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    Post by Naganori Wed Nov 11, 2020 2:05 am

    Jutsu Shorthand Used:
    Units of ink: 25/4 ml or essentially enough for one small scroll. One ink pot (25 ml) would be 4 units.
    Ninjutsu consumption: a consumed ninjutsu does not maintain it’s properties except its elemental affinity: damage, power, speed, chakra affinity, etc. It has all of it's chakra cannabalized and it becomes converted into it's natural elemental equivalent. Suiton becomes water or mist. Doton becomes rock or mud. Katon becomes a warm ash or smoke. Any damaging elements of the technique are lost entirely. The substance left behind in the seal can then be used as a sealed resource that may be used to fulfill the requirements of other jutsu that require sealed elements. (One might put a suiton jutsu in stasis, and then use another jutsu to make a geyser.)





    Pigment Thief:


    Zap:

    Not ready to be approved:
    Approved techs to be moved, trained or otherwise Ignored:


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    Post by Kitsuki Kurahasa Wed Nov 11, 2020 8:49 am

    Great Owl: Needs an upkeep of 10 reduce range to 250m.

    Pigment Prosthesis: This needs an upkeep of 10 as well or if you want the upkeep to be much lower than the tail is going to have to be fairly weaker and limited. You could give it the same stats as your body with respect to Strength, Constitution, and Coordination and that would justify a lower upkeep cost.


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    Post by Naganori Wed Nov 11, 2020 9:50 am

    Edits have been made~


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    Post by Kitsuki Kurahasa Wed Nov 11, 2020 10:12 am

    Naganori wrote:
    Great Owl:

    Pigment Prosthesis:

    Approved


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    Post by Naganori Wed Dec 01, 2021 12:03 am

    Requesting a review of pigment thief and one other jutsu (reviewer's choice), please.


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    Post by Chen Kimyōnakama Wed Dec 08, 2021 1:49 am

    Please repost the ones you'd like to have reviewed as a separate post.


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    Post by Naganori Wed Dec 08, 2021 10:55 am

    I’d like these, but if this is too much I’d prefer pigment thief be prioritized.
    Flash. Bang:

    Pigment Thief:

    Super beast:

    Swallow:

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    Post by Kitsuki Kurahasa Thu Dec 09, 2021 8:03 pm

    Flash of Genius: within range except those within 1/3 meter < - What range is this referring to? The 5m range or the 40m range?

    Pigment Thief: "while also increasing the damage [D-Rank damage]." <- I don't really understand how damage works with this technique or the overall purpose of it. Would be helpful if you could give an explanation or an example of how you see this technique working.

    Super Beast: Otherwise they are isolated from the space outside as if they were in a different dimension. This space is shared among all beasts created with this jutsu, but persists even after the frog is dispelled. <- I don't understanding the "space persisting" after the frog is dispelled. What does that mean? Also, what's the +15 CP for?

    Swallow: Please assign a rank for the Speed stat rater than meters per second. This technique must comport with the generalized rules for sealing techniques which is as follows: "Sealing live jutsu are deeply limited. The phrase "sealing live jutsu" means jutsu that has been cast by an opponent usually in the context of combat. Such sealing techniques will have a five post cool down before they can seal another technique. One must also pay the base cost of the rank of the jutsu (regardless of what the caster pays). Fire Sealing Method works in this fashion."

    Zap: Needs handsigns and I think Speed shouldn't be based on Coordination but should be set at A-Tier unless you want to increase the cost and go for S.



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    Post by Naganori Sun Dec 12, 2021 4:44 pm

    Justs edit history for my sake please ignore
    Edits made to jutsu:


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    Post by Naganori Mon Dec 13, 2021 10:29 pm

    Jutsu to be approved
    stabby water seal:

    Super beast sealing:

    Flash. Bang:
    Pick'n'Mix:

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    Post by Nozomi Wed Dec 15, 2021 9:27 pm

    Naganori wrote:Jutsu to be approved
    stabby water seal:

    Super beast sealing:

    Flash. Bang:
    Pick'n'Mix:

    Swallow:
    Approved


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    Post by Naganori Sat Jan 01, 2022 4:14 pm

    Super beast:


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Sun Jan 02, 2022 6:38 pm

    Naganori wrote:
    Super beast:

    This technique needs a defined number of jutsu in can inhale. It cannot be all A-Rank water/air techniques/effects.

    "This volume is shared among all beasts created with this jutsu, and persists even after the frog is dispelled in a small seal the original frog’s size that forms out of the remaining ink." < - Is the seal attached to the original scroll/paper that the frog was drawn on?


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    Post by Naganori Fri Jan 07, 2022 7:26 pm

    Super beast:

    Hachiman:

    Consumption:

    Transposed Transformation:

    Sneks!:


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    Post by Shimiko Chinoike Sun Jan 09, 2022 4:06 pm

    Naganori wrote:
    Super beast:

    Approved.


    Hachiman:

    How big can the arrows be?
    I thought it was one humaniod, why does it say two?
    Cut the range in half.


    Consumption:

    Consumption should have two more handsigns.
    51% of the snakes should be destroyed for the jutsu to end.


    Transposed Transformation:

    Approved.


    Sneks!:

    Approved.


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    Post by Naganori Thu Jan 20, 2022 10:03 pm

    Custom Unique Booster:

    Form Without Ego:

    I messed up the "these two humanoids" part because I copy pasta'd...

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    Consumption:


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    Post by Kitsuki Kurahasa Mon Jan 31, 2022 4:09 pm

    Naganori wrote:Custom Unique Booster:

    Form Without Ego:


    "This technique requires advanced knowledge of tenketsu and the tenketsu pathways that exceeds the norm to use, but the technique is only mastered by tempering both Mind and Body." <- This should require Ijutsu no?



    Hachiman:

    "They do damage based on their rank,"

    Not sure what you mean by this, I thought the damage was laid out in the preceding sentence?


    Consumption:

    "These snakes are hardy and all of them must be destroyed for the jutsu to end." Delete this sentence.


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    Post by Naganori Wed Feb 02, 2022 7:43 pm

    Form Without Ego:


    Hachiman:

    Consumption:

    Pigment Thief:

    Applicable shorthand:4 units of ink = 1 small ink pot = 25 ml


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    Post by Kitsuki Kurahasa Fri Feb 04, 2022 11:24 am



    Consumption:

    Pigment Thief:

    Applicable shorthand:4 units of ink = 1 small ink pot = 25 ml

    Approved.


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    Post by Naganori Tue Feb 15, 2022 5:09 pm

    Form Without Ego:


    Hachiman:

    Lightning boost:

    Also requesting to get rid if the 'The' in the name of 'Malignant consumption of a divine fruit' that was approved in the previous post, and I would like to change the name of "Flash of Genius" to "Flash of Brilliance". It was approved:here .


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    Post by Yuichi Thu Oct 06, 2022 9:16 am

    Naganori wrote:
    Form Without Ego:


    Hachiman:

    Lightning boost:

    Also requesting to get rid if the 'The' in the name of 'Malignant consumption of a divine fruit' that was approved in the previous post, and I would like to change the name of "Flash of Genius" to "Flash of Brilliance". It was approved:here .

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