatar

Posts : 44
Join date : 2017-09-14

PostSubject: Re: Bushido Black's Customs   Sun Dec 03, 2017 6:02 am

Fixed

_________________
"Makahshi Kereko. But to you my name is Pit, and you're not talking your way out of me"

Strength: C
Constitution: C
Stamina: A
Speed: B
Coordination: A
Intelligence: D
Perception: B
Back to top Go down
Izumi
Admin
avatar

Posts : 557
Join date : 2012-05-28

Character File
Skills & Elements: All
Class: X
Ryo: All of It

PostSubject: Re: Bushido Black's Customs   Sun Dec 03, 2017 7:52 am

Drop the deflection rank of Malevolence to C. Also, it won't be able to deflect attacks that are obviously too big, like a water wave or some such. No need to specify, just be aware.

Everything else is good.
Back to top Go down
http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com
Izumi
Admin
avatar

Posts : 557
Join date : 2012-05-28

Character File
Skills & Elements: All
Class: X
Ryo: All of It

PostSubject: Re: Bushido Black's Customs   Fri Dec 29, 2017 8:58 am

@Makahshi Kereko wrote:
Spoiler:
 
Approved.
Back to top Go down
http://gladiusrp.forumotion.com
Makahshi Kereko
Jounin
avatar

Posts : 44
Join date : 2017-09-14

PostSubject: Re: Bushido Black's Customs   Sun Feb 04, 2018 10:55 am

Name: Autolanding
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 0m-10m
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: When the user lands on any surface, they tense their muscles and release a blast of chakra while doing so this creates a knock back effect of 4 meters to all those with a Constitution under B Rank.
Weaknesses: Doesn't work on those with Constitutions above B Rank

Name: Bat Dropping
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: 2
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 0m-10m
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This is a close range technique whereby the user drops any object and then hits it with their knee transferring a great deal of kinetic force and speed onto the object allowing it to strike and move at the user's Speed and Strength at the time of impact without losing its structural integrity. This can be used for devastating combination attacks.
Weaknesses: N/A

Name: Bidou
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 4
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This is a control scheme technique allowing the user to manipulate large objects with simple speed and finesee. The scheme functions by identifying and manipulating those surface areas, edges, and sides of the object so as to wield it far more effectively. This manifests itself as a tier to Strength for the purpose of manipulating a heavy object.
Weaknesses: Note that Bidou will not actually increase the user's Strength for the purpose of dealing damage directly this just makes the object easier for the user to manage.

Name: Boost Grabbing
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: 1
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Close Quarters
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: The user dashes at a high speed and grabs the opponent. If the user is larger than the opponent they will be able to channel the extra momentum into the opponent's chest at the moment of the grab. The kinetic force itself breaking a single rib by sheer act of grabbing. User receives a plus to strength for the act of grabbing.
Weaknesses: User must be physically larger than their opponent. (if not in weight then at least in height and vice versa).

Name: Chain Grab
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: Varies
Range: Close Quarters
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This is Taijutsu move by which the user grabs the opponent, tosses them, and then increases their speed to catch them again and throw them again. Each cycle of grabbing and tossing exponentially increases the user's Coordination and Strength as they become more and more familiar with the target's body. The initial grab and throw increases the user's Coordination and Strength by a plus, the second two pluses, the third a tier, the fourth a tier and a plus, the fifth a tier and two pluses, the sixth two tiers. The chakra cost is commensurate with the boosts received as per the stat boosting rules. Interestingly enough, as a result of chain grab the opponent is continuously thrown but usually does not actually makes contact with the ground as they are caught and thrown in another direction before actually hitting a surface. This is obviously not the case of the user chooses to end the technique rather than continuing the grabs. However, the act of being thrown at greater and great forces in various directions causes the opponent to experience severe vestibular dysnfuction for every grab and throw completed.

1st Throw: Mild Dizziness
2nd Throw: Vertigo
3rd Throw: Severe Confusion, Severe Vertigo (Minus to Perception)
4th Throw: Severe Vertigo, Nerve Damage (Minus tier to Perception)
5th Throw: Unconscious
Weaknesses: N/A

Name: Dash Cancel
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Close Quarters
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: S Rank Speed
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: The user runs at the opponent at a high speed and transitions into a power slide however in doing so they create an afterimage due to their high speed. The after image will follow through with a dash while the real user lags behind by a few seconds creating the opportunity to attack the opponent. This lowers the opponent's Perception (tracking specifically) by a tier for the purpose of reacting to the user's attacks.
Weaknesses: This doesn't work against with a higher Perception than the user's Speed.

Name: Dash Dance
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Close Quarters
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: A Rank Speed, A Rank Coordination
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction without slowing down, losing momentum, or balance. This creates the illusion that the user is moving in multiple directions at once as all an opponent shall see is a mass of after-images breaking off in different directions. The opponent loses a tier of Perception for the purpose of tracking the user's movements.
Weaknesses: The illusion portion does not work on those with a higher Perception than the user's Speed and Coordination.


_________________
"Makahshi Kereko. But to you my name is Pit, and you're not talking your way out of me"

Strength: C
Constitution: C
Stamina: A
Speed: B
Coordination: A
Intelligence: D
Perception: B
Back to top Go down
Masuyo Kaede
Jounin
avatar

Posts : 669
Join date : 2016-12-07

Character File
Skills & Elements: Fire | Earth | Wind | Bukijutsu | Ninjutsu | Taijutsu
Class: B
Ryo: 99775

PostSubject: Re: Bushido Black's Customs   Sun Feb 04, 2018 4:43 pm

@Makahshi Kereko wrote:
Name: Autolanding
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 0m-10m
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: When the user lands on any surface, they tense their muscles and release a blast of chakra while doing so this creates a knock back effect of 4 meters to all those with a Constitution under B Rank.
Weaknesses: Doesn't work on those with Constitutions above B Rank

This seems more like a Coordination/Strength check than Constitution. Regardless, being a Taijutsu I'm not seeing how you can achieve this. Make this a Ninjutsu (assuming you have the Ninjutsu skill.) If you do, make the check for Strength or Coordination and make it C-tier.

Quote :
Name: Bat Dropping
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: 2
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: 0m-10m
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This is a close range technique whereby the user drops any object and then hits it with their knee transferring a great deal of kinetic force and speed onto the object allowing it to strike and move at the user's Speed and Strength at the time of impact without losing its structural integrity.  This can be used for devastating combination attacks.
Weaknesses: N/A


This seems like a very cheap way to make any object a devastating projectile. If anything, seeing as it's Taijutsu, this can produce a Strength boost while following standard projectile rules.

Quote :
Name: Bidou
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: 4
Range: N/A
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This is a control scheme technique allowing the user to manipulate large objects with simple speed and finesee. The scheme functions by identifying and manipulating those surface areas, edges, and sides of the object so as to wield it far more effectively. This manifests itself as a tier to Strength for the purpose of manipulating a heavy object.
Weaknesses: Note that Bidou will not actually increase the user's Strength for the purpose of dealing damage directly this just makes the object easier for the user to manage.

Approved

Quote :
Name: Boost Grabbing
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: 1
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Close Quarters
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: The user dashes at a high speed and grabs the opponent. If the user is larger than the opponent they will be able to channel the extra momentum into the opponent's chest at the moment of the grab. The kinetic force itself breaking a single rib by sheer act of grabbing. User receives a plus to strength for the act of grabbing.
Weaknesses: User must be physically larger than their opponent. (if not in weight then at least in height and vice versa).

Breaking of the rib would depend on the target's Constitution, as well as other things such as armor. I would omit that sentence entirely.

Quote :
Name: Chain Grab
Rank: D
Power: D
Activation Cost: N/A
Upkeep Cost: Varies
Range: Close Quarters
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: N/A
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This is Taijutsu move by which the user grabs the opponent, tosses them, and then increases their speed to catch them again and throw them again. Each cycle of grabbing and tossing exponentially increases the user's Coordination and Strength as they become more and more familiar with the target's body. The initial grab and throw increases the user's Coordination and Strength by a plus, the second two pluses, the third a tier, the fourth a tier and a plus, the fifth a tier and two pluses, the sixth two tiers. The chakra cost is commensurate with the boosts received as per the stat boosting rules. Interestingly enough, as a result of chain grab the opponent is continuously thrown but usually does not actually makes contact with the ground as they are caught and thrown in another direction before actually hitting a surface. This is obviously not the case of the user chooses to end the technique rather than continuing the grabs. However, the act of being thrown at greater and great forces in various directions causes the opponent to experience severe vestibular dysnfuction for every grab and throw completed.

1st Throw:  Mild Dizziness
2nd Throw: Vertigo
3rd Throw: Severe Confusion, Severe Vertigo  (Minus to Perception)
4th Throw: Severe Vertigo, Nerve Damage (Minus tier to Perception)
5th Throw: Unconscious
Weaknesses: N/A

This is denied. The "effects" chart you have would entirely depend on the target's Constitution, and are blown out of portion to begin with while making little sense in the perspective of Taijutsu combat. You can have a staff buff for throwing people if you wish, however it will need to be ranked accordingly.

Quote :
Name: Dash Cancel
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Close Quarters
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: S Rank Speed
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: The user runs at the opponent at a high speed and transitions into a power slide however in doing so they create an afterimage due to their high speed. The after image will follow through with a dash while the real user lags behind by a few seconds creating the opportunity to attack the opponent. This lowers the opponent's Perception (tracking specifically) by a tier for the purpose of reacting to the user's attacks.
Weaknesses: This doesn't work against with a higher Perception than the user's Speed.


Approved

Quote :
Name: Dash Dance
Rank: C
Power: C
Activation Cost: 5
Upkeep Cost: N/A
Range: Close Quarters
Speed: N/A
Element: N/A
Skill: Taijutsu
Classification: Secret
Requirements: A Rank Speed, A Rank Coordination
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction without slowing down, losing momentum, or balance. This creates the illusion that the user is moving in multiple directions at once as all an opponent shall see is a mass of after-images breaking off in different directions. The opponent loses a tier of Perception for the purpose of tracking the user's movements.
Weaknesses: The illusion portion does not work on those with a higher Perception than the user's Speed and Coordination.

Approved

_________________
Strength: C
Constitution: B
Stamina: C
Speed: B
Coordination: B
Intelligence: C
Perception: B

Spoiler:
 


Character Updates
Back to top Go down
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: Bushido Black's Customs   

Back to top Go down
 
Bushido Black's Customs
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Gladius :: Registration :: Technique Registration-
Jump to: