Zenaku custom jutsu

Name: Hot ash genjutsu
Rank: A
Power: A
Activation Cost: 20 cp
Upkeep cost: N/A
Range: Touch/self
Speed: Instant
Element: None
Skill: Genjutsu/sharingan
Requirements: N/A
Classification: personal technique
Parent Technique: Genjutsu sharingan
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: The Genjutsu takes two posts before its fully activated. The first post is when they touch the enemy or the enemy touches them thats post one on there second post the genjutsu takes effect by making it look and feel as if there body is turning black as coal then they start to break apart like sand blowing away in the wind. Deals A rank psychological damage and freaks the enemy out so it lowers there speed by 1 tier for 5 posts

Weaknesses: Can not be activated unless user has there sharingan activated and the person must be in contact with the enemy or the enemy to be in contact with him to work.

Name: Fire style firefly bombs
rank: A
power: A
activation cost: 20
upkeep cost: n/a
Range: 25 feet  
speed: B
Classification: Personal techique
Element: Fire
Skill: Ninjutsu
Requirements: none
Parent Technique: none
Hand seals: Tiger,Ram,Snake,bird
Description: After performing the hand seals the user then fires 4 meduim sized fire balls from his mouth but then they suddenly burst apart and the four now becomes 15 smaller sized floating fire balls that hang around the battlefield, by using the tiger seal or snapping of the fingers the balls of fire will then go off in a chain reaction of explosions.

weakneses: none.

Jin Misukage wrote:Name: Hot ash genjutsu
Rank: A
Power: A
Activation Cost: 10 cp
Upkeep cost: N/A
Range: Touch/self
Speed: Instant
Element: None
Skill: Genjutsu/sharingan
Requirements: N/A
Classification: personal technique
Parent Technique: Genjutsu sharingan
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: The Genjutsu takes two posts before its fully activated. The first post is when they touch the enemy or the enemy touches them thats post one on there second post the genjutsu takes effect by making it look and feel as if there body is turning black as coal then they start to break apart like sand blowing away in the wind. Deals A rank psychological damage and freaks the enemy out so it lowers there speed by 1 tier for 5 posts

Weaknesses: Can not be activated unless user has there sharingan activated and the person must be in contact with the enemy or the enemy to be in contact with him to work.

Name: Fire style firefly bombs
rank: A
power: A
activation cost: 15
upkeep cost: n/a
Range: 25 feet  
speed: B
Classification: Personal techique
Element: Fire
Skill: Ninjutsu
Requirements: none
Parent Technique: none
Hand seals: Tiger,Ram,Snake,bird
Description: After performing the hand seals the user then fires 4 meduim sized fire balls from his mouth but then they suddenly burst apart and the four now becomes 15 smaller sized floating fire balls that hang around the battlefield, by using the tiger seal or snapping of the fingers the balls of fire will then go off in a chain reaction of explosions.

weakneses: none.

These are pretty good but they both need the activation cost to be adjusted to 20 first please before they can be approved

Ok I fixed it.

Jin Misukage wrote:Name: Hot ash genjutsu
Rank: A
Power: A
Activation Cost: 20 cp
Upkeep cost: N/A
Range: Touch/self
Speed: Instant
Element: None
Skill: Genjutsu/sharingan
Requirements: N/A
Classification: personal technique
Parent Technique: Genjutsu sharingan
Hand Seals: N/A
Description: The Genjutsu takes two posts before its fully activated. The first post is when they touch the enemy or the enemy touches them thats post one on there second post the genjutsu takes effect by making it look and feel as if there body is turning black as coal then they start to break apart like sand blowing away in the wind. Deals A rank psychological damage and freaks the enemy out so it lowers there speed by 1 tier for 5 posts

Weaknesses: Can not be activated unless user has there sharingan activated and the person must be in contact with the enemy or the enemy to be in contact with him to work.

Name: Fire style firefly bombs
rank: A
power: A
activation cost: 20
upkeep cost: n/a
Range: 25 feet  
speed: B
Classification: Personal techique
Element: Fire
Skill: Ninjutsu
Requirements: none
Parent Technique: none
Hand seals: Tiger,Ram,Snake,bird
Description: After performing the hand seals the user then fires 4 meduim sized fire balls from his mouth but then they suddenly burst apart and the four now becomes 15 smaller sized floating fire balls that hang around the battlefield, by using the tiger seal or snapping of the fingers the balls of fire will then go off in a chain reaction of explosions.

weakneses: none.

Approved

Name: Phantom Sound
rank: B
power: B
activation cost: 15 CP
upkeep cost: 5 CP
Range: 60 Meters
speed: B
Classification: Personal technique
Element: Non elemental
Skill: Genjutsu
Requirements: none
Parent Technique: none
Hand seals: Snake,Tiger,Ram,Bird,Dragon.
Description: Zenaku starts by gathering chakra up into his mouth and lips and when he finishes he starts to whistle which makes the sound echo out all around him into a 360 area. It takes 1 post to fully activate( First post to use it, second post before effect kicks in.) Once the effect of the jutsu activates the person will start seeing the ghost of those that have fallen at there hands or the loved ones they knew that died. If they have not killed any one or there loved ones have not died then the jutsu shows there loved ones as if they had died. The phantoms will grab hold of them and Paralyze the body. While the opponent is caught in the genjutsu the user can only move at D rank speed and coordination while the opponent paralyzed.
weaknesses: Being deaf or having something in the ears will make the effects not happen.


Name: Wind style wind dragon jutsu
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation cost: 30 cp
Upkeep cost: None
Rang: 100 Meters
Speed: S
Classification: Personal technique
Element: Wind
Skill: Ninjutsu
Requirements: none
Parent Technique: none
Hand seals: Dragon,bird,snake.
Description:: Zenaku starts by inhaling a lung full of air, he then has to wait 1 post before he can fire it and when he dose he breaths out a big and thick twister which forms in to a dragon and rushes at the enemy. The dragon deals large destructive force as it cuts things up to 20 feet around it, it also cuts the enemy up when it hits them.
Weakness: Must charge up for 1 post before using.

Remove the spaces like the other jutsu in this thread

Ok I fixed it. Sorry it took so long.

Phantom Sound: Speed cannot be instant. Should be B Rank.

Wind Dragon: Speed should be just set at S.

Ok I fixed it.

Phantom Sound: Add in that the user can only move at D Rank Speed and Coordination while this Genjutsu is paralyzing the opponent. Use meters please.

Dragon: Use meters please.

ok i fixed it, if there are any other problems please let me know.

Jin Misukage wrote:Name: Phantom Sound
rank: B
power: B
activation cost: 15
upkeep cost: n/a
Range: 100 Meters
speed: B
Classification: Personal technique
Element: Non elemental
Skill: Genjutsu
Requirements: none
Parent Technique: none
Hand seals: Snake
Description: Zenaku starts by gathering chakra up into his mouth and lips and when he finishes he starts to whistle which makes the sound echo out all around him into a 360 area. It takes 1 post to fully activate( First post to use it, second post before effect kicks in.) Once the effect of the jutsu activates the person will start seeing the ghost of those that have fallen at there hands or the loved ones they knew that died. If they have not killed any one or there loved ones have not died then the jutsu shows there loved ones as if they had died. . The phantoms will grab hold of them and Paralyze the body. While caught in the genjutsu the user can only move at D rank speed and coordination while paralyzed.
weaknesses: Being deaf or having something in the ears will make the effects not happen.

Needs more handsigns. Like five.

Name: Wind style wind dragon jutsu
Rank: S
Power: S
Activation cost: 30 cp
Upkeep cost: None
Rang: 100 Meters
Speed: S
Classification: Personal technique
Element: Wind
Skill: Ninjutsu
Requirements: none
Parent Technique: none
Hand seals: Dragon,bird,snake.
Description:: Zenaku starts by inhaling a lung full of air, he then has to wait 1 post before he can fire it and when he dose he breaths out a big and thick twister which forms in to a dragon and rushes at the enemy. The dragon deals large destructive force as it cuts things up to 20 feet around it, it also cuts the enemy up when it hits them.
Weakness: Must charge up for 1 post before using.

Approved

Name: Phantom Sound
rank: B
power: B
activation cost: 15
upkeep cost: n/a
Range: 100 Meters
speed: B
Classification: Personal technique
Element: Non elemental
Skill: Genjutsu
Requirements: none
Parent Technique: none
Hand seals: Snake,Tiger,Ram,Bird,Dragon.
Description: Zenaku starts by gathering chakra up into his mouth and lips and when he finishes he starts to whistle which makes the sound echo out all around him into a 360 area. It takes 1 post to fully activate( First post to use it, second post before effect kicks in.) Once the effect of the jutsu activates the person will start seeing the ghost of those that have fallen at there hands or the loved ones they knew that died. If they have not killed any one or there loved ones have not died then the jutsu shows there loved ones as if they had died. . The phantoms will grab hold of them and Paralyze the body. While caught in the genjutsu the user can only move at D rank speed and coordination while paralyzed.
weaknesses: Being deaf or having something in the ears will make the effects not happen.

Ok I fixed this so it now has 5 hand signs.

Jin Misukage wrote:Name: Phantom Sound
rank: B
power: B
activation cost: 15
upkeep cost: n/a
Range: 100 Meters
speed: B
Classification: Personal technique
Element: Non elemental
Skill: Genjutsu
Requirements: none
Parent Technique: none
Hand seals: Snake,Tiger,Ram,Bird,Dragon.
Description: Zenaku starts by gathering chakra up into his mouth and lips and when he finishes he starts to whistle which makes the sound echo out all around him into a 360 area. It takes 1 post to fully activate( First post to use it, second post before effect kicks in.) Once the effect of the jutsu activates the person will start seeing the ghost of those that have fallen at there hands or the loved ones they knew that died. If they have not killed any one or there loved ones have not died then the jutsu shows there loved ones as if they had died. . The phantoms will grab hold of them and Paralyze the body. While caught in the genjutsu the user can only move at D rank speed and coordination while paralyzed.
weaknesses: Being deaf or having something in the ears will make the effects not happen.

Cut range down to 60m

ok i cut the rang down to 60M

Jin Misukage wrote:Name: Phantom Sound
rank: B
power: B
activation cost: 15
upkeep cost: n/a
Range: 100 Meters
speed: B
Classification: Personal technique
Element: Non elemental
Skill: Genjutsu
Requirements: none
Parent Technique: none
Hand seals: Snake,Tiger,Ram,Bird,Dragon.
Description: Zenaku starts by gathering chakra up into his mouth and lips and when he finishes he starts to whistle which makes the sound echo out all around him into a 360 area. It takes 1 post to fully activate( First post to use it, second post before effect kicks in.) Once the effect of the jutsu activates the person will start seeing the ghost of those that have fallen at there hands or the loved ones they knew that died. If they have not killed any one or there loved ones have not died then the jutsu shows there loved ones as if they had died. . The phantoms will grab hold of them and Paralyze the body. While caught in the genjutsu the user can only move at D rank speed and coordination while paralyzed.
weaknesses: Being deaf or having something in the ears will make the effects not happen.

Ok I fixed this so it now has 5 hand signs.

This still needs to be cut down to 60 meters please.

I did I fixed the original post but here is the fixed one.

Name: Phantom Sound
rank: B
power: B
activation cost: 15
upkeep cost: n/a
Range: 60 Meters
speed: B
Classification: Personal technique
Element: Non elemental
Skill: Genjutsu
Requirements: none
Parent Technique: none
Hand seals: Snake,Tiger,Ram,Bird,Dragon.
Description: Zenaku starts by gathering chakra up into his mouth and lips and when he finishes he starts to whistle which makes the sound echo out all around him into a 360 area. It takes 1 post to fully activate( First post to use it, second post before effect kicks in.) Once the effect of the jutsu activates the person will start seeing the ghost of those that have fallen at there hands or the loved ones they knew that died. If they have not killed any one or there loved ones have not died then the jutsu shows there loved ones as if they had died. . The phantoms will grab hold of them and Paralyze the body. While caught in the genjutsu the user can only move at D rank speed and coordination while paralyzed.
weaknesses: Being deaf or having something in the ears will make the effects not happen.

The phantoms will grab hold of them and Paralyze the body. While the opponent is caught in the genjutsu the user can only move at D rank speed and coordination while the opponent paralyzed.

*^ Add the words in red and this should be ready to go.

Give it an upkeep of 5 CP also please.

Ok i think every thing is in order now.

Name: Phantom Sound
rank: B
power: B
activation cost: 15 CP
upkeep cost: 5 CP
Range: 60 Meters
speed: B
Classification: Personal technique
Element: Non elemental
Skill: Genjutsu
Requirements: none
Parent Technique: none
Hand seals: Snake,Tiger,Ram,Bird,Dragon.
Description: Zenaku starts by gathering chakra up into his mouth and lips and when he finishes he starts to whistle which makes the sound echo out all around him into a 360 area. It takes 1 post to fully activate( First post to use it, second post before effect kicks in.) Once the effect of the jutsu activates the person will start seeing the ghost of those that have fallen at there hands or the loved ones they knew that died. If they have not killed any one or there loved ones have not died then the jutsu shows there loved ones as if they had died. The phantoms will grab hold of them and Paralyze the body. While the opponent is caught in the genjutsu the user can only move at D rank speed and coordination while the opponent paralyzed.
weaknesses: Being deaf or having something in the ears will make the effects not happen.

Jin Misukage wrote:Ok i think every thing is in order now.

Name: Phantom Sound
rank: B
power: B
activation cost: 15 CP
upkeep cost: 5 CP
Range: 60 Meters
speed: B
Classification: Personal technique
Element: Non elemental
Skill: Genjutsu
Requirements: none
Parent Technique: none
Hand seals: Snake,Tiger,Ram,Bird,Dragon.
Description: Zenaku starts by gathering chakra up into his mouth and lips and when he finishes he starts to whistle which makes the sound echo out all around him into a 360 area. It takes 1 post to fully activate( First post to use it, second post before effect kicks in.) Once the effect of the jutsu activates the person will start seeing the ghost of those that have fallen at there hands or the loved ones they knew that died. If they have not killed any one or there loved ones have not died then the jutsu shows there loved ones as if they had died. The phantoms will grab hold of them and Paralyze the body. While the opponent is caught in the genjutsu the user can only move at D rank speed and coordination while the opponent paralyzed.
weaknesses: Being deaf or having something in the ears will make the effects not happen.

Custom B-Rank techniques require 6 to 12 handsigns. You currently have five.

Ok the jutsu now has 6 hand signs.

Name: Phantom Sound
rank: B
power: B
activation cost: 15 CP
upkeep cost: 5 CP
Range: 60 Meters
speed: B
Classification: Personal technique
Element: Non elemental
Skill: Genjutsu
Requirements: none
Parent Technique: none
Hand seals: Snake,Tiger,Ram,Bird,Dragon,Tiger.
Description: Zenaku starts by gathering chakra up into his mouth and lips and when he finishes he starts to whistle which makes the sound echo out all around him into a 360 area. It takes 1 post to fully activate( First post to use it, second post before effect kicks in.) Once the effect of the jutsu activates the person will start seeing the ghost of those that have fallen at there hands or the loved ones they knew that died. If they have not killed any one or there loved ones have not died then the jutsu shows there loved ones as if they had died. The phantoms will grab hold of them and Paralyze the body. While the opponent is caught in the genjutsu the user can only move at D rank speed and coordination while the opponent paralyzed.
weaknesses: Being deaf or having something in the ears will make the effects not happen.

Jin Misukage wrote:Ok the jutsu now has 6 hand signs.

Name: Phantom Sound
rank: B
power: B
activation cost: 15 CP
upkeep cost: 5 CP
Range: 60 Meters
speed: B
Classification: Personal technique
Element: Non elemental
Skill: Genjutsu
Requirements: none
Parent Technique: none
Hand seals: Snake,Tiger,Ram,Bird,Dragon,Tiger.
Description: Zenaku starts by gathering chakra up into his mouth and lips and when he finishes he starts to whistle which makes the sound echo out all around him into a 360 area. It takes 1 post to fully activate( First post to use it, second post before effect kicks in.) Once the effect of the jutsu activates the person will start seeing the ghost of those that have fallen at there hands or the loved ones they knew that died. If they have not killed any one or there loved ones have not died then the jutsu shows there loved ones as if they had died. The phantoms will grab hold of them and Paralyze the body. While the opponent is caught in the genjutsu the user can only move at D rank speed and coordination while the opponent paralyzed.
weaknesses: Being deaf or having something in the ears will make the effects not happen.

Approved~

Name: Lightning style: Lightning web barrier 
rank: A
power: A
activation cost: 25 cp
upkeep cost: 15 cp
Range: 10m
speed: A+ 
Classification: Personal technique
Element: Lightning
Skill: Ninjutsu 
Requirements: Ninjutsu/fuinjutsu 
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand seals: Dragon.Tiger.Bird.Dragon.Ram.Horse.Tiger. Rabbit. 
Description: After  doing the hand Seals, you throw 8 pieces of fuin paper in front of you. Lightning will then chain together to create a lightning barrier. If the opponent physically touches it, then they will be hit for A rank damage. 
weaknesses: If a water technique hits it, then the water jutsu gets lowered in power by -1 teir. 

Name:Lava Release: Lava Pillar Spears
Rank: S
Power S
Activation cost: 30
Upkeep cost: N/A 
Range: 50m
Speed: S
Classification: Custom/Jinchuuriki host.
Elements: Lava 
Skill: Ninjutsu 
Requirements: Lava style 
Parant technique: Earth Release: Rock Pillar Spears
Hand seals: Horse → Boar → Gesture hand at target
Description: Lava style: Lave Pillar Spears is a variation of the earth Pillar Spears, so it does the same thing but uses molten rocks. Molten rock pillars will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target.

Weakness: N/A 

 Name: Heavenly Illusion: False Dominion 
Rank: S
Power: N/A
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep cost: 15
Range: 40M
Speed: S
Classification: Custom
Elements: N/A
Skills: Genjutsu,Fuuinjutsu.
Requirements: Genjutsu. Fuuinjutsu.
Parant Technique: N/A
Handseals: Ox-->Snake-->Ram-->Dragon-->Snake-->Bird-->Tiger.
Description: After forming the hand seals, the user will spread a large amount of their chakra into a dome surrounding the battlefield. Those within the dome are inflicted with a subtle yet powerful genjutsu, completely controlling their sense of distance and location. To them, an opponent can seem 10 feet to the left instead of their true position or 5 feet closer/further. This, needless to say, completely disrupts the victim’s attacks as they’re not able to gauge the opponent accurately. Cause of this the opponent loses a 1 Tier loss to there perception. Furthermore, because chakra is surrounding the area, traditional sensorary techniques also isn’t able to accurately find the opponent. Because of this The opponent dose not know they are in a genjutsu until after they are in it. The opponent activates the genjutsu when they enter the Dome. 

Weakness: In order to maintain the Dome The user must keep a one handed Tiger sign active. 

Name: Lava style: Lava shuriken 
Rank: A
Power: A
Activation cost: 20
Upkeep cost: N/A
Range: 30m
Speed: A
Classification: Custom/ Jinchuuriki host.
Elements: Lava 
Skills: Ninjutsu
Requirements: Ninjutsu/Lava style
Parent Jutsu: N/A
Handseals: Tiger-->Dragon-->Ox-->Tiger-->Boar-->Dragon. 
Description: Stomping the ground The user brings up molten Lava rock then using the hand signs the molten rocks forms into shuriken and then goes flying towards the opponent. 

Weakness: If a water jutsu is used to clash or defend it lowers the lava shuriken power by 1 tier.

Jin Misukage wrote:Name: Lightning style: Lightning web barrier 
rank: A
power: A
activation cost: 25 cp
upkeep cost: 15 cp
Range: 10m
speed: A+ 
Classification: Personal technique
Element: Lightning
Skill: Ninjutsu 
Requirements: Ninjutsu/fuinjutsu 
Parent Technique: N/A
Hand seals: Dragon.Tiger.Bird.Dragon.Ram.Horse.Tiger. Rabbit. 
Description: By doing the hand Seals, you throw some fuin paper in front of you. Lightning will then chain together to create a lightning barrier. If the opponent physically touches it, then they will be hit for A rank damage. 
weaknesses: If a water technique hits it, then the water jutsu gets lowered in power by -1 teir. 

Name:Lava Release: Lava Pillar Spears
Rank: S
Power S
Activation cost: 30
Upkeep cost: N/A 
Range: 50m
Speed: S
Classification: Custom/Jinchuuriki host.
Elements: Lava 
Skill: Ninjutsu 
Requirements: Lava style 
Parant technique: Earth Release: Rock Pillar Spears
Hand seals: Horse → Boar → Gesture hand at target
Description: Lava style: Lave Pillar Spears is a variation of the earth Pillar Spears, so it does the same thing but uses molten rocks. Molten rock pillars will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target.

Weakness: N/A 

 Name: Heavenly Illusion: False Dominion 
Rank: S
Power: N/A
Activation Cost: 30
Upkeep cost: 15
Range: 40M
Speed: S
Classification: Custom
Elements: N/A
Skills: Genjutsu,Fuuinjutsu.
Requirements: Genjutsu. Fuuinjutsu.
Parant Technique: N/A
Handseals: Ox-->Snake-->Ram-->Dragon-->Snake-->Bird-->Tiger.
Description: After forming the hand seals, the user will spread a large amount of their chakra into a dome surrounding the battlefield. Those within the dome are inflicted with a subtle yet powerful genjutsu, completely controlling their sense of distance and location. To them, an opponent can seem 10 feet to the left instead of their true position or 5 feet closer/further. This, needless to say, completely disrupts the victim’s attacks as they’re not able to gauge the opponent accurately. Cause of this the opponent loses a 1 Tier loss to there perception. Furthermore, because chakra is surrounding the area, traditional sensorary techniques also isn’t able to accurately find the opponent. Because of this The opponent dose not know they are in a genjutsu until after they are in it. The opponent activates the genjutsu when they enter the Dome. 

Weakness: In order to maintain the Dome The user must keep a one handed Tiger sign active. 

Name: Lava style: Lava shuriken 
Rank: A
Power: A
Activation cost: 20
Upkeep cost: N/A
Range: 30m
Speed: A
Classification: Custom/ Jinchuuriki host.
Elements: Lava 
Skills: Ninjutsu
Requirements: Ninjutsu/Lava style
Parent Jutsu: N/A
Handseals: Tiger-->Dragon-->Ox-->Tiger-->Boar-->Dragon. 
Description: Stomping the ground The user brings up molten Lava rock then using the hand signs the molten rocks forms into shuriken and then goes flying towards the opponent. 

Weakness: N/A

Approved